~~Desire~~AK last part pg56 - Page 13

Awesome part... n ur new ff sounds bre interstin!!!! U know angad drags her everywhere... i mean where ever she is he pulls her into sumwhere loll!!!!

great part 😊
i like ur new idea for a ff ana i think you should continue on it 😊

fab part!! and do go on with your new ff idea, it sounds great!! continue soon!!

Originally posted by: ixi-shaj

Brilliant he's acting so like a jealous lover, though she could have came up with a better come-back.

Criticism- the 'pinning her to the wall' is getting a bit repetitive, im not saying its not a good idea but just so you know.... (hope i'm not too harsh, no one else is saying anything... 😕 )

lol he sure is.😆...nah its really good ur not harsh i know i was getting bored of typing those 5 words lols so don't worry i won't use the wall i'll be more creative lolz but thanx for telling me😊

Originally posted by: sameira-90

great part 😊
i like ur new idea for a ff ana i think you should continue on it 😊

thank you😊...i sure will when i get more replies on it 😊

Originally posted by: erier101

fab part!! and do go on with your new ff idea, it sounds great!! continue soon!!

thanks😊 , glad you like my new idea

Originally posted by: ishu124

omg. that was wonderfull continue sooon.

thanx😃...oh and continue your ff when get time , i really like the story its like a fairytale hehehe

Originally posted by: candyprincess

great part

thanks😊

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Awesome part... n ur new ff sounds bre interstin!!!! U know angad drags her everywhere... i mean where ever she is he pulls her into sumwhere loll!!!!

thanks, glad u like my new idea well i'll be writing the first part maybe today😊 lol 😆😆i'll try and stop him lolz

Originally posted by: iamsmart

fab parts


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sana

thnx!!😊