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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: kaj05

autumn rani.... wow wow wow wow wow... goshh.. i am really thinking to sending your ff.. along with sammy's.. and kashu;s ff's to the kaajjal makers... u are too too too too good!!!!
this part of yours seems sooo real.. really... i was literally picturing it happening..
and yayyyy.. u made adi kaajjal's bhaiyya.. hahahahaha.. i loved that... 👏 👏 👏

Thanks Kaj, only hope those blind dimwits realise what's glaring at them in the face!!!😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
Ok here u go again Autumn 😳 ...once again just mindblowing,superb,fantabulous 😳 ...I loved the way u brought a twist in this part by making dev's chilhood friend Adi as kaju's bhaiyya 😛 and chulbuli sounds really cute 😛 😛 ...next time dev should address kajal as chulbuli 😳 ..that will b more fun i guess 😉 😛 ..Aww i love to see the jealous dev and his possessiveness for kaju😳 ...and now Adibhaiyya,kajal and veer along with dev will form their own batallian to fight against the evils 😛 ..wowww all this sounds really exciting 😳

Do continue soon Autumn 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Ok here u go again Autumn 😳 ...once again just mindblowing,superb,fantabulous 😳 ...I loved the way u brought a twist in this part by making dev's chilhood friend Adi as kaju's bhaiyya 😛 and chulbuli sounds really cute 😛 😛 ...next time dev should address kajal as chulbuli 😳 ..that will b more fun i guess 😉 😛 ..Aww i love to see the jealous dev and his possessiveness for kaju😳 ...and now Adibhaiyya,kajal and veer along with dev will form their own batallian to fight against the evils 😛 ..wowww all this sounds really exciting 😳

Do continue soon Autumn 😃

Thank you mishti!! I am gald that brought a smile on your face. Waise aap itni raat gaye IF pe kya kar rahin hain????😛😉😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: autumnleaf

Thank you mishti!! I am gald that brought a smile on your face. Waise aap itni raat gaye IF pe kya kar rahin hain????😛😉😆

Oh this is nothing new Autumn😉..I m used to remain awake till 3am on IF😛..for me its just the evening😃

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Oh this is nothing new Autumn😉..I m used to remain awake till 3am on IF😛..for me its just the evening😃

😆 Catch some of your beauty sleep dear!!!😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
Maria, I got your pm but didn't know for which ff so I presume both and thank you for it!!! 😊😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg...i love this FF of urs too..man u r 2 gud..plz continue soon...plz summarize this serial's story cuz i never watched this srial in my life so can u plz do it for me from starting to end jus in points...plz plz plz...i jus loveu nd ur stories....
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Posted: 18 years ago
thx for summarizing the story for me in the other FF...enough love rani
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: rani_rani

thx for summarizing the story for me in the other FF...enough love rani

You are most welcome and thank you i am touched by your appeciation!!😳

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Posted: 18 years ago

Okay today we all are back as devdasi who suffer the pain for Dev!! So cheer up with this fabulous Dev special!!!

Especially for Jyoti and Hemadi who are very low along with all us bhootnis who feels Dev's pain as our very own.....................

Part 26...................................

As soon as Adi leaves Dev collects Kaajjal in a tight hug. He keeps muttering in her ears with a passionate "I am sorry Kaajjal, please forgive me... please forgive me......"Kaajjal is so lost in Dev's arms. As soon as Dev touches, her thinking ability simply dissolves, disappearing into thin air! All her insides feel like jelly, and she doesn't trust her feet to keep her upright. She clutches and hangs on to his shoulders as if her life depended on them. Her fingers entwining in his silky short tresses pulling and digging her nails at his nape. But he cares less as the pain is sharp and sweet driving him crazy beyond any sanity.

After passionate moments, Dev is the first to speak but in short gasps as he is breathing hard from the passiona and Kaajjal's soft suplliant body that makes him so insane. "I should never have doubted you or your love for me. But blame it on my love for you. You are mine, Kaajjal, remember and no one, but me alone have the right to love you so. Kaajjal fears and feels the awe both at the same time with Dev's intense and passionate love. But at the same time a proud and satisfying feeling enters her whcih is like a soothing sweet music to her soul. Dev is hers and he loves her to death. That is the only thing that matters and that prods her to be a bit bold.........

She simply raises her finger and shuts his tirade. She looks deeply into his eyes and then ever so slowly slides her finger along his lips tracing its entire contour and reaches the corner and then slides it ever so gently tracing the dimple evident at the corner. All the time she is holding his equally passionate look with her bold stare. Her finger then pays homage to his ear and then slides up slowly to his forehead. She tries to trace from memory those lines that mar the forehead when he is angry or worried, trying to mentally decide if there are three or four of them? She ultimately decides on three! As if glad that she is right tongue in cheek she murmurs "Three!!!" and shakes her head on Dev's questioning eyes. She smiles shyly then biting the lower corner of her lip but contunues to pay hoomage to his other ear and cheek and finally moves the full circle of his face ending at the opposite corner of his lips.

But suddenly Dev gets more naughtier and nips her finger with his teeth albeit a bit gently but not before she utters a startled "Dev...." And then as if in remorse kisses it ever so slowly and gently................

She hugs him tight, hiding her face in the warm haven of his strong chest and curve of his shoulder, not able to meet his passionate stare feeling suddenly very shy by her bold gestures not for one moment feeling that she was capable of such bold display. She then hears the soft rumble of his laughter not mocking her but endearing her and she smiles in turn. He feels her lips on his chest as they flutter and plant a soft kiss in reply and that breaks the last of his control and his sanity is in shambles. He lifts her and carries her to the bedroom, his intentions evident in his stride......................................

After hours of spent passion Kaajjal wakes to find it is well into late evening and Dev is busy on the phone talking to some employee at RC (RadioCity) Mr. Tandon, that he had signed all the necessary documents and that for any further decisions he had given a specific power of attorney to his brother Veer pratap Singh. That he will be away for a few days and to stay in touch with Veerbhai for any further disputes! He ends the call and is unaware that she is awake. She slides out of bed and dons her dressing gown and moves softly towards Dev. She slides her arms around him and hugs him from the back resting her head on his broad expansive back. He acknowledges her gesture and presence with a slight turn of his head in her direction and brings her upfront and slides his hands around her middle from behind in a similar loving gesture and nibbles at her ear. That has her in giggles as Dev knows very well her weak spots. He smiles and becomes serious and says "its time Kaajjal for me to give you back your honour and punish mom's killer!" A shiver goes down her spine when she hears the strong vengence in his voice at the last part of his statement and the tone suggested that no one can mess with Dev Pratap Singh and get away with it! The 2 most important women in his life were in question. One whom he had the sad fate of losing and the other who was threatened both by that one person!!! He would be damned if he was going to let Karan succeed the seond time over. He will have to burn in hell..... burn in hell he will........

Here Dev asks Adi to meet him in the Singh ,mansion with Satya at the beach house for the night. He leaves Kaajjal with a heavy heart, but assured that she is safe with her father. Adi reaches the Singh mansion just before Dev could and tells "Ram Singh",

(I hope you are reading this sharmii....😆)

that he was there to meet DPS. The ever vafaadar Ram Singh asks him to sit and calls Panna chachi(PC). PC comes and Aditya introduces himself as Dev's old friend at Harvard and Pc immediately but faintly recalls and she welcomes him. But sadly informs that Dev isn't here and that something very bad had happened. Adi interupts her respectfully but gently and informs her that he knows and also offers his condolences to her. He then tells her that he got a call from Dev asking him to come here and that Dev too is going to meet him here. PC 's spirits lift at the mention of Dev coming home and she leaves telling Adi to wait while she prepares something for him and for Dev.

Adi is waiting when he hears the sound of a woman's Payal and he looks in the direction and sees her. There she is an epitome of grace and beauty and even today has the power to turn his heart to molten lava, watching her glide down the staris so gracefully...................

Preview : Dev' plans in action. Dev calls Veer bhai and Adi and asks them to come over urgently to the beach house alone!!!!

Edited by autumnleaf - 18 years ago

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