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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 4

back 2 nainital
we s a guy wearing pink shirt,blue monkey wash jeans.we can see only his back.he is listning to music of britney spears .(of course with haedphone)
he is listening to
Oh baby baby, oh baby baby

Oh baby baby, how was I supposed to know
That something wasnt right here
Oh baby baby, I shouldnt have let you go
And now youre out of sight, yeah
Show me how you want it to be
Tell me baby cuz I need to know now, oh because

Chorus
My loneliness is killin me (and I)
I must confess I still believe (still believe)
When Im not with you I lose my mind
Give me a sign, hit me baby one more time!

Oh baby baby, the reason I breathe is you
Boy youve got me blinded
Oh pretty baby, theres nothin that I wouldnt do
Thats not the way I planned it

Show me how you want it to be
Tell me baby cuz I need to know now, oh because

Chorus

Oh baby baby, how was I supposed to know
Oh pretty baby, I shouldnt have let you go
I must confess that my loneliness
Is killin me now
Dont you know I still believe
That you will be here
And give me a sign, hit me baby one more time

Chorus

I must confess (my loneliness) that my loneliness
(is killing me) is killing me now
(I must confess) dont you (I still believe) know I still believe
That you will be here (I lose my mind)
And give me a sign...
Hit me baby one more time!

it seems that girls of nainital fancy this guy as thy r all staring at this hot guy walking past thm.he moves 2wards a house and flungs the door open
r:hi naveen
n:hi rajveer
we see his face and it's none other than rajveer singh shekhawat.

r:wat's up man?
n:ceiling(giggles and then his yes well up)
r:navven wat happened?why r u crying?
n:thse r tars of happiness
r:tears of happiness?
n:raj,my sis nains ia coming to nainital
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Phoolon Ka Taaron Ka Sabka Kehna Hai
Ek Hazaron Mein Meri Behna Hai
Sari Umar Hame Sang Rehna Hai

Ye Na Jaana Duniya Ne Tu Hai Kyon Udaas
Teri Pyaari Aankhon Mein Pyar Ki Hai Pyaas
Aa Mere Paas Aa Keh Jo Kehna Hai
Ek Hazaron Mein ...

Jabse Meri Aankhon Se Ho Gayi Tu Door
Tabse Sare Jeevan Ke Sapne Hain Choor
Aankhon Mein Neend Na Dil Mein Chaina Hai
Ek Hazaron Mein ...

Dekho Hum Tum Dono Hain Ek Dali Ke Phool
Maein Na Bhoola Tu Kaise Mujhko Gai Bhool
Aa Mere Paas Aa Keh Jo Kehna Hai
Ek Hazaron Mein ...
r:that's gr8
n:raj.i want a favor frm u
r:yes,shoot
n:can u pick up my sis frm the station?
r:wat?

but why don't u go?and morover i don't know her.how will i identify her?
n:actually rajvr,i will not be able to ntake a leave frm school.u know 2morro mr.desai is gonna come.he is da one who is gonna select kids for the interschool music competition.and being a music teacher,i hav 2 be presnt there.
r:ya but?

n:don't worry.i have already told naina abt this and abt the prob of identifying her,then wait
he goes 2wards the table ,takes out keys frm a drawer,opens a door which hav been closed since ages.
r(thinks):i've always been curious 2 know wat's inside the room,but i never dared 2 ask him.i know u navin vry well.i know u don't like sharing ur personal things and i know there's something prsonal in that room

naveen comes out of his room,locks it back
n:here u go raj
r:wat's this?
n:this album contains snaps of naina and me.i hop now the prob o identifying her has been solved.go through them ok? i have some imp.work in school.i'll see u later?
r:ok at wat time she is coming?
n:who she
r:NAINA
n:oh !sorry she's coming by 11 am train
r:ok i'll pick her up.

next scene
rajveer opens th album and is awestruck to see the angael in front of her.

he was memerized by naina's beauty and simplicity.while browsing through th pics he saw this


naina seemed to be very happy her smile reached her eyes he thought that the guy with her was his boyfrend.he felt little bad.
but in other snaps it seemed dat all her happiness has vanished.she looked a bit frustrated and depressed

Edited by amritafan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: yyyy

Waiting earely to read ...plz continue

well here's da next part.hope u enjoy this

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Posted: 18 years ago
#33

sorry for delay.here's da next part

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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
hey good going

excellent presentation

great going

pl continue and dont be late in updating
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 👏 Excellent....i am earely waiting 4 Raj -naina meeting ....i like ur idea of using pics,....plz continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
i'll update soon.i m not well right now.my net also broke down frm the day i updated
i m ready with the next part and i'll continue soon.thx 2 all
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37

part5
next day
rajveer is getting ready 4 picking up naina at the station.he is taking extra care to dress properly though he doesn't know why he is doing this.
raj is wearing a black shirt with a black blazer on it.he is looking damn hot as ever.

he reaches the railway station .he scans each and every corner of the station but doesn't find naina.then all of a sudden he sees a strange sight in front of him.he sees that most of the people r staring at him.he is a bit confused.he soon realizes that everyone is not staring at him but all r staring at some1 behind him.when he turns around ,rajveer sees a beautiful face .her hair were blowing under the effect of wind.she was none other than ms naina ah!singh

naina is wearing this

rajveer is just awestruck to see her.he feels a sort of current passing through his body. but he sees a sort of pain in her eyes.he feels a pain in his heart too

background

Every night in my dreams
I see you. I feel you.
That is how I know you go on.

Far across the distance
And spaces between us
You have come to show you go on.

Near, far, wherever you are
I believe that the heart does go on
Once more you open the door
And you're here in my heart
And my heart will go on and on

Love can touch us one time
And last for a lifetime
And never let go till we're gone

Love was when I loved you
One true time I hold to
In my life we'll always go on

Near, far, wherever you are
I believe that the heart does go on
Once more you open the door
And you're here in my heart
And my heart will go on and on

There is some love that will not
go away

You're here, there's nothing I fear,
And I know that my heart will go on
We'll stay forever this way
You are safe in my heart
And my heart will go on and on

raj goes 2wards naina

r:hi!i m rajveer.u r naina right?

n:hi rajveer .nice meeting u.

raj found a lot of pain in her voice too.but there was a kind of sweetness in her voice that made him crazy.he wanted to listen to her again and again .

r:(thinking):i don't even know her yet i m going nuts ,i m going crazy abt her.i need to stop thin king abt her.

raj was too confused at the miment. he could understand his feelings for naina.was it love or infatuation?he could not even understand why naina seemed so depressed and why naina and naveen lived seperately though they seemed to love eact other a lot as far as raj knew.

with these jumbled thoughts rajveer took naina to naveen's house.driving back was a silent event.when they reached naveen's house naveen was back.naina quickly ran and hugged is bro tightly.tears of happiness were flowing down her's and naveen's cheeks.raj could definitely sense the love between naveen and naina.the bro-sis love was so obvious to him.raj's eyes also welled up on seeing their love.after naveen and naina parted.

nav:raj.me and naina will go for a dinner 2day.why don't u join us.

raj:sure ,if naina has no problem with that.

nai:of course u can come.why would i have a problem

naina agreed thpough she did want him to come .she wanted some time alone with her bro.she wanted to tell him something which was very personal and which was haunting her 4 a long time.she wanted to discuss something with naveen today itself but due to raj she won't be able to do that.moreover rajveer's 1st impression on naina was not gud.she had seen rajveer stealing glances at her ,since she arrived,even during the drive.

next scene

rajveer is wearing this

naveen this

naina was wearing this

she had let her hair open just like the pic.while she was walikng down the stairs ,rajveer saw her.

raj:man!she is gonna kill me.she is so angelic.she is the godess of beauty.just look at her,she has dressed so simple,yet she looks such a princess.she is so elegant

Edited by amritafan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 👏 nice part....take care of ur health first...we will wait ..no prblm 😊....finally they met..good but naina doesnt seems 2 be a good impression of raj..
Edited by yyyy - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: yoginisahakari

hey good going

excellent presentation

great going

pl continue and dont be late in updating

thx

well i did update it a bit faster than usual

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: yyyy

👏 👏 Excellent....i am earely waiting 4 Raj -naina meeting ....i like ur idea of using pics,....plz continue soon

thx.

i think pics gives a clear idea of wat writer's imagination is

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