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really awesome continue soon..............nice starting...

wow tht was wicked prt rejected sis!!!!cont sooon

fANTABULOUS- i guess we know why her dad dont like Angad.

ps 12 mill...yeah right 😆

i like... lol its really goood!! continue soon!👏

lovee maulii<33

Originally posted by: pooja1221

sweet! father and son-in-law tension, huh?lmao 😆 😆 😆 I can just feel it! awesome concept and now Angad will hav a good view of her in a nightie unless she buys the curtains 😉 great job! Love both ur ffs. You're a very creative writer! 👏

lol I am still debating if Kripa will remember to put up the curtains or if she will forget😉😆

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

YAY!!! AWESUM 1st prt!!! 👏
👏 sooo unique & different... i LOVE
LOVE LOVE it!!! 😳 i already sense tension between future father-in-law
& future son-in-law... seems like trouble... 😉 😆 i CANNOT wait till
they see each other... i have a feeling it will be priceless!!! 😉 😆 i
LOVED how Angad just stared at Kripa... it was sooo cuteee!!! 😳 i hope
Kripa buys curtains... wudnt want Angad to c her in her nightdress!!! 😉
i CANNOT wait to read more... ur an AMAZING writer!!! 👏 👏
continue soon!!! 😛

It's just like the movies where the girl like the guy the father hates the guy, has any one seen the walmart commershal were the father-in-law gets his son-in-law a walmart gift card and when the son-in-law says thanks that father-in-law just say your welcome kind of in a way like...my wife made me give this to you.

Originally posted by: pal89711

it was just fab....awesome....terffic..and cool
i really liked on how u started the ff. is it love at first sight 4 both or no...just wanted 2 know...i hope this is not the only reason y kripa's dad rejected angad for the proposal...continue soon i can't wait 2 see kripa's dad reaction wen he sees angad living next door...once again keep up the gud work....hope u all the best 😊 continue soon continue soon continue soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz 😉 u can continue wen ever u have time with this one n art of darkness..cause tht is coming 2 an intersting point...

oh dont worry there will be many diffrent reasons as to why Kripa's dad will rejected Angad, one is the car and the second one is... you will have to read the next part to find out

ok i will post the next part for this fan fic today or tommorw

hey!!just read the intro and GOD it is mindblowing...poor Angad..lol his sexy neighbor happens 2 b the daughter of the very guy he crashed into this morning..lolzzz..i guess sparks will fly xcept there will b thunder before tht.. 😃

Originally posted by: shiv-gauri4eva

hey!!just read the intro and GOD it is mindblowing...poor Angad..lol his sexy neighbor happens 2 b the daughter of the very guy he crashed into this morning..lolzzz..i guess sparks will fly xcept there will b thunder before tht.. 😃

lol so ture sparks will fuy but thunder will also come but i am not sure if the thunder will come before i was thinking about puting the thunder after the sparks lol because thunder brings rain of love lol thunder can scream all he wants but the rain will bring ak togeter any ways

glad you like the fist part