Beginning of KSBKBT FF1 Updated-Part2!

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Well I thought it would be nice to refresh the story but this is a fan-fic. So basically, I will not be copying the story completely, some new bits and some old bits.😉 I thought this would be nice for the people who haven't watched Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi since the beginning. Btw Nimmi I hope you don't mind me using your style of writing, used in your updates😃

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Short Version:

    The serial begins on Baa's birthday in Shanti Niketan home to the Virani family, Baa is praying to a Tulsi Plant in her garden. Babuji is introduced and sings the Gayatri Mantra for Baa's birthday. Gayatri is introduced complaining. Jamandas is introduced. "Arararara!!!!" is shouted and Daksha + Himmat are introduced. Someone is roaming around, Savita is introduced. Mansukh is introduced too while the two argue. Baa goes to the main hall and sees no celebration and gets depressed as no one knows it's her BD. Babuji shows her a letter and she gets happy. "Ram, Ram, Jai Raja Ram" is heard as a man walks from his car. Next bells are heard and a woman is seen praying. The two are shown side by side (in different areas) while the KSBKBT song starts playing. Baa sees a woman running to her holding some Rangoli. The lady smiles warmly and Baa is delighted. The lady runs and collides with the man. The Rangoli is spilt,"Ram, Ram, Jai Sita Ram" is played again.
  • *Best Scene-Tulsi is introduced laughing happily. Mihir is introduced too, smiles and gazes deeply in to Tulsi's eyes.*

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The whole home of Shanti Niketan is introduced and then the prayer of Om, Jai, Jagdish is heard. While a prayer is made in the garden, and Baa is introduced.

B: Jai Tulsi Ma! Jai Thakurji! Bagwan I only have one thing to say, please bless me. I hope that on this day Shanti Niketan will be filled with you. Ommmm!!!

Then she takes a cup filled with water and waters the plant. She chants the words of Om, Jai, Jagdish. Then an old man is introduced, Baa looks happy. Its Babuji!!! She comes to Babuji and Babuji starts the sacred Gayatri Mantra, Baa is overjoyed.

Baa-B

Babuji-BB

BB: Amba!!! Come over here!!!!

B: Yes!

She comes to Babuji and he starts singing the sacred Gayatri Mantra, Baa is overjoyed.

B: Such a big gift! I'm so happy that you have sung my fav song!!!

BB: I know my lovely wife, thats why I sung it. Oh and look what I've got for you!

B:Imli!!!!!!

She starts gobbling them down like there is no tomorrow!!!

She puts them aside and starts flirting with Babuji (awwwww... so cute old romance...😳)

B: I knew you would remember my birthday. That was so sweet!😳

BB: I knew you would enjoy it!

They laugh sweetly, then the scene shifts...

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Some lady is shown looking like a prune with all that make-up

Guess who...it's none other then the witch Gayatri! Siting on her bed, now that's what I call lazy!

G: Jamandas, first you stoped me from dancing and now this! Hurry up! Tell Raghu kaka to make me some breakfast! Hurry! I mean it!

Okay I think he gets the picture...Someone then stands up running to Gayatri's aid, JD is introduced.

JD: How many times do I have to tell you, I'm JD!!! Who is Jamandas???

G: Don't try and act smart! This was delivered to me how late? Tell me! First of all you sit here and do nothing!

JD: Please forgive I'll get Raghu kaka an extra pair of hands okay? Maybe that will help? But what has happened? Your normally like this but not this evil, tell me!

Gayatri glares at JD. JD gets scared.

JD: Ummm... I'm going bye see ya!

Gayatri starts chopping away at her cereal Hasn't she got any table manners sheeesh!

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A strange song is played its the ARARA song and Daksha is introduced standing outside a toilet, how convienient!😳😳😳 Her husband is introduced going inside that toilet.

D: ARARARA!!!!! What are you trying Himmat? Like this makes me life a lot easier!

H: Right! Daksha, please can I just brush my teeth?

D: Arara! What will become of you, I dremt of you becoming Dharmainder to me but you coudn't even be Govinda! Arara! What are you doing in there? What have I done to deserve this Bagwan!

He emerges and Daksha rushes in knocking Himmat over😃

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A lady is shown lazing about, doesn't she have anything better to be doing? Savita makes her entry. She is heavily armed with jewelry, i bet with that amount she could kill Jackie Chan just by all of it falling on him, he would choke!

S: Raghu kaka!!! Make some tea for me!!!

Somebody else is sitting at the dining table and picks up the newspaper and Mansukh is introduced.

M: What is in today's news...Savita?

He turns around to see the biggest nightmare of his life!

S: Yes it's me your point being?...Can I not come down without any fuss from you?

M: I was just asking Savita.

Raghu kaka brings a big cup of tea. It looks like it's going to fall on Savita😃 He leaves...

S: Right fine do as you wish let me enjoy my tea!

M: You know, what your problem is Savita? No I guess you don't, it's because your too selfish!

He leaves...

S: Hmmm... interesting, so my own pati is going to teach me!

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Baa descends from the stairs slowly. Savita comes in.

B: No decoration? No prayer? No one...

Savita comes to her.

S: Oh Baa I just remembered!

B: I knew it Savita you remembered it!

S: Yes I did, how would I not remember the day where Mansukh gained the trust of the Share Holders!!! And that was how our property has been increasing and money flowing in! (Im not sure of this is correct, i dont follow business!😉)

Baa cries, Savita you're very mean😡 Poor Baa! Then Gayatri and Daksha come to their pack leader.

G: Baa we are going shopping, if you need anything tell one of your sons we are going to be a bit too busy!

D: Arara, Baa I was wondering would you like to have some of my moisturiser, then you will become completely like Hemaji! Because right now you look a bit pale, you look completely like Rekha!

They all start laughing evily and they go outside, Baa cries😭 I really wish I could hit them with a shoe, that will teach them not to mess with Baa!😡

Baa cries...her sons come. They start talking and JD doesn't seem to be listening.

B: Arre Mansukh, Himmat where are you going to work?

M: Yes Baa, we were going to the office, do you want something?

B: No but thanks for asking...

They nod their heads and go...

Baa cries even more. Babuji comes...

B: Not even my sons reliase it's my birthday, why Thakurji?

Babuji comes...

BB: I have something to give to you.

B: What is it?..

BB: A letter from Mihir...

B: Mihir? OHHHH, HES FINISHED! HE'S COMING! I knew that out of everyone he would never forget, he is my real grandson! When everyone else doesn't know, he remembered it!

BB: Amba I told you na, Mihir is this house's Ram.

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A man walks from his car, holding something in his hand. He picks up a picture of Baa and says:

Man=M

M: Baa how could I not remember your birthday, it is beyond me to do that. Whenever it has been your birthday have I ever forgotten? Not at all, my sweet Ba I will celebrate your birthday. You are the elder of this house and must be given respect!

"Ram, Ram, Jai Raja Ram" starts playing as the man walks away from his car.

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Meanwhile a young lady is shown praying to God, bells ring and the girl starts to run towards the Virani House as "Ram, Ram, Jai Sita Ram" starts again.

Lady=L

L: Baa, I'm coming. You know? I haven't forgot your birthday at all! I will give you a surprise! I will never forget when your birthday is!

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The two people are shown side by side while walking, but not in the same area. As in, they are in different places but going to the same destination lets say!😳 The man holds a phone to his ear, and the lady holds some Rangoli! The KSBKBT song starts playing...(I like the title song so thats why I'm playing it!😃)

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Baa sees a girl running towards her she looks carefully with her specs on, and nearly jumps in delight (a bit too much of it lately).

B: I know that 3 people know it's my birthday. My sweet pati Govardhan. My grandson Mihir, who is my one and only Ram. And last of all, the kindest of all and the purest of all that can do no wrong! My Tulsi!

L: Baa! Happy Birthday!

She touches Baa's feet.

B: May God keep you happy forever!

L: Why Baa, do you always have to be so formal with me!

B: Oh so that wasn't formal touching my feet?

L: Yes but Baa, it's my sanskar! I have to uphold it, you know! Besides I was just joking, your my elder I have to respect you now.

B: That's my Tulsi.

L: Oh and look what I got for you! It is a Tulsi plant!

B: My only wish is for that Tulsi plant to be as pure as you!

L: Baa you're embrassing me!

The lady goes outside.

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*She goes as the man also walks towards her and they bump into each other. The Rangoli is spilled all over the man. Then lady starts to laugh as the KSBKBT song starts playing, then two people are finally introduced as the main characters; Mihir and Tulsi. Mihir gazes deep into Tulsi's eyes as she gets embrassed and turns away.*

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I hope you liked that, you are free to post your views on what is going to happen next and give me some ideas! Okay! I hope you liked it!

Love Shiv!

Edited by pikablu - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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plz can sum1 reply i worked very hard during my free time 😭 😭 😭
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that was great..i even forgot some of the details..great job 😊
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great job... but iz this how teh story actually started .??????i m curious...
continue sooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: rani712

great job... but iz this how teh story actually started .??????i m curious...
continue sooon
rani

actually nooo... some bits were from the beginning (but that was a long time ago so maybe not) but this also has my own scenes like the Daksha-Himmat scene😉

Edited by pikablu - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ok well here is the next part, sorry if it was a little late

Short Version:

Tulsi and Mihir stare into each other's eyes while Savita watches with anger.
  • Bauji talks to Tulsi and call her to say that she is invited for a small pooja in the evening for Baa.
  • Someone is shown entering the house, it's Shakti Anand introduced as Hemant! Everyone asks him about his project and he says its a succes. Just then Mihir comes and everyone becomes happy!
  • Mihir goes to Baa to give the present. He then goes to Savita's room where he meets Savita.
  • Everyone is getting ready for the pooja, Daksha gets irritated at Himmat.
  • *Tulsi comes to the house looking beautiful, Gayatri, Daksha and Savita look angry. Baa, Babuji and Mihir look happy.*-Best Scene
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    Mihir and Tulsi gaze into each other's eyes. Tulsi blushes as Mihir picks up her hands. They start to engage in a huge hug. Savita sees and becomes mad.

    T: Mihir! Stop what if someone sees us?

    M: It doesn't matter! I love you! I haven't seen you for 5 years do you know how much I've missed you? I can't stand getting engaged to someone else instead of you!

    T: I love you and missed you a lot too! I wish you could have been here instead of abroad. I also, wish you weren't engaged to someone else (she starts crying).

    Mihir comforts her. They get back into a cute little hug. Tulsi looks down to see a present.

    M: Don't worry Tulsi everthing will be alright.

    T: (A present? Ah! It must be for Baa. Silly, he must of forgotten while meeting me). Don't you have to give that to Baa, Mihir?

    M: Oh yeah! Sorry, forgot to!

    T: Don't apologize to me, apologize to Baa. She's been waiting for you all this time!

    M: You always think of others, especially my family. That's one of the reasons I love you. Well bye, I'll see you later!

    T: Mihir one of the reasons I love you is because of what you've done for my father and well we wouldn't want to forget our childhood days, now would we? Well anyway, bye!

    Mihir smiles then goes into his house, Tulsi runs along to the mandir. Savita has watched all of this.

    S: Well! How dare that Tulsi try and take Mihir! I'll see how that woman gets her hands on my son! And how could he meet her first! As a child she wasn't enough now she wants Mihir again? I won't let the engagement with Payal break. But, Mihir was supposed to meet us first in Australia not that poor girl!

    Daksha hears this. She looks very happy.

    D: Ararara! Bhabhi! You don't know these villagers! They can go to any extent to get money. And your son is in range. You should be very careful, otherwise there will be Khushi for Tulsi and Gham for you.

    Savita looks angry.

    S: I will prevent her from getting into this house! I will do whatever it takes to make sure she doesn't get close to Mihir.

    Savita goes into the house.

    D: Popkorn Khao Aur Mast Ho Jao! Now Daksha watch, the special thriller movie which Bhabhi will enleash out! Arara!

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    Back in Shanti Niketan. Bauji tries to get hold of Tulsi. He knows one place where he will find her, in the mandir.

    B: Tulsi?

    T: Babuji? Why did you come here? You should have called me!

    B: Tulsi. How could I do that when you were here.

    T: You could have called Raghu Kaka to call me, why do you take the trouble of coming here?

    B: Fine please forgive me! (he says sarcastically).

    T: No Babuji don't do that. Elders should never ask for forgiveness from children!

    B: Arre Baba, I was only joking. Anyway we are keeping a small pooja for Baa's birthday. So I was wondering if you could come today?

    T: Anything for Baa, I will of course come! (she giggles) Oh Bauji I need to go to the shop to buy some Ganga water, I'll see you later, bye!

    Tulsi runs to the nearby shop.

    B: That's it stay like you are! That's our Tulsi, an ideal person who always cares for others!

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    A man walks in holding a briefcase. He walks in like a cool person and then his face is shown. Everyone is happy.

    G: Hemant!!!! My son!!!! How was the business deal?

    H: It was great Ma, we got the deal the tender is ours!

    JD: Wonderful son, look Gayatri how our son is gaining ground for our company.

    M: I knew Hemant would take our business far, Kaka!

    Everyone turns around and then they see Mihir! One after the other they embrace him.

    Mansukh: Beta, how are you? We missed you a lot! I can't believe it's been 5 years!

    M: I'm fine, I missed everyone a lot as well. I couldn't stand being away from India!

    H: Bhaiya your back and that's all that counts.

    M: Hemant I hope that you've been handling everything here.

    H: Yes Bhaiya, I've done everthing that you've would have done.

    Mihir smiles.

    M: Oh yeah! Papa where is Baa?

    Mkh: Upstairs. Go quickly as she has been waiting for you for a long time.

    Mihir rushes upstairs.

    M: Baa! Here I've got you a present that you'll love.

    B: A statue of Ganesh!

    M: Sorry Baa but in Australia I couldn't find many things that you would have liked.

    B: That's alright Beta! What matters is the thought. And of all the people I know, I knew that you would remember my birthday! And besides a murti of Ganesh is amazing! I will put here on my desk.

    M: Oh I have to go now Baa. As I have to meet Ma.

    B: Oh right! She is in her room I believe.

    M: Thanks Baa, ok bye, see you later!

    Mihir hurries along.

    B: Savita must have done a lot of good deeds in her past life to have such a great son!

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    S: Mihir!!! How are you? Did you enjoy Australia?

    She hugs Mihir tightly.

    M: Yes thank you Maa.

    S: That's good.

    M: So are you getting ready for the pooja.

    S: What pooja?

    M: For Baa's birthday.

    S: Oh yes! How could I forget about that!

    M: Come down quickly!

    S: Yes, yes I will!

    Mihir leaves.

    S: My saans just had to have her birthday now! Oh what should I wear? Maybe, this blue topaz necklace or this silver diamond necklace. My bangles as well! Oh and the bindi...(she blabbers on and on and on about the jewelery)

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    Daksha is trying to find a suitable sari, when she bumps into Himmat.

    D: Himmat!!!!! I was trying to find a sari and now you've made me drop my earrings!!!

    H: But, Daksha why are wearing such formal clothing for a pooja in our own house. Without people and with just the house people. I don't get it?

    D: Himmat!!!!!

    H: Yes???

    D: Just as Devdas couldn't live without his love. I cannot live without my love........jewelery!

    H: I thought I was your love...

    D: Oh common Himmat stay with me! I have many different loves; diamonds, pearls, gold, silver, neckalces, emeralds...SRK...

    H: Nooooooo!!! How could you cheat on me for that Shah Rukh Khan!!!

    D: Ararara Himmat! It's only a dream, and as we all know some dreams don't come true. So you pray that this dream doesn't come true.

    H: Yes! That's what I should do!

    Himmat leaves the room.

    D: And I'll pray it comes true! Oh I can't wait!

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    He: Raghu Kaka keep the Ram statue in the middle of Sita and Laxman.

    B: So are all the arragements done Hemant?

    H: Yes Babuji.

    B: Excellent, where is Mihir now? Someone is coming especially for Mihir.

    H: Who is that?

    B: Let's just say it's a special someone.

    H: Ah I see! Well Bhaiya is...

    They look up and see Mihir coming down the staircase.

    H: Coming down the staircase! Ok should we start?

    B: Not quite yet!

    Someone enters the door, everyone looks and Tulsi walks in with a beatiful golden sari. Everyone looks as she walks in. Savita is not pleased. Daksha and Gayatri look displeased with Tulsi. Baa and Babuji are happy, Mihir stares at Tulsi and Tulsi slowly walks to him.

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    Well I hope you liked that part! Enjoy more coming soon.

    Edited by pikablu - 18 years ago

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