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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
DAY 1
Ritu was talking over phone....and from the other side someone was giving her a comliment...

"Well done Ritu...Well done.....Tumne to acchha dimag lagaya ...Rajveer ko dhamkaane ka isse accha mauka humein nahin milta....aur isse achha plan to mujhe bhi nahin milta...

Ritu---Thanks ....Woh to kamal lights katne ki wajah se hua...Jisne bhi ye kaam kiya who ye nahin janta ki usne hamaari kitni madad kii hai.... Uske is silly se prank ne bahut kamala dikhaya hai....Jaise hi andhera hua....Main rajveer ke kamre main gayi aur who note chod diya....Aakhir uske rooms ki duplicate chaabiya kis din kaam aati....

The person on the other side says----
Ab aage kya plan kya hai??
Ritu-----Mian rajveer ke phones tapped kar diye hain....Bas mujhe yeh jaanna hai ki woh rigger kis din chupayega........Uske pehle mujhe trigger haasil karma hai....Ab hum apni manzil ke bahut kareeb hain....ab humein koi nahin rok sakta....
Other person---Ok...Good luck....Over and out.....
Ritu----Yeah...
And then she puts down the receiver....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22

Rajveer har ladki aur faculty members ki rooms ki talaashi lene ka bahana karta hai....Rotine inspection ke bahaane who har room check karta hai.....har ek kamre ki chaanbeen karta hai....Ki kahin use koi suraag mil jaye....Par use abhi tak safalta nahin mili thi....

At last ab Naina hi bach gayi thi....Uske room ki talaashi karne ki baari thi....Waise to Rajveer ko yeh pata tha ki naina spy nahin hai....Lekin phir bhi who naina se milne kii aas mein uske room jaana chahta tha....Woh uske room jaata hai..darwaaja khatkhata hai....
"Knock Kock Knock Knock...."

Naina andar se awaaz deti haai..
Naina---ek minute....
Then she comes and opens the door to find Captain rajveer standing before her....
Naina----Aap yahan???Sir maine aapse pehle hi kaha tha ki main....

Rajveer use beech main hi tokta hai aur kehta hai......
Rajveer---Cadet Naina Singh...This is ur routine room inspection....Can I proceed??
Naina---Oh...Yeah/.....Ok sir....

Rajveer enters the room and aise hi....idhar udhar check karne ka natak karta hai....There was a strange tension between them....Then rajveer opens the cupboard and searches through the pile of clothes and comes across a photo of Him n naveen standing together...that was taken during their college days....

Rajveer---Naina please ...kya tum ek baar phir se mere bare main nahin soch sakti??/ Please?? Kyun tum apne aap se door bhaag rahi ho?? Aue kyun ye mane se inkaar kar rahi ho ke....

Naina----Sir please stop it....Aap kyun baar baar mujhe yeh manwaane pe tule hue hain ke main aapse pyaar karti hoon??? Please aap chale jayiye......chale jayiye yahan se......Please.....Bhagwaan ke liye meri zindagi se bhi door chale jayiyae......

Rajveer takes a deep breathe and says.....
Rajveer---theek hai...chala jata hoon main yahan se...Aur bahut zaldi tumhare zindagi se bhi....door....bahut doorr.......
Tab agar tum mujhe awaaz bhi dogi to bhi main wapis nahin aaoonga....ye mera waada raha tumse....

And as teard trickled out of his eyes....he went out of her room.....
Somewhere.....
Ritu takes out the earphones.....and says----
Ritu----Oh...To Captain rajveer naina se mohabbat karne lage hain...i see...... good good.....interesting.....Par ye routine inspection kya hai...mujhe pata lagana padega.....

Dr Ritu has fitted a microphone in Rajveer's collar......and was listening to everything that captain Rajveer was saying.....and doing...

DAY 2
Rajveer ne har room check kar liya tha....Ab sirf Ritu ka room baaki tha....He searches for her to ask her permission but she was not to be found....But the room was left open....

Rajveer----Lagta hai mujhe aapke permission ke bagair hi aapka room check karna padega Dr Mishra......
Rajveer goes inside and closes the door from inside.....

Rajveer searches for the drawers and shelves and almirahs....but all he found was some useless KMA files...and some other things....The lockers were closed shut and rajveer failed to see what was inside them....
He was very disappointed and in a very bad mood.....So he kicked the dustbin from his leg....

As a result....tyhe dustbin fell revealing its contents....
Rajveer lets out a sigh....and began to put back all the contents back to the dustbin.....when suddenly his eyes fell on a crumbled copy of magazine.......Curious...he opened the magazine and browsed through its contents....When he came across some pages....in some articles...he found 5that some letters of the headings were missing....Somebody had cut the out....
Rajveer's suspicions aroused.....He pulls out the anonymous letter that he had received that day morning....and spread it out on the table....and he matched the leters of the letter with those of the magazine.....And they were matching perfectly.......Yes...they were cut from the very magazine that was in the hands of Rajveer...

Then a mixed feeling of confusion and surprise washed over him....All things were falling into place.....correctly.....So it was clear that Dr Ritu Mishra....was the one who sent him the letter......
Rajveer---DR.RITU MISHRA...I am surprised......

Just then the microphone fell off from his collar.....and he picked it up and glanced suspiciously....and obviously shocked .....

Rajveer----Oh...To Dr,Ritu mishra ne meri jaasoosi bhi shuru kar di hai.....I see...Intelligent.....

Just then he heard the footsteps coming nearer...Hurriedly he picks up the magazine and stuffed it back inside the dutbin and puts the dustbin back in its place....And then he puts the microphone...and the letter inside his pocket....when the door opened......

Just then Dr Ritu Mishra pushes the door open.....and steps inside....and was taken aback to see Rajveer inside her room...

Ritu---Captain Rajveer?? Aap yahan??? Mere kamre main?? Koi kaam tha kya???

Rajveer was stumbling at his words....and without knowing what to say... next.....

Rajveer---Oh...uh...oh...unmmm......Woh actually....main..woh....Hann...actually main aapse milna chahta tha....Kya hum dono baat kar sakte hain??? Ek cup coffee ke saath??? Ek doosre ko jyaada se jyaada behtar jaane ke liye??
Yehi poochne ke liye main aapke paas aya tha...par aap thi nahin...to main andar chala aya...I hope u don't mind....

Ritu was confused and was refusing to believe what Rajveer was trying to make her believe....But still she said....

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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
Ritu----Oh..no no captain...aap kabhi bhi yahan aa sakte hain..feel comfortable....Main to bas aise hi pooch rahi thi...kyunkii aap is tarah achanak hi....Aur rahi baat coffee peene ki...to I am sorry main aaj nahin aa sakti...aaj main thodi busy hoon.....To kya hum baad main baatein kar sakte hain>>>

Rajveer---Oh..Sure sure...I don't mind....Ok...I should leave now...have a good day....

And then he moves away from Ritu' s room and thinks outside....

Rajveer---Mujhe ab pata chala....Ke aap itni busy kyun hai....Koi baat nahin aage aage dekhiye hota hai kya....

Ritu thinks in her room---- Aakhir captain Rajveer Yahan aaye kyun the?? Kuch to gadbad hai....Kahin use mere lagaye hue microphone ke bare main to nahin pata chala???
And sayin so...she opens a locked drawer with the help of her keys....and listens to captain rajveer....He was talking to some student outside the corridor....
Ritu---Microphone to theek hai...Phir baat kyat hi?????

DAY---3
Huda comes to Naina's room but nobody was present there....

Huda---Are yaar...kahan gayin ye dono....Pooja to apne Rohit ke saath hogi....Ab Ye naina kahan rah gayi??? Khair koi baat nahin....Main yahan baith ke uska intezaar karta hoon....


Then Huda looks over Naina's belongings.....On the table...a diary was left open..Huda becomes curious....and took the diary and began to read.....

Huda---Naina ki diary??? Wow....Ab pata chalega...ke naina mere bare aakhir kya sochti hai???

He began turning pages of the diary...and at last came across the last night's entry....He began to read......
***************************************************
What is written in Naina's Diary???
What will Ritu do next??
What was Rajveer saying about leaving Naina's life??
Catch out the next episode.....
"Aaj raat Captain Rajveer aur Ritu mam ki engagement thi....Aur main khud ko rok nahin payee.....Specially jab mujhe yeh pata chal chukka hai ki Captain Rajveer bhi mujhse pyaar karte hain.....Haan haan Captain rajveer mujhse bahut pyaar karte hain....Unhone aaj khud mujhse yeh kah diya....Main bhi unse yeh kehewna chahti thi ki main bhi unhe kitnaa pyaar karti hoon....Par kah nahin payii...Pata nahin kyun....shayad isiliye kyunkii unhone engagement kar li hai....ya phir isiliye ki main huda ka dil phir se todna nahin chahti....Par huda ko ye main kaise samjhaaooon ke who sirf mera achha dost hai...sirf mera dost...achha dost.....aur woh hamesha woahi mee liye rahega...Aaj usne mujhse maafi mangi....Par main jaanti hoon....Ke who mujhse pyaar karta hai...Pata nahin main kya karun?? Apne best friend ki khushi ke liye uska saathdoon ya phir apne dil ki baat sunu aur Captain Rajveer ko apne dil ki baat kah doon???"

Huda realsise that Captain Rajveer and Naina truly love each other...and in some way or the other...he was coming between them....And naina looks to him a s a best friend only....Then he suddenly realizes that how selfish he had been to naina and rajveer....
Huda thinks----Maine sirf Naina ko cheenne chaha...sirf use paana ...haasil karma...Par captain rajveer ne naina ko bina paye hi pyaar kiya....woh dono ek doosre ko pyaar karte hain...karte hue bhi,,,,ek doosre ko kuch nahin kah paate,,,,,main kitna galat tha..Main in dodno chahne walon ko alag karma chahta tha....Phir meri mammiji kya sochti mere bare main??? Nahin...ab aur nahin....Mian apni galti sudharna chahta hoon....Main un dodno ke beech nahin aaoonga....Main ab un dodno ko milaoonga....Haan...Aakhir pyaar ka doosra naam Dosti hi to hai......Main naina ko khush dekhna chahta hoon....hamesha....Aaj se huda badal gaya hai....Haan....Main Niana aur captain Rajveer ko milaoonga....
Saying so Huda lefts the room....with tears in his eyes....He was sad that Naina doesn't love him...But happy that atleast Naina will be happy with Captain Raj
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
Rajveer thinks in his room...holding the microphone.....
Dr Mishra ab aapka microphone...hi meri madad karega....Yehi mujhe aaptak pahunchayega....Mere paas to koi subut nahin hai...ki aap is KMA main spy banker ayeen thi.....Ab lekin aapki madad se main aapka nakaab utarunga.....Aap bas dekhti jayiye...

Rajveer then thinks of a plan and then he calls his Sir....and talks with him...holding the microphone...near his moth....
Meanwhile....listening...to the earphone was Ritu...She was listening very attentively to the conversation going between Rajveer and his Sir...

Rajveer to sir in lous voice---- Sir maine soch liya hai...Humein trigger ko hamare headquarters main shift kar dena padega....Kyunkii spy ko ye pata chal chukka hai...ki hamara trigger kahan chupaya gaya hai.....Sir aapka kya khayal hai???

Sir from the other side---Theek hai rajveer ..jaisa tum theek samjho....Par dhyaan rahe....Trigger ekdum theek hona chahiye....

Rajveer---Jee sir...OK....then..
And he puts down the receiver.....
Ritu takes out the earphone from her ears...and says to herself....

Ritu---Oh..oh..captain....lagta hai...aap darr gaye meri dhamki se....Isiliye to aap trigger shift karne ki koshish main hain....lekin ab mujhe jald se jald Trigger haasil karma padega...isse pehele ki aap jagah change kar dein....

And Rajveer thinks----
Rajveer----Ritu ji...aap jaroor soch main pad gayin hogi....Ke ab aap kya karengi...mera plan sunkar....aap jald hi mere jaal main phansne waali hain.....Bas paanchwe din ka intezaar karte rahiye.....Tum bach nahin sakti...
Day --4
Ritu has invited Captain Rajveer over breakfast.....
When Rajveer enters...Ritu Mishra's room...he found that the wholeroom was dark...except the cadles....the room was dimly lit only.....
The table was full of mainy food items...ranging from parathas....soups...salad.....and wine...also...
Rajveer finds all this suspicious.....
Rajveer----Ye sab kya hai...Dr mishra??
Ritu---aap hi ne to kaha tha...ki aap mujhse baat karma chahte hain...phir ab kya hua??

Rajveer---haan maine kaha tha...par...itna sab...kyun??
Ritu---ab aur kuch mat kahiye...aayiye baithitye...hum khana suru karte hain....
Rajveer----actually mujhe bhoook nahin hai...maine pehle hi khana khaa liya tha...I am sryyy aapko pehle se inform karma chahiye th...

Ritu was disappointed...
Ritu---Phir ek glass drink to aapko mere saath lena hi padega...main kuch nahin jaanti.....
Rajveer—par...itni subah subah....
Ritu---Par war main kuch nahin janti...
Then she takes out 2 glasses and pours wine in both of them....
But when rajveer was not noticing...she slipps some powder inside his drink.....
Then she gives the glass to Rajveer..
Rajveer was reluctant to drink it..
Ritu---comeon captain...maine itne pyaar se aapke liye breakfast banaya tha..apne to nahin khaya par atleast yeh drink to khatam kijiye....please..

Rajveer...Ok....dr Mishra...
Tabhi Ritu ke mobile pe phone aaata hai...
And she goes away...
Meanwhile...Rajveer gets up...and throws the drink in the wash basin in the absence of Ritu..

When Ritu comes back...she notices rajveer's empty glass and smiles with satisfaction and says to herself....Ritu—ab main acchi tarah se apna kaam kar sakti hoon...aur rajveer...tab aap gahri neend main honge......
Its night time.....
Everybody is sleeping....
There is utter silence everywhere....But somewhere...a dark sinister figure...was moving quietly.....carefully..fearing that she may be seen by someone...she had revolver in her hand.....and a torch in the other.....Ritu moves to the secret room.....which was also serving as a store room for KMA...
The room was closed...but Ritu slowly punches the card that she got from rajveer....nad the door opens....She goes inside silently......
Ritu was proceeding with the help of a torch light.....She enters a small secret room..Then she removes a large box carefully only to reveal a secret locker...behind it......
Slowly she begans to feed the code ...very slowly...and attentively.....and then..CLICK....the locker opens up....
And she exclaims...silently....but delightfully ...Aha......and she puts her hand inside .....she finds it completely.....She seemed confused......Ritu frowns in horror..and is annoyed...
Ritu---Trigger kahan gaya/?? Meri information ke mutabik to trigger ko aj yahin pe hona chahiye tha....Captain Rajveer to Trigger kal shift karne waale the.....Phir trigger kahan gaya?? Use to yahin kahin hona chahiye tha..
And saying this...she begins to search frantically...inside the locker....
Then a voice came from behind....
Kyun Chunk Gayi Dr Ritu Mishra??
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
Dr Ritu flungs back to see Captain Rajveer standing before him...with a revolver aimed directly at her....
Dr Ritu tries to be innocent-----Aaap...aap.....Kya kah rahe hain??? Captain eri to kuch samajh main nahin aa raha....
Main to yahan ...actually....maine kisi ko dekha yahan pea ate hue....To main uske peeche peeche aa gayi...

Rajveer---Aapki koshish bekaar hai Dr Mishra....ab aap apna ye nakaab utar dijiye.....Mujhe sab kuch pata chal chukka hai....Aap hi who spy thi KMA main...Jo meri jaasosi karne aayi thi....Ek baar nahi..baar baar....Aap hi ne naveen ko bhi fasaya tha....Aur to aur mere drink main aaj aap hi ne neend ki goli milayi thi...taaki aap aaj aaram se trigger chura sake...Kyun maine theek kaha naa/?? Aap mere har kaam pe nazar rakhti thi....Aur suriji pe hamlaa bhi aap hi ne kiya tha....Aur is room ka code aur locker ka password bhi aap hi ne mere room se churaya tha....yahan tak ki mere collar pe kal aapne Microphone bhi lagaya tha....gud gud...i was impressed....Par ek galati kar dee apne..dustbin main aapko who magazine ka copy nahin chodna chahiye tha.....

Then Ritu too points out the gun aiming at rajveer---
Ritu---Haan main hi who spy hoon...Maine hi ye sab kuch kiya hai....Navin ko bhi deshdrohi maine saabit kiya tha...aur agar aaj aap mere raaste main nahin aate...to mera yahan aane ka maksad ab tak poora ho chukka hota.....Par abhi bhi kuch nahin bigada...Main tumhe bhi deshdrohi saabit kar sakti hoon.....Waise bhi Brigadear Chandok meri hi baat ka yakin karenge.....Woh tumpe bharosa hi kitna karte hain.,....
Mujhe trigger de do...captain or else I will shoot...

Rajveer---Goli chalane ki galati kabhi mat karma....Zara apne peeche nazara to dekhiye.....

Ritu turns aroud and surprisingly....many orderlies came out from their hiding place...pointing....their guns at ritu.....and surrounding her....Brigadear Chandok and Rajveer's Sir also enters the room.....
Then Rajveer comes forward and takes the revolver out of Ritu's hand....
Brigadear Chandok----Dr Ritu mishra..ab aap back ke nahin jaa sakti....aap range haathon giraftaar ho rahi hain....Ye saara plan captain rajveer ka tha...unhone jaan boojh ke trigger shifht karne ki khabar di thi...taaki tum aaj raat yahan trigger churane main aao...aur pakdi jaao....Maine sab kuch sun liya hai.....Aapko sharam aani chahiye....ke aap apne hi desh ke saath gaddari karne pe tuli hui hain.....aap desh ke naam pe ek kalank hain....Arrest her immediately....
The orderly arrests Dr Ritu Mishra....and takes her out of the room....
B.C.-----Captain Rajveer I am prod of you...I am sory ke maine tumpe kabhi yakin nahin kiya.....
Rajveer—Its OK sir....Woh kehete hain naa....Subah ka bhoola agar shaam ko ghar aaye to use bhoola nahin kahte...

Then they both laugh.....
It's a scene of a function...Every faculty member was present there....All the students were also there....They were whispering among themselves....what they have heard that day morning.....
That Dr Ritu was a spy....and Captain Rjaveer was a secret agent who had helped to get her arrested,......And how bravely captain has saved the trigger from the hands of terrorists.....This news was taking time to sink in....Huda Ali Alekh yudi Pooja and naina were also there....As BC presided over the function and came forward to speak.....all the students stopped whispering and there was silence everywhere....They were too eager to know what had actually happened.....

B.C.----My dear students....Aap sabko ab tak pata chal chukka hoga....Ki hamare beech ek spy tha...Jo desh ke saath gaddari kar raha tha...Aur who koi nahin balki aapki apni Dr Ritu Mishra thi.....Lekin..Thanks to Cptn Rajveer...aaj unhi ki madad se humne us spyt ko range haathon pakada hai....Ab Ritu jail main umar kaid ki sazaa bhugat rahi hai....Aur aap sabhi ke liye ek khush khabari bhi hai...Aaj hum Captain rajveer ko Major Rajveer banana jaa rahe hain......
Everybody clapps and whistles...
Rajveer gets up and comes near he stage.....BC fixes a Medal on his shirt....and they both salute at each other.....Now rajveer begins to speak.....Everybody cheers and applauses......

Rajveer-----Mujhe bahut khushi mehsoos ho rahi hai ki main aaj apne missipon main kamyaab raha....Saath hi saath maine ye bhi saabit kar diya hai ki...Captain Naveen Singh Ahluwalia ek spy nhain tha.....Woh ek sachha desh bhakt tha....Use Ritu ne fasaya tha...Aaj bade dino ke baad aakhir kar....uske naam se who kalank mit gaya hai....Aur use veergati se sammanit kiya jaa raha hai...bahut jald....

Naina beams with pleasure at this news.....After all uska bhi aaj KMA aane ka makshad poora ho gaya hai......Uske bhaiya ke naam se deshdrohi ka kalank mit gaya hai....Aur who bhi...sirf captain rajveer ki madad se....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#26
Rajveer---- Mujhe KMA aake bahut accha laga....Yahan ke students faculty members.....Sabse mujhe dher saara pyaar mila hai...Par kabhi khushi hai to kabhi gham.....Mujhe aap logon ko yeh batate hue bahut dukh ho raha hai ki....mere KMA aane ka maksad poora ho gaya hai.....Aur isiliye...Mujhe KMA chodkar wapis jaana padega....

Everybody started to murmur......They hadn't anticipated this.....naina was also shocked.....She realizes for the first time....That how lonely she will be if Rajveer will go away.....She was filled with despair and a sense of loss too....
The students started shouting----Don't go sir...PLEASE.......Dont leave KMA......

Rajveer----aap log please shaant rahiye....Please..sorry...maine ye faisla le liya ha...aur main aaj hi KMA se jaa raha hoon.....Mere yahan ruklne ki koi wajah nahin hai....
Saying so he looks directly at Naina.....
And naina shifts uncomfortably in her chair,...aware of the reason that Why rajveer was leaving..
Rajveer----that's all...Thanks you....

Saying so....He left the function..and goes to his room....to pack his things up...
All students and faculty member left the place..sadly....Naina was standing there all alone....She was thinking...that she has to do something....soon......so that rajveer will not go away...after all it was naina who had asked him to leave that day...
She had to do something.....
What is this?? Captain Rajveer is going to leave KMA???
What will Niana do now???
Can she tell him now how much she loves himmm...Or Not??
Finally ur wait is OVER...THE LAST EPISODES ARE COMING NEXT...
KEEP UR FINGERS CLOSED........

rajveer was taking out his clothes and other things...from the closet...and shelves....and started packing them in suitcases....with a heavy heart....He was too unwilling to go...but he has no other option...he had to leave KMA for Naina's sake...coz she herself asked him to go out of her life....He was really hurt that day...and so actually now he is leaving her life....
Just then there was a knock on the door....
rajveer--come in..
And Pooja Ali Alekh n Yudi enter the room...
Ali---Sir please KMA chod kar mat jayiye...ek aao hi to the,,,jo hamari har mushkil main hamara saath dete the...aur aaj aap hi jaa rahe hain...
Pooja--Yes sir..please mat jayiye naa...warna hamara poora network dow ho jayega....
Alekh--Sir please itni bhaw mat khayiye aur ruk jayiye....
Yudi----Sir..... Please...Mat jayiye na...U are our Ideal....
rajvver smiles and says...--sorry friends...I have to go.....Main ruk nahin sakta....
then Lolitha and Shalini and Suriji enters too...
Dr Shalini hugs Rajveer and hands over a box to him...
Shalini--ye first Aid kit hai..waise main chahti to nahin ki aap iska istemaal karen...par aap jaise insaan ke peeche to hamesha dushman lage rahte hain...so...keep this...
Suriji too hugs rajveer and pats him on his back...
Suriji---Oye khotya...To bhi hamein naveen ki tarah chod kar jaa raha hai...Tere aane se KMa main Khushi aur hansi ka mahaul chaa gaya tha...ab tu bhi jaa raha hai...

everybody was sad and sabhi ki aankhon main aasoon tha...only Huda and Naina...were the only 1 absent there...
But Raj kisi ki baat nahin sunta...and takes his luggage and suitcase...and goes out of his room....everybody comes ttoo...to see him for the last ime...each n every student and faculty were there....
rajveer wanted to see naina...but she was not around..
When raj came near the amar jyoti...he salutes the aag..
and then goes with an orderly in a jeep to staition..
everybody waves him good bye..
Rajveer did not look behind...he was leaving KMa..Naina....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#27
rajveer was waiting for his train in the platform...he was sitting all by himself...with lugaages all around him..
Naina aur KMA ke baare main soch soch ke use rona aa raha tha...
So he places hio shands and covers...his face with his hands...
And starts to cry....
then suddenly he heard somebdy calling his name...the voice was familiar...
he turns around to look at HUDA standing before him..
He gets up...
Huda--Sir main aaj apko jaane nahin doonga...Main janta hoon ki maine jindagi main bahut se galat kaam kiye hain..par main ye bhi janta hoon ke aaj jo main karne jaa raha hoon woh sahi hai..
Rajveer smiles at huda and looks at him happily...and hugs him..
raj--nahin huda aaj mujhe jaana hi padega...I am sorry main ruk nahin sakta....
then Huda says--ek minute..
and goes behind the wall and brings naina forward from her hiding place....then he places naian's hands in raj's hands and says..
Huda---Kya ab bhi aap nahin rukenge???Mujhe yeh karne main bahut takleef horahi hai...Isiliye main yahan se jaata hoon....Ab faisla aap dono par hai...
saying so Huda leaves the staition...wiping the tears that rolled out of his eyes...He was sad that he is gonna loose naian...but happy that naian will be happy for what he did....So a smile of satisfaction was on his face...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
rajveer stood there...standing there...holding naian's hand in his....looking at naian/////naina was not looking at rajveer...usne apni aankhen neeche khuka li thi...Woh apne aap se sharminda thi...then rajveer's train came blowing its whistle loudly....
And raj came back to his senses....and he llosens his grip from naian's hands...holds his suitcases,,,and says....
rajveer--Ok naian...Ab mujhe jaana hai..meri gaadi aa gayi hai..Bye...
rajveer waits for a few sec to see what naian was telling....But naian kuch nahin bolti...she doesnt find any words what to say....She just looks at rajveer as if pleading him not to go....
As Naina kuch nahin bolti....so raj steps into the train and takes up a window seat to sit down...
naina saysa at last----
Sir..Kya aapko sach main jana hai?? kya aap ruk nahin sakte hain>??
rajveer says nothin---- he wanted naian to confess that she loves him too..but naian was not saying anything about that....So rajveer shakes his head in NO....
Then the guard blew his whiistle....and waves his green flag....Naina looks at horror...she has to do something..soon....then she runs away....
rajvver was surprised that naian turned to leave.....without saying anything....
The train was now about to move any moment...
just then rajveer hears an annoncement....It was NAINA's voice....
she was saying from the announcer's room....everybody was listening in the platform....to what she was saying..
"Rajveer sir,,,aap jahan kahin bhi hain...please yeh baat suniye...Mat jayiye....Mian aaj aapse woh baat kehena chahti hoon jo aine aapse kabhi nanhin kahi....Par aaj woh waqt aa gaya hai...yes..main aapse pyaar karti hoon bahut bahut pyaar...
I forgot to say that I love you....
I forgot to say I love you..
When angry words came and my mind made me feel that our relationship is wrong....I forgot to say I love you...
When the hurt inside me grew and the only pain I could feel was my own.....I forgot to say I love you...
When tears began to fall and stubborn pride made me close my heart to urs...I forgot to say I love you...
When I said maybe It was best that we should end this...and go on in our separate ways..i forgot to say I love you..
When disbelief washed over me...i forgot to say i love you...
when the door closed and al that reamined was my silence and quite tears..i forgot to say I love you....
I forgot to say how much joy u brought in my life....
I forgot to say that u were the most interesting part of my day....i forgot to say that a day without u left something empty inside me....
I forgit to tell u how i thrilled to the sight of ur sweet smile...and the sound of ur quite voice....
i forgot to tell u how much i valued u as a person...
I forgot to tell u that u were the one who taught me to struggle and gave me a hope to live....
i forgot to tell u that u were the one who was always on my side..no matter what happens...
i forgot to tell u that it was u who made me to fall in love...
when u turned to leave, when i could have reached out...but i didnt...because my pain clouded my judgement....i forgot to say I love you...
I simply forgot...
I know time has passed....and our lives are going to move forward....and what we shared remains in the past....But somehow....u know just what u did means to me....
What my memories still hold so dear,,,,,
Yet my strongest regret is not expressing my heart's constant whisper...
I LOVE YOU...
I LOVE U
I LOV U
Yes i luv u...
the train began to move.....slowly..then it takes up sped....faster and faster...naina listens as the train slowly moves out of the staition....taking out rajveer with him....rajveer has moved out of naina's life.....he is gone..naian ne bahut der kar di....
naian was hit by a pang of regret....and lonliness....she starts crying,.....use khus pe bahut gussa aa raha tha....Kyunki usne rajveer ko rokne ki pehle koshish nahin kii....
kash raj ko usne ye baat pehle kah dee hoti..kash.....to aaj woh uske saath KMA main hota...She cries desperately....in hope....captain rajveer please wapis aa jayiye..please////Plz mujhe akela chod kar mat jayiye...pls....
just the she heard somebody's hand on her shoulder....who was saying--dekho naian main aa gaya.....
Naina turns and looks at rajveer
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Rajveer apni baahein faila ke naian ka intezaar kar raha tha...naian jhat se uske paas daud ke chali jaati hia....and they embraced....crying in each other's arms....lovingly kissing each other....desperately wanting to be with each other forever....naina ke aasoon kab khushi main badal gaye use paat hi nahin chala.....raj train se utar ke naian ke paas aa gaya tha..aakhir naiana ne usse apne dil ki baat jo kah di thi....woh jo sunna chahta tha..usne sun liya ....
then atlast raj breaks the silence...
rajvere000ab yahan se wapis KMA chalen?? ya saare logon ko apne pyaar ka naxaara dikhayen???
naina looks around her..all the people were surrounding her..watching her..and they started clapping...at the couple's happy ending...
naian blushed with embarrasement....
naian--jaldi chalte hain....
And they smiled at each other....and went together hands in hands...to KMA..to start their new lives...happlily...
Arre ??? Aap kahan chal diye??
Uske baad baaki sab ka kya hua ye janna nahin hai kya???
naina nd rajveer are going to get married....and they are now least worried at what other people will think.....They are just waiting for naina's final year to get over....
naveen ko veer chakra se sammanit kiya gaya hai....naina's parents are happy..both wid this and also wid naia's choice..after all it was naveen's choice too...
Brigader chandok has retired,,,,,and hopefully it is captain rajveer who is going to be the next principal....
yudi ko neelu aur alekh ke riste ke baare main pata chala...par uske mana karne se bhi..neelu manne waalon main se hai kya???
Aur yudi..atlast...himmat dikha kar...simran ko kah deta hai...i love u..
aur simran use ek tamacha marti hai aur kahti hai---Itni choti si baat kahne main itni der laga di>>>???and at last kisses him...
Pooja ne rohit ke saath aane main saaf saaf inkaar kar diya....
After all....usne usko shaadi ke din manaa jo kar diya tha.....
and moreover....pooja ko to ali se pyaar tha.....Ali ne bhi atlast pooja ko propose kiya...and pooja ka jawaab bhi haan tha...

Itne saare couples ko dekh ke suriji ko bhi josh aa gaya.....
and unhone ek din nashe main aa kar Lolitha ko propose kar hi diya..
Pehle to lolitha ne naa kaha..par baad main unhone bhi suriji ka utra hua chehera dekh kar haan kar diya...
Major nair kaa bhi tabaadla ho gaya tha..unke badle main ek naya major aaya tha...major VISHAL...jo bilkul captain raveer ki tarah handsome aur fun loving tha...aur secreatly..Dr shalini ka dil uspe aa gaya hai....
Aur aapne yeh to nahin poocha ki Huda ka kya hua??
aayiye mil ke dekhte hain....
huda and Ali were standing in the cafetaria....when a tall and gorgeous girl entered....
She asked ali---Excuse me?? kya aap bata sakte hain ki girls hostel kis taraf hai>>???
Ali was about to say when Huda interrupted....and said..
Huda---Arre isse kya pata...humse pooch liya hota...hum aapko wahan tak chod dete....
saying that...huda holds naian's arms....
Woh ladki thoda gussa hoke huda ka haath apne haath se hata deti hai...
No thanks...aap se poochti...to hostel ki jagah kahin aur hi aap mujhe pahuncha dete shayad...Aur haan..apne haath hataiye..ladkiyon se kaise baat karte hain..shayad aapko nahin pata....
huda exclaims---Oye hoye...kya tewar hain....waise aapka naam kya hai.>>
the girl--aapse matlab??
huda--Khair koi baat nahin...aap to ekdum Niana jaisi hain..usi ke jaise tewar bhi hain...isiliye main aapko phoolan hi bulaoonga...Phoolan part II
Girl--What?? just shut up...
Huda---aah...bilkul naina....waise meri mammiji kahti hain.....
and he goes on n on n on....

Ab pata chala??Huda ko to phoolan part II mil gayi....Ab main soch rahi hoon...jis academy mein itne saare couples hain...kyun naa us academy ka naam kancheunjunga millitary academy se badal kar KANCHEUNJUNGA LOVE ACADEMY kar diya jaye??
Kyun ???
Aaapka kya khayal hai???
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
Aweome part n an awesome ff!!!! I absolutely luved it... esp da ending... it was soooo sweet n cute!!!! luved da phoolan part 2 loll 😆 😆 😆

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