Oblivious To The Obvious-pt13pg36-last pt - Page 9

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Posted: 18 years ago
#81
awwwww...so cuteee part!!! 👏 i luv the way u describe the thoughts goin' on in their mind!!!god...kripa eats soo much 😆 ...lol cont soon!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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angad is soo sweet and cute! i think kripa will fall for him sooner or later. anyways do continue soon😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesummmmm!!i realli cant think of words 2 describe ur FF scept it rocks!!hope kripa falls for Angad soon!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awsome ur descriptions very vivid especially the internal thought proceses i also like to know y cant she be nice for once to angad maybe coz shes oblivious to obvious 😆 sorry for the late coment but loved the exqusite and perfect title suits the fic
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Posted: 18 years ago
#85
awsome part dear
i hope our dear billionear wins the heart of his princess
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#86
AWwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, dat was soooooooooooo sweet, n i love the way angad tkes cre of her.... how adorable... n i like how u show their inner thoughts about love n how they act like they h8 each other... choooo chweet!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks so much you guys for the comments! just because i don't reply that doens't mean i don't read them i usually read all of them atleast twice 😳 ! i'm posting a part in 2 secs. so hold your horses!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Chapter 7:

It was evening already and both of them were locked in their rooms trying to get ready except their thoughts always wonder up to one another.

Angad finally got ready and was waiting in the living room when his cell phone started buzzing. He grabbed it and looked at the name calling. Uggh… not her again. What a chipku? She never leaves me alone. He simply cut it. The phone rang again, making him even more mad he picked it up. "WHAT AniTa?"

"Hey…" Anita said totally ignoring his rude comment. "So what's up Angad? Where have you been? I've been missing you so much, darling."

Arrgh… but anita I havn't been missing you so do me a favor and hang up. "Nothing, anita. Is there anything important you need to tell me?"

Right at that moment his eyes fell upon Kripa fumbling with her earring and walking down the steps. She looked gorgeous in that white strapless dress, it fell right above her knees. She had a simple necklace around her next with a simple diamond in it. She had silver earrings dangling down her ears.

All of a sudden, she felt like she was in a vertigo causing her to trip a stair. "Ah! Ah! Aaah…." She shut her eyes tightly and bit her lower lip, waiting for her to fall onto the floor but instead she felt strong arms grab her waist. They turned and Kripa landed right on top of Angad who was on the cold floor. He looked at her pale face that was scared to death as she slowly opened her eyes to, once again get lost in his gorgeously almond brown eyes.

She felt hypnotized… the mixture of his after shave was still pretty strong, his warm breathe which awfully but sweetly so sugary sweet, the passion firing in his eyes. Oh how she resisted her self from reaching down to his lips and loosing herself to him. She'd the same look in Prithvi's eyes once… No! She wasn't supposed to think of Prithvi like that. He was her to-be brother-in-law… but she loved him and once upon a time, he did too. But now he doesn't! She reminded herself and now she was to control her mind and not think of him like that; she couldn't do that to Sheetal. She would've burst into tears, if Angad's cell phone wouldn't have been barking!

He noticed the sudden change in the direction flow of emotions on her face. She looked so vulnerable, innocent, and in a way oblivious to the traps he'd set and of what he was trying to do. For the first time in his life he felt guilty for being so sly and for hiding the truth from her. He finally heard Anita barking on the other line. "Hello, Anita.."

"Angad… who's there with you?"

"Oh… umm… no one's her darling. I promise."

"Angad are you saying the truth?"

"Obviously baby!" he chose these words on purpose to make Kripa mad. After all, she deserved! She was being so mean to him. After seeing that his plan was working he thought to go further in it.

OBVIOUSLY BABY! And NO ONE'S HERE! ACHA… so I'm a no one and Anita is baby. AARGGH…. WHO IS THIS FLIPPING ANITA???? UGGH… I'M GOING TO KILL HER!!!! Actually why should I kill her? Shouldn't I be killing him?!?!?

He read jealousy and anger on her face making him mentally smirk. "Oh, Anita Darling! How are are you? I missed you so much. I love you so much because you're so nice and pretty.
Anita on the other side was so excited but still stunned. "Thanks, Angad. You're really sweet as well. So what are you doing?"

"Oh me. I'm going to some disc. It's going to be so boring… all the girls here are so ugly unlike you… you're just so beautiful and stunning and gorgeous" YUCK! If she's beautiful then a pile of shit is a picture of Mona Lisa.

Arrghh…. Did he just call me UGLY or was I hallucinating??? Oh my god! And he said she was pretty!!! I am so going to KILL him! I'm so not going to leave him alone. I'll make sure he admits that I, Kripa Surya Sharma, is the prettiest person alive. How dare he? He did not even compliment me when he saw me and now he's telling someone on the phone pretty!!!! I am going to seriously murder him so ruthlessly!!! I have the perfect way. I will butcher him into tiny million pieces and I'm going to feed him to my dogs! Shit! I don't have dogs… so what I'll feed him to my WATCHMAN'S bull dogs! Yes, that will be a sight to see! And yeah, Boring! Who the hell was he calling boring? Hasn't he seen himself he's the boringest person alive. And seriously Who doesn't have a nice breakfast? Everyone does! He's the weirdo, not me! EEEDDIIIIOOOOOOT! STEWPID MONKEY! DONKEY! POTATO! TOMATO! KARELA! YUCK! I hate karela no wonder I think of him as one cause he's everything but sweet!!! AAARRRGGHHHHH… THIS MAN IS SERIOUSLY NOT GOING TO LEAVE ME UNTIL I GO TO JAIL. Jail? Jails scare the crap out of me… they are so dark and spooky! Oh my god! You know what I should send him there. EEDIOT! STEWPID MONKEY-BREATHE SMELLING, CROCODILE SKIN FEELING, PIG SNORTING EEEEEDDIOOOOOOTTT!!! ARRGGH… I'M GOING TO SO KILL HIM. NO! I'LL I'M SO GOING TO GIVE SOMEONE ELSE A SUPARI! WHY SHOULD I DIRTY MYSELF FOR THAT ALIGATOR… PPPIIGG!!

"AHEM! AHEM, LET'S GO NOW!" Kripa spoke ludly so that, that ANITA could hear her.

"Angad! Who is that?"

"uuhh… who… Naukrani thi." He said with a smirk looking at the death glare he was receiving from Kripa! Yes! Mission accomplished. I finally got her mad. She deserves. Whenever you see she's always being rude to me so now there. She so deserves this.

"OHHH MMMYYYYYYYY GGGOOOOOOSH! YOU DID NOT JUST CALL ME A MAID!!!! WHAT THE FUDGE!"

"are you sure that's the naukrani, darling?" inquired Anita.

"uh.. bye honey! I'll talk to you later!"

As soon as he cut the phone and looked up, he knew for sure that if Kripa hadn't been wearing a dress with four inch heels he would have definitely have been chased around with a knife and this time be actually assassinated. Amazing isn't it? How I notice everything of hers like the shoes she's wearing? I'm such a darling! I take care of her so much! He grinned.

"WHY THE HELL ARE YOU GRINNING?" she asked through gritted teeth.

"Because you look jealous!" he said with such ease that she didn't know what she was going to with this donkey!

"YOU… YOU… YOU'RE JUST SOOO…"

"Yeah, yeah I know… I'm just so SEXY! And irresistible!" he grinned at the look of disbelief on her face.

"IMPOSSIBLE, IS WHAT YOU ARE!!! AND YOUR SO THE WORLD'S BIGGEST LUNGUR AND THE WORLD'S BIGGEST MONKEY, DONKEY, MONKEY-BREATH SMELLING, CROCODILE SKIN FEELING, AND PID SNORTING MONK-"

Before she could finish her words she was held by her waist and pinned to the wall behind her…

sorry guys it's another half part! i'll post the other half some other time cause i have a bio test tomorrow! crap! i havn't even started studyin been to distracted ahem.. ahem.. dat doesn't mean IF was the cause heheh.. so well gotta go but plz leave me comments and you silent readers too!! will be waiting!😃

Edited by pooja1221 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#89
🤣 🤣 🤣 ...god kripa is soo imaginative...boy she sincerely needs some angar management classes 😆 😆,,fabulous partt...lol cont soooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#90
hey!
im a silent reader for most ffs, but i love urs alot! Its extremly well written, and i love the story. Cont soon 😊
x3 Prakriti

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