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Posted: 18 years ago
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next part comeing in a few mins 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 4

Angad entered his house from a wild day of the new girl kripa Sharma driving him crazy. As angad entered her smelled his moms famous chocolate cake with fudge. Angad went into the kitchen and hugged his mom from behind. Angads mom jumped a bit in surprise

n-angad you scared me

a-hi mom can I have some cake

n-no, you cant….it turns out we have new neighbors and I am making the cake to welcome them

a-fine but can I at least have the fudged spoon

even though angad was a 12th grader he always became a kid when it came to his moms home made fudge. It was the best that could be

n-no, you can not have the fudge spoon. Last time you ate so much of it you were sick for a week

a-please mommy

angad made the sad kid face but his mom didn't cave in

n-sorry son

a-fine

right then angads moms phone rang

n-(phone)hello….oh I will be there asap

a-what happened

n-emergency at the hospital,(angads mom is a doctor) angad I need you to take the cake to are new neighbors and I also want you to invite them to dinner

a-ok mom, don't worry I will go right now

n-oh angad be careful when you cross the street

a-mom I am an expert at crossing the street. I am not the fist guy in the world that can cross the street without being able to see it.

n-i know I just want you to be careful

a-i will don't worry, god mom you worry way to much

n-i cant help it, after all you are my only son

by saying that angads mom left for the hospital and angad headed for the house across the street to welcome them and invite them for dinner.

Angad rung the door bell….no answer…for a second angad was thinking he got the wrong house but then all changed when the door of the house opened and angad smelled such a soft sweet smell that drove him crazy and that person could be no other then KRIPA SHARMA HERSELF

a-KRIPA!

k-ANGAD! What are you doing here

a-well I live across the street and….you know what, here is a cake my mom made me bring it,(angad jerked the cake in kripas hand) my mom invited your family to dinner come if you want but if decide to come STAY WAY FROM ME FOR YOUR OWN GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kripas mom saw someone at the door and came to the doorway where kripa was standing and smiled at angad with out knowing of the tension going on between angad and kripa.

g-hi, may I help you

kripas moms scent didn't bug angad at all because the scent was quite average but kripa was just driving him crazy. Angad just couldn't help but want to go so close to kripa that there would be no space in-between them but he managed to stop him self as much as possible

a-hi, Ms. Sharma I am angad khanna from across the street and I just came to welcome your family to the neighborhood and to invite you all to dinner….

Before angad could finish talking kripa took the cake that angad handed her and through it on his face form anger. Kripa just couldn't believe this guy first he tells her to stay away from him and then he acts all nice to her mom.

Kripas mom was shocked at kripas action angad was just happy that now at least kripa would stay away from him.

g-KRIPA!!!

k-sorry, mom but I just HATE JURKS LIKE ANGAD KHANNA!

By saying that kripa storms upstairs to her room

g-I am so sorry about my daughters behavior, she is going to be grounded for a very long time

angad felt bad for kripa because most of it was his fault

a- Ms. Sharma don't ground kripa please, she's not lying I was a big jerk to her today at school and if it was me I wouldn't blame her for throwing a cake in my face. In fact I probably throw a cake in my own face for doing what I did do to her.

g-don't try and stick up for her, she has gone to far!

a-please before you ground her at least hear her side of the story

g-ok(little more calmed down from hearing angad wasn't angry)

a-you all will come for dinner right?

g-sure, we will come

Dinner Time

It was dinner time and angads mom and dad were all ready to invite their guest that were soon to arrive. The doorbell rang and angads mom opened the door.
Angad was the only one from the family not at the door way to greet the Sharma family because he was making dinner

n-hello welcome to are home

g-thank you for inviting my daughter and me

n-please come in

kripa and her mom enter the khanna house

k-you have a very lovely home

d+n-thank you

d-angad! Is dinner ready?

a-just 5 more minutes

angad called out from the kitchen

g-your son makes dinner

n-angad is the best cook in are small family, and he loves helping out around the house but some times I worry for him

g-why so, he is such a loving boy

k-(thinking) loving my foot

n-angad has had a very tuff childhood, you see we used to live in new york but…when angad was born every thing changed, he was born with a disability

kripa was confused, angad seemed fine to her

naina could see the confused look on kripa and her mom

n-when we moved here angad was able to defeat his disability but the only thing angad cant do still is drive

kripa wanted to ask why but thought it might be rude. Angad came out of the kitchen with a smile but it disappered when he smelt that fresh sweet sugar smell of kripa. Kripa saw this express and it bug kripa more then anything.

k-(thinking) why dose angad get so stressed out by seeing me?


hope u like this part
next part comeing soon
comeing up-angad khanna's room is CLEAN!!!!!!!!!
Edited by night girl - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
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thats a nice long part
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome part!!!! I luved it, esp wen kripa chucked dat cake in his face, dat was funny 😆 coz in all ffs angad mite get pushed, shouted at, or even slapped, but i dnt think ive ever read a ff where someone threw a cake at angad loll 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Awesome part!!!! I luved it, esp wen kripa chucked dat cake in his face, dat was funny 😆 coz in all ffs angad mite get pushed, shouted at, or even slapped, but i dnt think ive ever read a ff where someone threw a cake at angad loll 😆

shouting and screaming is old school. throwing cakes in other peoples face is the new thing is town 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG!!!! i cudnt stop laughing!!!! 🤣
he got caked!!!! lol!!!! thats HILARIOUS!!!! 😆 😆
i hope ALL the prts r this long!!! 😉
AWESUMLY AMAZING nd HILARIOUS prt!! 👏
continue!!!! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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you know i expected you guys to laugh at the whole cake thing

but was it really that funny because the next part is supposed to be super funny
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome part! 👏 👏 👏
love it! 😳
cant wait to read more! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwww poor angad!! lol i love the fact that he wrote move or ill kill u LMAO!! sooo funny!! continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome part. may be Naina is gonna tell kripa that angad is blind...lol..can't wait. continue soon

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