The Truth... (ak)part 7...page 10

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this is my first try...after reading manyyyy ffs... soo plss bear meee..

" kripaaa.... plssssssssssssssss" angad begged but kripa walked as if she dint notice him.... " kirpaaa... you hate mee... i know... but my sister... she's your best friend... comeone... you cant do this to her....."

" uhhhhh angad..... you are forgetting something..." she haulted adn turned around..." she WAS my best friend....she IS nothign now... i dont even know her.... and remember you said there is a big diferrence between WAS and IS...." saying this she walked away.... but angad still followed her.....

" kripa i knoww... but she just wants to talk to you once.... plsssss.... after all she was once your best friend.... plssssss kripa... shes my sister... i cant---" interrupted.....

" now you see.... now you see how much it hurts when you seee your sister in the hospital....lving between death and life.... adn the person she wants teh most wont come to her..... how do you think i felt when you refused to go to teh hospital when my sister needed you teh most..... when you weren't there for my sister... why should i be there for yours????"she looked straight into his eyes.... and then contnued..." now if you excuse mee... i got to get ready for a date tonight...." she stormed away... got in her car and zooomed off... while angad was left speechless.....

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" hey pritzzzz... umm... uhh...errr.... can we cancel our date tonight plsss...??" kirpa said gathering her guts... through her cell.....

" sure.... is everythign ok??"

" everythign is finee... i just dont feel goood...." she lied...adn also added" and i am going to the hospital to see ayesha didi...."

" ohh... you want mee to come??" prithvi asked concernedly.....

" noooo pritzz... its ok... i'll be finee....." kripa replied....

" uhh...ok....bye...luv ya...." prithvi said....

" luv ya tooo... byeee" kripa hung up.... and threw her cell to teh back seat.... then she got off the car...and went into teh hospital......

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the door slowly opened... and kripa closed her eyes aas she took a step in.... she toook a deep breath and opened her eyes..... there she was... aaliyah... who used to be her best friend ......in a hospital with thousands off tubes attatched to her.... her blanket was upto her chin.... there were bruishes all over her face... and her head was bandaged..... she got flashbacks of the last time she came to teh hospital with her best friend....

FLASHBAK...

" ugghhh i hate this place...." kripa yelled as she entered teh hospital......" ewww how taccy.... yaar aali..lets gooo... we dont need to see him..." she almost tunred around to leave..... but alliyah caught her and dragged her....

" kripa...hes my brother... and plus... ayesha di's been here for teh whole night... she needs some rest...adn shell never leave bhai with teh nurse here....soo we gotta be there...." alliyah said.... trying to find angad's room....

" but aaliyah....(pause) u stay here... i am not staying in thsi place...not even for a minute...." she exclaimed.....

" what will you do...if someday i'll be here in teh hospital and you'll have to come see mee??" alliyah said....

" i wont come...." kriap said stubbornly..... alliyah looked at her disappointedly...... kripa smiled adn added.." because i know.... you're too fit to be in a hospital.... you'll never be here.... and if you'll bee here... then i'll be staying with you all night and all day...just like ayesh didi is staying for angad....(suddenly her face changes from a frown to a mishchevious smile) btw... dont they make a good couple....???" kripa said excitedly.....

" yeppp..... THE best...." alliyah said.... and they both gigled.... adn finally found his(angad) rooom....

END OF FLASHBACK


kirpa was returned to teh reality by a soft whisper.... she quickly wiped her tears and looked at aaliyah...who smiled weakly at her.... but she dint smile back...she was expressionless..... she sat beside her adn looked at her....

" hi kripa...." alliayh said weakly.... in a hushed voice.....

" hey..." kirpa replied unenthusiastically.....

" you're still mad..... aren't you?????" aaliyah said... this time increasing her voice a lil....

" yess i am....." kriap replied.... with an annoyed expression.... " i dint come here to tell you that i am still mad or anything... i just came here to ask you...why'd you want mee.... of all people????...(pause) y not prithvi...or rahul...anjali.... why mee???" she questioned......

" because you're my best friend....." aaliyah replied quietly... but kripa could still hear her....

" tsk tsk.... as if...." she said...and looked away...

" if you dont think you're my best friend...or i am your best friend...then whyd ou come here??? to see mee??? i thought you hated hospitalss..... adn plus after ayesha di--" interrupted....

" DONT YOU DARE CALL HER DIDI....." kriap said pointing her finger to alliyah.... but soon cooled down.... " i came here due to humanity.... if i hadn't come...there would bee no difference between your brother/you... and mee..... i just dint wan to bee like you guysss......"

aaliyah.smied buyt tears poured down her eyes... " i am sorry kripa...." she lightly sat up...inspite of teh pain..she hugged kripa..... kriap dint know what to do.... she had been longing to hug her best friend adn cry for a year and a half now.... but she dint hugg her back...instead she pulled away... adn made her sleep.... then she looked away....

" what do you want aaliyah??" she asked... this time few tears trickled down her cheeks....

" to know.... if you will forgive mee....." she answered.....

" you know my answer already alliya... i can never forgive you or your brother...... anywayss i know u dint call mee for that.... what do you want alliyah??" she said calmly.....

alliyah wiped her tears.... smiled..." i want to meet simi..."

kripa froze.... and turned to her.... " h-how do-o y-ou know....ab-ab-o-ut... s-i-m-i.....???"

" kripa.... wherever you are... i alwyas have an eye on you.... you can never hide anythign from meee...." she said grinning...although her bruishes hurt she couldn't stop but grin....

kripa sighed heavily and turned away..." u wont meet her...(paused) i wont let you meet her...." she stood up and left....without letting aaliyah say anything or stop her......

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kirpa stopped her car at her driveway and went inside... she was really tired..... she threw her purse on the couch....and yelled..." betttyyyyyy!!!!!"

" up in simi's room kripaaa...."she hears a voice.....

kripa runs upstairs.... the room is light pink with rainbows everywhere.... there were ponies and castles...with princesses etc on teh walll... it was a nursery.... there betty.... who is about 16 or 17.... sitting with a baby in her lap... trying to get her too sleep.... kripa walks upto them....and betty hands her he baby....

" awww.. simi my bacha.... did you miss mama???..." she lightly rubbed her nose agains her cheek...nad she gigled.... then she started playing with kripa's fingers.... kripa looked at betty and smiled and said..." thankss for babysitting betty...."

" comeon krpa... you babysitted mee... now its my turn to babyst your daughter...adn she'll babysit mine... right simi??" simi clapped her hands together and laughed....." see she says yess......(glance at her watch....) ooo shit.... sorry kripa... i gotta go.... byee... byee simi...." she blows adn flying kiss at simi and waves at kripa and leaves.....

ok soo that is it for today... i'll continue once a week with a lnggggg part.... hmmm.. i am pooooooooooooooja..😳.. plss comment guyssss..... ok soo i g2g now....need to study for tomorrow's test.....soo will rigt nex week....ttyl byee
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sounds pretty cool!! hmm...wonder what happened that caused kripa to hate aaliya and angad so much....wonder why aaliya is in the hospital....if kripa really is the mother of simi, and if she is, tehn who the father is... and of course the relationship between ayesha and angad 😉 (cuz its a-k 😉 )....its pretty good considering its your first part!! soo many secrets though!! gosh suspense 🤢 ..lol 😆 good luck on your test and looking forward to your next update!! continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sounds great can't wait for the next part 👏 and good luck on ur test 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg!!!! is she her daughter or ayesha's daughter.. lemme guess, ayesha died... omg thats how ur making it sound! omgg

continue sooooonnn
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome jus read it... seems like an awesome ff, cnt wait to read more!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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very interesting! continue, it sounds great. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wooooooohoooooooooo its nice hun!!!!!! 👏
con soooon.....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanxx everyone... i aid i'll continue once a week... but since i am soooooo happy.. and also really bored...lol.. happy becasue of teh snow day and bored because... well i am all alone.... soo i am writing this part.. 😃

PART TWO

after an hour or soo...simi finally went to bed.... and kripa put her in the crib... she herself was very tired... soo she decided to take a nice warm shower and go to sleep.... and soo she did...she was on her bed...twisting and turning... she couldn't sleep... she stared straight at teh ceiling adn suddenly she sstarted replaying the scene...

kripa and ayesh awere sittin...when ayesha was just lying on her stomach lost in her world... kripa was reading a book...." kripa....??" ayesh said suddenly...

" hmmmm..." kirpa said not takign her nse out of teh book....

" when do we know if we are in love??" she asked....

this was such a random quetion... she looked at ayesha... and laid down beside her..... " i dont know...but are you in love???"

ayesha blushed...." i think sooooo...."she mumbled... burying her face into her arms....

" OMG!!!! reallly??... soo whos teh lucky person??" she said relaly excited... ayesha was gonna say something but kripa interrupted...." dont tell mee.... angad right???"

ayesha nodded... " but id ont know if he likes mee... i mean i dont want to lose my best friend saying i love him..." she said sadly...

" arre ayesha di...be positive na yaar.... and there si noone in teh world who wont love you... i mean in my case its different... people hate mee.. cuz i am stubborn..adn attitude girl... but you are nothing like mee... trust mee... noone can resist you..." kirpa said encouragingly...

ayesha smiled... and put her hands around kripa and said... " waise.. what is going on between you and prithvi???"

" ayesha dii... he likes mee... but i dont...." kirpa said crossing her hand across her chest.. adn ayesha laughed looking at her....

kripa was interrupted by simi's crying...she moaned adn walked up to teh nursery.... " simi... will you ever let me sleep???" she mumbled... she arried her into her arms... she looked her nappy was good.... she wasn't hungry either... soo kripa took her downstairs to teh living room...and theystarted watching tom and jerry... it was aroun 2 in teh morning.... simi finally started laughing watching it...and soo did kripa... both were enjoying... when kirpas cell rang... kripa piced teh phone still watching the cartoon...

" hello...." she said.... gigling...

" hello ms.sharma.??" a guy said....

kripa immediately recognized tehh voice...soo she looked away form teh tv... and turn the volume low...." yess... whats teh matter dr.dayal...??"

" actually miss sharma...(he says somethign we cant hear....)"

" really... i'll be there in 20 mins..." she hung up...

she dint want to take simi with her because...she dint want angad to know she even existed.... well alliyah knew...adn she was afraid alliyah will tell her brother... but she still trusted her.... she dint know what to do... she took teh phone and called betty....

" hello..." said a sleepy voice....

" ummm betty...itsmee kripa..." kripa said nervously....

" oh...kripa... why do you sound soo nervous...is eerythign ok??" she asked...

" yea...a ctually i neede a favor...."

" sure...anything..."

" actually i got to go to the hospital.... to se ayesha di...----"

" and you need someone to see simi right??"

" uh-huh... soo will you??"

" suree.... i'll be there in 5 mins... bye..."

" bye and thanxx..."

she hung up... betty came and kirap finally elft teh ohouse after putting simi in good hands.... she wnt to teh hospital.... and ran to ayesha's room... she saw angad sitting infront of ayesha's room... but she dint say anything.... she walked past hin and asked the doctor.... " how is she???"

" she is improving a lot.. i mean she is out of coma but is still unconcious...." teh doctor said giving a reassuring smile....

" thanxx doc..." she said with a smile...

" dont thank mee... thank yourself...we had lost hope a long time back.. it was you who made this possible...."

kirpa grinned and looked inside the room... angad stood beind her adn said.."aren't you gonna yell at mee or ask mee to leave..??" he said...

" who am i to say soo... ater all you are her best friend/husband... i have no right to say anythign to you.... you have the full right to visit her.." she answerd adn just sat there on teh bench....

" why are oyu doing thsi kripa.??" angad said frustratingly....

kripa smiled... " what am i doing??" she looked at him...while tears pour down her eyes..... angad kneeled infront of her....

" you know i love you...then y are u making mee suffer??" he said as a tear trickled down his eye...

kripa looked away... " i cant tell you y am i doing this... but can just tell you that you cant love mee... you love ayesha di and only her..."

she stood up as went into teh room..... while angad just banged his fist to the bench....
Edited by pooooooooooja* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Fantabulous!. what happened with them two and why is he married to Ayesha?
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wow......that was really good...cont. soooooooooon!!!!!!

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