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tht part was a treat.... its awwesome n amazing... continue sooon... just tooo goood...

Now thats shocking! :O hadnt expecte that, definitely not from the first part..but later in the second part I had my doubt Melanie..and the last lines made my confusion clear. 😃 now its getting more and more interesting 😊
wonder why she's hiding her true identity???

AHHHHHHHHH Great part....i knew it that melly was kripa....but y is angads life in danger ❓ thats was great part wonder wat will happen next so kripa is under cover...and y didn't she come back to angad if she was alive????.....u have to coootn sooon or else i'll die...GOD ur fanfic is goood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

d part was 22222 good n i also dat she had lost her memory or smth but wen was alive then why did she not come bak 2 A b4 n why now is she hiding dat she is K n i hope dat no one comes b/w dem n u have also said dat smth happens due 2 which he again becomes d same old A afterwards i.e. after dey r deeply in love wonder wat but hope dey always remain 2gether n u have also said dat K makes him fall him in luv wid her but cant she reveal her identity n tell him her feelings so why try 2 do so as she knows dat he luvs her n remembers her n plzzzzzz continue soon

Originally posted by: goldi2

i was like AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH lol lmao lol i seriously was lol my mouth was WIDE open lol
OMG its Kripa!!! i never new lol i had thought she was but then i was like naaaa!! lol
omg im soo excited now!!!
lol not that i wasnt before but now its like OMG i cant wiat type of a thing
lol
continue soon neha



Hina

Lol... im glad i could keep u on the edge of ur seat! 😉 I hope i can keep it tha way!

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

OMG!!!!!!!! that was FABULOUS!!!!!! this FF is soooooo INTERESTING!!!!!!!
i LOVE it, i CANNOT wait to read more!!!! PLEASE continue ASAP!!!!!!!
👏
i kinda figured she was kinda like an agent when she took the gun out!!!
before that i thought she was Kripa who'd lost her memory!!!!! lol!!!!
that was UNEXPECTED!!!!!! LOVING this FF, ur an AMAZING writer!!!!!!
👏
continue soon!!!!! 😃


p.s. nice name, 'Melanie Wade'!!!!! 😊

Again, im glad i could keep u thinking! I agree, i like the name!😉

Originally posted by: proud_2_b_mysel

OMG that was exellent
buiously didnt get the last line
i mean is kripa an ISS agent

Yup! She's an ISS agent, who takes undercoever missions!!!!

Originally posted by: sahr_8

aaaaaaaaaaaa omg thys FF is sooo good better than any FF u ever wrot esoo different from the ones i read ur a awsome writer man
TEACH ME plzzz
ill pass english big time
hehe

u no wat i thought that melanie was kripa but she lost her memory or had plastic surgery and wen she gets married to angad shell regain her memory haha

i got lyke 2% of that


so is kripa wearing a mask or angad doesnt recognize her bcauz itz bin 13 years and she changed a bit????

tell plz

U'll knwo what her face is all abt later in the FF! And, writing well doesn't really help do well in LA u need more than that. I'm sure if u study more, u'll do better! 😉

Originally posted by: mansi1219

OMG OMG OMG OMG!! ok lol thats enough of them... I had to wati for like 8 hours before i cud read this... too much going on.. but AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! the part was AMAZING, AWESOME, GREAT, FANTABULOUS... or w/e else u can say that means one of those things... u r an awesome writer... this ff is truly different from any others.. i kno some of ur other ones are too.. i lvoe this.. ok.. for the part... to be honest.. i had a feeling melanie was kripa.. but had no clue how u were gonna make it make sense that her name was melanie and all taht... the last couple lines cleared all of it up! i m soo happy taht melanie is kripa!!! so she already knows that he loves her.. OMG who is trying to kill him??? wow how did kripa get into ISS..? love the suspense.. i didnt think this part would come soo soon or you would tell the readers so soon who MELLY actually is.. angad is soo cute and he is really nice and down to earth to be a future king... i wouldnt mind a king like him.. he is way better than BUSH!!! god... lol.. 😆 ... ok i done.. i need to cut down on the comments... obtw can u comment on the comments.. lol i lvoe reading them.. 😃 ...

ok well.. i hope u cont soon.. i kno its not gonna be a for another week.. 😭 .. good luck for mock trial.. my school is gonna suck... i already kno.. but its ok..

luv
mansi 😊

U'll know some of it later in the FF, and some in the next part! And, see just for you i'm replying to the comments... I'll continue on Friday or around the weekend!

Thanks.... i need it.

Originally posted by: chandini1234

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Neha, how in heaven & earth do u get these fab ideas from..... oh god, i think u stole my brains cause i really dont have any, and then used them 2 think up these gr8 parts lol..... 😆 😆 😆 ... but seriously, i was like halfway in this ff and almost decided 2 ditch it cause i was so angry u brought this "dumb" Melanie in my Angu's life, but hurray, i persevered to the end and got my sweet reward of ISS agent....... yippeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!! 😆 😆 😆 ..... anyways, gr8 ff and pls cont soon....

<3 Anusha 😳

How mean! I think u guys need to learn to live with changes.. what if Melly was the leading lady and not Kripa???? Huh? Well anyways, now that u know u cann wait to see what happens next!

Originally posted by: ice _girl

d part was 22222 good n i also dat she had lost her memory or smth but wen was alive then why did she not come bak 2 A b4 n why now is she hiding dat she is K n i hope dat no one comes b/w dem n u have also said dat smth happens due 2 which he again becomes d same old A afterwards i.e. after dey r deeply in love wonder wat but hope dey always remain 2gether n u have also said dat K makes him fall him in luv wid her but cant she reveal her identity n tell him her feelings so why try 2 do so as she knows dat he luvs her n remembers her n plzzzzzz continue soon

If i tell you, there wont be any fun in this! Just wait and read! 😉

aww.. how sweet u replied to all the comments to me.. thanks..

lots of luv
mansi 😛

i........can't.............breath 😲

omg kripa is melaine 😳

continue sooooooooon 👏

its 2 gud 😊

kanwer 👏

last part i was great i knew that melanie wade would turn out to be kripa...can't wait to find out why she became melanie...continue soon

Hi Neha,

I think ur really a fab writer and i love ur story lines always. I had different id b4, so i have actually read all ur previous ffs...... and they r all progressively better...... but i loved summer affairs the most 😊...... gr8 work as always....👏....... and pls cont soon......😃

<3 Anusha😳

Ps: pls dont mind chandini1234's comments, she's my younger sister n she used my name 2 comment, just 2 irritate me since ur my fav writer, so she was a bit mean.... pls forgive her, she's just 9..... thanks.....😊

hey neha fantastic part....another g8 ff....hey i just don't get, has kripa been a ISS agent since childhood and is she a princess or from a royal family?
continue soon....