Tere Bina (RajivAmna ff) last part updt! - Page 41

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Posted: 17 years ago
thanks frndz!! will be updating soon..!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow ruku dear great part loved it ttoooo toooo gooood m so happy saima and rayan r bak together aur rishbh sudhar gaya...continue sooon...can't wait more... 👏 👏 👏
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Originally posted by: Honii

wow ruku dear great part loved it ttoooo toooo gooood m so happy saima and rayan r bak together aur rishbh sudhar gaya...continue sooon...can't wait more... 👏 👏 👏

thank u so much 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Part-31

Recap-
Saima ko police arrest karti hai.... Rishabh ko Mr.Rai ki asliyat pata chalti hai aur wo police ko sab kuch sach bata deta hai aur apni galatiyo ke liye Rayan aur Saima se maafi maangta hai...
Rishabh aur Garewals mein dosti hoti hai... Aryan laut aata hai.....

Story further......
Rishabh aur Rayan Aryan se milne uske ghar jaate hai... Aryan aur Rishabh kaafi ache dost hote hai..
As soon as they entered in Aryan was surprised to see Rayan too.
Aryan: are Rayan? mujhe laga Rishabh u hi mazaak kar raha hai
Rishabh: ab itna bhi yakeen nahi raha?
Aryan: nahi, per kabhi kabhi tum aisi harkatein karte ho ki samajh nahi aata kya kahu
Rayan: wo sab chodo yeh batao tum kaise ho aur u achanak yaha kaise?
Aryan: bas kuch waqt mil gaya to apne purane dosto ke paas laut aaya
Rishabh: oh, purane dost hmmm........ kuch to hai, kya khyaal hai Rayan?
Rayan: wo to nahi pata per Aryan aaj ghar mein pooja hai aur tumhe bhi aana hai
Aryan: aaj shaam?
Rayan: ha kyun any problem?
Aryan: nahi problem to nahi hai... thik hai, koshish karunga... actually kuch kaam hai shaam mein per i'll try and
come
Rishabh: Aryan kuch baat to pakka hai, tum kuch badle badle lag rahe ho
Aryan: koi baat nahi hai baba....
{rayan's cell rings}
Rayan: helloo...
Raina: beta, agar tum free ho to zara ghar aa sakte ho?
Rayan: ji mama, per baat kya hai?
Raina: Saima uske ghar ja rahi thi,to maine socha agar tum free ho to uske saath chale jao
Rayan: thik hai mama, main abhi ghar aata hu, Saima se kehna ki wo ready rahe
Raina; thik hai.. {hangs down}
Rayan: ghar se phone tha mujhe jana hoga....
Rishabh: ghar se??? {teasingly} bhabhi ne bulaya hai?
Rayan: {smiles} nahi, per kuch kaam hai
Aryan: hum samajh sakte hai, tum jaao
Rayan; per tum dono waqt per aa jana
Rishabh: iska to pata nahi per i'll be there on time
Rayan: ok, byeee
{and he rushes out}
Rishabh: aur batao, achanak kaise?
Aryan: kuch nahi, tumhe yaad hai main hamesha tumse apni ek dost ke baare mein kaha karta tha
Rishabh: ha.. kya hua use?
Aryan: kuch din pehle uska phone aaya tha... to bas uske liye hi aana pada
Rishabh: koi khass dost?
Aryan: nahi...
Rishabh: ok,i beleive u... acha mujhe kuch kaam se office jana hai... Shaam mein milte hai
Aryan: thik hai, i'll call u then
Rishabh: ok
{rishabh bhi chala jaata hai. Aryan was very happy to be back.
Waha rayan bhi garewal house pohoch jata hai}
Raina: are itni jaldi aa gaye?
Rayan: ha, Saima kaha hai?
Raina: kamrein mein hai... beta, zara use khush rakha karo
Rayan: main kuch samjha nahi
Raina: jabse uski dadima gaye hai wo bahot udaas si rehti hai... Use iss sab se bahar aane mein waqt lagega, aur
isiliye main chahti hu ki tum hamesha uske saath raha karo,use khush rakha karo
Rayan: ji mama...,main dekhta hu use.. {he goes to his room, saima was waiting there for rayan. As Rayan opened the door,
he saw saima was sitting there, and the lights were switched off}
Rayan: Saimaa... {switches on the lights} Kya hua?
Saima: nahi, kuch nahi....
Rayan: hmmm..... kuch nahi? to phir iss pyare se chehre per udaasi kyun hai? Ab to sab kuch thik ho chuka hai
Saima: nahi, hum to bas aise hi baithe the... kuch waqt akele rehna chahte the...
Rayan: ab yeh to mumkeen nahi ho sakta... Kyunki main tumhe akele nahi chod sakta... {smiles} sach kahu to main khud bhi akela nahi reh sakta... Akelapan kya hota hai yeh mujhse beheter kaun jaan sakta hai... Khair, wo sab chodo aur mujhe
batao ki wo kaunsi baat hai jisse tum itni upset ho?
Saima: {smiles} aapse ek baat kahe?
Rayan: chalo koi muskuraya to sahi, ha kaho
Saima: aap bahot ache hai
Rayan: hmm... to batao mujhpe bharosa karti ho?
Saima: ha
Rayan: aur pyar?
{saima apni nazrein neechi karti hai}
Rayan: kya tum mujhse pyar karti ho?
Saima: yeh kaisa sawaal hai? {faces the other way}
Rayan: bharosa karti ho per pyar...
Saima: chale? hume jaldi lautna hai
{saying this saima goes out of the room}
Rayan: {smiles} nahi karti..... per ek din zaroor kahegi....
{rayan bahar jaata hai, saima raina ke saath neeche living room mein thi. Wo Saima ko dekhkar smile karta hai aur phir bahar chala jaata hai... Saima Raina se kuch kehti hai aur phir wo bahar jaati hai..., per aaj wo kuch hichkhichayi se thi. Use darr tha ki kahi phir se
Rayan usse wahi na puche. Wo khud bhi nahi jaanti thi ki kya wo Rayan se pyar karti hai ya nahi. Uske liye wo kuch bhi karne ko tayyar thi, uski takleef Saima se dekhi nahi jaati thi... Rayan ki har choti badi baat ka khyaal rakhti thi per aaj tak use iss baat ka ilm nahi tha ki kya wo bhi Rayan se pyar karti hai? Shayad usne ab tak Aryan ko puri tarha se apni zehen, apne dil se meetaya nahi tha....
Bade hi dheeme kadmo se wo Rayan ki taraf badh rahi thi. Rayan wahi car ke paas khada Saima ko aate dekh raha tha...uske chehre per wahi muskurahat thi}
Saima: chale?
Rayan: hmm...
{and they drive off to Khanna house... per raaste mein unki car kharab ho jaati hai}
Saima: kya hua?
Rayan: pata nahi, lagta hai kharab ho gayi... main dekhta hu
{rayan checks but coudnt get through...}
Rayan: samajh nahi aa raha kya hua hai?
Saima: koi baat nahi hum taxi se chale jayenge
Rayan: per yaha to koi taxi nazar nahi aa rahi.. Chalo aage dekhte hai shayad koi taxi mil jaye...
{aur wo chalte hi aage badhte hai... aur tabhi dheemi dheemi si barish hone lagti hai... Rayan Saima ki taraf dekhta hai....
kuch hi der mein tezi se barish hone lagti hai... aur yeh dono bheeg jaate hai... thodi duri per raaste ki dusri taraf ek chota sa ghar jaisa hota hai}
Rayan: barish rukne tak wahi rukte hai...
{aur rayan saima ka haath pakadta hai aur waha le jaata hai.... waha ka darwaza bandh tha to wo dono wahi bahar khade the... Barish kaafi tezi se ho rahi thi
aur saima jaha khadi thi wo puri bheegh rahi thi, rayan uski taraf dekhta hai aur phir uske saamne khada hota hai taaki saamne se wo aur naa bheege...
Rayan kuch der ke liye bas saima ko dekhta hai aur saima rayan ko...phir wo kuch awkward feel karti hai aur apni narzrein neechi karti hai.... Rayan samajhta hai aur phir apna coat nikalkar use de deta hai... Kuch der baad barish thodi kam hoti hai so wo waha se nikalte hai.. kuch duri per unhe taxi milti hai aur phir wo khanna house jaate hai...
Saima ko waha kuch kaam hota hai, use wo karke nikalne hi wale the ki phir barish tez hone lagti hai}
Rayan: mujhe lagta hai hume kuch der yehi rukna chahiye
Saima: per hume pooja ke liye deri hogi
Rayan: hmm... main Sahil se kehta hu ki wo hume yehi se pick karle ya phir gadi bhijwa de
{he calls up Sahil.. Sahil was at Garewal house playing with Adi. Rishabh too was with him by now}
Rayan: hello Sahil
Sahil: kaha hai aap sir?
Rayan: hum yaha Khanna house mein hai, raastei mein gaadi kharab ho gayi thi aur abhi barish bhi tezi se ho rahi hai
to kya tum car bhijwa sakte ho?
{ab sahil ko kuch masti sujhi}
Sahil: per sir, main khud yaha site office per hu, barish itni tezi se ho rahi hai to socha ki kuch der baad niklu
{rishabh bas sahil ki taraf dekhta hai wondering as to what was sahil upto.. Sahil just winks at him playfully}
Rayan: per tum waha kya kar rahe ho?
Sahil: wo main...bas... {looks at rishabh} Rishabh ke saath aaya tha
{ab rishabh hairaan reh jaata hai}
Rayan: oh, thik hai main kuch karta hu
Sahil: sir aap kuch der wahi rukiye, jaise hi barish kam hoti hai main khud aapko lene aata hu
Rayan: thik hai, aur tum bhi zara sambhalkar aana
Sahil: ji sir... {disconnects the phone}
Rishabh: tumne Rayan se jhooth kyun kaha?
Sahil: wo isliye ki aaj wo dono bahot waqt ke baad ek saath hai, aur tum to jaante ho peechle dino jo kuch bhi hua
uske baad ab unka saath rehna kitna zaroori hai
Rishabh: wo sab to thik hai per yaha aunty se kya kahoge?
Sahil: kuch kehne ki zaroorat hi nahi padegi
Rishabh: kya matlab?
Sahil: matlab yeh ki ab aunty sir ko phone karenge aur kahenge ki jaldi yaha aaye, sir kahenge ki bairsh ki wajah se wo wahi ruk gaye hai aur aunty kahenge ki abhi aane ke zaroorat nahi hai, kuch der baad hi aana
Rishabh: aapki planning to bahot achi hai per beta agar aunty ne Rayan se keh diya ki tum yehi ho to? Khud to maroge aur mujhe bhi marvaoge
Sahil: oh ha.. maine to iske baare mein socha hi nahi.... kuch karo na, agar aunty ne sir ko phone kiya to.... oh no
Rishabh: yeh acha hai karo tum aur mare hum dono?
Sahil: oh ho ab tum behes mat karo aur kuch socho
Rishabh: idea. Isse pehle ki aunty Rayan se baat kare hum hi aunty se keh dete hai ki Rayan ki gaadi kharab ho gayi hai aur wo wahi ruke hai, aur aane mei deri hogi
Sahil: uncle dusri gaadi bhijwa denge. Tum to ek idea bhi nahi soch sakte...
Rishabh: ok ok, tum uncle se baat karo aur main aunty se... samjhe {winks at him}
Sahil: hmm.... waise tum itne bure bhi nahi ho
Rishabh: ab jao aur uncle se baat karo.....
{ek taraf rishabh aur sahil rayan aur saima ko akele rehne ke liye bahane karte hai aur dusri taraf unki iss harkat se bekhabar rayan aur saima wahi baithe sahil ka intezar karte hai....}

....... End of Part- 31 ............

comments awaited!!!

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ruksaar

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Posted: 17 years ago
hailaaa.......very cute part......ab wats this aryan upto....isse jaldi batao ki saima is married to rayan.... 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
great part 👏 👏 chalo yeh Rishabh kuch to kaam aaya 😆 😆 pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssseeeeeeee continue sooooon waiting eagerly to know what happens next between Rayan and Saima 😳 😳, pl add some romance b/w them 😳 cont. soon 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow nawesome part loved it tooo tooo gooood wow sahil hats off to him acchi planning kii hai gr8..continue sooon can't wait more 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
very nice part.........ple continue soon........cant wait for the next part..........thanks'

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Posted: 17 years ago

awesome part !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...................👏 😊 👏 😉 👏 .........rayan n rishab went to meet aryan....though rayan had to leave soon 😊.......aryan tell rishab he came for a special friend 😊 😭 (saima ofcouse) ........saima n rayan talk was cute 😛...rayan knows that saima doesn't love him 😭, but believe's that she will someday 😉 (i believe that 2 😊 ......hope soon plz 😉)........saima haven't forget aryan at all 😒 😭 😔..........i hope that she realize that she loves rayan n not aryan 😉 😭 😊 !!!!!!!!!!!...................barish ki wajah se saima n rayan phas gae khanna house me 😉......aur sahil ko suji shararat 😆.........the plan is great but lets see if it works!!!!!!!!! 😉 😊 😛 😊 😉 ...............rishab is also involed in it 😆........coz of sahil 😆!!!!!!!!!!!................yaar aryan is back .......i hope that it does not create any other problem btw rayan n saima ?????????..........plzzzzzzzz continue soon ruksaar........can't wait !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
thanks for all ur comments ppl. Was busy with uni work so cudnt update, but will try to update asap..😳

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