Rishtey...Relationships...ManAn KeeSh RishDaa ShivDaa SS - Page 2

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Posted: 3 years ago
#11

Manik and Nandini are jumping the gun. Just from flowers they thought they love each other?

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Posted: 3 years ago
#12

So now we have a reason why Naksh is always asked to sacrifice. But still this is not right. Rudra has to learn to accept reality.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#13

Who are Naksh's parents? Why was he shocked seeing their picture?

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Posted: 3 years ago
#14

Rudra is getting everything handed to him on a platter. Now Sitara in the person on that platter. They can not play with her life like that. No one asked her what she wants.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#15

Rishtey...Relationships...Part 3

Dedicated to Shesha who gave a jodi name to Rudra-Sitara-RuTara.

It was the photograph of Manik and Nandini.

Naksh stared at Manik and Nandini while they looked at him emotionally.

Naksh:What kind of a joke is this?

Manik:It is true.We are your parents.

Nandini:Yes,we only gave birth to you Naksh.

Naksh:It's a lie.I heard with my ears that I am not your son.

Manik:Did you hear us saying your name?

Naksh:No.But you were saying that ...

Nandini:We said that we have to tell him that he is not our real son.But it's not you,but Rudra.

Naksh was shocked.

Naksh:No,I won't believe this.You both always valued Rudra more.

Manik:We valued both of you equally.It's just that we were over concerned about Rudra bcause we did'nt want him to be hurt by us.By birth Rudra is not our son,but by heart he is our son just like you.

Naksh was confused.

Nandini:You may be thinking how Rudra came into our family.Right?

Manik:Before that you should know about my brother Arjun.

Naksh:Your brother Arjun?

Manik:He was my soul brother.He was in my music troupe.

Nandini:Pooja was my best friend.Pooja and Arjun fell in love with each other.

Flash back....

On Valentine's day Manik and Nandini confessed love to each other.

After that Arjun went near Pooja.

Arjun was sweating.

Pooja:Do you want to tell me something Arjun?

Arjun:Ya...

Pooja's face blossomed.

Pooja:Then say without any delay.

Arjun:I...I...

Pooja:I...

Arjun could not continue.

Pooja shed fake tears.

Pooja:I loved a spineless fool who can't even say I love you to me.

Arjun was stunned:What?You...you love me?

Pooja said with a childish expression:Yes you stupid.

He became very happy.

Arjun:I love you too Pooja.

They embraced each other happily.

Manik-Nandini were getting cozy with each other.

Pooja and Arjun saw it.

Pooja:Chee..shameless.

Manik-Nandini parted from each other.

Manik:Why did you call us shameless?We are lovers.

Pooja:Still..romancing like this...

Nandini:Guess Pooja and Arjun did'nt have their first kiss yet.That's why Pooja is frustrated.

Pooja and Arjun were embarrassed.

Pooja-Arjun:Shut up guys.

Manik:Why should you guys be frustrated and not allowing us to romance?Just have your first kiss.Then problem solved.

Pooja-Arjun were embarrassed.

Manik-Nandini walked away.

Arjun:Pooja...i think we should have our first kiss atleast now.

She became shy.

They shared their first kiss which was very cute.

Manik-Nandini and Arjun-Pooja romanced in rain too.

Meri Kismaton Ko Mile Hath Tere

Phir Se Lakeerein Dikhne Lagi

Dekha Tumhein Toh Aisa Laga Hai

Jaise Yeh Aankhein Dhadakne Lagi

Rahun Umar Bhar Main Teri Tu Mera

Jab Main Badal Ban Jaaun

Tum Bhi Baarish Ban Jana

Jo Kam Pad Jaaye Saansein


Tu Mera Dil Ban Jaana


Rim Jhim Sawan Ki Boondein

Tu Har Mausam Barsana


Jo Kam Pad Jaaye Saansein

Tu Mera Dil Ban Jana

Mere Labon Se Aaye Kabhi Bhi

Ho Naam Pehla Tera Meri Zubaan Pe


Chahe Zamana Munh Mod Le Par

Har Pal Tu Rehna Mera

Bas Yeh Dua Hai(Baarish Ban Jaana music video).

Arjun-Pooja got married.

Manik-Nandini took part in their wedding like their siblings and danced there.

Waha waha ramji, chu chu, chu chu

Jodi kya banayi, chu chu, chu chu

Bhaiya aur bhabhi ko, chu chu, chu chu

Badhayi ho badhayi, chu chu, chu chu





Sab rasmo se badi hai jag mein,

Dil se dil ki sagayi


Aapki kripa se yeh, chu chu, chu chu

Shubh ghadi aai, chu chu, chu chu

Jiji aur jija ko, chu chu, chu chu

Badhayi ho badhayi, chu chu, chu chu


Sab rasmo se badi hai jag mein,

Dil se dil ki sagayi


Mere bhaiya jo, chup baithe hain

Dekho bhabhi yeh, kaise aithe hain

Aise bade hi bhale hain


Aise bade hi bhale hain, mana thode manchale hain

Par aap ke siva, kahi bhi naa phisle hain


Dekho dekho khud pe, chu chu, chu chu

Jiji itrayi,

Bhaiya aur bhabhi ko, chu chu, chu chu

Badhayi ho badhayi, chu chu, chu chu


Sab rasmo se badi hai jag mein,

Dil se dil ki sagayi


Waha waha ramji, chu chu, chu chu

Arae waha waha ramji, chu chu, chu chu


Waha waha ramji


Suno jijaji, aji aapke liye

Meri jiji ne, bade tap hain kiye

Mandiro mein kiye phere


Mandiro mein kiye phere, puja sanjh sawere

Tin lok taintis, devo ko yeh rahi ghere


Jaisi maine mangi thi, chu chu, chu chu

Waisi bhabhi pai,

Jiji aur jija ko, chu chu, chu chu

Badhayi ho badhayi, chu chu, chu chu


Sab rasmo se badi hai jag mein,

Dil se dil ki sagayi




Waha waha ramji, chu chu, chu chu

Arae waha waha ramji, chu chu, chu chu


Waha waha ramji.(HAHK).

After marriage Arjun-Pooja shifted to Manali which was Arjun's native place.

They enjoyed their honeymoon there.

Bana Lungi Main Ab

Tujhe Hi Khuda

Jab Main Badal Ban Jaaun

Tum Bhi Baarish Ban Jaana

Jo Kam Pad Jaaye Saansein

Tu Mera Dil Ban Jana

Haan Rim Jhim Sawan Ki Boondein

Tu Har Mausam Barsana

Jo Kam Pad Jaaye Saansein

Tu Mera Dil Ban Jana

Haan Rim Jhim Sawan Ki Boondein

Tu Har Mausam Barsana

Jo Kam Pad Jaaye Saansein

Tu Mera Dil Ban Jana

Tumhein Baarish Bada Yaad Karti Hai

Aaj Bhi Mujhse Teri Baat Karti Hai

Tumhein Baarish Bada Yaad Karti Hai

Aaj Bhi Mujhse Teri Baat Karti Hai

Tumhein Baarish Bada Yaad Karti Hai

Tumhein Baarish Bada Yaad Karti Hai

Aaj Bhi Mujhse Teri Baat Karti Hai

Tumhein Baarish Bada Yaad Karti Hai

Aaj Bhi Mujhse Teri Baat Karti Hai

Tumhein Baarish Bada Yaad Karti Hai

Meri Kismaton Ko Mile Hath Tere

Phir Se Lakeerein Dikhne Lagi



Dekha Tumhein Toh Aisa Laga Hai

Jaise Yeh Aankhein Dhadakne Lagi

Rahun Umar Bhar Main Teri Tu Mera

Jab Main Badal Ban Jaaun

Tum Bhi Baarish Ban Jaana

Jo Kam Pad Jaaye Saansein

Tu Mera Dil Ban Jana



Haan Rim Jhim Sawan Ki Boondein

Tu Har Mausam Barsana

Jo Kam Pad Jaaye Saansein

Tu Mera Dil Ban Jana

Tumhein Baarish Bada Yaad Karti Hai

Aaj Bhi Mujhse Teri Baat Karti Hai

Tumhein Baarish Bada Yaad Karti Hai

Aaj Bhi Mujhse Teri Baat Karti Hai

Tumhein Baarish Bada Yaad Karti Hai(Baarish Ban Jaana music video).

Nandini's father Shekar was against Manik-Nandini's relationship.

Manik arranged a surprise for Nandini by decorating the area with lights.Nandini arrived their wearing a red gown.Manik was mesmerized by her beauty.

Manik held her hand.

Suddenly Nandini burst into tears.Manik was shocked.

Manik:What happened Nandini?

Nandini:Manik,my dad is not accepting our relationship.He is threatening that he will kill you.If so,I will kill myself.

Manik got angry.

Manik:How dare you say that you will commit suicide?Is our love that weak?

Nandini:Then what will we do Manik?Dad will kill you.

Manik:Your dad can't do anything to us.We will elope and marry.We will hide from him by staying away from him.He won't be able to trace us.

Nandini was stunned.

Nandini:Is it practical ?

Manik:Yes..it is.So be calm and enjoy.

He wiped her tears and led her to the table.He fed her dinner and she felt peaceful.

Nandini:Thank you for changing my mood Manik.

He smiled.

Manik-Nandini eloped to Manali and got shelter in Arjun-Pooja's home.Manik-Nandini got married in the presence of Arjun-Pooja.


The credit for the edit goes to the unknown editor.

Nandini gave birth to Naksh.All were very happy.After a year,Arjun-Pooja gave birth to Rudra.But the storm came as Nandini's father Shekar came to know about their whereabouts.Pooja informed the police as Shekar came there with the weapons.

He stared at Manik angrily:You are going to get finished.You deserve death for snatching my daughter from me.

Seeing him taking weapons, Nandini fainted due to fear.

Before manik could go near her,Shekar tried to stab Manik.But Arjun came in between and he got stabbed.

All were shocked.

Pooja held him tight.Arjun-Pooja stared at each other emotionally.

Pooja's lips shivered:Arjun!

Arjun:Protect Manik and Nandini...look after our son.

Pooja could'nt talk anything.Manik ran held Arjun.

Manik:No Arjun...nothing will happen to you.

Arjun's tears rolled down his cheeks.

Arjun:Please look after my Rudra like your son.I am sure that you will be a good father to him.

Manik wept.

He fell down dead.

Pooja screamed:Arjunnnnnnnnnnnnnn!

Pooja stared at Shekar and shouted:You killed my Arjun.I will kill you.

She took a bat to hit his head.Suddenly he stabbed her too.

Manik cried:Noooooooooooooo

But to the shock Pooja took one of his weapons and hit his head.Shekar fell down dead.

Manik held Pooja:Pooja..nothing will happen to you.Don't go.

Pooja:Manik...be practical.Promise me Manik that you will never let Rudra know pain like us.

Manik:I promise...

She closed her eyes taking her last breath.Manik wept silently.

Nandini opened her eyes regaining consciousness.She was horrified seeing the scenario and cried loudly.Manik embraced her.Both cried.

Present...

Manik:To save us Arjun and Pooja sacrificed their lives.

Nandini:They both had a painful death because of us.That guilt will never go from us..So we decided that we will not give any pain to Rudra.That's why we always asked you to sacrifice for Rudra.Please forgive us Naksh..not because we don't love you.

Naksh wept silently.

Manik:When Rudra had the psychiatric problem of hurting himself when he was in pain we were more guilty.We were scared whether because of us,Arjun Pooja's son will also have a painful death.Though according to the doctor, Rudra is cured,we are still scared.We feel that hurting Rudra is still risky.We are scared whether he will hurt himself again.

Nandini:As a mother I felt guilty of hurting you.That's why I told Manik that we will tell Rudra the truth.

Naksh:Don't tell him the truth.Rudra may not be able to bear the truth.

Nandini:Then Sitara?

Naksh:Let Sitara take the decision.Only she knows who she wants or whether she loves either one of us or someone else.

Nandini:Naksh is right Manik.What if Sitara does'nt love Manik?We can't force her.Right?Rudra has to accept it.

Manik nodded painfully.

Gold.Abrol thumbnail
Posted: 3 years ago
#16

Nice part dear

Loved it

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗

coderlady thumbnail
Posted: 3 years ago
#17

Rudra is their adopted son not Naksh. Maybe they are overcompensating for Rudra.

coderlady thumbnail
Posted: 3 years ago
#18

Pooja was quite judgemental about Nandini and Manik. She did need that first kiss to loosen her up.

coderlady thumbnail
Posted: 3 years ago
#19

Nandini and Manik had to run away and get married, but her father found them still.

coderlady thumbnail
Posted: 3 years ago
#20

Nandini and Manik always tried to keep Rudra away from pain. But some pain is part of life.

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