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Posted: 18 years ago

#151

JUST READ UR FIC.
ITS GOOD BUT 2 MUCH COMMENTS...
continue soon

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Savina

@savina_101

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Posted: 18 years ago

#152

Part 14
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We see a burning dance floor , Dilip and Dev are talking in the corner. Kripa,Anisha,Savina&Nisha are walking around to find a guy to dance with.
N- why am I walking around and looking for a guy to dance with when I dont even like to dance
S- well were not telling u to stay
Prithvi comes up to Nisha
P- do u want to walk around
N-sure
nisha and prithvi walk away
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We see someone mixing sumthing in a drink He/She hands it over to a watier and puts 500 laks on the waiters tray the waiter walks up to Kripa
W: madam heres your drink
K: thank you
The watier walks away
Kripa is about to take a sip of the unkown mixture....
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Angads walking with girls
He bumps into kripa and the glass falls down!
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A persons smile turns into a grin
Someone: did u do it?
Someone else:I did but it didn't turn out right!
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K:Look what u did to my clothes!
Ang:Sorry....
Kripa makes a face at him and wakes away
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We hear giggling
we zoom to a couch
Which has Prithvi and Nisha sitting on it
P:remember last time we were throwing spitballs at savina
Nisha starts to giggle
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We see anisha and channing dancing
and Savina and Josh dancing
Kripas standing in the corner
angads surrounded by girls
But Angads attention is on Kripa
angad walks up to Kripa
K: Go away...before your girlfriends follow you here
A: How come no one asked you to dance?
K: Because i dont want to dance I turned down a lot of guys
A: Ya right
Laksh walks up to kripa
Guy: Now do you want to dance??
Kripa looked at angad and smiled
K: I would love to
Angad watched kripa dance with the guy.
A: Oh shit...is that sonia dancing with another guy!
As soon, as angad gets back to his "girlfriends" Sonia pushes the guy out of the way and tries to dance with angad, but angad ignores her.
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Laksh: Come on kiss me
Kripa: Laksh... uh..N please
Laksh puts his hands around kripa and pulls her close to him. Angad, notices this and walks up to kripa
Kripa: leave me i dont want to dance anymore
Laksh: kiss me now!
Kripa: NO!
Laksh: what did you say!? You *BEEP* *BEEPING* *BEEP*
Ang: She said no You *beep* *BEEPING* *BEEP*
And with those last words angad shoved his fist into Lakshs stomach.

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Savina

@savina_101

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Posted: 18 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9
fab part!!!

thanks😳

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Vinny

@Vinny143

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Posted: 18 years ago

#154

hey guys i just came back from london it was really fun 😊 hopefully well continue sometime this week 😃 😃

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Savina

@savina_101

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Posted: 18 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: KaranB
hey guys i just came back from london it was really fun 😊 hopefully well continue sometime this week 😃 😃

Hey Welcome Back!😳

Edited by savina_101 - 18 years ago

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Savina

@savina_101

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Posted: 18 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: monikaseth
awesome dear 👏

Thanks

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Savina

@savina_101

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Posted: 18 years ago

#157

Part 15
Recap:Laksh: Come on kiss me
Kripa: Laksh... uh..N please
Laksh puts his hands around kripa and pulls her close to him. Angad, notices this and walks up to kripa
Kripa: leave me i dont want to dance anymore
Laksh: kiss me now!
Kripa: NO!
Laksh: what did you say!? You *BEEP* *BEEPING* *BEEP*
Ang: She said no You *beep* *BEEPING* *BEEP*
And with those last words angad shoved his fist into Lakshs stomach.
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Laksh trys to hit Angad back but Angad puches him back.
Angad grabs Kripas hand and takes her out the door.they both sit in the car and have a quiet ride home.When they reach to kripas house she says thanks and quickly gets out the door so quickly that angad didn't have a chance to say your welcome.
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Kripas sitting on her bed holding her most precious bear.Having flashbacks of what just happened.Theres burning tears trickling down her rosey cheeks.
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Angad is sitting in his room thinking why would laksh do such a thing?Angad felt betrayed.Just then there was a knock on angads door.He opens it.
Ani:hi
Angad turns around without saying a word.
Ani:u like her don't u
Angad turns around because he really needed to anwser this question
Ang:Like who?
Ani:(sighs)Kripa
Ang: NOO! doesn't mean i save her I love her!
Ani:Come on bro u can't hide from me infact i'm your beloved sister
Ang:ok...I wont hide from u......well I DON'T LIKE HER
Angad pushes Anisha out the door and slams it shut
and says "Or do I?" he grins and shuts his light.
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Sharms and the khannas decide to have breakfast together
so there all sitting on the sharms dining table.There all really shameful of what laksh did.
S: Auntie wheres kripa
G:shes up in her room
Ani:ok where gonna go see her
the 3 girls get up and start to clim the stairs.
Kripas on her dresser chair putting on eyeshadow
theres a knock at her door
K: come in!
Anisha opens the door
K:hey guys!
S: hey
Kripa gets up and opens her blinds
a bright light shines on there faces
K:it's a pretty good day don't u feel like going to the beach
Ani:yea
S: but we need are swim suites!
K: well we will go to ur house so u guy can change
Kripa opens her closet and puts her swimsuite in a bag
they shut the door behind them.
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The 4 girls come down stairs
J: were are u going
K: to the beach
Ang:we want to come to
K:ok drive ur selfs there!
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Kripa takes Anisha,Savina and Nisha to there house
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They all come out wearing there swimsuites
they get in the car and drive off
When they get there the guys are already there
Angad stands up
Ang: we all decided that we will take u guys to long beach walk
the guys stand beside there girls except for Angad and kripa
J: I guess angad and kripa are together
they both look at eachother
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Sorryyyyyy for not contuining!!!! I hope u enjoyed this part!!!!Please leave lotsssssss of comments
thanks 😳

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Savina

@savina_101

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Posted: 18 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: popgirl
Awesome part continue soon

Thanks😳

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Aisha

@Xo-PuZen

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Posted: 18 years ago

#159

hi i just read your ff and i just love it!!'
it was great..
plz continue..
you havent updated in a looooong time..
your fans are waiting..

Aisha 😳

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Savina

@savina_101

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Posted: 18 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: Xo-PuZen
hi i just read your ff and i just love it!!'
it was great..
plz continue..
you havent updated in a looooong time..
your fans are waiting..

Aisha 😳

Aww Thanks

Will Update Soon...😳

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