Originally posted by: Urmila54
Right now. I don't know about anything or anyone but the fact that I am literally having goosebumps all over my body and tears in my eyes but I can't pinpoint the exact emotion because of which I am crying.. my heart is literally full of new kind of mixed emotions... I literally bow my head infront of you and your skill .... I had literally become a dieheart fan of yours...You know the way you explained every single emotion of each and every member and especially the way you penned down the emotions and feelings of Kranti she was keeping in her heart.... The way you made her lived her life once again in a summary from day 1 of meeting Ram to the present... The way she realises her mistake.. her fault of ignoring Mandira's hatred towards Ram from the beginning, to trusting her , letting Ram go, to taking a stand for herself and her children in real manner... It's not an easy task.. I had read several fictional stories where Kranti had changed her mind afterwards and everything but the strong surge of emotions I felt after reading your story and the connection which I had felt between story and my heart and feeling like living the story in real during reading... This way I had never felt before and infact I will feel this way for another story or something else in future too... Although it started just as reader and writer but I feels a strong heart to heart connection with you Saumya... You may find it funny or hilarious but whatever I am writing now is what I feel about you and story... Although we had never met face to face ever and don't know if we will in future too but all I know is that you are a girl with golden heart... And each and every word I had written is written by heart and I mean every single word of it ... Infact I had a lot of words to say but I don't want to make you bore🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺.. so will tell you someother day infact the truth is there is a lot to say but can't find words to write it down.. because I am not good in expressing my feelings or emotions by writing it down☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️....
Now coming back to the story all I want to say is a poem I remember which I had read somewhere...
“A Mother’s love is something
that no one can explain,
It is made of deep devotion
and of sacrifice and pain
It is endless and unselfish
and enduring come what may
For nothing can destroy it
or take that love away
It is patient and forgiving
when all others are forsaking,
And it never fails or falters
even though the heart is breaking
It believes beyond believing
when the world around condemns,
And it glows with all the beauty
of the rarest, brightest gems
It is far beyond defining,
it defies all explanation,
And it still remains a secret
like the mysteries of creation
A many splendored miracle
man cannot understand
And another wondrous evidence
of God’s tender guiding hand.”..
And so is Kranti for her children whatsoever decision she took in the past was childhish and wrong but not even for a single second she thought evil for Ram or had seen him as her stepson... At that time also and right now too all she is thinking for her children and there benefits. Her way was wrong in the past but instead of living that wrong decision she is correcting it is what matters and this is what a mother do .. Siya's words were true that although they were separated but their separation has made them stronger than before.. This is what happens.. May be yours parents decision of way of doing things is wrong sometimes but it causes no harm to you..
Eagerly waiting for the next part dear...
Please update soon.....
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