ROSID SS(COMPLETED):-RETURN OF MY LIFE ?

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Select the title friends... "Life is beautiful" or "Return of my life"...


This is again as usual our pyaare couple Rosid ki hai.... Based on them only.


Its a Cop story. CID.. Siddant,Prem two orphans.. Later Rajender impressed on seeing their talent in the childhood only when he visited ophanage once. Oh sorry I forgot . By the way Rajender is an ACP of CID Mumbai


Later Siddant and Prem completed their education in law and crime , later they also joined CID Mumbai..


5 years later, Sid and Prem become Senior officers and his friends also joined them .. Sid is too strict and serious where as Prem funny and talkative...


Story will be entertaining only.. Hope you like this too... I know I have one ongoing ff but thought of giving this ss.. of 15-20 chapters only..


Heroine is going to make her dhamakedar entry in the first chapter it self..


Give your valuable reviews on this... Whether to continue or not? Ha, please select the title.. If you are not okay with both of them , then suggest your own...

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Either title is OK. Looking forward to the story.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Cop story! Sounds interesting. Looking forward for the updates.

And both the titles are good. But, you know the story better than us, so you decide which one suits the story😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I love CID 💙..... eagerly waiting for the first chapter .....

Title ?!I still haven’t kept a title for my ff itself smiley37 You are really asking a wrong person for it 😆.....

either of the title is good .. keep the one which you feel like ..

all the best for this SS 👍🏼

Eagerly looking forward for this SS 😃

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thanks for your reviews Coderlady, Confused-Soul, Andetheres.


So I will name this ff as "RETURN OF MY LIFE"


1st chapter is on the way

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Posted: 4 years ago
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CHAPTER 1:-SHOCKING RETURN:-IS THIS MY ROLI???


5 'o' clock in the morning.. As usual our hero CID senior inspector Siddant opened his eyes and looked around and gave a dry smile.


He just carassed his other side of the the bed...


He remembered something..


Sid-Arey Roli, always you woke up early, why?


Roli-That's so simple Siddant, I always want to see your happy and smiley face which makes my whole day happiest ...


Sid-Acchaaa, he said with closed eyes..


Roli-Yes dear, good morning..


She gave a kiss to him and went to fresh up..


It was his daily routine , he opens his eyes with a sweet morning kiss by his wife.


Almost 5 months now, Roli Divedi turned Roli Siddant Bharadwaj...


Sid smiled and went to his daily exercise...


FLASHBACK ENDS.....


Sid-You are a big liar Roli, you left me in the middle only.. You promised me that you always there for me but see now I am alone without you my life is empty , why you did this to me you cheater...


He as usual heard athe voice and smiled.. "Ye dono kabhi nahi sudharenge"...


It was Prem and Ishita(Sorry Guys I hate Simar that's why I don't want to include her character anymore) .


They also got married along with Rosid.. A perfect romantic lovebirds..


Ishita-Arey Prem, get up...


Prem-Common Ishi, its still 5.. Bureau 9 baje jaana hai yaar, let me sleep sometimes...


Ishita-So you are not coming haa...


Prem-Arey , where are you going now? Searching for the new boyfriend???


Ishita-I am such a fool that I got married to one stupid guy, but what to do he is such a dumb also...


Prem-You...you stupid get lost. Don't disturb me...


He heard a knock....


Ishita-I think bhai only...


Prem-For your kind information , he is my brother not yours...


Ishita-Huh kya farq padta hai, good morning bhai.


Sid-Good morning dear..


Both gave a side hug...


Sid-Oh our young hero still sleeping


Prem-Gooood morningggg Brother


Sid-Good morning dear... You are such a dumb Prem


Prem-Bro, you too... This is not fair at all...


Sid-Then what? Your darling wife planning for swimming with you but..


Prem immediately jumped from the bed...


Prem-She what? Really????


Ishita-Huh, I think I should marry to Siddant instead of you...


Sid-Yeah, but what to do my Prem will feel bad...


Prem-Arey who told, take her away.. I will marry any other good girl.


Ishita-Then first I kill her then you only...


Sid-Accha, so much love.. very good. Prem if you want to go with your wife then take this coffee and take your swim suit,... Byee....


Prem-Ishi- Bye brother...


Sid as usual went to prepare break fast and romantic couple went for jogging and then planned for swimming...


7 'o' clock now...


Prem and Ishita enjoying well in the pool..


Ishita-Arey see bhai is calling..


Prem-Already 7???? Arey Ishi because of you I am late today you chudail ki bacchi...


Ishita-Accha, because of me ha???? Who lost in my kisses haa? You chudail ka baap... get lost..


Sid-Oyee, baad mein jagad lenaa ab fresh hoke aajao break fast ke liye.


Prem-Coming brother...


Both went to bathroom and after 15 minutes both came down..


Ishita-Tomorrow Prem will cook..


Prem-Why me? Its your job not ours..


Ishita-Arey no need for bhai to cook everyday. From tomorrow onwards me and Prem will share


Prem-Yeah, okay for me


Sid-Arey no need.. In fact I am happy to this . So you too just enjoy


Ishita-You too naa bhai, by the way as usual food is too good..


Prem-Yeah bro, your hands have magics...


Sid smiled...


Then they went to Bureau..


Ishita-Brother...


Sid-Ha Ishi


Ishita-I want ice cream


Prem-Abey chal, winter time no need


Sid-Arey bro, let her eat naa.. Come Ishi..


Ishita-Thanks bhai....


Prem-What a brother-sister.. huh leaving me alone like this


Ishita-Arey we are not ignoring you come, I will buy you a cup ice cream...


Sid-Yeah and we will eat Butterscotch Cone.


Both hi-fied each other.. Prem pouted...


Trio went to Ice cream shop...


When they entered the Bureau , everyone's face is dull...


Sid-What happened? Why these all faces dull..


Prem-Arey , ye kaha se agaya???


"Good Morning"...


Sid-Oh no.. Aaj ka din toh gaya samjho..


"What did you say Siddant?"


Sid-Nothing Sir, good morning Sir


Ronit, DCP of CID Mumbai


Ronit-You three , come here


Rajender also entered.. "DCP this time?"


Prem-Now what?


Ronit-By the way, in the morning itself what were you doing in the ice cream parlor?


Trio shocked,..


Ishita-How do you know that?


Ronit-I am DCP ... that's why


Prem-Vahi toh humhara bad luck hai


Ronit-What did you say>? I heard it..


Sid-Good, by the way, what are you doing there? Any new girl friend????


All giggled....


Ronit expression changed...


Ronit-You..you what is the need of talking about my girlfriend now?


Prem-Sir, what happened? She also ditch you right????


Ronit-Shhhh, slowlyyyy.. don't shout


Sid-We really feel bad Sir


Ronit-Discipline, discipline.. Remember I am your DCP


All in one, "Yes Sir"...


Ronit-Discipline means Ronit, Ronit means


All-Discipline..


Ronit-Yeahhh.. He went out..


Raj-Discipline means Ronit, wah joke of the year..


Sid-Arey Sir, this 6th girl friend also ditched him


Prem-Aur kya karegi bechari, DCP sir se tang aak ke khudkhushi karne se behtar yahi hai ki chodke chale jaao..


Sid-Arey araam se.. You know right , diwaaronke bhi kaan hote hai


Raj-What really?


They understood that DCP standing behind the door and listened their talks...


Ronit entered again.. "Dekh lunga sabko, ek ek koh dekh lunga, deklungaa, mujhe jokebanaake rakha hai, dekh lunga tum logonko"...


He finally went...


Raj-Dekhlungaa,, 10 saalo se yahi bolte aaye hai lekin kuch kiya nahi


Sid-Arey kaise karte Sir... Girlfriend so sambhal nahi sakte toh Bureau kaise sambhalenge..???


All laughed ..


Raj-Okay enough, go to your work


All-Yes Sir


After 2 hours.. DCP again entered....


Ronit-Rajender and Prem come with me, and Siddant study this file..


Sid-Okay Sir


trio went out.


Raj-What happened Sir???


Ronit-New officer is coming to join us..


Prem-So what is new in this? Why you called us here?


Ronit-Pehle mere baat toh sun lo yaar, see this file.


Both shocked...


Raj-This is impossible...


Prem-Yeah, she is ....


Ronit-No, I also shocked but she is not.. Just looks like... But my problem is Siddant.. Fortunately he is slowly coming out from that grief but now


Raj-Yes Sir, how will he respond?


Prem-Sir..


Ronit-I tried but strict orders from the head quarters that I can't transfer her within 1 year


Raj-Okay sir, we will handle him.


Ronit-Okay she may arrive in few mins..


Prem-Don't worry Sir, Sid will be fine..


After sometime, DCP along with girl entered inside...


Sid is busy in his work...


Raj-Sir...


Sid looked at DCP and Girl, he again saw that girl..


Everyone looking concerned about Sid only.. But he is calm and smiled...


Raj-Siddant, Prem this is new CID officer


Siddant-Welcome to CID Mumabi Ms.Shruthi


Ronit-You know her???


Sid-My friend also trained in the same academy only, he told me


Shruthi-Thank you Sir...


Sid(Himself)- Strange... Same face, same look, same cute smile, but she is not my Roli .. but


Prem-Are you okay???


Sid-Of course I am.. Come lets do work ...


Prem-Welcome Ms.Shruthi, this is my wife and senior officer Ishita


Shruthi-Oh hello mam


Ishi-Hello Shruthi, welcome


Shruthi-thank you..


Everyone wished her.. and went back to their work.. Sid suddenly lost in his thoughts...


FLASHBACK:-


Ronit entered with two girls...


Raj-Ye lo, ye phir se aagaya .. gaya humhara saraa din paani mein


Sid-Good Morning Sir, who are these two kids??


Girl-Kids??? We are CID officers...


Prem-Offciers??? Looks like college students


Ronit-Shut up. Is this way to talk with your new officers?


Sid-Huh, two ladies ...


Prem-Hey she is beautiful


Sid-Abey, tumhare paas kitne girlfriends hai, aur kitne chahiye tujhe. chup raho


Prem-Look her(Pointing to Ishita)..


Girl-Ishita Pandey on duty Sir...


Raj-Oh Ishita, welcome to CID Mumbai...


Sid-And you...


Girl-Roli Divedi Sir..


Sid-Welcome to CID Mumbai..


He forward his hand...


Roli-I love you Sir


Wow, that's more like it... All shocked including Prem,Ronit and Raj..


Ronit-Ye ladki koh marne kaa iraada hai kya? Siddant ke saat aise baat kar rahi hai yaar


Sid-Are you mad? What did you say ?


Roli-I said I love you Siddant Sir


Sid-You..you this is not any play ground , this is CID Bureau


Raj-I think she is daring.. No one have guts to talk with him like that but she that too on her joining day.. super..


He smiled and went..


Prem-Waah, kaha se pakad ke laaye ho isse?


Ronit-Arey Lukhnow se


Prem-Perfect


Sid-I am your senior officer and remember in front of me never talk like this again


Roli-Why Sir? Is there any rules that one junior can't love his senior officer?


Sid-Oh come on, this is your first day.. Is this the way to impress your senior???


Roli-So what? Duty and love are not same, this is my personal..


Sid-Poor Girl... It won't work...


Roli-So you are afraid of me


Sid-Seriously?? Joke of the year.. In this world this Siddant don't afraid of anyone got it


Roli-Is it???


Sid-Yes of course now go and do your work.. There ...


Roli-Okay if you have no fear then just copy me...


Sid-Fine tell me...


Roli-I always love you Roli, Roli Divedi se Roli Bharadwaj banjaao..


Sid-I always love you Siddant, Roli Divedi se Roli DIvedi hi rehnaa...


DCP and Prem and other laughed... Roli blinked her eyes..


Sid-I told you .. find a better way Ms.Roli, again welcome to CID Mumbai.. Go


He smiled and went.


Roli-As I heard, such a smart officer ha, by the way you never said you don't love me ha.. So you have no other options my so called senior officer, just wait and watch..


FLASHBACK ENDS...


A small amount of tears came out from his eyes...


Prem-Are you okay bro??


Sid-Yeah fine, just recalled something..


Prem-Hmmm


Shruthi-Why is he crying Ishita mam?


Ishita-I am your friend now, you can call me Ishita


Shruthi-Oh okay Ishita.


Ishita-I think he remembered something


Shruthi-Something what???


Ishita-voh actually


Sid-Ishi... come here


Ishita-Yes Sir...


Sid-Ishi, please don't tell anything about me and Roli okay


Ishita-Okay bhai


Sid-Thank you


Ishita smiled and left..


Shruthi-What happened???



Ishita-Nothing.


Shruthi-Ha tell me, what happened to him?


Ishita-Nothing, I think some sad past


Shruthi-May be he did something wrong that's why


Ishita-Don't ever tell anything like that in front of me again got it??? You know nothing about him


Shruthi-Oh okay sorry


Ishita-Okay leave that matter..


Shruthi looked at Siddant and then back to her work...


TO BE CONTINUED.

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Edited by Smiley-Rosid05 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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It was an amazinggggg update 👌👌👌👌

Is Ronit’s character as DCP inspired from DCP Chitrole ?! I love his character ....😍

Pakka Shruthi is roli.. but why ????🤔🧐 if my guess is wrong .. don’t mind it 😅

Sid-ishi ....good bhai-behen ✌️

Sid -prem 👌👌....

Wohooo! Roli proposed Sid on their first meet itself ..... 🥳

Roli is so Daring 🤟

Siddhant is too smart 😎....

Very very very very eagerly waiting for the next update ✌️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Great start sir and Ishita bonding was nice dcp ronit is a copy of dcp chitrole I think Shruti is roli only is she is pretending to be Shruti eagerly waiting for next update❤️❤️♥️♥️♥️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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That's a good start.

Sid, prem and ishita's bonding is cute.

Im sure Shruti is none other than Roli. Is she having memory loss or is it any plan?🤔

Waiting to know more.

Update soon.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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So Shruti looks like Roli. What happened to Roli?

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