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Posted: 4 years ago

All about me…

Things were compounded the next morning by the largest bunch of red roses Viveka had ever seen in her life

Papa was reading the newspaper Naina and Viveka hadn’t said a word to each other after Naina had slammed her door on Viveka’s back

The twins just laughed and made fun of her misery. Akash was at a point where he had had it with Naina. He talked to Anubha last night and she had told him to lay off

Thankfully Dadu and Dadi were at Bua’s

Naina’s theater did not have any spectators

Viveka made pancakes (the twins got whatever they wanted when Ma was not in town)

They generally used the words “Oh Gawdd!! I HATE my life”

Now Naina was right there

Akash was no longer worried she would do self harm

The man holding the roses was hidden behind the bunch

It was simple, elegant arrangement of the darkest of red roses, must be a 100 or more?

Viveka peeked myopically through her steamed up glasses, oiled hair and pancake flour on her skinny tee

“Kaun hai Papa”

“Roses hain beta” he mumbled

He could not hold it, he asked the guy to set it on the coffee table

“WOWW” Veev gasped

“Here she was all upset… looks like dude wants to make up with her” Viveka laughed

The twins had left for college they would have posed with it individually and shot a 100 selfies in a second and gone off and bragged something utterly cliche to their male friends “If I cant have such a relationship then I don’t want a BF”

Their lives were lived on SM

Viveka chuckled and did the same… for no reason

Abhishek had not sent her a THING in the few months

There was no chance he was going to send her a 100 roses

When all this Raanav thing blows over she could very well use the roses to shame Abhishek or whoever… she chuckled

“card hai?” she peered in the red velvet forest

There was one tucked underneath in what seemed like a Swarovski crystal bowl

“Kitna bhari hai beta, kaise uthaya aapne?” Akash quizzed the delivery kid

“Jee sir” he nodded and accepted the Rs.100 with gratitude and walked away

Viveka wanted to vaporize when she saw the name on the card

“Viveka Mathur” it said

But it was too late Papa had accidentally pounded on Naina’s door announcing she had gotten flowers from inder

She came out screeching and gushing

Viveka pulled the card and stood up to open

“Its RUDE Veev” she yanked it smugly with a giggle

“Umm.. OK” Viveka pushed her glasses up awkward wondering how to break it to her

But the card was gone… swoosh

“Thanks for the coffee and the Dan Ariely quotes! Raanav”

“MUJHE kyon bheja hai isne?” Naina looked confused truly “Is HE hitting on me now?” she scowled a little egotistically

She flipped over the envelope

“To

Viveka Mathur”

It said

She just threw it on a couch and went into her room and slammed the door with a loud bang

Akash picked it up opened the card and read it… and smiled handing it to a pink Viveka

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Posted: 4 years ago

this man is chummaaa❤️maan ja veev..

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Posted: 4 years ago

"Viveka wanted to vaporize when she saw the name on the card"


😆😆 This one was hilarious to read . I loved it.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nisha mam very small update 😞😞

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wow. Thanks for the midday update Nisha 🙏🤗


And you know us all very very well. Apparam


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Posted: 4 years ago

This man is from the Victorian age. Aajkal nahi milte aise log, who talk, behave and woo like that

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Posted: 4 years ago

He's a "gentleman caller"

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Posted: 4 years ago

You are right Sudhi, his sartorial style is classic and his attitude is classy as well

I am tired of the nonsensical WhatsApp and Tinder "hook up" culture and lack of decency

We live in a free country, #girlpower, women have been suppressed for too long bol bol bolkar everything is turning into craziness

No I dont want women to sit at home with no career and make babies and wash their husband's feet

But at the same time I am irritated by the whole grossness of it🤢

What is the use of washing your hands a 100 times and washing your hair everyday (Indians get a lot of crap around here for eating with their hands and only washing their hair once a week)

Hook up WITH freshly shampooed hair of course with a stranger you met in a bar 10 minutes ago and exchange bodily juices 🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago

Misery loves company

Papa put the flowers in her room and sent pictures to Anubha, he rarely sent pictures, but this time he did

Anubha even texted first thing after she returned from work, when he didn’t answer she called him

“USNE bheja? KYON?”

“Aapki beti us se milkar aayi kal, aaj usne thank kiya” he laughed

“Naina kaisi hai?”

“Toofan machaya hua hai usne” he groaned

“She is not jumping off the balcony right?”

“Nahi… she loves herself too much for that…. Usne socha Raanav USKO chahta hai” he whispered

“Raanav pata nahi KYA chahta hai” Anubha was scared

“Usne kaha aapse Anu”

“Kitni sach hogi yeh baat?” “Akash…. “Helllooo”

“Haana haan sun raha hoon…. Satyen to has rahe the us din”

“Kya pata baap bete ki saazish ho”

“Bwahahahah” “You have a really high opinion of your self if u think the man will pause his cuties of being a CEO in order to harass us”

“I do have a high opinion Akash”

“I don’t know… I cannot see another daughter go through heart break” Akash was choked up

“I don’t even know what she saw in him… he had trouble written all over him”

“HUA KYA bata nahi rahi”

“Aap Veev ko kaho Raanav ko poochhegi” Anu urged

“Bas…. Bawaal mach jaayega”

“We cannot be speculating for ever right?”

“Umm.. yeah… but that’s not a good idea”

“Kha rahi hai kuch?”

“Haan she ate pizza last night but wont come out of her room”

“Pizza kyon? Main to 4 subziyan banakar hati hoon”

“U know Viveka…. Who shaam ko 7 baje aayi… main NOIDA gaya tha Asthanas keg har”

“Does Veev like Raanav?”

“Pata nahi…. Ek dum shock mein hain who”

“Main baat karti hoon…. He is also BIG TROUBLE”

“Tum to aise kisi se nahi karwake dogi apni betiyon ki shaadi”

“I cant” Anu choked up

“Have a good evening… so jao jaldi”

“Naina ko sochkar neend bhi nahi aati…

“aaj usne chhutthi kari hai” he said bitterly

“Oh god!!”

“Are u going to leave her home alone?”

“Nahi aaj 3rd Monday hai na, Veev ke classes 5 baje taq nahi hai, I will be home early” he sighed

Ther e Viveka went to take a shower, feeling supremely self conscious

She opened her bathroom door to peek at the flowers on her desk

Humungous arrangement on a sparkly bowl

She contemplated thanking him

“No don’t… he will take it as you trying to kiss up” her mind warned

“Hmm” she nodded

She stepped out, did diya at the home mandir and begged for clarity with folded hands

Naina came to her room and stared at the roses that now sat on a carved Jaipuri stool near the balcony door

“Why did he send you flowers?”

“Umm.. just being polite I guess” she mumbled not looking up from the article she was reading

“I feel so hurt Veev” Naina’s eyes were bloodshot

Viveka felt teary too

She got up to go hug her

The girls relaxed in each others’ arms and sighed

“I love him he doesn’t want anything to do with me”

“I am sorry”

“I know” Naina sat down

“Have you showered or eaten anything? Jao nahao… I will make pancakes”

“Inder never sent me any flowers” Naina looked at them longingly making Viveka blush

“These are just thank u flowers”

“NO THEY ARE NOT stop LYING TO ME Veev” Naina began to cry

“I am not”

“You think I am a fool”

“Naina I will never hurt you bebu” she hugged her again

“I want to be with him so bad….”

“I know… its your first heartbreak”

NOT!

Naina fell in and out of love….

“Will you ask Raanav if he will meet me? He has blocked me”

“Umm.. I… uh… umm.. I don’t know if that’s a good idea”

“WHY NOT?” Naina held her head and sat on the bed

“Because I don’t even know him….”

“So you want to protect YOUR reputation”

“No Naina… jaanti nahi main bande ko”

“TO? SHAADI kaise karogi tum?” naina accused

“I don’t know…. I don’t know if I am”

“You just want to be selfishly happy, you don’t want me to join that family”

“Aisa nahi hai jaan” Viveka kneeled on the floor and begged

“Don’t you think its strange he proposed to you a second after Inder dumped me?”

She was a queen of conspiracy theories

Viveka did not tell her she had the proposal for 3 months now

Or 2?

“Umm.. yeah he told Papa anD Ma on Saturday”

“Achhe log nahi hai Veev… they are horrible, crooked, devious people” Naina hugged Viveka protectively

“Hmmm…”

“We BOTH are better off shunning them” naina visibly relaxed

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Posted: 4 years ago

Please write the next one with Raanav.🙏

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