unexplained feelings PART2 updated PG 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey check out my ff im a boy a cute boy actually im a sexy boy ight enuf bout myself and sos S**Z I h8 these things,I h8 writing but this storys for my frend I wont say her name but she knows who she is and shes on IF shes addicted to the site so this is 4 u and ill write there first names cuz I dun remeba there second names sos

So here goes:

A guy called angad attending school in yr 11 bets m8s with kripa,hes pretty messed up at the moment as his on drugs and smoking so u no how it is ,this best frend kripa,he has feelings 4 her but doesn't mention anything till last week end of term in the canteen he told her his feelings but she simply ran away so as u see it didn't go so well its now been 6 weeks holidays and there back to school today,hes pretty nervous cuz he has a feeling that he might've lost his best frend.forgot to mention his drope dead gourgeous and hes popular,very popular for all the wrong reasons

where as kripa is a very popular gal in school,the popularity is only cuz she hangs out with angad,she is also drop dead gourgeous but she dun smoke or do drugs so shes not messed up,she loves ibal khan,shes obsessed by him,angad no 1 enemy and she is in luv with college boy prithvi but that is only a crush when she finds out bout Angads feeling everything seemed to change

hey friend u no who u are u no this is our story so why not u help me write it u explain ur side and ill explain mine and guys can u pls persuade this frend of mine to help and ya hope u like it I bet u h8 it I suck at this stuff but lyke I said im only writing 4 my frend

so if u lyke it pls comment

if u thnk it sucks pls still comment and write it sucks

simple enuf I think

anyways thanks for reading if u read it

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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww thats cute i hope ur friend helps u write lol and if u represent angad then i really hope ur not a druggie lol its not cool to smell like an ashtray lol but i do hope u continue!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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interesting, continue soon!!!!!!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwww thats soo cute!!! it sounds good!! i hope your friend helps u write it 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hiya and a good thing ur writing a ff but i hope this is not based on u and me i swea ur mad and ill try and help u but u no ive already got so much ff but ill try and u trampy u didnt tell me u were joining IF 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww shaz and a boy aww so sweet lol i kill myself well ok nice starting its interesting she smokes even though im sorta confused continue soon (LOL SHAZ and Boy Funny no its funny cause umm u no i really don't no oh well)
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~*Milly*~

aww shaz and a boy aww so sweet lol i kill myself well ok nice starting its interesting she smokes even though im sorta confused continue soon (LOL SHAZ and Boy Funny no its funny cause umm u no i really don't no oh well)

im guessing u no shaz thats a good thing and yes shaz and a boy wats so funny id luv to no ,no she dun smoke im da one smoking and doing drugs ,well this story in reality is confused i mena i think i shud register with confused.com sos i think im confising evryone now anyways thanks 4 the comment

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: memze

hiya and a good thing ur writing a ff but i hope this is not based on u and me i swea ur mad and ill try and help u but u no ive already got so much ff but ill try and u trampy u didnt tell me u were joining IF



sos shaz but its based on us but chill u write ur side to ur feelings and i write mine and u sud be happy ure playing kripa look at poor me im stuck as angad and thanks cuz i no ull cont after all i ur bezz mate
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Posted: 18 years ago
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everyone else thanks for ur comments 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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By da way guys ill be writing this in sum 1st person and sum normal

Part 1

it was back to school, the 6 weeks holidays went pretty fast I didn't really chat to Kripa much as she pretty much ignored me when ever I saw her on the street she was with her family and lets just say her family aren't too keen on me especially her dad, hi woke up early in da morning got dressed in to my uniform and headed to school, I looked around 4 her but she wasn't there, I attended registration and she wasn't there either, miss hill called her name out

Miss hill-Kripa

And that's when she walked in

Kripa-yes miss

She looked at the class and smiled like her normal self, she had a big data folder in her hand covered with pictures of iqbal khan, and she took her seat next to me like she always does

Kripa-hey Angad

I was pretty shocked at her behaviour cuz I thought she mite be angry at me but she was calm and her normal self which was a good thing but still I wanted my answer, the questioned I asked her before the 6 weeks holidays, I was just about to talk to her when miss said u can chat but she dashed along to the boys on the other table and gave them all hugs, this is one thing I hate she is so open with everyone she gets on with all the boys in class which is a good thing but is it really necessary to hug ,I suppose im just being jealous,I went to join in,we chatted abit then my mate faz started saying things which weren't in anywasy pleasing kripa

faz-hey angad and kripa so r u 2 hooked then ,I heard angad asked u out b4 the hols

angad-faz yaar shut up

faz-wat im only asking

kripa-look guys me and angad r only frens,nothing else and well always stay da same right angad

angad-yah wat she said

break time

I was with my mates and we all went behind the bushes and I started smoking,kripa who wasn't pleased went away,I cudnt go after her cuz I was with ma m8s and I was getting paid now for giving them drugs,I gave them there drugs and took there money and then went off to look for kripa,I saw her with her close mate samreena in the front gates staring at the college boys coming in,I went up to kripa,samreena

angad-heya guys

kripa-hi angad look prithvis cuming

samreena-yea and hes totally mine

kripa-no mine

I dunt no why but I felt a dash of jealousy go up me,I knew prithvi he used to be my brothers frend who is now in jail,I wne tup to prithvi

angad-hiya man

prithvi-hey angad how is it going

angad-pretty good

prithvi-hey listen whats that chicks name there

angad turned around and saw he was pointing to kripa

angad-her names kripa,why?

prithvi-well I kindve like her

angad-well stay away understand

prithvi-woah man wats up

angad-nuthin its just that im kindve involved with her

prithvi-sos bruva didn't no

my hands r hurting that's all I can write im probably boring u out anyways the next part id appreciate if shaz u cud write it,u all ust know now that its her as she wrote in her comment,so shaz u rwrite ur side cuz I have no idea how u were feeling so why not u explain plsss and yea guys lemme just let u no basically this is mine and shaz aka memze story but she don't like me actually I dun no I think she has confused feelings and to tell the truth this ff is really to get to know eachother she explains her feelings in her part and I do mine in my part and u readers get entertainment,basically I kindve got in truble with ma school now and have got kicked out so I dun see her much so this is kindve way to stay in touch,anyways maybe her true feelings might cum out in this story I really dun no anyways if u read thanks adnd if u didn't I dun care owww my hands r hurting right Im gonna go sleep now so goodnight

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