TAAREY FF~ This time it's FOREVER ( CHAPTER 6 UPDATED)

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Shweta

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Posted: 6 years ago

#121

Hola Ishani😳

Look who finally managed to make her way here😎🤪

The prologue is promising.

You got me intrigued here😃

P.S.- I'll be commenting for every chapter. So, brace yourself for a series of comments😛

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Shweta

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Posted: 6 years ago

#122

--| Teaser 1 |--

You call that a teaser🤢

It was more of a snippet and has got me totally confused😕

I guess I should just continue reading..

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Shweta

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Posted: 6 years ago

#123

--| Synopsis |--

Ohhh!

Now things are starting to make a little sense😆

Honestly, I never thought of a TaaRey FF through this angle. I'm truly intrigued

I guess it's safe to assume that Taani's engagement with Vishesh is broken.

But why would D3 break apart?😕

And also SwaRon.

Great plot yaar👏

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Posted: 6 years ago

#124

I'm sorry. Too much was going on at that time. I don't know what I've done to be an inspiration for anyone, but I appreciate the gesture. Thank you❤️

--| Chapter 1 |--

Taani toh kamaal ki dancer ban gayi yaar!

But what is this tension between everyone?

It's so difficult to see them this hostile.

Have Sharon and Taani been together since the last year?

Also everyone seems to be avoidling Kriya. Has she done something, knowingly or unknowingly?

Right now the equation is that Rey is happy to see Taani, but Taani is shattered to see Kriya with Rey.

Why? I mean, in my defence, as per the show Taani wanted Rey to move on. Unless you've changed that attribute, I am confused by her reaction.

Great chapter👍🏼

Just one thing, seven years mein VP ki promotion ho jani chahiye thi nahi? He has still not become the principle😛 Just kidding😆

Loving the story so far😳

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Shweta

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Posted: 6 years ago

#125

Karan-Arjun😆

Arjun is here, Karan will soon come dear😛

That was a bad rhyme!

Moving on..

--| Chapter 2 |--

Wait what?😲

I hope that the girl is Sharon. She better be! Warna Taani itni calm nahi hoti. But then again this is a different version of Taani, so I can't be completely sure.

Sharon bheegi billi kaise ban gayi? I miss the attitude wali Sharon already😒

In the last chapter I thought Kriya did something, but clearly Rey has done something. Why else would Sharon distance herself away from him?

Rey ne kya kaand kiya hai yaar🤓

I think the D3 falling out is because of Kriya and Rey.

But why would everyone else be so distant with each other?

So many questions..

I hope I find answers soon. You see I don't like waiting especially for secrets🤪

What an irony right?😛

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Shweta

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Posted: 6 years ago

#126

Oh God!

Stop making me feel awful

I'm sorry for being late.

--| Chapter 3 |--

You described a period of almost a year in just a few lines and those ines just brought back every memory. It's like I'm having a breakdown with Taani.

Gosh! I miss this show so bad!🥺

I loved the way you brushed upon their relationship.

The writing was so beautiful!❤️

Reading ahead..

NOOO😡

I want more!!!!

Aise kaun end karta hai yaar *pout*

Get back the old Sharon. This version of hers is scaringly uncomfortable.

What is wrong with her?

And what is wrong with ShaReYam?

Why this cold treatment of SwaRon towards Rey?

I want answers!

Also, Kriya is being clingy for no reason. Why is she trying so hard for rey's attention?

The secret is killing me!

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Shweta

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Posted: 6 years ago

#127

--| Chapter 4 |--

I knew it!!!😃

SwaRon ki sagai

Kya planning ki hai Taani ne😆

And poor Rey, he was so close to decipher the truth about this engagement. Par bulawa aagaya🥱

Also, I have the same questions as Rey. Why did Taani's engagement break?

I'm assuming because Taani still loved Rey and after a point Vishesh probably couldn't accept that anymore. Understandable, but still weird.😕

8 million dollar ki koi ring leta hai!

I think engagement tutne ke baad, Taani apne sir pe gir gayi thi!

Which explains the change of attitude and her buying the ring!

But, I love how she stood up for herself.

I'm loivng this character.

Ek taraf yeh hai jiski baate khatam hi nahi ho rahi, aur dusri taraf Rey. Saala maun vrat pe hai?🤢

Ek hi nahi bola hai usne🤢

Idiot!

Past aside, they should at least greet each other as friends.

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Shweta

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Posted: 6 years ago

#128

Belated Happy Birthday Ishani🥳

Sorry for being over a month late in wishing you. Maaf kar do please🤗

--| Chapter 5 |--

Why does Rey have so bad luck with girls?🤢

Rey's track record:

Kriya-Taani-Aashi-Taani-Kriya-Sara-Kriya-Taani

Chal kya raha hai bande ki life mein!

Jokes apart,

I loved the door scene.

Loved how they found solace by just being near each other❤️

Finally they spoke

I love them yaar

but i want a proper conversation *pout*

Why is Swayam being the pain in the behind🤢

He loves Sharon, he somewhere knows that Sharon still loves him.

Then why is he being so NOT him!😡

TaaYam scene was beautiful❤️

I have a feeling that Swayam is gonna profess his love for Sharon or the other way round. Sharon is upto something. I hope she does something😃

Taani is being, well a mastermind. Shruti!😆

I feel bad for Swayam.

Please give a ShaRey / ReYam / TaaRey (actual dialogue scene) / ShaReYam / ShaNi scene😳

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Shweta

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Posted: 6 years ago

#129

I want to say this on behalf of TaSha and me, and I know she will agree with me.

Don't keep mentioning us at the start of every update. This is your work. You deserve the love and appreciation for it. We shouldn't get a share of it.

It's your FF Ishani, don't start with our names.

The post where you put the update on, belongs to you and only you.

I appreciate your love and concern for us, but please do stop doing that.

You are an amazing writer. Let that post celebrate you. Not us.

Shweta😳