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Posted: 7 years ago
Kya update milne ke koi chances hain?
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Yayayayayay! I'm so desperately waiting! :)
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are u sure??
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yes i am sure priyu di. it's a good day. 🤣
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Din bhi khatam hone aaya. Update kab milega?
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Updated on pg 48. PMs in some hours.


ps: present AR first super good interaction, kind of the first step together rather than one pushing back on chapter 12.


Edited by Meraki. - 7 years ago
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Bebuuu!! So good.

Yaar, even these lil lil AR interactions are just killing me! Riddhima is just so <3333
I adore her! So freaking much!
And, Armaan! It's like he's falling in love with her all over again and gods, that's so beautiful! I love it. I love how he isn't saying much, but he's feeling all these things about her. I'm sure ki Ridz bhi usse itna toh jaanti hai that she can decipher, that somewhere, he's mighty proud of her for achieving what she has and that he's just too f**king grateful about the fact that she's being so accommodating.

I know it's necessary, but yaar, ek achcha sa, complete dialogue wala AR interaction dikha do. Jo happy ho. Even if it's just Armaan saying he's really happy to see her or something. Woh bhi chalega. But please, karde! I'm dying over here.

Now, coming to the flashback! Gods. My baby is so cute! Waise, usne Padma Mom ko manaya kaise? Yeh mere bilkul samajh ni aayi, but chalo, theek hai. Manaa liya na. Bas, that's important. They're cho freaking cute, yaar! Yeh saare past interactions padhke itna zyada achcha lag raha haina, kya batau main! It's just so... LOVE. I have no other word. So good!!

Extras. Well, Rahul is my fave. So, ofc I wanna see what's happening with him. And Atul & Anjy, too.

Ab, ek request hai. Please show some Ridz - Muski interaction! I really want that!

And excitement for the next chappie with Shanky is SO HUGE!! I CAN'T WAIT!

Ab jaldi se update de diyo, please!
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as I said a super good present interaction b/w AR in chapter 12, let shanky talk with both of them in 10 and have him sort out his feeling and Muski's entry in chapter 11, chapter 12 is going to be so f**king great. maybe less of dialogues but AR where Armaan steps ahead for them.
Rahul ki happening well, he have completely shut himself from everyone so I have greater plans for his entry, like after Ridhima returns back to Mumbai. I will definitely show what happened with him in the past some months tho.

Anji-Atul dynamic is going to change so so so much, I won't be making Atul a lost puppy. I love Atul-Anji but there were so flaws, I never understood before but I do now.

1. Anji stepped on him too much and they never showed his stand up for himself, maybe once or twice.
2. Anji only felt bad for shouting at him once I guess?!
3. Atul was too insistent, that dude needs to learn that he should have a self-respect and also respect her boundaries, there were times when he never did.

off course this is what made AA but I am going to reason it here, change the equation.

So get ready for some self-reflection of Anji.

I loved s2 Atul, he has matured a lot, he was sweet yet after failing in his exams, he kind of grew up.

anything else? a scenario in mind? ^
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Meraki.

as I said a super good present interaction b/w AR in chapter 12, let shanky talk with both of them in 10 and have him sort out his feeling and Muski's entry in chapter 11, chapter 12 is going to be so f**king great. maybe less of dialogues but AR where Armaan steps ahead for them.

Rahul ki happening well, he have completely shut himself from everyone so I have greater plans for his entry, like after Ridhima returns back to Mumbai. I will definitely show what happened with him in the past some months tho.

Anji-Atul dynamic is going to change so so so much, I won't be making Atul a lost puppy. I love Atul-Anji but there were so flaws, I never understood before but I do now.

1. Anji stepped on him too much and they never showed his stand up for himself, maybe once or twice.
2. Anji only felt bad for shouting at him once I guess?!
3. Atul was too insistent, that dude needs to learn that he should have a self-respect and also respect her boundaries, there were times when he never did.

off course this is what made AA but I am going to reason it here, change the equation.

So get ready for some self-reflection of Anji.

I loved s2 Atul, he has matured a lot, he was sweet yet after failing in his exams, he kind of grew up.

anything else? a scenario in mind? ^



CHAPTER 12! I SHALL BE COUNTING DOWN THE DAYS!!! EEEKKK! IT'S GONNA BE ABSOLUTELY AWESOME!

Well, I shall wait for Rahul's entry then. He was my fave in the boys after Armaan (as everyone has probably guessed by now, given the importance he always gets in my stories :p). So, I'm really looking forward to him coming back. And yes, the progression of his love story with Muskaan.

You're right. Atul was too insistent at times and Anjali was too dominating. Anjy knew how much Atul loved her and she used that many times. Even if it was in small ways, usne baar - baar Atul ki achcha aur uske pyaar ka faayda uthaya hai. I didn't like that.
But, I also didn't like Atul being so insistent at all times. He should have stepped back and evaluated everything and seeing how Anjali wasn't interested, he should have backed off.

S2 Atul was awesome. I really loved him. I so wish we'd seen more of him.

Self reflection chapters for both Atul & Anjali sound like a good idea! :)

Scenario? Ummm, maybe after Armaan & Riddhima in Ch12, Riddhima and Sid stay back for a couple days while Shanky leaves. And Sid is left confused by the dynamic that AR share. Matlab, obviously, he'll not consciously seek them out, but maybe when he's working and going on rounds or something, he sees the two of them. And he gets confused as to why Riddhima is giving this patient so much importance. Remember, you'd shown him being confused on seeing her cry during A's physiotherapy? So, some more instances like that. And seeing them, maybe Sid starts thinking Riddhima isn't as great a doctor as everyone seems to believe because of her reactions to Armaan's treatment. Like, he starts feeling that agar woh kisi patient ko dard mein dekh nahi paayegi, toh how will she treat them, because in some cases, it's important for the patient to go through all this difficulties to get cured. Maybe something like that.
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Posted: 7 years ago
and its really difficult to choose any two.. i want to read abt everyone

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