Random Arshi OS. Part 2 updated

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poppyaster

@poppyaster

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: friends_4dream
Loved it
Hope to see it completed soon

Thank u soo much friends _dream for liking my work..😊

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poppyaster

@poppyaster

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Asheley
Good start dear
I hope you complete it soon

Loved this OS

Thank u soo much Ashley 4 liking my work😳

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poppyaster

@poppyaster

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: kittenlover
Aaawww My dearrr 🤗 🤗 🤗 ❤️!
Nice start and beautifully written , the way u wrote is just fab. I read it in one go!
Do write more and more ! 😳😳 waiting for it dear !

Thanks a lot my dear Kittenlover..😳

U inspired me to write this OS 🤗

N i hope u continue to do so..👍🏼 ❤️

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kittenlover

@kittenlover

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: poppyaster

Thanks a lot my dear Kittenlover..😳
U inspired me to write this OS 🤗
N i hope u continue to do so..👍🏼 ❤️

Hai my dear poppy 😳

First of all sorry for commenting late ! I was a little bit busy for the past few days ! 😭 Again I read the story in one go ! 😛😳 it's really nice indeed ! Hope it will continue and waiting for new update. 😛😛

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sadhnasoumya

@sadhnasoumya

Stunner

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Interesting story

Khushi found her family

Now let's see what happens when shyam's truth comes out

Arnav should know what all wrongs he did

Update the next part soon

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Hey, read in one go. A very very beautifully written story. I am so glad Khushi is walking out without any hesitation or second thoughts and truly, no one loved her or deserve her love in that house. Is there another part for the story? It seems incomplete without ASR's ralisation of his loss or his crumpled ego when he comes to know how wrong he is at judging people or protecting his good for nothing sister he is. May be, Khushi's total indifference would be his true punishment if at all he would ever gather up courage to own his sins and ask for forgiveness...