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Posted: 18 years ago
#81
kooll!!!!!

she is a harry fan just like me.. im more of a radcliffe fan but hey wats the diff.. lolzzz

continue asapp!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: brainychild92

kooll!!!!!

she is a harry fan just like me.. im more of a radcliffe fan but hey wats the diff.. lolzzz

continue asapp!!!

..wats radcliff....im srry i only read HP books Children books and ones that win awards (divinci code) who is the author of radcliffe i'd like to read it.....i am posting the next part in a while
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 2-MATCHING MINDS
Recap-kripa agrees to see Nishant's Friend's Nephew
Today-1 jan,07 sharma mansion (continueing from yesterday)
Kripa leaves to prepare for tommarow.
After kripa leaves Kunun gives Nishnat Looks
Nishant(to kunun)-what????
Kunun-would you have died if you told kripa the WHOLE story
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NEXT DAY- Jan 2nd/07
Nishant's Friend's Nephew (Josh) comes to meet Kripa
They are sent to a room to talk
Josh(to kripa)-hi
kripa- hi
Josh-so...if you say yes to this proposal we are gonna get married
Kripa-yeh..
Josh bends down the way people do when they propose to someone he puts his hand togeather
Josh(begging)-please say no to this .......
Kripa-i am
Josh looks up at her
Josh Thinking-i thought of a speech for no reason..
Josh-why are you saying no?
Kripa- why do you want me to say no?
Josh-i like this girl but she is not very rich...actually she is not rich at all ....so my dad said i cant marry her........and...
Kripa- i understand
Josh- why are you planing to say no
Kripa-because i dont want to get married
Josh-cool
After Josh leaves....Kripa tells Nishant she doesn't want to marry Josh
Nishant tells kripa that he has a list of proposals and she should pick one.
Kripa throws the list in the garbage without looking and calls Kunun.
Kunun- yes kripa..
Kripa-i can't stand people coming to see me everyday they are sooooo anoying...
Kunun- so you want to start the plan soon
Kripa- yep lets start tomarow
Kunun left preparing to get screamed at.
TO BE CONTINUED

comment,complaints,concerns,predictions,seggitions, anything
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Posted: 18 years ago
#84
thx i am writing the 100th comment on this ff YEAH
Edited by sak21 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#85
amazing part
cant wait 2 read what kripa's plan is
👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#86
plz continue more often n if poss ible longer parts... n would be wonderful if u added a recaap n more details to the story...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

amazing part
cant wait 2 read what kripa's plan is
👏

i already posted kripa's plan in the promo...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: koolaries4

plz continue more often n if poss ible longer parts... n would be wonderful if u added a recaap n more details to the story...

i did add a recap ....the story is just beggining so i am awfully confused on what to add and what not to add....yesterday and today i have guests over and i have to play with them so i am getting confused easily.....i had written a beter and detailed version but it got deleted by the guests that came ...😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I am writing the next part i will try to make it long
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 3- plan played
Dec 3rd,07,New York , Sharma Mansion------------------------------------------this means their is a conversation being done that you is not being heard by the audience(like telling a plan)


Nishant is reading a newspaper in the living room...
Kripa is impatiently waiting for Nishant to put the newspaper down and see that she is running away from home and stop her.
Kripa goes in Kununs room
kunun- what happened did the plan work
Kripa-No he isn't even putting the stupid newspaper down'
Kunun-ummm....ok i have another idea
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THUMP
a suitcase falls down the stairs
kripa-"oops... sorry it fell"
Nishant -"what are you doing with a suitcase"
Kripa-"i am gonna run away tonight"
Nishant(calmly)-"why and where are you going to go"
Kripa-"India, there is a music school there and i want to join"
Nishant(still calm)-" and why are you running away"
Kripa-(about to cry)"Kunun Bhabi said i cant go ....cause schools more important..... WHO CARE ABOUT SCHOOL I WANT TO BE A SINGER NOT A SCIENTIST..."
Nishant(angry yells)-"KUNUN..... KUNUN.."
Kunun comes in the living room
Nishant(to Kunun)-"Did you compel my sister to think about running away ....HOW DAREYOU!!!Kripa is my sister and if she wants to join the music academy in India she will.
Kripa(happy) 😃 - thanks bhai, your the best
Kripa hugs her brother
Nishant realizes what he said 😕
Nishant-wait i didn't mean that there is no way you are going to India alone
Kripa(whining)-why.....you go on buisness meetings all over the world .....alone
Nishant(stern)-it is different....kripa you have never been out of New York
and if you go to India who will take care of you...
kripa- Sabu chachu ....
Nishant-the music academy is in Nanital????
Kripa-No!!!It's in Mumbai ...but sabu chachu has got an job at the music academy.....and told me i could stay with him as long as i want
Nishant-what job does he have
Kripa-Music teacher
Nishant(hesitantly)-Ok you can go...
Kripa-thanks 😆
Nishant-BUT.....
Kripa(scared)- but what... 😭
Nishant-you will not stay with chachu you will stay in a high class suite....
Kripa-ok 😃
Nishant-and you will get married when you get back
Kripa-why???
Nishant-because if you go you'll have less time to find a groom
Kripa(sad)-o....ok 🤢
NIshant(happy)-so .....get busy packing and when does this school start 😃
Kripa-next week but i am going tommarow...
Nishant(shocked) 😕 what....kripa.....you need to get a visa ....a ticket how will this be done so fast...
Kripa(calm) 👏 - i already got everything....a 4 month visa....a ticket for tomarow
Nishant-how and when
Kripa-well i was planning on running away for a month....and being your sister what idiot would say no to me. 😳
Nishant-o..ok but why are you going tomarow ...it starts next week..
Kripa-first i am going to nanital to visit chachu,chachi, and bobby,then i will go to mumbai with chachu
Nishant-ok...so chachu has not shifted to mumbai
kripa-no he will stay in the teachers cabin at that school
Nishant-ok....You should start packing....Kunun help Kripa pack.
Kunun and Kripa left to start packing.

TO BE CONTINUED.....

comments,concerns,complaints.....predictions....anything.




Edited by sak21 - 18 years ago

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