When Paths Converge -An AnuVir Saga (on AviMan) Pt -3 pg 16 - Page 10

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Posted: 7 years ago
#91
anu imagining jhanvi was emotional. though viren came in search for her out of humanity anu was so rude to him.loved his reply and anu apologizing.oh bus left.now anuvir on the road.this reminded me of jab we met.the next bus will be only in the morning. will they wait till morning or will they be able to catch another vehicle?
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Posted: 7 years ago
#92
Wonderful update dear
Waiting for next update dear
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 7 years ago
#93
Awww my poor anu how sweet viren is.love anuvir conversation so cute .. love it oh no they left bus oh god update soon really can't wait
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb update roshu. Jiska darr tha wahi hua They missed the bus...loved their nok-jhok and conversation. They have to wait till next morning. Can't wait for next. Thx for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing very nice update dear
Lovely it update
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Posted: 7 years ago
#96
Amazing update Loved it yar plz update soon
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So sorry for late reply
I really love the update poor anuvir stuck on that place love their cute nok jhok and really like your style of writing .you show all emotions by just writing a story keep it up
Thanks for pm
Happy new year to all belated 🥳 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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CHAPTER 3


Anushka and Viren occupy a shed next to the daaba having no clue of what to do next. Anu is exhausted beyond limits, one because of the travel and other because of worries. Viren's state is no different, but it's just that he's far cooler than Anu is. He just shoots a glance at Anu and finds her sitting covering up her face in her palms. It's then when he remembers that she hasn't had her dinner. He thinks of asking her to go to the daaba for having something, but hesitates. What if she finds another flaw with his intention, he thinks. But she looks so tired man, he says to himself though silently. Finally mustering courage he looks at her and begins


"Arrmm..If you're hungry, you can have something from the daaba. But only if you want to.' he says, obviously adding the last phrase to keep himself out of the fuss she's likely to create. Anu just nods in negative, not getting angry or impulsive this time. Though she's hungry, don't know why she's not feeling to eat.


"Okay, as you wish.' he says and turns to the other side avoiding eye contact with her. Anu just stares at the road, supporting her head with her arm.



Few moments later, Viren silently looks at Anu and finds her rubbing her forehead clearly indicating that she got a headache. May be because she skipped her dinner, he thinks. But he didn't know what to do either. She isn't ready to eat her dinner too. What more can he do than saying, he can't feed her right? Just then, an idea strikes his mind and he looks at Anu with a smile. He quickly gets up while Anu looks at him surprised.


"What happened?' she enquires not understanding what he's up to.


"Nothing. Just sit here. I will be back in a moment.' Viren says while Anu nods, though confused.




Some two minutes later. Viren comes back to Anu with two paper glasses full of hot coffee and a pack of hot, freshly cooked pakoras. Anu looks at him surprised while he simply smiles at her and sits on the edge of the bench keeping the glasses and the pack in between them.


"What's this? I told na, I don't need.' Anu says, but her tone soft. All Viren does is to smile and slowly slides the glass to her.


"it's okay. See, it's so cold out here. So this hot coffee and pakoras are gonna be a great help. Just have it.' he says while Anu still seems hesitant.


"Areyy yaar, just pick it up. Give me a company.' Viren says as he picks up his glass with a smile. This makes Anu smile as well. This guy is kinda nice, she thinks as she grabs her glass. She slowly sips the hot coffee while staring at the road. Her dry throat instantly soothes as the warm liquid make its way to her stomach. She closes her eyes feeling much better while Viren smiles, noticing her. He opens the pack of pakoras and signs her to take some.


"Here. They seem to be hot and tasty.' he says as he picks couple of ones for himself. Anu smiles and nods. Her smile is so pretty, then why is she hell bent on shouting always, thinks Viren but instantly shoves off the thought and continues drinking the coffee.




Few moments later. Anu feels much better as she had something. To be honest, Viren had just picked up only a bit of the pakoras as he knows she may be hungry and somewhere, Anu could guess that. I had probably mistaken him earlier, he seem to be a decent guy thinks Anu as she looks up at him.


"Thanks..And sorry.' Anu mumbles in a low voice while Viren looks at her surprised.


"Could guess that the thanks was for this...' says him as he points at the empty glasses. "But didn't get why that sorry came in.' he puzzles.


"For behaving odd with you. I know I've been too much. But I thought...'


"That I was a jerk dying for your attention and creating chances to come close to you. Right?' asks Viren stopping her in the mid. Anu nods sheepishly while Viren breaks in to laughter.


"It's okay. I appreciate your alertness though. But please understand this, all guys aren't flirts. I'm not claiming that I'm a very descent fellow; however I surely don't bite.' he says with a chuckle while Anu smiles. She is definitely out of the odd feelings for him and is sure that he has no wrong intensions.



After a moment of silence, Viren turns to Anu while she too looks at him. "What's your name?' he asks just to kick start a conversation to end the boredom while Anu is kind of startled. He notices the odd feeling on her face and sighs.


"ahh..Okay okay, don't say.' he says quickly guessing that she isn't interested in introducing herself to him.


"Anu..Anushka.' Anu quickly says, surprising him. He smiles while she reciprocates the same smile to him.


"Nice name.' he complements casually and looks at the road to see if any vehicle is passing. But nope, the road is still empty. He sighs and turns to Anu again, giving her an awkward smile. Anu is also feeling bored and moreover congested in the silence where all the bitter memories gush to her. She looks at Viren who is looking down carelessly.


"Viren...' she calls while he looks up at her puzzled. "You're from Mumbai?' she enquires.


"ya. Andheri.' he says with a smile hiding his relief. He actually feels much better seeing her relieved and cool. The friendly and warm guy he is, he doesn't actually like the company of dull and aloof people. He feels happy that she's over her misunderstanding about him.


"Okay, Anushka what do you do? Studies or work?' he enquires, feeling much comfortable to talk than earlier.


"Armm...studies, last year in law.' she replies with a smile.


"Oh that's great!' comments Viren.


"And you?' Anu enquires while Viren's face turns a little pale.


"Woh...I...I work in a private firm.' he replies hiding the uneasiness.
Edited by RoshniMenon88 - 7 years ago
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"Oh...' Anu simply hums. It is silence for the next few minutes. Just then, Viren notices the amber light from the headlight of some vehicle and quickly stands up. Anu too looks at him hopefully as they spot a car at a distance. Viren quickly stands up and steps in to the road a little waving his hand as a signal. Anu too stands behind him, hoping that they'd get a lift. .


"Please stop!' Viren toots as the car draws close to them. Unfortunately, the car just drives past them and leaves in to the darkness leaving them in disappointment.


"Shitt...' Viren mutters under his breath and looks at Anu who is also bearing an upset face.


"Can we get out of this place anytime soon?' Anu questions in a sad tone while Viren shrugs his shoulders.


"Don't know. let's see.' he says in the same tone as hers and looks at the road again, having no clue of what will happen.



Two hours later. Viren's and Anu's patience have literally worn out of waiting. In the past two hours couple of other vehicles has passed by, but none minded to give them a helping hand.


"I think we'll have to see morning here!' Viren mumbles in annoyance while Anu just looks at him with an upset face.


"I'm sorry. Knowingly or unknowingly I've become the reason for entrapping you here.' Anu says guilty, feeling sad. Ultimately she knows that her fantasies were the root case of all these misshapenness. But what can she do, it just happened, but she never felt it would trouble someone else too.


"It's okay. What happened is happened. Let's not ponder more on it. Sure, we'll find some way out.' Viren consoles her, making her smile.


At the same instant, Viren hears the sound of some vehicle and quickly rushes to the road. He finds a truck approaching them and sighs in anticipation.


"Please god, please help us.' he mumbles as he signals the truck to stop. Anu also reaches him stuck between expectation and awareness that it can be turned down. Viren signals vigorously while the truck reaches real close to them. Anu prays silently, wishing that the truck would stop. Much to their relief, the truck halts as it reaches them. Anus' face brightens up with a smile while Viren sighs in relief and kisses his fist looking upward, thanking the lord. He quickly runs to the truck and looks in to see the driver.


"What?' asks the driver, a middle aged fellow with a knit brow.


"Woh bhaisaab, we lost the bus we were travelling . It's so long since we're staying here on the roads. Can you please give us a lift? We need to reach Veerpur. If you're not to there, just leave us in the next junction where we can catch a bus to the place.' Viren requests while the driver looks at him and Anu alternatively.


"Please bhaisaab, we'll sit in the back. Girl is also there. Please!' Viren requests taking a look of Anu.


"haan Bhaiyya, please.' Anu too pleads.


The driver thinks for a moment and then rubs his brow.


"Okay. Get in. we're going to Veerpur only.' he says while both their faces lit up.


"thank you bhaisaab!' they say in unison with wide smiles.


"Okay, okay, make it fast.' the driver orders while Viren gestures Anu to follow him. He reaches the back of the truck and gets in quickly while Anu stays on the ground, not knowing how to get in. It's at a good height and so it's quite difficult for her. Viren settles himself in the hay in the truck and looks at Anu who is in dilemma. He understands her concern and slowly extends his right hand to her. Anu looks at his hand first and then at his face. Why do I feel so strange, thinks her as she slowly extends her hand to him. However, she shoves off those thoughts and grabs his hand as a support. Viren holds her hand tightly and pulls her up, landing her in to the truck, though unsteadily.


"Thank you! 'she says as she sighs in relief while Viren smiles warmly. It's then when they notice that their hands are still joined. Viren flashes an awkward smile as they pull off their hands from each other's slowly and settle down comfortably.



"Shall we go?' they hear the driver asking them.


"haan bhaisaab!' Viren says loud enough while the driver starts the truck. Viren and Anu sigh in extreme relief as they are taken far away from the shed where they've been sitting for while two hours.


"thank god!' Viren says to Anu while she nods positively.



"Seriously thank god. Or else I don't know what we would have done.' she says while Viren gives her a relieved smile.




Much later. Viren and Anu are still seated in the back of the truck as it travels with full speed. The extremely cool breeze is hitting both of them and poor Anu is literally shivering in the extreme chillness, all thanks to her light cotton clothes. Viren finds her trying to keep herself warm by wrapping her hands around her frame. Her nose is watery and teeth are rattling.



"you alright?' he questions her in concern while she gives him a positive nod though she didn't mean it at all. Viren too understands that she isn't fine and thinks for a moment. An idea strikes his mind but he initially feels odd of it. Yet, seeing her condition he removes his jacket and extends it to her while Anu looks at him confused,


"Here, Wear this. You'll feel better.' he says while Anu nods a quick no.


"It's okay. Wear it. No problem.' he says.


"No. it's okay. I can adjust. It's so cold, so you may need it too.' Anu says, not ready to disturb him.


"No problem. My tee is already woolen and otherwise too I'm pretty immune to all this. So take it.' he says while Anu looks at him hesitantly. Still with the look he gives her and due to the extreme coldness, she couldn't stop herself from taking it. She slowly gets it from him and wears it. It instantly shields her from the extreme cold, making a deep sense of gratitude brew for him in her heart.


"Wear the hoodie too. you'll feel even better.' Viren says pointing at the hoodie while Anu slowly pulls it over her head.


"Very good. I'm sure, you'd have no problem now.' says Viren with a smile.


"thank you!' Anu says with a wide smile while Viren grins, running fingers through his hairs that are blowing in the wind..


"It's okay...then...let me sleep. I'm kinda tired. Good night.' he says while Anu nods warmly.


"Good night!' she wishes him back while he smiles, keeps his bag away and lays down on the hay, looking at the night sky. he's anxious about the next day but just closes his eyes to sleep. Anu too leans on the railings of the truck and closes her eyes, musing on various things. Unknown to them, their paths have converged, not for a day but for a lifetime.

Edited by RoshniMenon88 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing update dear... Luvd their convo... Good that they both r comfortable with each other now... Viren is very caring for anu luvd it... Eagerly waiting for next update soon

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