Dard Na Jaane Koi - An AR FF - Completed!!! - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
#21
Sp now we knw armaan hates girls... Chubby armaan... Awww.. Meko woh champu armaan Ki yaad aagayi.. He was luking so cute in that avtaar.. Kameena.. dono bhai kameena...bhale shadi k agle din divorce Ki baat kaun Karta hai... Shadi hoke divorce hone k baad reputation bahut rahega.. Akkal ghas chadne gayi hai kya??? Ok I gt it u hate girls bt u should say it in d 1st place itself that u're nt marrying her... Gadha... Ridhima should do sum thing rather than crying... I so wish ye thappad billy nhi ridhima se padti iss kameene ko... Bt koi nhi... Luvd how Ananya and billy trying everything to comfort ridhima in this new relation... And this part is also written by amna... Bt chotu sa part tha.. Kab start Hua jab khatam Hua pata hi nhi chala... Will read nxt part on Monday 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: ITSABOUT_DMG

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this is sooo bad yaar
bechari ridhima kitna kuch sehna padraha hai usey
armaan aise kaise kisi ek stupid ladki ki wajah se saari ladkiyon ko judge karsakta hai
cant he just give a one chance to his marriage n ridhima
kyun itni jaldi hai ghar chodke jaane ki aur shaadi ke dusre din hi Divorce😡
how can he even use that word apni nayi naveli dulhan ke saamne
acha hua usey billy ne ek kheech kar thappad lagaya
stupid kahin ka
n btw ye waala part rihoo di aapne likha hai
ab suspense khatam karo aur jaldi se disclose karo ke parts likh koun raha hai bhai
n update next part soon


Hey Humey...
We know, how bad anything can happen to a single girl just in a matter of 24 hours na...
Pata nehi, lekin ab karliya toh hum kiya kar sakte hai ;P
Dekhte hai ab aage kiya karte hai Armaan...

Hehehe Ab thappad nehi maarenge toh kiya aarti utare iska ;)
After all he is a father too...
Accha, u think so...
Chalo bata dungi... tohdi der mein...
Because I m going to update it soonish...
take care...

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Posted: 7 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Natalya_bedi

I feel so bad for Riddhima...poor thing...one brother already played and the other one is going to play with her life...but Armaan bechara bhi kya kare...puraani yaadon se peecha nahi chuda pa raha...
Let's see aage kya hota hai...


Thanks dear...
Yeah we too are feeling bad to do so to her but kiya kare..
story hai toh kissi koh dard aur takleef milenge aur kissi koh khushi right...
Dekhte hai kitni din, month ya saal tak aise rahe Armaan...
haan zarur...
Take care :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Dik..

Ohoo.. a ki hogya..??

By God armaan ke dil main itni nfrat..
Poor ridhima uski toh O My Mata hogyi..!!!

Update next soon...


Hello hi hehehe...
Even we don't know yeh kaise hogaya hahaha...
I know, ab kiya hoga Ridz ka yeh hum dono koh bhi nehi pata...
Kyunki humne toh stories shuru se hi discuss nehi kiya...
Ab jo bhi likhenge, uske dil dhimag mein kiya chal raha hai...
We both don't know :D

Yes, In Sha Allah Soon
Take care and keep loving..
Supporting too :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: NishitaRahman

WOW AWESOME PART.LOVE THE PART.EAGERLY WAITING FOR NEXT PART


Thanks dear...
Sure, will update in a while...
Take care :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: vidu87

Vry interesting update


Thanks dear...
Take care :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: lashyyy

no doubt its Amna who has write the parts n i feel it that u did some editing or some little minor changes in the parts but overall its written by her !!!
now coming to story will not say new n different as its not but attractive i can say that
poor ridhz just in few sec a bubbly cheerful girl turn into something else
she is not blaming anyone not even armaan but armaan is being too agressive n impulsive if i can say ek min me divorce thats ridiculous
or vo bhi agar dena hi h to sabke samne bolne li kya zarrurat thi abhi that y aggressive
let see how will you shape it is wat i m excited abt n now when i m back to reading will read n comment on previous story n part soon ...
reason you know very well y i was anavailable from few days as its season n i was really ill
n weak m trying to complete n this tym it took too long


Hehehhe chalo dekhte hai next part mein if you guess it write or not...
Yeah we know it isn't much different... But glad u find it attractive...
Yeah poor girl na...
She could have blame but she isn't like those types of girls who blame someone else on others fault...
We know, how ridiculous anything can be more than that right...
Why to hide even when he is going to leave her :P

yup very well...
We are glad u are now back in action hehe...
Take good care...
Be healthy...
Keep loving and enjoying...

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Posted: 7 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: saniyapatel

Yaar humesha is sid k karn AR ki life mein problem hoti hai ammy ne bahot hi fast decision lia hai divorce ka use ek baar ridz k baaremein sochna chahiye I know uska bhi fault nhi hai vah apna past bhoola nhi hai bt agr vah thande dimag se soche to jis tarha us shaina churel use ditch kiyaa usk bhai ne bhi ridz ko dhoka diya phir use bhi saare ladko se nafrat krni chahiye dekha jaaye to dono ek hi kashti mein sawar hai hope dono ek dusre ko smze part was emotional thnnx for pm n continue soon


Hehehe we know...
Lekin not all the time, sometimes kabhi vicky or vivek bhi aajate hai :P
We know, how could he do that right...
U r absolutely right... He should think of Riddhima view too...
U r most welcome dear...
Hope u like further parts of the story as well...
take care :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Prizi

Sp now we knw armaan hates girls... Chubby armaan... Awww.. Meko woh champu armaan Ki yaad aagayi.. He was luking so cute in that avtaar.. Kameena.. dono bhai kameena...bhale shadi k agle din divorce Ki baat kaun Karta hai... Shadi hoke divorce hone k baad reputation bahut rahega.. Akkal ghas chadne gayi hai kya??? Ok I gt it u hate girls bt u should say it in d 1st place itself that u're nt marrying her... Gadha... Ridhima should do sum thing rather than crying... I so wish ye thappad billy nhi ridhima se padti iss kameene ko... Bt koi nhi... Luvd how Ananya and billy trying everything to comfort ridhima in this new relation... And this part is also written by amna... Bt chotu sa part tha.. Kab start Hua jab khatam Hua pata hi nhi chala... Will read nxt part on Monday 😊


Yeah there always would be a reason for a guy to hate something right...
Hehehe accha, mujhe toh jab tumne kaha tab aagayi :P
Hahahaha I m loving your comment Priyu...
Tu aur gaali, thats news...
Dekhte hai Riddhima kiya karti hai, bas roti rehti hai ya...
Armaan koh dikha deti hai, woh chup beitne ladkiyon se nehi...
Glad u love the part and bonding of Ananya Billy with Riddhima...
Accha, yehc chotu sa tha???
Hahaha seems like you was enjoying a lottt...
Ok, we are posting today...
Whenever u get time, read and comment...
Take care :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30
Dard Na Jaane Koi
An AR FF


Part 3


Armaan was looking at the side as Billy stare at him with anger burning in his eyes.
An: Billy.
B: Samjhao isko Ananya. Ek ne toh bina soche samjhe tamasha bana diya hai. Ab dusra bhi humhara tamasha bane ka soch raha hai.A: Baba.B: Not another word Armaan. Siddhant ki tarha agar tum bhi yeh nikaah nahi karna chahte the, to tum bhi bhaag sakte the. Lekin ab tum maano ya na maano, Riddhima tumhara biwi hai aur rahegi.
A: Lekin.
B: Agar tumhare dil me tumhare Mama aur Baba ke liye thori si bhi izzat hai, to tum is nikah ko ek chance doge. Riddhima ne Siddhant se mohabbat karne ke baad bhi tumse nikah ki kyunki uske dil mein apne ma baba ke liye aur humhare liye izzat hai. Ab tumhari baari hai Armaan. Aur haan, tumhe is ghar mein nehi rehna hai toh jaate jaate apne biwi koh saath lejao. Kyunki tum maano ya na maano, ab Riddhima tumhara zimmedaari hai.

Billy left from there hoping Armaan would think of what he just said, he had already lost one and he has no strength to loose anymore of his children. Ananya also went after Billy knowing how much hurt he was today, leaving Armaan and Riddhima behind.

All this time, Riddhima just stood not understanding what to say. Armaan looked at her, who just run up to their room not believing this was happening with her. Armaan who was hurt with his father words, gave Riddhima all the fault. Soon his thoughts turned into anger. Armaan left the bag in hall and left the house.

While in room Riddhima was crying her out sitting near the bed thinking about her life. She was thinking what she has done wrong that her love left her like that, that too on their marriage. Riddhima never thought, after Siddhant left her Armaan would take a decision like that but to her fear Armaan was willing to leave her with his parents just because he wasn't happy with their marriage. Neither Riddhima was happy but for the sake of their reputation, she agreed to marry him.
R: Ya Allah, yeh kiya ho raha hai meri saath. Kyun ho raha hai. Maine aisa kiya gunah kardiya jo mujhe itna takleef mil raha hai. Sirf apne mohabbat se nikah karne ka sapna dekha tha maine, ek khubsurat zindagi bitane ka sapna dekha tha maine. Phir aisa kiya hogaya Allah, jo mujhe khushi ki badle mein itna dukh mil rahi hai.

Tears were continuously falling from her eyes, Riddhima kept her knee close to her chest as she hide her face. Riddhima was shivering due to the crying as she try not to let her voice out. Last night, her heart as already broken in to several pieces when she got to know Siddhant didn't come to marry her but she decide to marry Armaan for her parents, thinking at least Armaan would try to give a chance to their marriage but seems like no one want her in their life. \

Riddhima was disturb by her mobile ring, she look at the caller and saw Anjali number flashing. As she wanted to share her pain with someone badly, she answer the call clearing her face but no voice came out.
Anj: Riddhima, tu tik haina.?
R: Anji.

Riddhima couldn't talk as her voice was blocked due to crying, she didn't realized how long she kept crying. Hearing Riddhima voice, Anjali understood she must be very broken.
Anj: Riddhima, sambhalo apne aapko. Jo kismat ka likha hai, woh hum badhal nehi sakte. Ab tum Armaan ki biwi ho, Siddhant aur apne baare mein sochne ka koi faida nehi hai. Apne is nayi rishte koh ek moka doh. Khuda pe bharosa rakh.

Riddhima was about to tell her about Armaans decision, but then she stopped. She cant do that, its not the right time. She will have to wait.
R: Khuda pe bharosa hai, tabhi to is Rishte ke liye Haa ki thi mene. An: Bas to phir, jab Khuda tere saath hai, to phir kis bat ka darr. Dekha de Armaan ko, ke tu Riddhima hai, kisi bhi cheez se dur nahi bhagti.

Riddhma smiled and then said her goodbye to Anji. Even though she wanted to, she wasn't able to talk to her parents right now. She did not blame them, but she was just not ready to talk or see them. She felt betrayed, she felt hurt, she left like her own parents have left her alone.

Riddhima did not know that she was lost in her thought, that she did not even got to know when Armaan entered the room. Armaan looked at her with an angry face.
A: abhi ek din hua nahi tumhe is ghar me aaye hu, direct hi meri aur mere parents ke beech me misunderstandings create karna shuru kar diya.
R: mene kya kiya Armaan.
A: itna bano mat, sab janta hu me tum jaisi ladkiyo ko. Samne kuch aur back pe kuch aur. Nafrat hai mujhe tum jaisi ladkiyo se, tumse aur hamare is rishte se.
R: Armaan...
A: shut up Riddhima.

Riddhima flinched back, as she heard Armaans angry voice. To be honest she actually got scared. She took two steps back. Armaan notices that and just for a mere second he softened, but then he remembered Shaina and again his anger came up.
A: Chalo mere saath.

He came forward and grabbed Riddhima by her hand. His grip was so tight that it hurt Riddhima a lot, but she wasn't able to say anything. Armaan reached to his parents room. He turned around and saw Riddhima's face, which was full of pain. Her eyes were closed. He locked down and then loosened the grip.
A: tum bas chup rehna. Tumhe kuch bhi bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai. Samjhi tum.

As Riddhima did not answered, Armaan got again angry. Automatically his voice raised.
A: mene tumse kuch pucha Riddhima..
R: jee..

Just a small whisper was heard from Riddhima. Armaan knocked his parents room and entered with Riddhima.
A: Mama, Baba, I am Sorry. Me janta hu mene jo pehle kaha, wo sahi nahi tha. Lekin aap sahi keh rahe hai Baba, mujhe is Rishte ko nibhana hoga, kyunke mene Riddhima se Shaadi ki hai, ab wo meri responsibility. hai. Lekin Baba, me wapis jana chahta hu. Me to yaha pe bas sirf Sid ki... Jo kuch bhi hua, me ab wapis jana chahta hu, aur is se pehle ke aap kuch sooche, me Riddhima ko apne saath leke jaunga. Once again I am Sorry. me aap dono ka head kabhi bhi sharam se jhukne nahi dunga.

Ananya had literally tears in her eyes. Billy came forward and hugged Armaan. he was so proud that Armaan was his son. he knew, that Armaan would never let him down. Armaan agreed to marry Riddhima, by only once asking.

Riddhima on the other hand was totally shocked to see this side of Armaan. Was he actually giving them a try, or was is just a drama. Which Armaan is the real one? The one, in their room, or the one standing in his parents room. Riddhima was really very confused.
B: hume pata tha beta, tum hamara sar jhukne nahi doge. Riddhima bohot aachi ladki hai, wo tumhe kabhi akela nahi chodegi. Bas ek mauka deke dekho.
A: Jee Baba.

Then Armaan left from there and went back to his room. Riddhima right on his track. Reaching the Riddhima got really confused with Armaans behavior.
R: yeh sab kyat tha Armaan.
A: Drama?
R: Drama? Tum kehna kya chahte ho.
A: wohi jo tumne suna. Yeh Rhishta sirf ek dikhawa hai. Koi umeed mat lagana.
R: What the hell Armaan, tum samajhte kya ho apne aap ko. Agar tum is Rishte ke lyie Razi nahi the, to me bhi razi nahi thi. Jitna tum is Rishte ke liye majbur hue ho, utni hi me bhi majboor hu. Tum aisa kaise kar sakte ho?
A: Awaz sambhal ke Riddhima, tumhe koi haq nahi hai is lehje me mujhse baat karne ki.
R: aur tumhe bhi koi haq nahi hai meri zindagi ke saath aise khelne ke liye.
A: Abhi mene khelna hi kaha shuru kiya hai Riddhima.

Riddhima could not control her tears anymore. She hated her life right at this moment. She did not think that her life could get even more miserable. But Armaan proved her again wrong. Not able to control her anger anymore Riddhima pushed Armaan on his chest. Armaan was definitely not expecting this.
R: HOW DARE YOU
She again pushed him
R: TUM SAMAJHTE KYA HO APNA AAP KO
She again pushed him
R: MERI ZINDAGI KYA TUMHE KHEL LAGTI HAI; PEHLE TUMHARA BHAI AUR AB TUM.

That was it for Armaan. He grabbed her hands and spun them around and pinned her to the wall.
A: Bas bohot hua. Don't you dare to compare me with Sid. Mujhme aur usme Zameen Asmaan ka fark hai, samjhi tum.
R: Nahi samjhi, aur na hi samjhungi. Jab jiski marzi hoti hai, aake meri zindagi ke saath khelna lag jaata hai. Pehle Sid aur ab Tum.
A: abhi mene tumhare saath khelna kaha shuru kiya hai Riddhima.
R: agar isko khelna nahi kehte to phi kisko kehte hai Armaan? Tumhari biwi hone ke bawajud bhi mujhe kabhi tumhari biwi hone ka darja nahi milega!
A: Tumhe meri Biwi hone ka darja chahiye

Armaans eyes were burning with anger, without thinking anymore he grabbed her waist with one hand and put his other hand on her neck, pulling her closer. Riddhima's eyes widened with horror. Before Riddhima could comprehend what was happening, his lips crashed on hers. A punishing kiss but it triggered something foreign in both of their bodies.

A strange sensation, both never have felt before. Riddhima felt her body suddenly shudder in excitement and her eye automatically closed. The feeling left both of them confused. The kiss eventually became tender and Riddhima felt him pulling her closer and closer to his body. He pinned her back to the wall, with him squeezing her.

Due to their closeness Riddhima could feel the muscular chest of Armaan. The kiss was heaven, for both of them, but none of them would accept that. As realization hit Armaan, he pushed himself away from Riddhima and wiped his lips.
A: tamasha to ab banega tumhari Zindagi ka Riddhima. Just wait and watch.

Then Armaan left from there, leaving a crying Riddhima behind. That was not what she meant, that was not how she expected her first kiss to be. That was not how she wanted to be claimed as his wife. She sunk on the floor and put her head on her knees. She could not deny that she actually liked the feeling of Armaans lips on hers. Armaans behavior, her feelings and above all this situation was confusing her so much. She just don't know what to do? Not even Riddhima knew when the sleep took over. She fell asleep sitting in the same position.

Much later when Armaan came back, he saw Riddhima sitting on the floor, sleeping. He actually felt sorry for her. Not even he knew why he let the anger control him and kissed her. That was not his plan. But his still did it. He wont deny, but he actually enjoyed kissing her and he would do it again if possible. But now he pushed the thoughts aside and took Riddhima bridal style and put her on the bed.

By lying her on the bed, he pushed aside some hairs on her face. He could even see the dry tears on her face. He was about to caress he face but then stopped midway.
A: nahi, tum bhola chehra leke phirti ho. lekin me jaanta hu ke is bhole chehre ke peeche koi shaitan chupa hua hai. Me tumhare is masoomiyat ke khel me nahi phasunga Riddhima. Kabhi nahi.

Then Armaan left from there. He did not want to sleep with Riddhima in the same room, so he took the guestroom, without his parents knowledge. And in the morning for the morning prayer he got back to his room, seen Riddhima already praying.

It was decided that today Armaan will fly back to Melbourne. But this time, Riddhima will go with him. They took farewell from their parents and left from there. After a long flight they finally reached Armaans house in Melbourne.

During the flight, Armaan did not even talked with Riddhima, he did not even looked at her. Riddhima felt very hurt by his behavior, but she decided to keep quiet. She did not want to see his angry side ever again. She had decided to keep her feelings inside her. She will just see how the life will go on. What Allah has planned for her. Instantly by entering Armaans house, he closed the door and turned to Riddhima with an evil smirk.
A: Welcome to the Hell Mrs. Riddhima Armaan Mallik. Tumhari Zindagi to ab barbad hogi.

Riddhima got literally shocked hearing this from him. She flinched by his cold and angry but still calm voice.



So here goes the third part and now...
We are going to reveal the writer name and those who guess it right...
You All Would know who has guess right but still we would mention the name below...

Ready...????
Ok Enough of suspense hehe...
So of course the first part was written by Amna...
Second part also...
Ah haan... It was me (Rihoo) hehehe...
By now you might have understand which trick we are using to confused you all...
Still the guessing game is on so in Part 5 we will reveal who has write this part (3) and part 4...

Congratulation those who guess correctly...

Who guess correct, Part 1 :


ITSABOUT_DMG, Prizi, lashyyy


Part 2 :


ITSABOUT_DMG

Keep guessing, loving and enjoying...
Take care
Hope u will enjoy further parts too...


With Love,
Rihoo & Amna...
Edited by RihooHaws - 7 years ago

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