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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
Nice update dear this ff remind me ur ff gist of love waiting for nxt dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sheetal1979

Nice update dear this ff remind me ur ff gist of love waiting for nxt dear


Yes.. infact reminding me too after couple of updates.. but taking care.. its not going the same way.. as Roli in that ff was innocent.. while here she is bold and knowledge enough...

There Siddhant do all naughty to Roli while here.. he wants to respect Roli wish and go as per her wish...

Hope it take its shape well as i think... 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 5

Roli came out in her Jeans & Tshirt...

Meena was shocked seeing her...

She rushed towards Roli...

Meena; Roli.. what is this...

Roli; What mom...

Meena; WHy are you wearing this dress here.. instead of saree...

Roli; mom.. i wont feel comfortable in saree.. thats why...

Meena; But Roli.. its not matter of convenience.. you are in your in laws house.. that too newly married.. people may come to see you.. how they will feel if they see you in this...

Roli; Come on mom.. what is wrong in this dress.. see its covering fully and its very decent...

Meena; But Roli.. this is not our cultural dress.. did you see all of us.. we all are in cultural dress only.. then how come...

Roli: Oh God..

Roli remembered what Siddhant was telling her...

Yes.. she is unable to even reply to her own parents for wearing this...

But what he said... when he accept as she is..

She decided to use it as weapon...

Roli: Mom.. when he is not having problem and accepted.. then what is the problem...

Siddhant heard what Roli said & looked at her...

Roli knows though she argued with him inside.. she used his words as weapon now to protect her...

Roli gave a weird smile...

Siddhant with a smile came near them...

Siddhant; Maaji.. let her wear whatever she feel like.. i accept she is not comfortable in saree.. thats why she is wearing this.. no problem.. let her be...

Roli: Maaji.. you have seen.. in fact he is ok with this dress.. so leave it mom...

Roli expressed her thanks on her eyes while he moved from there with a smile...

Meena; Roli.. whatever reason you tell.. remember this is your in laws house.. you should behave properly.. you should not take undue advantage too..

Roli; Sure mom.. i will take care.. dont worry...

Jamanlal & Meena started from Village...

Roli wave bye to them while she realised getting far from her parents from now on...

Roli got tears and rushed inside the house...

Siddhant noticed that...

Sujatha: Siddhant.. it seems she is upset as her parents started.. go and take care...

Siddhant; Ok maaji...

Siddhant went inside while Roli was sitting in the bed with tears...

He went near her and sat in the bed leaving some space...

Siddhant; Roli.. relax yourself.. dont cry...

She was still crying...

Siddhant forward his hand towards her.. but he knows she may not like him touch her...

Swiftly he took his hand back from her...

Siddhant; Roli... they are just in Delhi right... you tell me whenever you wish to see them... i will take you to Delhi...

Roli: Why should i go to see them.. they only wanted me to get married and stay in this village right..

Siddhant; Roli.. what is this like a child... every daughter get married and go to husband place.. that doesn't mean her parents wants her to get separated and go to other place...

Roli: Still what was the urgency... how much i requested... what all i wanted to do... but...

She stopped...

Siddhant; What you wanted to do.. tell me...

Roli: What is the use of telling you... everything gone.. my dream.. my aim.. my ambition.. everything is shattered... now nothing can be done..

Siddhant; You tell me.. then lets see whether its possible or not...

Roli: When my father was unable to support me.. what you are going to do about it.. leave it.. its my fate..

Siddhant; Roli.. dont talk like that...

Roli; Then what else i will talk... for this stupid marriage... i left everything behind and came to this village...

Siddhant felt bad when she said as stupid marriage...

He didn't talk anything further...

Siddhant went out of the room while Roli continued to cry thinking about whatever happened...

Siddhant looked at Sujatha...

Sujatha; Maaji.. i am going to fields..

Sujatha: Ok Siddhant.. is Roli ok now...

Siddhant: It will take sometime for her to accept it.. let her come out on her own..

Sujatha: Ok...

Siddhant went to supervise the works in the fields...




It was lunch time...

Roli was yet to come out of the room...

Sujatha was worried that she is yet to come out of grief of her parents leaving her...

She thought.. atleast Roli can have some food and relax...

Sujatha went to their room...

When she opened the door.. Roli was still sitting on the bed looking at the wall with a dry look...

Sujatha: Roli...

Roli: Aunty...

Sujatha: Are you ok???

Roli was not interested to show anything to Sujatha...

Roli: Yes.. i am ok...

Sujatha: COme.. lets have lunch...

Roli: No.. i am not feeling hungry...

Sujatha: But you didn't had anything since morning...

Roli: But i am not feeling like having anything.. sorry...

Sujatha: Ok...

Sujatha went out of the room...

Siddhant return home for having lunch...

He washed his legs and came to have lunch...

Sujatha: Siddhant.. Roli.. didn't had anything till now...

Siddhant: Does she came out of the room...

Sujatha: No... i went to call her for having food.. she said.. not feeling hungry...

Siddhant: Ok.. dont worry.. i will bring her...

Siddhant went to their room to call Roli for having lunch...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Amazing update di roli missing her parents. Waiting for next.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
Mature sid stubborn roli combo is super. Talking abt gist of love its my all time fav.roli trys to adapt which was really funny and sid was really naughty.😉
Edited by Ranjani005 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
Sid was hurted with Roli behaviour .Roli too stubborn .I to thought about gist of love .I love that a lot .But this is different from that .Waiting for the next updates eagerly
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 6

Siddhant went inside room while Roli was still sitting upset in the bed...

He went near her...

Siddhant; Roli.. come lets have lunch...

Roli; No.. i am not hungry...

Siddhant with a smile sat in the bed leaving some space...

Siddhant; You are angry with me right.. why are you showing it in the food...

Roli; WHy should i be angry with you.. what you did...

Siddhant; Good i was worried you are angry with me... If that is true.. then you should come to have food.. without second thought...

Roli: When i said i am not coming to have food because i was angry with you.. instead i only said i am not feeling hungry...

Siddhant; But Roli.. your face shows you are so hungry...

Roli; What.. what is shown on my face...

she caresses her face to check...

As its true that.. her stomach was craving for food.. due to adamant only she was refusing...

Siddhant; Then what is this dullness... which clearly shows you are hungry.. am i right...

Roli: May be.. but i am not interested...

Siddhant: If you are not interested.. dont take too much of food... but have something which can satisfy your stomach hunger...

Roli was thinking for a while...

Siddhant; Come... we should never show any of our upset, anger or whatever over food.. its not good.. whatever lets handle it...

Roli got up and started walking towards the hall...

Siddhant with a smile followed her...

They sat for having food and Sujatha served...

Though Roli pretend as if she was not hungry...

Her hunger was at its peak as she didn't had food properly the previous day as well...

Moreover the food was tasty as well...

She put more and had eagerly...

Sujatha & Siddhant smiled looking at each other...



After food.. Siddhant went out to continue his works...

While Roli was feeling bored...

How long she can look around the four walls and stay inside house...

She hardly push time till evening...

By evening... Roli came out of the room...

She went to Sujatha...

Roli: Aunty.. what is there in this village to look around...

Sujatha; Roli.. this is village... we will have field only at all the sides...

Roli; There is nothing other than fields here...

Sujatha; Yes.. nothing will be there...

Roli: Then whole day you all will be inside the house only...

Sujatha; We go to field if any work is there.. other than that not much...

Roli: There is no shopping complex too.. then where you will do purchases...

Sujatha: For food.. we get from our field & in the back yard itself.. all varieties of fruits, vegetables & flowers are there.. what we require to go out is for purchase of dress or jewellery like stuffs which we dont require daily... we go to near by city when such need comes and do purchases...

Roli; THen Cinema theatre... amusement park...

Sujatha: Amusement park.. there is nothing like that even in near by cities.. but Cinema theatersare there in the cities.. When we go for shopping to those cities.. we will go to cinema as well...

Roli: Oh.. So other than field and home.. nothing else is there in this place...

Sujatha; We do have temple... we go there once in a while...

Roli: Good.. atleast some place is there to see..

Sujatha; Yes it is...

Roli; AUnty.. i wish i go to temple for a change as i am feeling bored inside the house...

Sujatha: Of course you can...

Roli; Well.. tell me where it is.. i will go...

She got up and were ready to go...

Sujatha; But Roli.. as you are new to the place.. let Siddhant come... i will send you with him...

Roli; THis village itself is small & how the temple is going to be complicated to locate.. just tell me the route.. i will go...

Sujatha told the route to Roli...

Roli: Well.. i will go to temple and return in sometime...

Roli rush towards entrance to go out...

Sujatha; Roli...

Roli; Yes aunty...

Sujatha; Are you going to go to temple in this dress...

ROli: Why.. what is the problem in going in this...

Sujatha: But Roli.. Temple is something cultural based.. So it will be better to go in cultural dress to such places...

Roli; Oh ok...

Sujatha; You wear as you wish at home.. but when going to temple its better to change to saree..

Roli; ok.. i understood...

Roli went inside the room and came out changing to saree...

In the meantime... Sujatha bring flowers to offer in the temple from backyard...

She gave it to Roli... and Roli was ready to go to temple...

Roli came out of the house and started walking on the route told by Sujatha...

On the other way.. Siddhant entered into the house...

Siddhant; Maaji.. is it Roli going that way...

Sujatha: Yes Siddhant... she is going to temple...

Siddhant; Oh.. thats why she went in saree...

Sujatha; Yes.. as i only insisted to go in the saree...

Siddhant; Well.. but how she will locate.. does she know the route...

Sujatha; I explained her the route...

Siddhant; Well..then no problem...

Sujatha; Siddhant... i wish you to go with her.. because she is going to temple for first time.. and all will wonder why she came alone without you...

Siddhant; Ok maaji.. i will go...

Siddhant too started going towards the temple...


Edited by banuprasa - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
Roli is stubborn but can't control her hunger so cute .waiting for more
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: banuprasa


Nice to know... I think you are shrutivishva in IG too... 😊

yes Akka I'm the one.. Shruthi.. Nice update.. Waiting for next..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 7

Roli was walking ahead while Siddhant was walking behind few steps...

The village people who saw Siddhant gave their greeting gesture by joining their hands...

Roli who saw that thought they are wishing her...

Roli too wish them back...

But all the way Roli was wondering... why they are wishing her...

Is it because.. its their practice to do that...

Or.. she is educated than those village people...

Or.. she is new to the place...

Still she gave her return wishes to all of them...

This continued all the way till temple...

Roli entered into the temple...

She went near the priest of the temple...

She gave the flowers given by Sujatha to her for offering to God...

Priest who took the flower wish too...

Roli was wondering even priest is wishing her...

Roli wish back...

While Priest eyes were behind her...

Priest; Maaji.. have not come...

Siddhant; No... she is busy at home.. thats why we have come...

Hearing Siddhant voice Roli turned and noticed him standing behind her with a smile...

Priest: Maaji told we need to perform special prayer after your marriage...

Siddhant; Yes she is planning for that.. may be she will contact you for this..

Priest: Ok..

Priest went inside and perform pooja as usual...

He came back with flower and sindoor...

He gave those to Siddhant...

Priest; Keep this flower & sindoor to your wife... its blessings of the God...

Siddhant looked at Roli...

Siddhant was wondering whether she will allow him to do that...

Roli was also wondering whether to allow him or not...

Siddhant went near & in a murmuring voice asked her...

Siddhant; Shall i...

Roli; Ok.. but just for others ok...

Siddhant smiled...

Siddhant kept the flower on her hair & sindoor on her forehead...

Roli though allowed him was not interested to stand there anymore...

She went to go around the temple...

Siddhant with a smile followed her behind...

People in the temple too greet towards them...

Roli now after experience with priest gave attention to where they are seeing...

Yes.. all were giving their greeting to Siddhant...

Siddhant was wishing them back too...

Roli was thinking... Oh.. all these greetings were for him...

While like a mad.. i was thinking its all for me & i was greeting them back...

What madness i did..

Of course its obvious.. i am new to this place...

While he belongs to this place only...

SO all people know him and greeting him...

Why they will even greet me...

Roli didn't greet any of them and moved from there swiftly...

Siddhant noticed that...

After coming around.. she sat on a side of the temple...

Siddhant too went there & sat with them...

Siddhant; Roli.. why you didn't greet people inside the temple...

Roli; Is it not enough getting fool all the way... not anymore...

Siddhant; Who was making you fool... i dont get you...

Roli; First how come you came behind me like this... and i was mistaking all were.. leave it...

Siddhant; Roli.. you thought they wish me alone...

Roli: Then who else...

Siddhant; Its for you too.. as i am beside you i too got it.. even otherwise.. you will get it...

ROli; Dont try to fool me again ok.. its all enough...

Siddhant; No.. if you doubt.. go around the temple again.. i wont come from here.. then see...

Roli got up and went around the temple...

The villagers who were crossing her were wishing her...

Roli turned behind to see whether Siddhant is coming with her...

Then ROli too greet them...

Roli was surprised and came back to Siddhant...

Roli; How come they are wishing me as well...

Siddhant; Why not they wish.. you are wife of their Village Panchayat President...

Roli: What??? you mean...

Siddhant smiled...

Siddhant: Shall we go home.. its getting dark...

Siddhant got up and started moving towards their house...

While Roli with surprised gestured followed Siddhant...

Greeting of Villagers continued all the way till their house...

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