Deewangi - Rajveer-Naina - Page 9

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Chapter 20

Precap - She breaks the hug, wipes her tears, walks two steps and says - "Ab mein dikhoongi ke beizti kisay kehtay hain Major Rajveer Singh Shikhawat, aapko toh mein aapki asli jagah ab mein dikhoon gi..ab apni zindagi ki kahani mein khud likhoon gi..."

Next Morning -

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Everyone is siting in Mess, all depressed while there is no sign of Naina and Rajveer. Just then, Rajveer walks in and asks suriji for a cup of coffee.

Raj - walks up to Suriji - "Suriji, 1 coffee please."

Without answering to Rajveer, Suriji just gives him a cup of coffee.

Raj - "Suriji, aap mujhe ignore kyun kar rahay ho?"

Suriji - "ye tu mujhse pooch raha hai puttar? Jo tunay Naina puttar ke sath kia us ke baad mein tujhse koi baat nahi karna chahta.", Suriji walks away from there.

Rajveer looks sad, he takes the cup of coffee and walks towards a table where all the Capts are sitting. As he was about to sit on an empty chair next to Huda, Huda says.

Huda - "Sorry Major Shikhawat, ye jagah booked hai."

Raj - "Huda, yahan pe koi nahi baitha hua."

Pooja - "Sorry sir, lekin aap hamare sath nahi baith saktay, hamay aap ke sath koi connection nahi jorna hai, aap ne jis tarah Naina ka signal cut kia hai, aap yahan se out of range ho jayiye."

Raj - "Capt. Ghai, aap janti hain ke aap apnay senior se baat kar rahi hain."

Aalekh - "yeich to panga hai ke aap apun ke senior ho, warna apun pata nahi kab ka kia kar deta,"

Ali - "Shant ho jaye Aalekh bhai, or sir, aap ke liye ye hi acha hoga ke aap yahan se chale jaye."

Yudi - "Chill guys, tum log doosroon pe apna gussa kyun waste kar rahay ho, let's go from here."

As they were about to get up, Rajveer interrupts - "No need for that Capts, mein hi chala jaoonga."

Rajveer leaves from there and walks towards a table where Nandini, Abhi and Naveen are sitting. He sits on a chair with them. He looks at all three of them who is completely ignoring him. He, then, looks at Naveen, anger is evident in his eyes.

Raj - to Naveen - "Naveen wo..."

Naveen - gets up and yells - "Bus Raj, oh sorry, I mean Major Shikhawat.."

Raj - also gets up - "Naveen tu mujhe Raj bula, mein tera dost hun.."

Naveen - "Dost? Hah dost.. right...So guys, ye hai mera so called best friend jis ne meri hi gudiya ke sath itna bara dhoka kia, pyaar ka natak kia or ab yahan mujhe apna dost bula raha hai. Nahi Major Shikhawat, nahi, aaj ke baad mere or aap ke darmiyaan professional rishtay le ilawa or koi rishta nahi hai, kash ye is waqt mein tujhay mar sakta, lekin mein aapne hath ganday nahi karna chahta, chala ja yahan se is se pehle mein apna aapa kho doon."

Abhi - gets up - "Calm down Naveen, aap aisay admi pe apna gussa waste mut kijiye, chaliye yahan se."

Nandini - to Raj - "sharam aati hai mujhe ye kehte hua ke kabhi mein tumhari dost thi, wo insaan mera dost kabhi nahi ban sakta jisse aurtoon ki izzat na karni aati ho.", to Naveen and Abhi - "chaliye yahan se."

"Koi kahin nahi jayega"

They all hear a voice, when they look towards that direction, they find Naina standing at the door, in her army uniform with an attitude. She walks towards where Naveen, Abhi, Rajveer and Nandini are standing.

Naina - stands in front of Raj - "koi kahin nahi jayega", looks directly at Raj - "aur aap kia keh rahe tha Major Rajveer Singh Shikhawat? Aap ne mujhe kal meri jagah dikhai thi na?" pointing towards her lips, "ye dekhiye sab log, ye hai inh ka ghatiya tareeka mujhe meri jagah deekhanay ka.", again looking at Raj - "ab mein dekhati hoon ke aap ki asli jagah kahan per hai."

She walks two steps towards Rajveer, takes another step towards him and..

CRACKKK

Naina throws her hand forward as hard as she could, whipping it across Rajveer's face. The crack of skin contacting skin echoed off the Mess's walls. Vibrations of pain started in her palm and spread all the way to her finger tips. Her palm was bright red, the same red mark that matched the one on Rajveer's face. He stared at her with his eyes wide as his hand slowly made it to his fire red cheek.

Naina - pointing her finger towards Rajveer - "ye hai aap ki asli jagah , Major Shikhawat! I hope aaj ke baad aap ko ye yaad rahay ga ke kisi aurat ke sath kaisa behave kartay hain, agar nahi yaad rahega toh mujhe koi problem nahi hogi aap ko aap ki jagah doobara dekhane mein.", Naina starts to walk away from him.

Everyone present in the Mess was shocked. For couple of minutes, Rajveer didn't know what just happened. He got his senses back when he saw Naina walking out of the mess.

His face turned bright red with anger in his eyes, his hands automatically made a fist. As he saw Naina walking out of the Mess, he yelled, "CAPT NAINA SINGH AALUWALIA!!"

She turned back and saw Rajveer standing in front of her with anger evident in his eyes.

Rajveer - "aap issi waqt ground pe mujhe report karegi", taking another step towards Naina, ", I WLL MAKE YOUR LIFE HELL and teach you how to behave with your seniors, Mein aapko 5 minute deta hoon change karne or ground pe report karne ke liye, THIS IS AN ORDER! GET OUT"

Naina - taking a step towards him - "No need for your five minutes, SIR, mujhe kisi airay gairay se favours nahi lena pasand" pointing towards his watch, "aglay 1 minute mein main ground pe hoongi aap ke samne, see you, SIR!", She leaves from there.

Huda-Aalekh-Pooja-Ali-yudi's table -

Huda - "gayi bhans pani mein, ye phoolan kyun shair ke muh mein hath dal rahi hai?"

Yudi - "chief, maine suna hai ke Major Rajveer agar gussay mein aa jaye toh wo kisi ki bhi life hell bana saktay hain."

Aalekh - "abay oye Nautanki, fikar not, apni Naina bhi kam nahi hai!"

Pooja - "ye sahi baat ki na Qaidi ne, ab dekhna Naina sir ka signal kaisay cut karti hai."

Ali - "chaliye, dekhtay hain ke sir kia punishment deinge Naina ko."

KMA grounds -

Everyone is present there, just then Rajveer comes there and sees Naina standing there, he looks at his watch, then walks towards her.

Naina - saluting him - "Capt Naina Singh Aaluwalia reporting, SIR!"

Rajveer - "I am impressed Captain, mujhe waqt ke paband log bohut pasand hain, apni ye energy bacha ke rakhiye, aap ko is ki bohut zaroorat parene wali hai apni punishment le liye."

Naina - "Mujhe har punishment manzoor hai, SIR!"

Raj - annoyed - "stop calling me sir' in such a weird way, Capt! Anyways, give me 10 runs on the double...NOW. To complete this punishment, you have exactly 30 minutes."

Naina - mumbles - "sirf 30 minutes..."

Rajveer doesn't fail to hear that.

Raj - "kya baat hai Capt? 30 minutes kam lag rahay hain aapko?"

Naina - "NO SIR! Mein ye punishment puri karoongi, SIR!"

Raj - "Great! Now, get going with the punishment as you don't have much time. Mind you Capt, har minute ki dairi ke liye aap ko 10 push-ups karne honge, aaj dekhte hain aap kitnay push-ups karti hain.. KOI SAWAL?"

Naina - "NO, SIR!"

Raj - "mere 3 ginnay per aap niklay gi, ready...1..2...3...and GO..."

As soon as she hears "GO", she starts running as fast as she could while Rajveer stands there and watches her.

Few meters away, Abhi, Nandini, Naveen ,Huda, Aalekh, Pooja, Yudi and Ali are standing and watching Naina.

Nandini - "ye Raj ka dimagh toh kharab nahi hogaya? 30 minutes mein koi kaisay ye punishment puri kar sakta hai?"

Naveen - "Kar sakti hai, meri behan, Naina karegi, wo haar nahi mane gi, wo ye punishment puri kar ke dikhaye gi."

Just the, Shalini comes there.

Dr. Shalini - "You are right, Major! Naina hi sirf ye kar sakti hai."

Naveen - "mathlab?"

Dr. Shalini - "Major, aap ko Endurance test yaad hai jis ko aap pura nahi kar paye thay."

Naveen - "yes, Doc, mujhe yaad hai."

Huda - "Sir, us test ke saray levels Naina ne complete kiye thay."

Naveen - "What?"

Dr. Shalini - "yes, Major, sirf Capt Naina ne hi wo test pura kiya tha or is academy ki best cadet bhi ban chuki tho wo, har test mein top kia tha."

Naveen - "I am proud of you, Naina! Aaj tujhay Major Shikhawat ko bhi muh toor jawab dena hai."

It has been 25 minutes since Naina is running constantly and it starts raining suddenly. Due to the heavy rain, it becomes hard for Naina to see properly and she ends up falling and twisting her ankle. Everyone watches that. Naveen sees that and is about to go and help Naina when Abhi stops him.

Abhi - "nahi Naveen, ye larai Naina ko akele hi jitni hogi and I am sure wo jeet bhi jayegi."

Rajveer sees that Naina fell down, he decides to go and help her, but he stops, because of his ego.

Naina gets up on her feet and starts running again with a sprained ankle.

It has now been 27 minutes when Naina completes her punishment and stands in front of Rajveer with a sprained ankle, with lots of pain evident through her eyes.

Naina - "Capt Naina Singh Aaluwalia reporting, Sir! Maine 27 minutes mein ye punishment puri ki hai, SIR!"

Raj - "Dismissed, Capt!"

As Naina was about to leave, she collapses on the floor due to her sprained ankle. Rajveer sees this and gets worried.

He goes to Naina, and gives her a hand.

Rajveer - "lagta hai aap ko madad ki zaroorat hai, let me help you."

Naina - refuses - "No sir, mujhe aap ki madad ki koi zaroorat nahi hai."

Rajveer - frustrated - "ENOUGH Naina, tum abhi bhi wo hi stubborn ladki ho, tumhe choot lagi hai, give me your hand, it is an order!"

Naina refuses his help

Raj - yells - "Naina..."

Naina - yells back - "the name is Capt Aaluwalia, Major Shikhawat."

Raj - "Enough with your stubbornness, I said give me your hand, THIS IS AN ORDER!"

Naina - "As long as I know, main apni Punishment khatam kar chuki hoon, so, mein issay koi order nahi manti, SIR!"

Raj - angrily - "tum aisay nahi maanogi..."

He lifts up Naina in his arms and starts walking towards infirmary. Naina keeps screaming.

Naina - "Mujhe neechay uttariye, Major!"

Raj doesn't reply and keeps on walking.

Naina - yells - "I said put me down, SIR!"

Raj - "Just shut up, Capt!"

As Rajveer was taking Naina, Naveen comes there and stops him.

Naveen - "thank you for your concern, Major! Aap meri behan ko neechay uttar saktay hain kyun ke us ka bhai hai abhi yahan, us ke bhai ke hotay hue ussay kisi gair ki madad lainay ki koi zaroorat nahi", Naveen mocks.

Raj - "Naveen tum..."

Naveen - "I said put her down, Major!"

Rajveer angrily puts Naina down and walks away from there. Naveen picks up Naina in his arms and starts walking towards infirmary. Naina is now in infirmary and gets her foot treated.

Next Morning -

Rajveer wakes up at 5am for his every day jogging. He makes his way towards the washroom to get ready. After he is freshen up, he makes his way towards the basketball court.

Basketball Court-

As soon as he reaches there, he is stunned to see what's in front of her. He sees Naina doing push ups. She is wearing a simple jogging outfit with her hair tied up in a high pony tail. Rajveer gets lost in Naina's beauty. He walks towards her and quietly stands behind her and watches her doing push-ups. Naina does not notice Rajveer and keeps doing her push-ups.

After she finishes, she gets up, turns back and finds Rajveer standing there with his arms crossed and with a gorgeous smile on his face. As Naina was about to leave, he calls her.

Raj - "Captain!"

Naina - turns around now facing him - "yes sir?"

Raj - "Don't you think aap ko aram karna chahiye, aap ke paoon mein choot lagi hai."

Naina - "Thanks for your concern Major, lekin mein ek solider hoon, ye chooti mooti choote mera kuch nahi bagaar sakti."

She turns to leave again when Rajveer calls her from the back.

Raj - "Naina stop!"

She doesn't listen and keeps walking away from him. He gets angry by her behaviour, and walks up to her fast, he catches her and pulls her closer to him.

Raj - angrily while making his grip tight on her arm - "tum mujhe aisay ignore nahi kar sakti Naina.."

Naina - pushes him off and takes two steps behind to distance herself from him - "Main kar sakti hoon, Major. And Don't you dare to touch me again, Major, aap ye haq kho chuke ho."

Raj - pulls her closer aggressively - "mera tumpe pura haq hai ,samjhi tum?"

Naina - pushes him off - "ab kabhi nahi, Major!"

She walks away from there leaving an angry Rajveer behind. When Naina reaches few steps away from Rajveer, she sees someone and hugs that person tightly.

Naina - excitingly - "Oh my god!!!! Gunny aap!!! aap yahan kia kar rahay ho? I missed you so much!"

Gunny - hugging her tighter - "wo surprise hai, Naina! Tumhe jald hi pata chal jayega!"

"AHHAMMM...AHAMMM."

They both get interrupted by someone who is clearing their throat. They both pull back from their hug and notice Rajveer standing there.

Jealousy is evident in Rajveer's eyes who is looking at both of them with his red-angry eyes while his hand made a fist.

Gunny - looking at Naina -"ye kon hai, Naina?"

Naina - "Not important, he is Major Rajveer Singh Shikhawat.."

Gunny - whispering -"oh toh ye hain wo jis se tum pyaar karti ho?"

Naina - looking at Rajveer - "Ho nahi, thi..Pyaar karti thi...ab nahi.."

As soon as Rajveer hears that, he gets angrier. Gunny takes a hand out towards Rajveer.

Gunny - "Hello Major, I am Major Gunraj Singh Randhawa!"

Rajveer - shaking his hand - "nice to meet you, Major!"

Naina and Gunny leaves from there leaving an angry Rajveer behind.

End of Chapter

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Major Gunraj Singh Randhawa/Gunny will be played by our own Ankur Nayyar

How did you guys like this part?What did you guys dislike about this part? Any suggestions from you guys that you guys would like to see in the story? There will be lots of tashan between Raj-Naina in coming up parts.

Since the jealousy track was there in the beginning, I was thinking not making the same thing again with Raj seeing Naina with Gunny. But, I would like to ask you guys if you want to see some jealousy again or not? Please do comment

Hope you liked this part!

Amazing update...want jealousy track it will be fun...and also lots of tashan b/w Raj n Naina ...totally in love with your story...also dying to know Ki raj ne naina ke saath isa kyu kiya...

Originally posted by: sonamiglesias

Amazing update...want jealousy track it will be fun...and also lots of tashan b/w Raj n Naina ...totally in love with your story...also dying to know Ki raj ne naina ke saath isa kyu kiya...

Thank you very much for your appreciaition! I will keep your suggestion in mind and will try to stand on your expectations!

And sorry Raj ne Naina ke sath aisa kyun kiya, wo janne ke liye thora wait karna parega Tab tak, keep guessing!

Brilliant update..This is very interesting track. I want to see raj jealous.. He still doesn't let her go and wants her with him.God knows what he had in mind.

Originally posted by: danish1

Brilliant update..This is very interesting track. I want to see raj jealous.. He still doesn't let her go and wants her with him.God knows what he had in mind.

Thanks a lot for the suggesstion! I will keep it in mind!!

Yep, this Raj is very strange, no one knows what he has in his mind! I mean he is eing rude to her, yet can't stand when she ignores him.

Lets wait and see what happens next!

Great update

Originally posted by: yoginisahakari

Great update

Fabulous fantastic

Jaldi batao Raj me aisa kyu kiya

Year hard to believe Raj ase Kar Sakta hai vo bhi Naina ke sat.

I am sure hamesha ki taraha Raj ye Naina ke Bhalayi ke liye Kar raha hai.

Update next Jaldi waiting...

Don't forget to PM me.

hey Yogini, thanks a lot for liking the update!

Don't worry, Raj jo bhi kar raha hai us ke peechay bhi ek wajah hai jo jald hi samne aa jayegi. Raj jo bhi karta hai sooch samajh ke hi karta hai, wo hamaein disappoint nhi karega!

Sorry yaar jo Raj ne kia us ki wajah jan ne ke liye thora wait karo! I promise it'll be worth the wait! 😊

superb update
I'm waiting for your update
sent me pm when you update