RoSid FF: I am your bride Completed FF - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice start di waiting for nxt
Edited by ruhi1985 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Read both the chapters. This FF reminded me of DDLJ
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2


Roli was sitting tensed in the back seat...

Why Roli should be tensed.. when its her engagement for which her family is going in the car...

Infact she knows about that so called marriage proposal since childhood...

Her father whenever talk to her for making her discipline or follow something used to tell...

'Roli.. you know Krishna family is very arthodox family... you cant be like this there...'

Whenever he wants her to learn something like cooking...

'Roli... Krishna family is in Vrindavan... not in Delhi.. you only need to cook & serve... dont think you can order pizza outside and sit in the sofa...'

Like this.. in each & every talk.. that Krishna family was always there...

Roli was fed up with this...

She used to tell her mother...

'Mom.. i really dont like talking about that family...'

But her mother replied her...

'Roli.. that is your sasural.. you should not talk like this... '

Roli was left with no other option or selection process for her marriage...

Its well booked in advance before even Roli knows the word marriage...

Still the surprising thing is.. she dont even know the name of the guy to whom her marriage is fixed...

Infact she is not even interested to ask & know...

What is the use even by knowing... is there any option for her like or dislike.. nothing...

When name itself is not known.. then talking to him.. seeing him.. were all just out of scope...

Now Roli is going to get engaged to such guy only about whom she dont even know anything...

When this is the case.. i mean.. when she was well aware about this so called proposal.. then what is the need of tension now...

Thats the fate...

Yes.. the fate came in the form of a picnic...

Picnic for which Roli went just last week...

That too after Jamanlal talk to Krishna about arranging their engagement...

Yes.. Roli & her friends decided to go for a picnic to South India...

When Roli told about that picnic plan to south India... her father started jumping between Sky & ground...

Roli: Pappa.. please allow me pappa... all my friends are going...

Jamanlal: Roli.. are you talking seriously... you know we are arranging your engagment in next week and you are asking for going to picnic...

Roli: Next week only pappa.. i am talking about going to picnic this week.. i will return before going to Vrindavan pappa...

Jamanlal: No Roli... Its wont work out... i never sent you alone with friends and all till now and i cant do that now...

Roli: Pappa.. i have been doing whatever you told till now... even you fixed my marriage as per your wish.. did i told anything... i am just asking for a small thing... picnic... why cant you allow for that pappa...

Jamanlal: Roli... its not good to go like that when talks about good things are going on..i mean your engagement... what if something happens like bad sign...

Roli: Nothing like that will happen pappa...

Jamanlal: How can we be sure Roli.. we only should be cautious & avoid such...

Roli: Pappa... we are going by train.. then 3-4 days we are seeing places.. then returning by train... what is risky in this pappa...

jamanlal: Roli.. whatever you tell.. my mind is not agreeing... i feel something is wrong...

Roli: Pappa.. nothing is wrong pappa.. dont you have trust on your daughter...

Jamanlal: Roli.. i have trust on you... i know about you...

Roli: Then what is the problem pappa.. i clarified there is no risk in travelling.. you confirm that you have trust on me.. then what is holding you from allowing me to go for this picnic...

Jamanlal: I really cant understand Roli.. but my mind is not accepting...

Roli: Pappa.. as i never went to such picnic you are worried.. nothing else... Pappa... please allow me pappa.. this is the first & last wish i am asking you.. after that anyway.. i am going to do whatever you tell right... i am going to get married to someone in a village & i dont know whether i get such chance also to go anywhere.. then why cant you give this last chance to live my life as my wish pappa...

Jamanlal got no other option other than allowing her for this...

Finally Jamanlal agreed...

Its all ok... she just went to picnic.. now what is there to get tension in that...

There only the role of fate comes...

Siddhant... Siddhant Bharatwaj...

Roli took deep breathe...

She casually turned her face outside...

Her eyes widened & face brightened...

Yes.. Its Siddhant who is coming in his car beside their car...

Roli got breathe of relief now...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome amazing can't wait update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome di waiting for nxt
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome start di can't wait update next soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Superb updates akka.. As I don't aware of the movie u r writing, this ff is also a banu akka's ff 4 me.. So I am very very excited
Edited by Rojark - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome start di👍🏼eagerly waiting for next😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you akka for such a treat!!Really happy to know that u are writing on DDLJ!!Indeed a HaPpY NeWs!!
Thank u so much!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Awesome Concept.😊
Roli Marriage was fixed in her Childhood with her father's Friend Son,it was so Interesting.😊
Roli was tensed about this Marriage.😲
Before that Roli wanted to go for a Picnic,it was so Nice.😊
Roli convinced his father for Picnic and there She will meet Sid,it was so Interesting.😊
The Story is getting so Interesting.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaSweety-Anu

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