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arshi_sarun

@arshi_sarun

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

The title of the story was so intriguing... Loved the update.. Please do continue ..thanks for the pm

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shibaniana

@shibaniana

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Interesting concept.
Waiting for the next part eagerly.
I should mention that I am new to this fandom and this is one of the first fanfiction of Arshi I am reading 😃 😃

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tina_1234

@tina_1234

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Very interesting
Does khushi thinks herself as his liability??
He thinks his liability towards khushi ??
Continue super soon please

Thank u sooo much for pm. Really appreciate it.
U are an awesome writer

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Srilatha

@Srilathalolla

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Its a very interesting plot , Khushi is too young and right now she is not in a right frame of mind as she lost her parents. I think that she will take time to feel attracted to Arnav , coming to Arnav he seems to a play boy so he will be attracted to Khushi but again will he approach her as she is his family?

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thamanna

@owin

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Very interesting start.Please do continue

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Mayvs2013

@Mayvs2013

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

very interesting... i am thinking something unpredictable...but definitely Arnav n Khushi only...

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Simmideepak

@Simmideepak

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Thanks for the pm dear

Please do continue eagerly waiting for the next update

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tanu3579

@tanu3579

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Love the start ... .. wud love to see why u plan fr them behind this pt...

Bt since u askd... I wud say just coz Arnav is nt a gentle being, he still doesn't need to have too many flings... Sry, by I guess I m still too Orthodox fr a willing liking towards thia kind of thgs...

Plus as of now, both seem to have just noticed each other... I doubt either is clearly attracted... Bt still if I HV to chose one of the two.. I think k arnav it is...

Khushi I feel is the emotionally stronger one, n might HV better hold on her actions n thots...

Edited by tanu3579 - 8 years ago

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srilathas

@srilathas

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Very interesting start dear :)

Surprised to c that u r asking for suggestions from we readers

I love your writing.. so I'm going to definitely follow this

Kindly send PM

Btw, I would love to see Arnav supporting Khushi in her life for her to become totally independent.. let him be a Prince Charming for her...

Right now at this juncture would love to see Arnav as a mentor, guardian.. let time take its course of action for Arnav to feel Khushi's utmost importance in his life and heart

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joy_of_life

@joy_of_life

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#30

this looks really interesting

I am really excited to see how their love story will develop because both of them have very different personalities especially considering arnav's playboy lifestyle

Please update soon cant wait to read the next chapter

Edited by joy_of_life - 8 years ago