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thanks alot dear
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Originally posted by: Jayeeta_06

fantastic update...⭐️⭐️⭐️...all the couples got married and Alekh-Bani are blessed with a baby girl...🥳...whereas Naina is 8 months pregnant now and that also with twins......Shalini accepts Naveen finally and she's also pregnant...👏👏👏...all the couples celebrates karva-chauth...😎...loved it...❤️❤️❤️...thank u 4 pm...😃...




thanks alot dear... 😊
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thanks alot for liking this story this much... m glad that my hard work is appreciated... so guys.. thnks for the lovely comments on part 37... here is the last part... part 38 of this story... read it comment... and plzz answer some my questions that i asked... it will help me for my further work...
lots of love hugs n prayers...
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*** Kuchh Rang Pyar Ke Aise bhi...***

Part 38 (Last Part )...

1 month later...

aise hi yeh ek mahina aur beet gaya... ab aalekh ki beti 1 mahine ki ho chuki hai... au naina ki delivery kisi bhi waqt ho sakti hai... rajveer naina dinner karke apne kamre me aate hai... aur rajveer naina ko araam se bed pe bitha kar washroom ki ore ja raha hota hai ki naina ki awaaz se mudta hai...

Naina : aaah...Raj...He ran to her holds onto her she holds onto her tummy...he started to panic...)

Rajveer :- Nain kya hua!...tum thik to ho?...Nain batao kya hua!...

Naina : aah..Raj...kuch kariye...mera labor pain shuru ho raha hai...(He starts to panic even more...he couldn't think straight at that point of time seeing her in that condition...)...

Rajveer :- main... main kya karun... ha ha... Nain tum rukko main doctor ko phone karta hoon...

Naina : doctor yaha aake kya karega...raj mujhe hospital leke chaliye...

Rajveer :- oh haan... (rajveer daud kar jata hai... aur aalekh bani aur ishita bula kar lata hai... aur with the help of aalekh naina ko hospital lekar jata hai...)

Rajveer :- doctor...Naina ka labor pain shuru hogaye hain...woh bohat takleef me hai...kuch kijiye na please..

Doctor: Mr.shekhawat ...calm down...aisa to hona hi tha...Nurse...Mrs.shekhawat ko delivery room me le chalo...Mr.shekhawat follow me...

The doctor leaves her cabin and rajveer follows her in a hurry...they walk upto Naina and he slowly runs his hand on her forehead...

Rajveer :- kuch nahin hoga tumhe...main hoon na tumhare saath

Naina : raj mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai... bahut dard hai raj... aap mere sath hi rehna plzz...

Rajveer :- Nain main yahin hoon tumhare paas...main tumhe chod ke kahin nahin jaaunga...tum darro mat... (He holds her hand into his as she tightened her grip on his hand in pain... they take her in the delivary room and they put all the IVs and blood pressure cuffs on her...she was so scared when Doctor comes with 2 nurses...)

Doctor: Mrs shekhawat aap ghabraiye mat sab thik hoga...aap taiyaar hain...

Naina : hmm...(She just shrieks in pain and rajveer was getting so tensed...he couldn't bear to see her in that condition... rajveer was feeling dizzy and doctor sees him...)

Doctor: Mr.shekhawat aap thik to hai...

Rajveer :- ji...main thik hoon...(He just holds his head with one hand whilst sitting down on a chair beside her,still holding her hand in his..)

Doctor: i think aapka BP low ho raha hai...Nurse inhe bahar le jake juice aur Salt water dijiye ..now hurry up...Mrs.shekhawat ple try harder...)

Rajveer :- lekin doctor main thik hoon...main Naina ko aise chod ke nahin ja sakta... (She continued to cry in pain whilst holding onto his one and and the bed tighter... When he almost fell from the chair when Nurse holds him and takes him outside...Nurse made him sit when aalekh and bani come...Nurse brings juice for him and hands him...)

aalekh : oye ab tere ko kya hua...?

Nurse: Mrs.shekhawat ki halat dekh ke inka BP low hone laga... (He drinks the juice and stands up...)

Rajveer :- nurse woh naina...

nurse:- dekhiye... hum sab hai wahan...

viren:- ha veer... kuchh nahi hoga use... (tabhi naveen shalini aur rishabh bhi aa jate hai...)

naveen:- naina kaise hai...

aalekh:- ander hai...

bani:- raj... kuchh nahi hoga naina ko... ab mujhe bhi to dard hua tha...

aalekh:- ha.. dekh na... yeh bilkul theek hai... naina bhi bilkul theek ho jayegi... aur bachha bhi... be a man...

bani:- oh really... tum yeh keh rahe ho... tum khud behose ho gaye the tab...

dadi:- oye ladna band karo...( tabhi pooja ali bhi aate hai...)...

pooja:- veer... naina...??

bani:- ander hai... aur tu yahan baith ja... khadi mat reh... aur raj... kuchh nahi hoga... jo hoga sab achha hoga...

rajveer:- hope so bani... meri naina aur mere dono bachhe safe aur sound ho...

all:- kya... do...??

rajveer:- ha wo... hum aap sabko surprize dena chahte the... naina ko twins hone wale hai... (all were really happy... dusri taraf naina ki cheekhe sunaai de rahi thi... par finally kafi waqt baad woh shant ho jati hai... aur doctor bhi bahar aati hai...)

Rajveer :- Doctor...Naina kaisi hai...??

Doctor: Congratulations Mr shekhawat ...aapko do bohat hi pyare bete huye hai... maa aur bache dono thik hain... par Mrs shekhawat ke liye kaafi mushkil tha...do bache ko deliver karna asaan nahin hai..lekin i must tell you woh bahot hi strong hai... abhi humne unhe injection dediya hai aur woh so rahi hain...aur kal shaam ko hum inhe discharge kar denge...

Rajveer :- Naina thik to hai na...kya main use dekh sakta hoon...

Doctor: ji woh bilkul theek hain...aur aap zaroor mil sakte hain unse...

Rajveer :- thank you doctor...

dadi;- oye hoye... chak de fatte... ek nahi balki mere do- do pote... oye viren ishita ko phone kar aur use bhi bata de...

rajveer opens the door slowly...and looks at Naina ...she looked so tired and restless...the IVs still running...rajveer goes and sits by her on the stool...and runs his hand on her forehead and bends down and kiss it and takes her hand in his while waiting for her to wake up...When he hears the babies groaning...he slowly places her hand on the bed and tiptoes in between both cots...he looks at the babies and a smile appears on his face...he had finally become a father...he couldn't express his happiness...it was like a beautiful dream come true...he felt as though his family was now complete...he slipped his finger between their tiny hands whilst caressing them with his thumb...he bent down and kissed them one by one...rajveerl ooks at Naina and a smile appers on his face and tears of joy came into his eyes...

Rajveer :- Thank you so much Naina ...itne khubsurat bacho ke liye...(when aalekh and bani enter...)

aalekh : Congratulations yaar...finally tu dad bangaya...

Rajveer :- aur tu chacha...(They both hug each other...)

bani: chalo ab tum dono hato muje bacho ko dekhna hai...

viren, dadi, shalini, naveen, rishabh ali, pooja:- aur hum... hume bhi to dekhna hai... (all went to babies... and koochikoo with them... naina bhi jaag jati hai... aur smile ke sath apne pariwar ko dekh rahi thi...)

viren:- thanks naina... (naina just smiles... all of them left after bid good bye to them... only aalekh n rajveer was there with naina... but aalekh also went outside... as he knew they need some time with each other... Naina looks at other side where rajveer was standing by the cots with smile...Naina smiles at him and try to get up but couldnt bcoz it was so painful for her...He rushed to her and held her hand into his...)

Rajveer :- Nain tum leti raho...kaisi ho tum?

Naina : bas thik hoon...mere bache kaise hai...

Rajveer :- bilkul thik hain...thank you so much Naina mere pariwar ko pura karne ke liye... (He kisses her hand and runs his other hand on her forehead..Naina just smiles at him...)...

Naina:- kahan raj... main aapko aapki beti nahi de payi...

Rajveer:- are to kya hua... mere yeh do bete hai na... aur beti ka kya hai... i m damn sure next time... twins nahi balki triplates honge wo bhi betiyaan...

Naina:- what... aap paagal ho... in dono ne to meri haalat kharab kar rakhi thi... aap na... no more babies,,,,

rajveer:- naina...

naina:- raj...

Rajveer:- ok - ok... wo sab baad me... pehle apne bacho ko nahi logi god me... ( rajveer coat ke pass jata hai... aur ek baby ko naina ko deta hai... aur dusre ko khud liye hota hai... naina ki aankhon se aanshun behne lagte hai...) naina kya hua...

naina:- raj yeh... yeh mere bete hai... mere jism ka tukda... aaj... main... aaj se jyada khushi mujhe kabhi nahi hui... kabhi nahi... (rajveer side se naina ko hug kar leta hai...)... aur dekhiye dono aap par gaye hai... dono ek se dikhte hai...

rajveer:- ha naina... yeh ehsaas bahut anmol hai na... aur mere hai to mujhpe hi jayenge na... aur ab twins similarities to honi hai... (fir dono hi apne bachho ke sath busy ho jate hai...)

next day...

doctor aati hai... naina kal se better lag rahi thi... wo naina ka aur babies ka check up karti hai... aur naina ko sham ko discharge dene ka keh kar chali jati hai...rajveer naina ke pass baitha tha... aur babies ke sath khel raha tha... (naina leti hai... aur unko dekh rahi hai...)

rajveer:- nain...

naina:- hmm...

rajveer:- nam kya socha hai... tumne kaha tha bataogi par abhi tak nahi bataya...

naina:- raj waise to maine ek bete ka aur ek beti ka naam socha tha... par ab maine soch lia hai... (tabhi pooja aur shalini ishita ke sath aati hai...)...

ishita:- kal to main mishthi ke karan nahi aa pai... par ab mujhe mere poto se milna hai... hat veer,... (aur ishita apne poto se ke sath khelne lagti hai...) chal pooja shalu... inka naam karan bhi karo...

shalini:- ha bhabhi... kahiye... kya naam rakhna hai aapke beto ka... ek ka main rakhungi... aur ek ka pooja... (shalini jakar ek baby ko uthati hai...) boliye... ( naina rajveer ko dekhti hai...)...

naina:- Kabeer... ( shalini pehle baby ke kaan me kabeer kehti hai...) bahut pyara naam hai... welcm to our life Mr Kabeer Rajveer singh shekhawat...

pooja:- now my turn... (pooja jakar dusre baby ko uthati hai... and looks at naina...)...

naina:- Sujal... (pooja baby ke kaan me sujal kehti hai...) welcome... Mr Sujal Rajveer singh shekhawat...

ishita:- naina bahut pyare naam hai... mere ghar ke chiraag... Sujal aur Kabeer... (Sabhi bachho aur naina ke sath busy the... aur rajveer sabko ek smile ke sath dekh raha tha...)

sham hoti hai... aur rajveer naina, sujal aur kabeer ko lekar ghar aata hai... dadi bani aur shalini unka bahut achhe se swagat karte hai... agle din pooja rakhi jati hai... jisme naina aur rajveer sujal aur kabeer ke sath baith - te hai... aur pandit ji... mantro ke sath sujal aur kabeer ka nam karan karte hai...


about night...

Rajveer :- Naina ...(Naina opens her eyes softly and looks at him...)

Naina : hmm...kya hua...Sujal Kabeer thik to hai...woh jag to nahi gaye...

Rajveer :- woh bilkul thik hain... mom aur dadi ne abhi ek ghanta pehle unhe dudh pila diya tha aur ab woh so rahe hain...par unki mumma abhi bhukhi hai isliye papa khaana leke aaye hain...

Naina : hmm...sabka dinner ho gaya...

Rajveer :- haan hogaya...sirf tumhara baaki hai

Naina : lekin aapne to abhi tak nahi kiya...

Rajveer :- nahin...aisa to nahin hai...woh maine bhi karliya hai...

Naina : Raj...mujhse is bare me kabhi to sach bola kijiye...

Rajveer :- tumhe har baar kaise pata chal jaata hai?

Naina : bas aise hi kyunki jab aap jooth bolte ho to tumhare chehre pe ek choti si muskaan hoti hai usse...

Rajveer :- tum to muje mujse bhi zyada jaanti ho...achcha pehle tum kha lo phir i promise main kha lunga...tum jaanti ho na jab tak tumhe khaate na dekh lun,mujse nahin khaya jaata...

Naina : aur aap bhi bahot achche se jante ho ki main bhi nahi kha sakti aur waise bhi raj yeh khana mere liye bahot hai...hum log saath me kha sakte hai...

Rajveer :- thik hai...jaisa tum chaho...hum milke khaa lenge...

Naina : hmmm... (dono milkar khana khate hai...)

aise hi yeh loge apni life apne bachho me busy ho gaye... aur dekhte hi dekhte... sujal kabeer aur mishthi bhi bade ho rahe hai... 4 month ke baad pooja ne ek baby boy ko janm diya jiska naam ayaan rakha hai... aur 6 mahine baad shalini ne ek beti ko janm diya jiska naam nia hai... aur yeh sabhi couples apne bachho ke sath apni zindagi ke anokhe rango ke sath khush hai... aur apni zindagi jee rahe hai... yudi apni wife aur bachho ke sath apni zindagi usa me bita raha hai... aur dekhte - hi dekhte inki zindagi ke 26 sal guzar gaye...

after 26 years...

26 sal bahut hote hai... bahut kuchh hone ya naa hone ke liye... aur in 26 salon me rajveer aur naina ki shadi ko 29 sal pure ho gaye hai...
aur rajveer naina ki kahani ko suru hue yahi koi 30 sal... ha 30 sal pehle mile the humare rajveer aur naina in 30 salon me bahut kuchh ho gaya... achha bhi bahut achha bhi... aur kuchh bahut bura bhi... sabse pehle baat rajveer naina ki hi karte hai...

Rajveer - naina 's life...

kareeb 30 saal pehle hui thi inki mulaakat... jahan naina ek inocent si ladki thi... wahi rajveer ke dil me naina ke bhai aur aur uske pariwaar ke liye kadwahat... apni nafarat aur badle ki aag me hi rajveer ne naina se shadi ki thi... aur naina wo to sachhe dil se rajveer ko chahti thi... par yeh dono ek dusre ke liye hi to bane the... tabhi toh... itani muskilo ke baad naina ne rajveer se shadi ki... par rajveer uske dil ki nafarat uska kya... wo bhi kam hui... waqt ke sath... naina ne halaaton se samjhauta nahi kia... balki jo bhi galat hua sab sahi kia... jinhone galat kia unhe saza di... aur rajveer ko jeeta... bahut hi kathinayion se guzra inka pyar... jab rajveer ko naina se pyar hua to naina use chhod ke ja chuki thi... par rajveer ne bhi haar nahi maani aur usne fir se naina ko jeeta... aur fir dono hi sirf prem ke dhaage me bandhe aur 2.3 yrs ki shadi ke baad inki zindagi me inke judwa bete aaye,... Sujal aur Kabeer... jinhone aate hi Rajveer _ Naina ko RaiNa bana dia tha... aur bas Raina apne sujal aur kabeer ki parwarish me jut gaye... par inki family kahin na kahin incomplete thi... kyuki rajveer ki beti jo nahi aayi thi... but bhagwaan ne rajveer ki dua qubool kar li... aur sujal aur kabeer ke janm ke 4 saal baad inki beti ne janm lia... Jiska naam Naina ne Ragini rakha... kyuki naina manti hai... ki agar ragini na hoti to sayad aaj rajveer aur naina sath na hote... aur ragini ko sabke beech rakhne ka sabse achha tarika yahi tha... aur rajveer naina se sehmat tha... is tarah rajveer naina kabeer sujal ki life me ragini aa gayi... ragini... sujal aur kabeer ki jaan... unki chhoti behen nahi balki beti... ha... jaan basti hai dono ki apni behen me... aur ragini sabki fav hai... specially apne papa ki... abhi ragini (Played by shilpa anand) 23 saal ki hone wali hai... aur uske dono bhai sujal (played by Rajeev khandelwal) aur kabeer (played by Rajeev khandelwal) 27 saal ke hone wale hai... sujal ko jahan business me itnterest tha... woh humesha se rajveer ki tarah banna chahta tha... usne apna family busniess sambhala hai... aur S&A industries ko nayi uchaiyon pe le ja raha hai... wahi... kabeer ko journalism ka craze tha... isiliye graduation ke baad hi usne journalism ki padhai ki... aur aaj... wo delhi ke sabse bade news channel KKN me EIC hai... khud ke dum pe,... aur dono hi apni professional life me uchaiyon ko chhu rahe hai... humare rajveer naina ko apne teeno bachho pe naaz hai...

Aalekh - bani's life...

inka kya kahe... ladte jhagate... aur rajveer naina ko milate milate 30 saal pehle hi inki nazar bhi mil gayi... inki shadi ko lagbhag 28 saal gaye hai... aur aaj bhi dono utna hi ladte hai... aur utna hi pyar bhi hai,... inki beti mishti 27 saal ki hai... aur uski shadi ek bahut hi achhe ladke samrat se ho gayi hai... aur dono hi apni life me bahut khush hai... mishthi ke janam ke 3 saal bad bani ne ek bete ko janm diya jiska naam mayank hai... jiski age 24 years hai... aur wo abhi office jane laga hai... aur apne bhaiya sujal ki help karta hai S&A industries me... inki life bhi bahut hi achhi chal rahi hai,...

Pooja - Ali's life...

pooj aaj bhi waisi hai... inki shadi bhi aalekh aur bani ke sath hi hui thi... aur yeh apni life me bahut khush hai... inter cast marriage hone ke baad bhi kabhi bhi koi bhi problem nahi aayi na inke pyar me... na shadi me... aur ise hi to india kehte hai... inka bada beta ayaan 26 saal ka hai... aur aarmy join karna chahta tha... isiliye is in dono ne apne bade bete ko aarmy ki training ke liye KMA bheja tha... aur ab ayaan aarmy captain hai... wahi inka chhota beta jo ki ragini ki age ka hai... jiska naam arjun hai... wo ragini ke sath hi college me tha... aur ab dono ka hi college khatam ho chuka hai... aur dono hi apne furure ke bare soch rahe hai... aur confused bhi hai... but hope so dono hi apni manzil pa le...over all inki life bhi set hai...

Shalini - Naveen's life...

bahut kuchh... bahut dard dekha hai inke rishtey ne... rajveer aur naina ke bade bhai aur behen... inka pyar tab ka hai,... jab rajveer aur naina apne initial college days me the... inke liye bachhe the dono... par inke dard bhare rishtey ko rajveer naina ne ek kiya... itani takleefo se guzarne ke baad aakhir shalini aur naveen ke sachhe pyar ki hi jeet hui... aur aalekh - bani aur pooja - ali ke sath hi inki shadi bhi hui thi... shalini ko thoda waqt jarur laga... par ab dono bahut khush hai... aur inki beti nia... 25 saal ki hai... aur use art ka bahut shaukh hai... to wo heritage of india ke liye kaam karti hai... nia ki life me dev naam ka ladka hai... dono ek dusre ko bahut chahte hai... aur jald hi inki shadi bhi ho jayegi... aur nia se chhota... ragini aur arjun ka crime partner sameer... shalini aur naveen ka chhota beta... age 23 sal... sportsman... aur usne abhi - abhi ek sports institute bhi open ki hai... for coaching...

aur ab baat... bado ki... to rishabh apne chess aur club me busy rehte hai... wahi viren aur ishita... ghar pe as a guardian rehte hai... aur apne pote - potiyon jo is ghar ki jaaan hai... sujal kabeer mishthi ragini mayank... bas inhi sab ke sath busy masti aur dhamal... par dadi... wo ab nahi rahi... 10 pehle unhi normal death ho gayi hai... par unhone apni livelyness is ghar ke kone - kone me chhod di hai...

7 october...

aaj shekhawat vila me bahut bada din hai... mishthi ki shadi ke baad aaj yahan fir se shadi hone jaa rahi hai... is ghar ke do ladlo ki... jo dadi ko sabse jyada pyare the... khair ab dadi to nahi rahi... par inki shadi ka mahaul zama hua hai... aap janna chahte honge ki yeh kaun hai... toh yeh koi aur nahi humare kabeer aur sujal hai... aaj in dono ki hi shadi hai... aur kuchh palon ke baad yeh apne pyar ko apni patni bana kar is ghar me lekar aayeinge...

Sujal & Kabeer's room...

sujal aur kabeer ek hi room me hai... aur ready ho rahe the... sujal mirror ke saamne khada baal bana raha tha... tabhi kabeer muskurate hue jakar bed pe late jata hai... (kabeer sujal se 5 minute bada hai... to sujal kabeer ko kabeer bhai bulata hai... kyuki kabeer the great ka kehna hai... wo bada hai use izzat di jaaye...)...

sujal:- kya hua kabeer bhai... itna kyun muskura rahe ho...

kabeer (uth ke baith jata hai...):- yaar sujal... maine kabhi socha nahi tha ki yeh din bhi aayega meri zindagi me... jis ladki se mujhe chhid hoti thi... jo humesha mujhse ladti thi... jo har waqt mujhe neecha dikhaane me koi kasar nahi chhodti thi... usi se main itna pyar kar baithunga... aur aaj wo meri patni ban kar aa rahi hai... MERI Ananya (played by Kritika Kamra) ban kar... (Sujal smiles... and sits besides him...) janta hai sujal ananya sabse alag thi... office me wo junior reporter aur main EIC fir bhi uski har baat mujhe attract karti... har bar wo mujhe challange deti aur kehti... i will proove my self sir... kehne ko main uska hero hun... but zindagi me maine usse bahut khush sheekha... sach ka sath dena... khush rehna zindagi jeena... mujhe na... usme kabhi kabhi... mumma dikhti hai... jaise mumma papa ko datti hai... waise ananya mujhe... how stupid i was... kitna jhagda kiya hai maine usse... par aaj... wo meri zindagi ban chuki hai... and thanks to our mumma and papa... wo meri patni banne wali hai... i m too happy man... (Sujal apna hath kabeer ke shoulder pe rakhta hai...)...

Sujal:- meri kahani bhi aapse kaha juda hai kabeer bhai... you know what jab first time Kashish (played by Aamna shariff) se mila tha... wo ek stupid si nervous employ lagi mujhe... aaj bhi yaad ki maine uska jab interview lia tha... to kitane utpatang sawaal kiya the... madam ne meri gadi bhi thok di thi... fir humesha mujhe har bat ke liye tokti sir yeh galat hai... yeh sahi nahi hai... aur apne collegues pe use trust tha par mujh par nahi... gussa aata tha mujhe... ki why the hell she cant trust me... par dheere- dheere achhi lagne lagi... aur ek jalan si hone lagi mujhe... dheere dheere usse pyar ho gaya... par main kuchh keh hi nahi payaa... par mujhe pata nahi tha ki uske dil me bhi kuchh hai mere liye... aur fir usi ne mujhse pyar ka izehaar ki... barish me beech road me... wo pal mere liye wahi thahar sa gaya tha... us din mera ek naya janam ho gaya tha... par uske papa ne uski shadi kahi aur tai kar di thi,,,, i thought i lost her... par papa ne aisa nahi hone dia... aur aaj mumma aur papa ke kaaran kashish humesha ke liye meri ho jayegi...aur isme ananya bhabhi aur aapka bhi bahut bada hath hai... thanku bhai...

kabeer:- ha sach ka... you know what jaisa mumma kehti hai... yeh pyar ke hi rang hai... jo hum dono ki zindagi me na jane kis - kis roop me aaye hai... aur aaj dekh na... yeh finally lal jode me humari zindagi ko meheka denge...

sujal:- sach kaha... pyar ke anokhe rang sachhe rang... mumma papa ne bahut kuchh saha hai... par unhone humesha hume best dia hai... and i think humari is family ke bhi azeeb aur gareeb rango me hum sab range hue hai...

tabhi koi ander aata hai... aur apne kamar me hath rakh kar khada ho jata... dono kabeer aur sujal use dekhte hai,... ragini gusse me khadi thi...

ragini (shilpa anand):- yahi haal raha na... to ho chuki aap dono ki shadi... meri bhabhiya kisi aur ko dhoondh lengi... aap log thakte nahi ho apni - apni wali ki badaai karke... hey bhagwaan... mere dono bhai pagal premi ban gaye hai... jab dekho apni biwiyon ke gungaan... aane do bhabhiyon ko bataungi unhe... ki aap unki burai kar rahe the...

sujal;- oye chup... burai kab ki... hum toh...

ragini:- ha - ha bolo bolo... aaj bol hi do...

kabeer (hugs her by side);- bachha tu kuchh karegi i know...

sujal:- are kabeer bhai... iska koi bharosha nahi hai... ek no ki... (tabhi ek stern voice aayi... aur teeno peeche mud kar dekhte hai... naina khadi thi... gusse me laal...)...

naina:- yeh kya ho raha hai...? ha... kuchh to sharam karo... shadi hai aaj tum dono ki... aur aaj bhi tum teeno lad rahe ho...

kabeer:- are nahi mumma... woh toh yeh... sujal... yeh hi ragini ko...

sujal:- kya ha... maine kuchh nahi kia mumma... aap to janti ho na... (Sujal sweet sa face bana kar naina ke saamne jata hai...) yeh dono hu mujhe pareshan karte hai...

kabeer(ragini's ears);- aaj bhi suru ho gaya mumma's boy...

ragini:- true... ab mumma ka gussa furr ho jayega... mumma humse nahi sirf sujal bhaiya se pyar karti hai...

naina:- are... koi nahi bolne de inhe... par mera beta to aaj bahut achha lag raha hai... aur kabeer... tu bhi ready ho... tum dono ka shehra bandhna hai...

kabeer:- are mumma aapko yaad aa gaya ki main bhi hu yahan... aaj meri bhi shadi hai...

naina:- kabeer...

kabeer:- aap na bas sujal se pyar karte ho... aur papa is chuhiya se,... meri to koi value hi nahi hai...

ishita;- are kisne kaha... main hu na... sujal ko apni mumma ke pass rehne de... mere kabeer ke liye main hu... chal tujhe taiyar karti hu,,,,, naina tu sujal ko ready kar...

naina:- ji ma...

ragini:-ahhh... main ja rahi hu... mere papa ke pass... (aur ragini muh bana kar rajveer ke pass chali jati hai... yahan naina aur ishita sujal aur kabeer ko ready karti hai... thodi der baad... aalekh bani rajveer aur ragini aate hai... aur rajveer apne dono beto ke sir pe shehra bandhta hai...)...

rajveer:- bahut achhe lag rahe ho...

ragini:- nhhh...

sujal - kabeer:- kyun...??

ragini (back hugging her father);- ab papa bhai (kabeer ) aur bhaiya(Sujal ) dono aapki corbon copy hai... but look at urself... aaj bhi u r the best... aapke aage yeh dono pani cum chai...

kabeer:- aisa kuchh nahi hai... ha... papa ki umra ho gayi hai bhool gayi hai kya...

sujal:- papa ki chamchi...

rajveer:- wait a minute... umra matalab... kisi angle se main tum dono ka baap nahi lagta... ha naina ka pata nahi...

naina:- what do u mean... aap yeh kehna chah rahe hai ki main budhdhi ho gayi hu...

rajveer:- are maine aisa kab kaha nain...

sujal kabeer ragini:- wooo... nain ha...

rajveer:- baap hu tumhara... sharam karo kuchh...

aalekh:- oh reallly tujhe yaad hai ki tu inka baap hai... to sun... mere baap of heros chal... we are getting late anita ji aur sinha saab ka 2 baar phone aa chuka hai...

ishita:- are ha... bahut hua... chalo sab... kabeer sujal chalo mere sath mandir fir baraat nikalni hai... bani wo thal...

bani:- ji aunty ready hai... (Sabhi chale jaate hai... sirf rajveer aur naina wahan the...)...

rajveer:- are naina yeh aanshun kyun... kya hua...??

naina;- aaj mere bete... dulhe ban gaye... aaj wo pal aankhon ke saamne se guzar gaya raj jab yeh dono paida hue the... aur humne inhe apne hathon me lia tha...

rajveer (hugs her by side):- sach keh rahi ho naina... m feeling too proud... mere kabeer aur sujal... they are the best sons one can have...

naina:- aur wo hum hai... aur mujhe na ananya aur kashish me apni parchhai nazar aati hai... bas wo dono mere kabeer aur sujal ko khush rakhe...

rajveer:- mujhe yakeen hai... kashish aur ananya is ghar ko khush aur jod kar rakhiengi... ab mujhe na sujal aur kabeer ki chinta nahi hai... kyuki unke pass ab wo hum safar hai jo apne pyar ke rango se inki zindagi ki bhar dega... inhe kabhi bhi galat raah pe jaane nahi dega... bas ab koi achha ladka meri ragini ko mil jaaye... n u know what... main meri ragini ke liye sabse achha ladka dhundh kar launga,,,,,,,

naina:- pata hai... ( she hugs him...tabhi pooja aati hai...)...

pooja:-oh mere veer aur zara... tum dono ka romance khatam karo... tum dono ke bachho ki baraat nikalne wali hai... kuchh to sharam karo... (naina rajveer se door ho jati hai...)..

naina:- kya pooja... kuchh bhi chal... raj... chaliye... (rajveer smile ke sath chala jata hai...)

delhi banquate hall...

Kabeer aur Sujal ki baraat bahut hi dhoom - dhaam se pahunchti hai... unka swagat hota hai... aur dono jakar ek - ek mandap me baith jate hai... thodi der bad pandit ji kanyaao ko bulate hai... aur sujal aur kabeer ki nazar stairs pe jam jati hai... jahan se sujal ki kashish aur kabeer ki ananya aa rahe the...

la.. la la la la la la la la...
la la la la la la la laaa...
he he he he he he he he...
hmmm...hmmm..hmmm...

pyar me lipte kitne... rang mile...
dekhe... kabhi wo rang...
jo... kabhi na mile...
kuchh rang pyar ke, aise bhi...
kuchh rang pyar ke, aise bhi...
kuchh rang pyar ke, aise bhi...
kuchh rang pyar ke, aise bhi...

la.. la la la la la la la la...
la la la la la la la laaa...
he he he he he he he he...

kuchh rang pyar ke, aise bhi...
kuchh rang pyar ke, aise bhi...
kuchh rang pyar ke, aise bhi...
kuchh rang pyar ke, aise bhiii...

dono jannat ki pariyaar lag rahi thi... sujal kashish ek dusre ko warmala pehnaate hai... aur kabeer aur ananya pehnate hai... aur fir inka subh vivaah suru hota hai... kabeer ananya ki mangh me sindur bharta hai... aur sujal kashish ki mangh me... kabeer ananya ko mangalsutra pehna deta hai... aur sujal kashish ko mangalsutra pehnata hai... fir dono hi couples agni ke phere le rahe hote hai... sabhi unpar khushi - khushi phool barsha rahe the...

oh...ooo...ohhh...hmmm...
wo mile the... yun mile the...
dekhne... bas unhe...
waqt bhi ruk gaya...
wo pyar tha...
chhune jise...
ek pal, ke liye...
aasmaa jhuk gaya...
par zindagi...
yeh aitbaar...
aaye magar...
bas ek baar...
kuchh rang pyar ke aise bhi... aise bhiii...
kuchh rang pyar ke aise bhi... aise bhiii...
aiseee... bhiii...

rajveer aur naina bhi unhe dekh rahe the.. ek azeeb si ehsaas tha aaj in dono ke man me... aankhon me jahan nami thi.. wahi honthon pe muskaan... rajveer naina ka hath tightly pakadta hai... naina apna sir rajveer ke shoulder pe rakh deti hai... aur dono saamne dekh rahe hai... apne bachho ko ek naye rishtey ke ehsaas me bandhte hue... wahi rishta jiske dum se aaj rajveer aur naina ki saansein chalti hai... tabhi ragini peeche se aakar un dono ko back hug karti hai... teeno saamne dekh rahe hai...

ragini:- mumma... papa... i too happy for them,... and i know aap dono kaisa feel kar rahe ho... mujhe pura yakeen hai ki kashish bhabhi aur ananya bhabhi... humare is pariwaar ko jod kar rakhiengi,... (naina and rajveer hugs her...)

yahan shadi sampann hoti hai... aur dono hi couples sabka aashirwaad lete hai... aur fir sujal - kashish aur kabeer ananya rajveer naina aur ragini ke pass aate hai... aur rajveer naina ka aashirwaad lete hai...aur ragini ko hug karte hai...

ragini:- hey... one family photo plzzz... (aur inki is supercool happy family ki pic click hoti hai...)

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aur mere pyare readers... yaha rajveer naina ki kahani khatam nahi hui... par inke bachho ki kahani suru hui hai... yeh anokhe rang hi the... jo aaj in dono ne na jaane kitane imtihaan dekar yeh anmol khushi paayi thi... isiliye... just be happy... and live your life... zindagi me jitne bhi rang mile sabhi ko samet lo... kyuki jab sabhi rang milte hai... to zindagi indradhanush (rainbow) ki tarah khubsurat ban jaati hai...

so isi ke sath main aap sabse vida leti hu... is ummeed ke sath ki meri is kahani ne aap sabko entertain to kia hi hoga... par yeh aapke dil ko chhu kar bhi guzri hogi... aur aapke dil me rahegi...


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THANKYOU to all my lovely readers...

here is some questions regarding this story... plzz do answer...


1. I want to Know how you feel about the story??

2. which is your most favourite scene??

3. which scene make u laugh??

4. which scene make u cry ??

5. what is the best thing u like about Rajveer and Naina ??

6. which is ur favourite charater??

7. which is ur favourite song ??

8. which scene u hate the most ??


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Edited by rkchandni - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful... but sad that fic has finished...
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I really loved the story ... and yup indeed it touched my heart... 1) I feel this story is among the bestest one i had read on IF... 2)Most fav scene...?? When returning from Agra Rajveer sings 'Hum Jo Chalne Lage' song from Jab We Met for Naina... 3) Scenes make me laugh ???? Aalekhs every idiotic banter throughout the story are my fav scenes... 4)Scenes make me cry ???? When Rajveer reveals truth to Naina on their first honeymoon and Rajveers Accident and Naina cares him throughout until Rajveer is able to walk again ... 5) Fav Character ???? Rajveer, Aalekh and Kabir... 6)Fav song ???? Hum Jo Chalne Lage 'Jab We Met'... 7) Scene hate most ??? Rajveer/Ragini past and Rajveer/Ritu interactions.. hey i am the first one to comment i guess yipeee..
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No i was the second one to comment hey but sad that story ended ... hope u write another story soon...
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Originally posted by: Sp8699

I really loved the story ... and yup indeed it touched my heart... 1) I feel this story is among the bestest one i had read on IF...2)Most fav scene...?? When returning from Agra Rajveer sings 'Hum Jo Chalne Lage' song from Jab We Met for Naina... 3) Scenes make me laugh ???? Aalekhs every idiotic banter throughout the story are my fav scenes...4)Scenes make me cry ???? When Rajveer reveals truth to Naina on their first honeymoon and Rajveers Accident and Naina cares him throughout until Rajveer is able to walk again ...5) Fav Character ???? Rajveer, Aalekh and Kabir...6)Fav song ???? Hum Jo Chalne Lage 'Jab We Met'...7) Scene hate most ??? Rajveer/Ragini past and Rajveer/Ritu interactions.. hey i am the first one to comment i guess yipeee..



Thanks dear loved ur answers
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No i was the second one to comment hey but sad that story ended ... hope u write another story soon...

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1or 2 doesn't matter dear I will try for another for sure
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Thanks allot dear

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