sukor os you are perfect

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<font size="6">hey i am new here</font>
<font size="6">my name is savira</font>
<font size="6">i am big fan of udaan nad sukor bonding</font>


<font size="6"> </font><font size="7">os</font>
<font size="6"> you are perfect </font>

<font size="6">chakor pov :</font>
<font size="6">i am broken my career ruined MEDIA THINKS THAT I USESE DRUGS TO WIN MARATHONS NOW I AM NOT ABLE TO SAVE SURAJ AND VILLAGERS FROM BHAIYA JI MY DREAMS MY CAREER MY PASSION EVERYTHING IS OVER I KNOW MY FAMILY TRUST ME VILLAGERS TRUST ME AND SURAJ ALSO TRUST ME BUT NOW I WANTED TO DIE BECAUSE IF SOMETHING HAPPENED TO SURAJ AND VILLAGERS IN FRONT OF MY EYES I WILL NEVER BE ABLE TO FORGIVE MY SELF I KNOW SURAJ IS THE ONE WHOM ONCE I HATED IM LIFE WHO IS MY BIGGEST ENEMY BUT AFTER MARRYING SURAJ I REALIZED HE IS NOT A BAD PERSON HE IS CHANGING TO A GOOD PERSON IN SOME WHERE DEEP I HAD FEELINGS FOR HIM I KNOW THAT I JUST ONCE IN MY LIFE LOVE SOMEONE WHO IS VIVAAN BUT NOW BOTH VIVAAN AND IMLI LOVE EACH OTHER AND HAPPY WITH EACH OTHER AND ENJOYING THEIR MARRIED LIFE PHASE I ALSO WANTS MY SISTER HAPPINESS SO ALSO WISH GOOD FOR BOTH </font>

<font size="6">suraj pov;</font>

<font size="6">i will support support you cahkor i will never leave your side I KNOW IN MY PAST I HATED YOU I WNATED TO KILL YOU BUT NOW AFTER MARRYING YOU I REALIZED TAHT HOW MUCH CARING LOVING SELF LESS GIRL SHE IS SHE PROTECTED ME SUPPORTED ME AGAINST MY EVIL FATHER I KNOW SHE HATED ME BECAUSE I ALWAYS GIVE HER PAIN SORROWS HURT BUT DEEP INSIDE I KNOW I STARTED TO DEVELOP FEELINGS FOR HER I HATED MY SELF FOR DOING THAT BECAUSE I KNOW AFTER MY EVIL FATHER AND SISTER RANGINI GO TO JAIL SHE WILL LEAVE ME</font>





After drinking the juice chakor starts crying and says
Chakor : suraj you know I am very bad that's why vivaan left me you know why he left me and choose imli over me because I am not like imli I can't be a good wife or good daughter in law because I am not like typical girls who just want normal simple married life who just want to live simple normal life you know imli only love vivaan but I am different from imli I had my dreams my career I wanted to fly in sky I wanted azadganj villagers to get free from the clutches of evil bhaya ji that's why vivaan gave my place to imli and leave my hand whatever you said is write boys always love girls like imli you know once a time you both loves imli no body thought about me because I am not good that's why god also give me punish now my career is finished now the world think that I takes drugs to win marathons and races Sab khatam ho gya suraj

Suraj : no chakor nothing is finished whatever media thinks is wrong and I know you did not take any type of drugs and one day truth will come out don't feel bad I am with whole azadganj is with you every body trust you than don't cry you are strong girl just in the age of 7 years you defeated my father then how can you think that you can't defeat my evil father and vivaan left you because he is unlucky he thinks that he got imli but the reality is that he is idiot you know once a time imli also feel jealous to you because you are a star marathon runner chakor you are a celebrity don't think like that every boy loves girl like imli some boys also loves girl like you you are such a wonderful human being and you family loves you whole azadganj loves you and feel proud on you don't think like that vivaan is unlucky that he did not realized that you'r importance in his life

After hearing such words from suraj her eyes become wet and she tightly hugs suraj suraj is shocked but after seeing chakor condition he also hugs her back

Suraj: chakor chakor listen to me

Chakor fell into deep sleep

Suraj picks chakor in his arms carefully and take to her bedroom and places chakor carefully on bed he put blanket on her then he started to leave suddenly he feels that someone held his hand he realized that chakor held his hand so he sat beside chakor he says
Chakor I know in my past I hurt you always gave you pain always and I always creates trouble for you on my eveil father orders but trust you changed me you change the evil suraj to a good person with you're love care concern and selfless nature I know i never said to you that I really felt guilt inside my heart I never apologized to you for my wrong deeds because of my ego but now I said I am really really sorry from the bottom of my heart and now I will make you happy and I will never leave you'r side I always try my level eat to make you happy I know because of my past you will leave me and give divorced to me after bhaya ji and ragini go to jail but I just want your happiness I did not care about the fact that you're happiness is not with me but trust me you are a perfect girl and anyone can love you I know you are hurt because vivaan left you and now love imli but trust me chakor you deserved a better life partner not vivaan I know I am not wroth of you I did not deserved you but still deepn inside my heart knows that I love you and I will never giver you're place to anyone or any girl I will love you forever because you are perfect girl perfect for me good night my dear wife chakor suraj rajvanshi

Sun rays fell on to chakor face through window chakor wakes up she had a headache because of alcohol suddenly chakor remembered all the night momoents with suraj how she hugged suraj how she tell all her pain to suraj how he pick her up in his arms how he take her to bed how he apologized for the past wrong deeds and love confession chakor feel extremely that suraj love her how much suraj gives her to importance it is a nice feeling to feel that you are very special person in some ones life in happiness she goes to take bath so that she will feel better after taking bath she comes out of woshroom and sits on bed starts thinking that how she onced love vivaan how vivaan left her how because of kamal naryan she did not take divorced from suraj how she thinks that vivaan leave her and she can never love some one in his life she can never feel special for anyone his how she starts to live with how he change to a good person he completely see the changed suraj who is loving caring protective and supportive and how she starts to feel love for suraj she cursed herself for that because she knows that suraj only loves imli he did not love some one else but after hearing love confession she felt that she is a perfect girl and god give her the best life partner suraj who is perfect she promised herself that she will take this relationship to next level she will also confess her feelings for suraj so that she and suraj starts new life and forget about past completely now life is perfect



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I know guyz I am not a writer this is my first attempt because I love udaan and sukor bonding feel free to criticised because I know I done a lot mistakes during writing this and also tell me should I continued this or not ?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey dear it was really good...plz write more

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