ROSID FF FOR MY LOVELY DAUGHTER UPD PG NO 14 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 1
A beautiful big house is shown .

A big hall with well and goood furnitures .

Then goes a big puja room

The kitchen a lady comes and says our little chef Is cooking

The girl says yes jhanvi chachi it is none other than avini

Jhanvi comes and hugs says happy birthday my doll .

She asks what our little chef is doing

She says cappocino coffee for papa and Amar chachu and tea for you and black tea for dada and daadi .

Wow my little chef is preparing more but why sad

Suddenly a man comes and hugs avini happy birthday doll she says thank u chachu

Avini papa didn't wish me till now

Amar says he will dear and smiles thinking of something

She gives coffee and tea to jhanvi and Amar

Amar says unlike her ma see how cute she is

Jhanvi says yes amarji

Avini comes with a plate to a room and callls dada daadi

Sujatha Sid and Amar mom comes and opens the door and avini gives them their tea

Rajendar says wow my birthday girl has made tea and hugs her and says happy birthday

Sujatha says happy birthday and gives a teddy bear and hugs she smiles

She goes to a room it is a big and cute room

It is a purple and white colour

Inside it a man is sleeping

Avini comes near him and says papa coffee

He says ok in a sleepy mood

Avini says papa you forget one thing he say I didn't today nothing special right then what that too without looking at her

He says go and get your dress in the changing room right

She goes and too the surprise when she opens the changing room

It is full of decorated with balloons and written happy birthday avini my angel doll

Avini says wow you siddhanth papa yeah our Sid has palned a surprise for her

She runs and jumps up on him he smiles and hugs her says happy birthday doll

After sometimes the get ready .they go down

They cut the cake

Avini unfortunately my birthday is on Sunday but no problem because my papa has arranged party naa my friends will come jolly

Avini comes and says to Amar chachu you to know papa surprise right

Amar says doll I know you liked it right she says I loved it and hugs Sid and Amar

She comes to Sid and says papa my friends will ask about mumma right when will she come

Sid turns pale because she left them she wanted to live like a free bird she don't baby .

Jhanvi says she went for work and will come one day but not today

Avini gets sad but amar says don't worry we tell your friends and today you go and play chalo

Avini says ok and goes

Sid y mumma haan sujatha says you take care of her like a mother and father but when she sees her friends mom she will to like to have right

Sujatha says beta you get married again

Sid says never maa even though she has carried this child for ten months but she didn't care for she left her and me

If I marry another girl how will she take care of my avini

I will never when age comes I will say avini the truth

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb start dear avni so cute eagerly waiting for nxt dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Waiting for your next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Super start love it avi cute waiting for roli
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Posted: 8 years ago
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superb beginning dear...n avni is so surprising!!..she's making tea,coffee for everyone?what others r doing leaving her to work that too on her bday?...but Sid's surprise is too nice,n love their bond
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Posted: 8 years ago
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super start waiting for roli's entry eagerly update next soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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fab start dear eagerly waiting for nxt
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2
It was avini birthday party .

Her friends came and they all were enjoying the party

Some of them asked were is your mother .

Avini told them that my maa has work so she didn't come .

A girl says my mumma leaves all her work comes to pick me up from the school but your mom didn't come for birthday to

Avini gets sad he keeps on thinking .jhanvi hears this and says her maa is so busy so didn't come but she loves her a lot

So leave all this let's cut the cake avini smiles .

Avini holding Sid hands cuts the cake the party got completed

Sid was talking with Amar .

Sid says I don't want to show avini her mother face itself . Jhanvi says if showing her photos she will think that her mother will come and stop asking us about her mother

Sid says do you think that prerna will come after doing so much things .

Amar says just we will do the idea that I said already .Sid says do think it Is correct to show some others photo as mother .

Amar Says for avini it is ok .that girl is dead and so she can't come back to .

When avini becomes big we will say the truth to her .

Sid says ok because I don't avini to see that prerna face .

Jhanvi says think once bhaiya .Sid says no jhanvi there is no thinking in this

Next morning

A big house. There' is a board mother terasa orphanage

A girl is cooking foods humming a beautiful

Suddenly.

A little girl comes running and hugs her and says Roli didi

Roli loooks at her kisses so what happens my ayesha is so happy

She says didi success you got job as a khathak dance teacher in modern dance academy one of the famous academy

She says with this money you can complete your fashion desiging course

Roli gets happy yes ayeshu yeah I will get more money and with this money we can do changes in orphanage too

Yes di she says suddenly a woman comes what you both are looking to cute

She says maa I have got job .

The lady is jhanaki owner of the orphanage all in the orphanage calls her maa

She says wow my baacha too good. Some mss come and asks so today night treat by Roli di

A servant comes and gives the photo to Sid and says Amar sir gave that

Sid says ok .Sid thinks I'm lying to my daughter what can be done other than that her thinks

He kisses avini forehead .She hugs him and says papa good morning

Sid says good morning doll .

A servant comes to jhanvi and says I have send the photo and resume of the girl who has asked for work in the dance academy to your assitant

Jhanvi is running the dance academy .

Jhanvi says ok

Avini gets up and sid comes to her with hesitation and gives her the cover which has the photo and says your mother photo



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh o misunderstanding sid thought photo of that girl but photo of roli who came to join jahnvi dance academy eagerly waiting for nxt dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome dear...fab idea...though Sid is doing wrong,let's hope it's for good only...really liked this twist a lot...

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