Taarey SS Broken Promise

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Chapter One



She entered into her room without making any sound , it's early morning 3'o clock she returned from office. Her gaze fall on him, her husband Rey. He is sleeping on the bed in sitting position. Put her hand bag on the couch and walked towards him and made him lie on the bed comfortably.


She sat beside him on the bed after taking shower , she caressed his hair lovingly and leaned towards his face and kissed his forehead.


"I'm sorry Rey.. I'm really sorry. I know you must be wanted to wish me and spent time with me. But I didn't return home on time. Trust me Rey.. me too wanted to do something special for us because of office work I couldn't do plan anything."


"But don't be upset my hubby.. your Taani surely make it up with you.I'll give you the most beautiful gift in the world. HAPPY ANNIVERSARY REY.." She pecked his lips and lied down beside him resting her head on his well toned muscular chest without spoiling his sleep.

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After a gloomy night sunrise brings a new hopes and dreams.It spread a golden light all around. She frowned when the golden rays kissed on her face disturbing her peaceful sleep. Rubbing her eyes with her fingers she slowly woke up .



She turned to her right side to see his handsome face. It's her daily routine from past one year whenever they are with each other. But today she didn't find him right beside her. A sadness crept on her heart . The first thing she wanted to do in this morning is apologized to him. She stood up from the bed and walked towards washroom to search him. She knocked on the door but didn't get any reply from inside. Then she took her steps towards terrace hoping she can find him there.


The sight in front of her left her numb and tears welled up in her eyes. She felt a sharp pang of guilt on her heart. All her favourite dishes and wedding anniversary cake placed on a table. She glanced at the satin off white bed spread on the terrace floor with red rose petals on it. She held the pillow close to her chest and caressed their photos printed on it.


Now tears streaming down from her beautiful eyes. He wanted to celebrate their anniversary with her . He had planned a romantic dinner date for them. But all his effort became vain because of her. Last night she caught up in office for an important meeting and he was fast asleep when she returned from office.


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"Taani beta..." She came out of her thought listening her Mother in law's voice.

" ji Mom..."

"Salgira ki bahut bahut bathaiyon beta..." Avanthika embraced her daughter in law.

"Thanks a lot Mom..." Taani smiled at her.

"Mom... Mmm.. woh Rey kahan gaya hai?" She asked little hesitantly.

"Rey subah subah academy chala gaya. Beta tum so rahi thi na..? isiliye bina bataye chala gaya hoga." Avantika said to taani who looks tensed.

"Aur haa.. hum aaj shyam ko tum donom me like ek choti si party raki hai." But Taani cut her in the middle said

"But Mom mujhe lagta hai Hume ye party nahi karni chahiye. I mean office me ithna tentions chal raha hai. Dad , Arjun bhayya air Tauji Sab itna tention me hai."

"Business me toh tention chaltha rah tha hai But apart from business we have a personal life too. Ye mera beta aur bahu ke first wedding anniversary hai. So hum ye anniversary zaroor manayega. Ek chotti si party hoga sirf hum family members aur Rey ka friends. Okey..?" Taani nodded her head and avanthika kissed her forehead and left the room.


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She wrapped in her bathrobe and searching for something to wear when a gift box caught her attention. She quickly unwrapped it with so much excitement . She very well know who brought this gift for her. It's a beautiful Saree. She smiled at his choice . He really know how to impress her with his choice. She herself can't find out something better than his choice.


She draped the Saree which he brought for her, did little make up and wore matching earrings and bangles and put her mangalsutra on her neck, filled her partings. She looked at her self in the mirror and adored her mangalsutra and sindoor on her parting which is symbol of their sacred relation.


She took an envelop from her cupboard and opened it. It's her pregnancy report. Two days before she got to know about her pregnancy. But she didn't tell him about this because she wanted to say him in a special way on their anniversary. Now she is going to tell him that he is going to tell him that he is going to be a father. She can't hide such a good news from him so long.


"Baby... We are going to see him. Woh Mamma se ghussa toh nahi hoga na...? Mamma kal papa ko bahuth wait karwaya aur aapke baare me bhi ab tak une nahi bathaya. You know baby... Your papa and his ghussa kafi famous hai. Lekin Mamma une manaloongi. Aap Mamma ke side pe hona..?Mmm...??" Taani said to her baby caressing her tummy.


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Precap

"Sharon... Taani bahuth badal gayi hai. Woh.. Woh Taani nahi rahi jise main pyar karthi hoon.Mujhe lagtha hai woh mere saath ghush nahi hai."


"Rey.. mujhe lagtha hai do log ek saath rah kar ghush nahi hai toh in donom ka alag hona hi sahi hai.Taani bhi pehle yehi kah rahi thi."


" Taani... I know you are not happy with me . Tum ne iss shaadi mera aur tumhara Tauji ki preasure me aake kiya tha. Now I'll free you from this relation."


" Thanks Rey.. Aap ne mujhe is rishte se aazad kar ke bahuth bada gift diya hai aaj ka din. Main bhi aap ko ek gift dena chahthi hoon. I hope aap ko pasand aawoge ."


"Taani ... You are pregnant..?I'm going to be a father..?"




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Edited by Candyfloss-TR - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing part 1 intersting concept
Precap nice next part update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice strt...
precap is interesting..
cntnu soon
thnx fr pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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interesting concept
update soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Super awesum...concept...plzzz update another part soonnn
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome
sprb update yr
lovely concept
i m already loving this story
plz update soon yr
cant wait to read moree...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats 4 d new story Interesting strt.continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing concept..
Interesting precap...
Loved it..
Update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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interesting concept
loved the start
cont soon

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