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Posted: 8 years ago
Yes Beautiful next part is Charity function only. After that dhamaka will open up.
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Part 106- The Charity Bash

" Suman you sit in front, let Adwaith sit behind. Else he will distract Sreedhar. He doesn't sit quite for a minute" told Renu.

They were getting ready to go for the Charity Bash and Suman made Adwaith sit in front. Maheswari agreed to Renu " Suman put him behind, let him run over the entire back seat"

Suman sat in front and as the car pulled out of the driveway Sreedhar gazed at her. She was wearing a light pink saree with chickenwork. " Sreedhar keep your eyes on the road, I am here to check on Adwaith. He is doing fine behind" she smiled. Sreedhar smiled back and she could see his face glowing.

They reached the venue and as soon as they entered one lady came running " Suman I am so happy you have come. Your students were complaining till now. Sreedhar so glad your Maa allowed her to come. Come let me show your seats." She ushered them in and as they moved in she introduced them to many people there. Finally they were made to sit in a table in the far right. The seating was arranged in the lawn in such a way that at every angle you could see the programme."

" You wait. Programme will soon start. Meanwhile have drinks. Let me tell the girls you have come. They will be enthusiastic ". The waiter came with both beer and soft drinks. Sreedhar took a coke, while Suman took Mirinda for herself and Adwaith. Adwaith insisted on wanting what is in Sreedhar's hand. Finally Suman had to relent and get him a coke. But the boy took only one sip and pushed the glass away. Suman gave her Mirinda to him and took the coke glass. Sreedhar smiled as she began to sip coke. He knew Suman didn't like coke and they used to fight over it.

" Sreedhar atleast now take something which Adwaith will also eat. Don't tempt him with fancy things" she rolled her eyes as she reluctantly sipped the coke and he gave her a laugh.

Soon the programme started. There was a welcome speech by Retd Army General. Then there was another speech a dignified lady Anuradha who said to be in charge of the widow rehabilitation of programme in Jaipur. She talked about the sacrifices the family of army men make and how the society has to support their families when the army man becomes a martyr. She outlined the programmes they do for supporting the ladies which includes exhibition of products made by them, funding the children's education etc... Then the events started. Soon it was Suman's students dance. When the dance started itself it was announced it was choreographed by Suman Varma. As the curtain lifted Sreedhar could see Suman was tensed. He used his feet and gently touched her feet. Startled she looked at him. He gently caressed her feet his eyes indicating everything will be fine. The tables were covered completely with fancy cloth and that gave Sreedhar freedom to touch Suman's feet without anyone seeing.

The song started as the 7 girls assembled. " Morni Bhaga mein bole Aadhi Ratma". The song continued and the girls danced perfectly

Sreedhar and Suman looked at each other. Suman felt herself in his arms as the dance continued and Sreedhar continued caressing her feet. Finally the dance was completed to a thunderous applause and Suman asked Sreedhar how was it.

" Sumanji it is beautiful. I am not telling just like that. You have choreographed it really well. I especially loved the steps you have put for the lyrics " Mein ghunghat mein jal gayi, kitne sawan barse, meri pyaaz na buji re barsatma". The girls have carried the pain of waiting for your loved one so well. She smiled knowing well it wouldn't have been different. The wait she is taking for him was enough to choreograph those lines. As if reading her thoughts she could see his eyes reflecting the silent pain. She leaned forward and with her feet gently touched his feet softly caressing. Their eyes met, hers indicating him not to be sad. The moment was interrupted by girls coming and hugging Suman.

" Suman teacher we are so happy to see you. How was it. Did we do well. Hello uncle tell us how did the dance go"

" It was really good girls. You rocked told Sreedhar"

" Why are you not asking my chotu nephew here. How did you girls fare" Suman told the girls indicating towards Adwaith.

One girl went near him and asked whether she can take him. Adwaith smiled at her as she took him. Soon the girls began taking turns to lift the child and then the announcement for next programme came. Suman asked the girls to go , change and come, taking Adwaith from their hands.

Finally it was the concert by Hariharan. From the time he took the stage people were shouting " Tu hi re, tu hi re". But it was the last song he chose to sing. Neverthless it was a soulful concert which both Suman and Sreedhar enjoyed thoroughly.

Once the programme was over an announcement came that dinner will be ready in another 20-25 mins. Meanwhile the dance floor is open. Also there are programmes arranged for the kids. The girls came back to Suman's seat and requested to take Adwaith for some games. Suman wanted to accompany them, but then Anuradha came, asking her whether she will accompany her to meet some people. Sreedhar told Suman to go with Anuradha telling he will look at Adwaith. Suman nodded as she followed Anuradha and the girls took Adwaith. Sreedhar sat alone in the table as he saw couples moving towards the dance floor his mind wandering to the moments of their stage performance " Kuch Na Kaho" where he had Suman in his arms.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hai Shruthi.
Nice one. 😊
Suman and Sree r so adorable. 😛😊 I fear something gonna happen to either Suman or adwaith. 😲.
Waiting for the next one dear.👏👏👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
Another beautiful romantic part.. loved the leg romance.. will Suman's work also be a part of the exhibition?
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Shruthi, what are you up to? I know very well Advaith is here to bring them much closer and with Suman away with Anuradha and Sree immersed in his dream theme song, where will the boy land and how will Sree console Suman who will hell break on seeing the missing boy? or should I say the chotu will call out for both his chachu and chichi to dance on the floor which might be seconded by some more people?

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Posted: 8 years ago
@Beautiful something bad for Suman or Adwaith, will Sree keep quiet then😉
@Ria thanks for liking romance. Exhibition wait
@Jaya enough light hearted parts, romance etc etc.. now time for high voltage drama😆😆. Daal mein Namak kam, yaa chai mein cheeni 😆😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
@ Shruthi, thanks for the info dear. I am eager now for the next parts rather than for the last few updates as you know they are not exactly my cup of tea when it comes to story telling. 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
I know Jaya. They are not your cup of tea. But there are readers who loves romance. So I have to balance it out. Also light hearted parts help to lay the foundation for the major parts 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
hi shruthi sis... liked the light hearted romance... now waiting for the big bang...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi Shruthi,
I have just read the entire story in the last 3-4 days and I m completely bowled over. Like I said in my pm, I am a avid reader but mostly read western mysteries.. My readership of Indian writers is v. Limited although I do read a lot if fanfics since joining IF. And I have to say this story is very intriguing and very well written. Even from an analytical standpoint it's fabulous.

Best part is that suman-sree love story which started off as a usual college romance- sweet and endearing - has turned into the catalyst or the way to cure a lot of social evils in the community. Other highlights which I applaud you heartily for are :

1. The subject itself - I can see that u have done a lot research and that itself is commendable. It is a very comprehensive subject which requires mature writing.
2. The way u have seamlessly merged widow ill treatment with other burning issues like marital rape, child marriage, dowry and generally highlighted all issues that are linked to gender discrimination in our society.

3. Each and every character's characterization and their layers and subsequent peeling of those layers. the way u write, we know why each character is what he or she is.. I love the way you depict the way each person's mind works.. We all knew how the minds of the moral police work, but to read it in such details the motives guiding them.. their indepth politics - everything is so interesting.

4. The way almost each member of Varma family is not at all stereotypical is the best aspect IMO.. Yes Rajashekhar is a typical Father/FIL but still he doesnt get support for his ideas in his own family.. (in fact he is facing a kind of rebellion from his own sons) plus Maheshwari manages to keep him in check. I love Maheshwari's character.. it shows that if women are sensible and can control the family in a commanding way, everything is balanced in the family.

5. Each couple is different and faces different challenges and has a different kind of love/understanding..

6. Absolutely love the way you write romantic scenes.. nothing OTT yet it reaches to the core with its sincerity and often makes one blush but smile.. can i suggest something.. now that they can talk a bit freely, let suman sree talk indirectly.. now that she completed that sentence,.. he can tease her using innuendos

Now the real best for the last.. fighting the system by staying within the system.. using system's rules to break the system.. this is just awesome and truly actually the only way..

all in all.. m really enjoying this story..



Edited by sshirley - 8 years ago

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