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Posted: 9 years ago
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Bookmark.
PS - Can i suggest that u update your title each time you post an update? It's easier for us to follow as well.. Sometimes i dont check my inbox.
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OMG I'm so restless to know who she is
Ahh!
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Interesting
is that girl a ghost?
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Sorry dears, I was caught up with a few work commitments. Will update all the three stories soon !

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Hi All, I uploaded Part-4 in two sections as it came out too long. Find them both below.



PART-4 (I):




Five days... five full days... It had been five days since he saw her.


"Why hasn't she come back?", he wondered sitting in the huge third floor patio , "She was supposed to be here three days ago", "Has something happened to her?"


Arnav panicked like never before. He threw the vase on the side table breaking it in vexation. Being the suave, disciplined businessman he was, he was always in control of situations... except this particular one.


Well, there is always a first time...


The revamping of Sheesh Mahal was almost done. His family were flying in today. "Nani and Di will be thrilled to see the developments", he breathed slow and deep, "I have to be in total control". While he sent two cars with Arjun to receive them from airport, Arnav stayed back at the Mahal to monitor last minute changes.


HP: Chote Saab, they are here


Arnav walked down the staircase leading to the grand foyer and with eager steps stepped out of the main entrance. He couldn't hold back a smile at the fascination in his Nani's and Di's eyes at the glory of the old palace.


Arnav bent down to take blessings from Nani, when she hugged him tight to her bosom. "Chote", she cried, "you have done a fabulous job".


"I'm sure it looks as majestic as it did when it was built 500 years ago or even better", Anjali chuckled in tears.


"Di", he hugged her, "Do you have to cry for everything?", he asked amused at his lovable drama-queen twin.


"Of course Saale Saab", chimed in Shyam Manohar Jha, Anjali's husband, "It's been 12 hours since she got emotional, so it's high time", in return receiving a gentle pat on his arm by Anjali.


"Hmm", "Come in everyone", Arnav said.


The relationship between Arnav and Shyam was strained four years back. Shyam, being a lawyer, had gotten involved more than needed with a female client and Arnav had stepped in and curbed it in his ASR style before it turned into a full-fledged affair. Anjali had just then given birth to Mehak and was blissfully unaware of the same. Shyam had since then tried to mend the bond between him and Arnav but ASR was adamant in keeping it to a few needed courtesies.


Mehak and Lavanya stepped out of the car last. Mehak ran into Arnav's arms shouting "Mamu, is this a real palace?"

"Yes, pumpkin", he said kissing her adorable cheek, "And you are the princess here".

He smiled at Lavanya who smiled back at him coyly, "ASR, how are you?". "Good, let's go in first", he said.





Everyone was shown their bedchambers. An hour later, all of them assembled in the huge dining area for lunch. Arnav had appointed maids and servants a few days ago to assist HP with household chores. It being a hot day, with the added stress of preparations to receive his family, Arnav was especially fatigued. He felt his head spin as he got up from the couch and collapsed.


The entire family rushed to him. HP got some orange juice while Arjun checked Arnav and tried to comfort the family saying, "It's hypoglycemia meaning low blood sugar", "he must have taken the medication but forgot to have his breakfast". Once Arnav got back to normal, he was irritated at everyone fussing over him.


"I am fine", Arnav said.

"I can see that", Anjali was sarcastic and furious at the same time.

"Have a good lunch and then sleep for a while Chote", Nani was stern.

"You really need to take good care of yourself Arnav", Arjun said annoyed, "This is the second time you passed out since you came to Lucknow".

While the others screamed "What?", Arnav glared at Arjun.

Lunch was a noisy affair with Arnav being the focus of attention.




It was late evening when he joined the family sitting in the great foyer for tea and refreshments. HP got him his black coffee.

"How are you now Chote?", Nani asked concerned placing the back of her palm on his forehead.

"I am fine Nani", Arnav chuckled.

"No more work for today", she commanded, "It's good that Manohar and Akash are in Delhi taking care of business", "I want you to rest well".

Arnav knew it was useless arguing with her, so he tried diverting the topic, "When are Mamaji, Mami and Akash coming here?", he asked.

"In a week", Lavanya said.



The next two days were boisterous. A few of the interior decorators and architects met with Nani and others to see if they would suggest any changes. Some interior parts of the Mahal were not renovated yet, so Arnav got a chance to focus more on that while his other family members helped with selection of furniture and supplemental assests.


Aman met him regularly to update on upcoming meetings and video conferences with clients, though they were kept to a minimum, with Akash having taken over the major portion in Delhi.




No one could sense a storm brewing in Arnav's mind under his careful pleasant outward charade. "Where is she?", he kept thinking, "It's been a week for God's sake". He fervently hoped she was safe. He had gone to the garden behind study that held jasmine plants a zillion times to check if she had come. "Jasmines are her favourite", he mused, her thoughts bringing a faint smile on his face.


Every time he heard a maid walk around with anklets, he would assume it was her. Every minute, every passing second was making him lose his control more. He yearned to see the angel, to hear her words, to see the twinkle of naughtiness in her eyes.


"Please come", he prayed, "I just need to know you are fine".



...Scroll down for Part 4 (II)...




Edited by SillyLisa - 8 years ago
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Hi All, I uploaded Part-4 in two sections as it came out too long.



PART-4 (II):


That night:



Arnav stepped out into the front lawn late at night. He had slipped out of their bed chamber after Lavanya fell asleep. He hadn't been able to rest well from the past two days.

"A walk in the garden might help", he told himself.

It was a beautiful moonlit night, the waxing phase of moon, cool and white.

As Arnav completed his third round around the huge gardens, he met with the sight his mind was longing for from the past 7 days.



She stood absolutely stunning in her orange sari with beads shining like diamonds in the moonlight.

Arnav felt happy, relieved and... alive...

He marched forward in hurried steps towards her as she moved back with a mischievous smile.



"Where were you?", he bellowed. He was about to touch her hand when she shook her head negatively and moved further back into a tree.


"I am sorry Saab", she said looking straight into his eyes, "I have been wanting to meet you but I couldn't".



"Enough with the cryptic", he said trapping her on the tree trunk with his hands on either sides of her without touching her.


"Why couldn't you come before?", he tried sounding angry though his anger was melting down fast in the pleasant jasmine scent wafting from her delicate body.


"I came but you were busy... with your family", she said.


Arnav was stunned. "You could have at least met me for a second", he said exasperated, "You have no idea how I pined for you this week".


She looked astounded at his admission of missing her, "I came... I came... but I was late... again", she said with a pause.


"What do you mean again?", he stressed on the word. She lowered her head, her long lashes covering her eyes for a brief moment.



"Look, I was... I was disturbed... if... um... something happened to you", he blurted the truth out.



She instantly looked up at him with tears in her eyes, "you were worried for me?", she asked like a small child.



"Yes, I was... very worried", the complicated introvert businessman was replaced by a simple guy concerned for his girl.



She looked at him for a long time roaming her eyes on his forehead, eyes, eyelashes, the scar on his eyelid, the sculpted face, the prominent nose and the firm lips. Arnav knew she was checking out his features but stayed mute. He watched her as she admired him. They stayed for a prolonged period of time under the canopy of trees gazing at each other in silent adoration. The cool night, the mild breeze and the silver light of the moon added to the romantic aura of the setting.



Arnav moved his body closer to hers, dipping his head down, his lips very near to hers.



"No Saab", she said blushing profusely, "at least not now".


Arnav realized what he was doing and moved a step back immediately, closing his eyes, clenching his fists in frustration. He turned back to walk away from there but was interrupted by her call.



"Saab", she said looking down, "You did nothing wrong", "it's just that I want you to know me before... "


"Then tell me about yourself", he spoke curtly turning towards her again.


"I will Saab", her voice was soft and slightly choked


"Are you okay? What happened?", he asked anxiously noticing her tears.


"I am very lucky to have found you Saab... after a long time...", she spoke honestly at his concern for her, "It's just that I don't know how to tell you"


"Give it a try", he encouraged.


"I am scared you won't believe me", she said sadly, "And I am not willing to take a risk".


Arnav exhaled deeply.



"Can we sit on the bench over there?", she pointed to a garden bench with a backrest a few feet away under the huge mahogany trees.


"Hmm", he said while walking with her.


"Can you tell me about yourself?", she asked him as they settled down.


He chuckled at the irony of the question. "Everything about me is out in the open", he spoke firmly, "It's you that I have no clue about... including your very name..."


"Saab, don't be angry with me", she said her big hazel eyes pleading.


"I am not angry with you", he softened instantly, "I just want you to trust me. Anyhow, let's talk about something else", he did not want their conversation to get awkward specially since he got to meet her after a long time, he wanted to spend as much time as possible with her.



They spoke for a few hours about random things punctuated in between with long periods of pleasant silence. They savored each other's company basking in the knowledge of unexpressed fondness.



With the first indication of dawn by the chirping of birds on the trees, she noticed that he was very tired and slowly dozing off with his head on the backrest. Smiling she got up to leave, without disturbing him, she drank in his handsome face and mumbled softly near his ear, "I love you Saab".




Three days later:



Arnav smiled at the sight of a naughty Mehak and a tired Anjali running behind her.


"I cannot tolerate her antics anymore", he heard his Di say.


"Look at the positive side of this Di", he said picking up the day's newspaper and coffee in each hand, while settling down in the couch next to Nani, "you might end up losing more weight".


Nani, Shyam and Lavanya laughed out loud.


"Well Chote", Anjali retorted, "May be in a couple of years I will see you doing the same behind your kids"


"Why would he do it Anjali?", Shyam said, "It would be his wife running behind his kid".


Lavanya blushed.



Arnav was immediately transported to the thoughts of a certain angel with big hazel eyes and a celestial face running behind his kids... no... their kids. The image brought an unknown gratification on his face.


He remembered how three days before, they spent the night together in the garden talking about mundane things when the experience was anything but mundane. To top it off, he recalled how she had professed her love to him assuming he was asleep. He had just drifted out of his sleep then due to the movement of the bench when she got up. He knew now he didn't have to follow her, she would come back... to him...



"What is that she is so scared to tell me about?", he contemplated.




That evening:



Anjali and Lavanya had expressed a desire to explore the palace. The north-wing was not completely done yet but there was a lake behind the Mahal on the north side that looked breathtaking. As Mehak played in the garden near the lake with Shyam and Arjun watching her, Anjali and Lavanya walked in with Arnav admiring the rustic interiors. Arnav started making a note of the renovations to be done on his IPad as he walked around.



A few of the rooms were empty with old furniture and paintings having been moved into a big living area by the workers. The three of them entered the north-wing living room appreciating the antique goods. Anjali and Lavanya planned to take a few of them to Raizada Mansion in Delhi. While they were dusting, Arnav's eyes caught something interesting- the portraits of royal families and Zamindars that owned Sheesh Mahal since it was built in 1500s.


There was a painting of an exquisite damsel standing sideways in front of a mirror with her back to the painting but the face was clearly depicted in the mirror. With a beatific smile, robed in a rich blue woven silk sari adorned with jasmines in her hair, she looked like a goddess. The thing that stopped Arnav's heart was the uncanny resemblance of the woman in the painting to his mystery girl.



"It is her, no doubt", Arnav was shocked, "But how?", "What is her painting doing here? and how is she related to the Mahal?"



The answer stared right at his face. There was an inscription with a name and details underneath the painting.



'Khushi Kumari Gupta'

1720 - 1739 AD




The world slipped beneath Arnav's feet. This can't be true... No, it can't be...Arnav was flabbergasted...




...Part-5 on Page 9...



Edited by SillyLisa - 8 years ago
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she died it must be her twin. she is not dead
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Wow very interesting update next soon
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Interesting i like it apdate soon
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I am hoping she is not a ghost. I thought so at first but is hoping it is not true and want them to be together. But he is married to La already. Wait to see what you are coming with.

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