RoSid/Aviman FF: Pyaar Kabhi Jukhta Nahi Complete FF

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi guyz ArishA here with my 9th ff concept...
Concept:
Roli live in curel village ...where laws are so bad and they hate love ...sid came their rosid meet with each other & fall in love know lets see whAT will happpenshow rosid get union in curel village which kill lovers if they get to know...

i hope u all like concept..
plz share your views...
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sheetal1979 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting concept ari first finish ur current ff soon and start this ff gud luck
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice concept dear waiting for updates but plz complete ur pending Ff first
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice concept dear. Pls start it but finish ur current ff then start it dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1:
Big Village thier laws are so strict & they hate love...
In this cruel village..
One beautiful soul..
Roli divedi lives.. Such sweet ,kind heart girl who just 20 year... Her father jamnala divedi cruel man & her mother was nice... Who loves her daughter after her son murder... His own father kill him as he love one girl... That time roli was just 6 years.. She saw her brother and that girl that in front of her eyes..
She got to afraid & say she never love someone... But know situation changes...
One handsome boy who just came fews days back in this village for research... He bump with roli.. Both had eye lock & after that roli run from their if anyone see them... But their heart lost.. Both fall in first eyelock...
Regularly sid meet with roli as in research.. But he just wanted to see her... Roli to liking his company...
Few days more spend..
Both start falling deeply..
Meena understand with roli behavior..
But roli afraid to confess as she knew what happens after that...
Sid call roli ..
He neel down and say..
Sidhant: I love you roli... She was shocked her body start shivering.. She can't saying anything..
Sid cup her face..
Sidhant:I know roli u afraid... What happens if village people know.. I know what happens with your brother... But trust me roli this time I won't let this happen trust me... Roli hug him...
Roli :I love you 2...I trust u but I am afraid I saw my brother dead with my eyes...
Roli hug him more tight...
Sidhant :sssh relax I am with u na...
After that roli went home... Where jamnal waiting for her with burning eyes...
Roli got afraid she hide behind meena.. Hold her tightly...
Jamnala came near her & slap her hardly she fell down.. Her lips start bleeding.. He grab her with hairs & drag her in room & lock her...
Give orders to goon to find sid...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2:
Roli crying in room.. Her fear going to be true... They kill her sidhant... Meena enter in room... Roli hug her..
Roli :maaa I love him.. They will kill him..
Meena: no beta this time history will not repeat... Go roli take this money & run with him... I lost my young son don't want to loss u... Plz run beta... Roli hug her & run...
She rush to sid...
Sid siting thinking about roli.. When he saw roli running towards him and crying.. Sid stand up roli hug him tightly...
Roli :let's run sidhant ji they coming to killing u..
Sidhant: relax roli (rub her back) tell me what happens...
Roli tell everything..
Roli :let's run sid ji they are coming...
Sid hold her hand & start walking but they surrender with so many goons...
Roli hold sid tightly came close to him... They take both with them... Where all big people group waiting for them...
Roli feeling afraid she hold sid more tight..
Jamnala to their.. He came near roli & about to slap her.. But sid hold his hand ...roli hide behind him... Holding him from back...
Jamnala partner in crime... Vijay Singh son suddenly came his name veeru... Roli saw him she got afraid more... Hold sid more tightly...
Vijay: veeru my sons.. Go & enjoyed her in front of his Ashq. ..first he got punshiment & then will kill him & u can have with roli forever.. Right jamnala?
Jamnala: yes right go beta. ...goon hold sid..
Sidhant: don't try to touch her ..I will kill u.
He went near roli she was shivering... Thier were so many mans.. Veeru pull her dupata & throw far...
Roli hiding from hand.. She was crying sid burning with anger..
Veeru hold her and push her floor... All looking this scene.. He removed his shirt.. Roli shouting taking sid name.. Veeru jump on roli...sid with great anger push all goons & grab veeru.. He beats him a lot...
Then hold roli she was shivering.. Looking at sid.. Sid took her dupata & cover her..
Jamnala took gun.. Aim on sid.. Roli hug him... They ready to died but together...
Jamnal shoot rosid both close eyes holding each other hand.. But they didn't died.. They saw meena came in front of them... Roli shouted maa.. Sid hold her...
Meena: take my daughter run from here go... Sid hold roli hand... Run...
Both run a lot...

Know let see...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow superb updates ari luvd it eagerly waiting what happen nxt
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Posted: 9 years ago
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fab updates ari loved it poor meena sacrificed her life for Rosid plz kill that veeru lets see how rosid will tackle it waiting for next eagerly update soon
Edited by himani_rosid - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 3:
Rosid both running they went in jungle they all behind them...
Both running badly...
After sometimes roli get tried...
Roli: sid ji... I can't walk more... I am feeling pain ...
Sidhant :roli just little more...
Both running their it's dark on jungle...roli get hurt on foot badly start bleeding... She fell down & scream..
Sidhant :roli are u ok?
Roli :sidhant it's paining... Sid took cloth & tie on wound.. But roli can't able to walk know ...she was in tears..
Sid wipe her tears & hols her in arms...
Start walking...

After long time they came far from that village... Rosid both are tried... It's to dark know...
Both sit under tree...
Roli feeling thirsty..
Sid took bottlet from bag... Make her drink...
She lean on sid shoulder...
She slowly slept... Sid not getting sleep... Roli fall on sid lap.. She feeling cold... Sid conver her with dupata... Caressing her hair...in morning sunrise hit on sid... Sid got up saw roli still sleeping but sun disturbing her sleep...
Sid keep hand blocking sun light...
Sid thinking let her sleep... Sid took her in arms start walking..
After sometimes roli get up...
Roli:sid ji I can walk... Let me down..
Sidhant :sssh I know u can't walk... Your whole foot got badly hurt baby.
Roli :but sid ji...
Sidhant:sssh baby we going na...after long struggle... They reached on some road ...due to weakness Roli get faint & saying pani pani... She didn't eat anything from 2 days..
Sid was so worried..
Sid saw little tea stall... Sid take roli thier & make her sit in bench... Order one water bottle.. 1 tea & two bread... So she can have something...
Sid sprinkle some water on roli face...
Make her drink water & then feed her bread dip on tea... Feeding her... Roli half sense..
Sid was in tears. ..
This all things old couple watching...
Both came near sid & asked with him...
He tell everything...
Old lady: u take this girl & came with us.. Until u can't went your place u take rest our house...
Sidhant :but how we?,
Old man :yes beta why not... She need rest look her conditions.. Sid take her thier house..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awww poor roli fainted sid is so cute & caring who is this old couple hope they r good & not devils he he just kidding waiting for next eagerly update soon

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