MADNESS IS BEAUTIFUL

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MADNESS IS BEAUTIFUL

Sagar "Aren't you scared?Tumhey darr nahen lag rahan hain?"

She just smiled "Everyday every hour whenever I am not busy with him."

Sagar "What happened to him he suddenly fainted?"

She "Mujhey bhee nahen patha.Aisa kabhee nahen huan usually when he stresses he will become sleepless. It is first time I am seeing this happening." Her face is yet covered by scarf completely hiding her rough scarred face .

Sagar "Huan kyaa hain.I mean its completely an unpredictable day . Viran kahan gayan hain abhee?"

Anusha "Who nahen aayega ussko patha hain kuch faidaa nahen hain yahan aakar."

Sagar "But they are brothers right ?"

Anu "Cousines ? Vikrant key papa aur Viran key papa bhai they.Vikrant key papa key marney key baad Vikrant ko uncle key pass he rehtha thaa." She is hiding but she is restless from inside .

Sagar " If you don't mind can I ask you a personal question."

Anusha "He is MAD." Smiling "Madness is beautiful"

Sagar " Madness and Beautiful?"

Anusha " I don't mind calling him that neither does he.He don't care what others speak of him and I learnt same .We are just made only for each other .Destiny always makes one for you."

Sagar " But he didn't look ,sorry even an ounce as mentally affected.But looks more caluculative,confident just perfect."

Anu "He planned todays meeting 243 days ahead .I just got to know today."

Sagar " Main kuch samjha nahen aap jo kehrahen hain jho Viran ney kahan aur jo main dekha there is no sinc at all."

Anusha "Vikrant's mind works non stop and more than any human being I know. He is smartest and genious. He just can't organize his brain ."

Sagar "Excuse me."

Anusha " If he speak for assume thirty minutes he will speak on 30 different topics same time in what ever order either related or unrelated ,he might be speaking of cricket and suddenly he will speak of cancer or Rajeev anup anything,you can even expect him to change languages.He can't or should'nt concentrate on a thing for long time."

Sagar "Really complicated ."

Anusha "Lot complicated ,no one understands him or his problem and he just lets them think what ever they think."

Sagar "Tho issey Vikrant sey communicate karney mey problem hogee na."

Anusha "Wohi tho ho rahan hain jabh who baath kartha hain no one understands what he is speaking as it doesn't make any sense and as usual he got branded mental,mad mental disorder who toh hain but ."

Sagar "Aap kaisey samajhtee hain phir."

Anusha "I wait and listen .I can understand and I don't have any other thing in life except him.I listen to his stories and I know everything or most of things he speak so I can understand."

Sagar "He spoke for almost halfa an hour on same topic today right before me ."

Anusha "He can concentrate but with a side effect.His brain has to do lot work to do so and it strains him lot and he could hardly sleep when he stresses his brain .I have seen him sleep almost for days continuously and it hurts a lot so I will do anything to avoid it."

Sagar " How does he speak with others then ."

Anu "He won't only me .He avoid speaking or speak as he wish no one bothers .He was outcast.Hummara ghar bhee city key bahaar hain no neighbours,no guests."

Sagar " But aap khush hain ."

Anusha "Life teaches best lessons .And taught me too .I know its value and it makes Vikrant most precious to me he will show hell and heaven at same time." Smiling.

Anusha " Ek baar ussney merey liyen love letter likha thaa ussey padney mey mujhey almost poora din laga tha samajhney mey."

Sagar "What ?Woh kyun ?"

Anusha "It was in two pages,I remember 3000 words .Almost 250 statements."

Sagar "Seriously aap yeh sabh count kar rahen thee."

Anusha "He wrote mixing 19 languages .Mujhey harr word ko google karna pada thaa."

Sagar "Kyaaa 19 languages."

Anusha "He can speak 21 languages but not in order."

Sagar "You are kidding right."

Anusha "Mera pass who letter ka photo bhee hain dekhiyen toh ." Showing him a picture in her mobile.

He burst to laugh after seeing that.

Sagar "Aapney kyaa kiyya usskey baad? It was romantic right."

Anusha "Aur jho mujhey poora din google karnaa pada usska. "

Sagar "But he is really unique .Aapka shaadi kaisey huyi thee .I mean is it love marriage or .No one marries a mad man knowing it"

Anusha "Love after marriage."

Anusha " I had choice too marry him or stay unmarried. Same way no one marries a woman with disfigured face like mine .Will you?"

Sagar stumbled to say .

Anusha "Never mind.I don't feel bad ."

Sagar "Aapko kyaa huaa thaa?I am sure koi accident hain right."

Anusha was silent remembering the horror of her life.

Anusha "I just survived .Lost so much.So much . and got him in return."

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Posted: 9 years ago
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very different concept all together and gripping too.
pls cont this pls. its a request.
a different and unique picture of life and representation of characters which makes u long for more updates.
thanks for the pm.
good to see u back after a long time.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2

Their attention was diverted by the opening of the door and doctor came out .Anusha instantly sprang to action to enquire about her husband.

Doctor " Stress key wajaha sey behosh huan hain . He need rest,abh who so rahen hain . Was he stressed for something koi problem ."

Anusha " Buisness problems .I will see that he get rested . Sorry, but when can you discharge him. He don't like hospital atmosphere. "

Doctor "He is looking alright ,but it is better to keep him in observation for a day or couple."

Anusha "Can I go and see him."

Doctor "Aap jaakey admission key formalities poorey keejiyen hum unhey room mey shift kaney key baad you can see."

Anusha "Thank you Doctor."

Anusha then went to finish formalities and Sagar waited near ward.

After few minutes in a ward room.

Anusha "Vikrant koi nahen hain uthsaktey hon."

Sagar was puzzled and surprised to see Vikrant opening eyes.

Anusha "Aap dariyen math ,Vikrant ko hospital sey allergy hain.What ever he is doing he will sprang up with that name."

Vikrant "You know that and you brought me to hospital."

Anusha "Nahen tho circus ley jaathey tumhey .Abh do din tak yahen rehna hoga don't do any drama."

Vikrant "Anu ek baar na Rajeev ko bhee jabartasthi hospital ley gaye they unknown to him."

Anusha "Jaanthee hun aur who bhaag gaya thaa wahan sey aur kissey ko mila nahen abh thak .Koshish bhee math karna donon taangey tood doongi."

Vikrant "Actually main soch rahan thaa kee kissey ney ussey kidnap kiyya hoga."

Anusha was puzzled this time "Rajeev ko koi kyon kidnap karega .I mean he is already in death list."

Sagar "Sorry to disturb ,but Rajeev koun hain?"

Anusha "Some story character Vikrant ka creation hain jabh jabh hospital aatha hain tabh unhey yaad aajatha hain."

Vikrant "Abh yaad aaya aapney merey deal key baarey mey kyaa socha."

Sagar "Sir it would be loss for us even to think of agreeing .Aap khudh hee sochiyen we just can't give you 25% venture for a building and some land.Who bhee office aur mess involve hoga .We have huge expenses hummara manufacturing hub hain shaayad IT hotha tho possibility hotha."

Vikrant "We have a wear house three KM away from port . Main ussey bathaana bhool gayan.Anu Laptop mey plan hain dikhaon." He stopped on track saying his statement shaking his head roughly.

Anusha "Vikrant main baath karthee hun you relax.Aur bathao Rajeev ka kya huan ."

Vikrant "Tumney death list bola tumhey Phantom wala story yaad hain .Usska bhee na hospital sey connection hain like he started killing from an hospital.Vijay bhee uss time peh waheey thaa."

Anusha "Lekin Vijay is innocent right he can't even argue and he is crippled." Saying opening his laptop .

Anusha "Kaunsa folder hain."

Vikrant " 243."

Anusha "Kyaa kiyya tumney yahan bhee kuch story likhaa hain .I told you na not ok ok story nahen hain ."

Anusha "Vikrant yahan tumhaarey alaawa kissey ko japaneese nahen aathe Russian bhee ,tamil bhee."

Vikrant "I wrote in English "

Anusha " Yup dikhney mey English hain lekin English mey spelling mistake sey bhee yeh word nahen hain."

Vikrant was acting as if he is doing some calculation " Anu han Klegowek bhee India aa chukka hain naa,ussey apney handler sey milna tha but abhee usska communication cut huan hain and he is trying to get back in communication with home ."

Same time some one knocked the door and Vikrant started acting asleep.

Doctor " Aap Dr Murthy ko jaatey hon kyaa, Charan Damodar Murthy."

Anusha "Han Vikrant ka personal doctor hain."

Doctor " Ok .mera unsey baath huin thee he suggested to Discharge him tomorrow."

Anusha " Unhoney koi medicine suggest kiyan hoga.I guess Sedatives."

Doctor " But aapko kaisey patha ?"

Anusha " It's the only medicine that works on Vikrant ,who bhee high dosage key wajaha sey."

Doctor just injected him with the medicine and gave some list to Anusha.Sagar was checking the files opened by Anusha related to same.

Sagar "Bingo .Its genious."

Anusha "Kyaa huan aap inney excited kyu ho." Still her eyes on her husband.

Sagar " He planned a lot big lot big."

Anusha is now checking the files or only map marked by Vikrant that is the only thing for them understandable.

Sagar " Aapney bathaaya nahen aapko Port key pass Store house hain .Mujhey nahen patha thaa .But it helps us a lot ,Pass mey control room hain security bhee aur road map shows we avoid much of the city almost like no traffic problems. Waisey capacity kitnee hain."

Anusha " 5 buildings hain but ,7 acre mey almost 4 toh buildings occupy kartey hain.You can see.Remaining Parking key gayen hain aur plantations." She was confused.

Sagar "Aapney yeh bathaaya nahen tha iss ware house key baarey mey."

Anusha "Mujhey bhee jyaada nahen patha thaa,I mean I never thought it was that important I thought Vikrant was giving it for rent pass mey Market bhee hain ."

Anusha was still dazed this building was also the part of mega plan .

Sagar "Sorry to ask but can I have a copy of this files , he actually made complete plan of the factory.Hummarey scale mey tho koi bhee factory fit ho sakta hain iss plan mey .I need to send it to my OR team to check validity and risks."

Anusha just gave him a go and he immediately mailed the files to his team to validate and caluculation.

Sagar is yet in shock for the depth it went having a ware house is not a big thing but having it in correct place makes wonder.

Sagar "Uss area mey aapka koi aur property hain kyaa."

Anusha "Hammara ghar bhee udhar hee hain I mean uss comond key corney mey but under construction hain."her face was strangely sad.

Sagar "Aapney tho kahan kee aapka ghar city key bahaar hain,but it is well within city."

Anusha "Puraana ghar bahaar thaa .Viren ka family ka thaa. We have to move out 3 months back."

Sagar "Aapney kahan under construction hain tho phir aap log "

Anusha "ware house mey hain wahen sab kuch."

She never understood her husbands obsession for ware house else she thought it was the work he did best most of his life so his preferred occupation even more priority than their own house.

Sagar "Aap apnee shaadi key baarey mey batha rahen thee."

Anusha "What ? han "





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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry for delay buddy
did'nt know that some one read
saw your comment yesterday
if have seen earlier would have posted sonner.


thankyou for reading and plz comment

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry for commenting late.
It was a really great update, filled with suspence.
Loving the way u r shaping up ur story.
It is so layered.
How many parts to go?? Is it a short one or u have decided to make it a ff??
Which ever u prefer but pls cont this even if u dont give updates regularly.

R u in hangouts or fb. Coz often I dont visit my pm inbox and I dont want to miss any updates in case u have pm ed me and i failed to notice.

Anyways pls do cont soon. Have a gud day.
Edited by utsha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am in FB with name SAKIV RAM
same profile pic as of forums
yes I also update story there
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Posted: 9 years ago
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oh ok thanks for ur reply.
i will add ur id.
pls update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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oh ok thanks . I will add ur id.
pls cont soon

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