Rosid/aviman ff:DIL DE DO YAAR - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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super start dear waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I think I can't saw roli character like this in any previous ffs very different her parents want marry that guy they selected is that guy is sid and how her parents stop her to not go canada eagerly waiting for nxt but dear try to give updates soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow, Roli is looking interesting...is gauri a good stepmother?or usual type?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So awesome start different roli character waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting dear different character of roli in this ff the guy is sid or someone else waiting for next update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you for your response guys and I am glad that you people like this...and yeah I am trying to show it in a very different way or you guys may even think I am crazy...yeah I am crazy after all I am a rosidian...don't think too much guys...groom is not our Sid...now I am typing next part of this...soon I will update next part...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: tatmantad

Thank you for your response guys and I am glad that you people like this...and yeah I am trying to show it in a very different way or you guys may even think I am crazy...yeah I am crazy after all I am a rosidian...don't think too much guys...groom is not our Sid...now I am typing next part of this...soon I will update next part...

oh God di plz I will get mad groom not sid OMG then who what is this suspence plz revealed soon otherwise I get mad
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: tatmantad

Thank you for your response guys and I am glad that you people like this...and yeah I am trying to show it in a very different way or you guys may even think I am crazy...yeah I am crazy after all I am a rosidian...don't think too much guys...groom is not our Sid...now I am typing next part of this...soon I will update next part...

oh no not sid then whom we'll wait
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part:2

Jamnanlal: you are not going anywhere roli...and that's final...and you are marrying to gauri's brother and that too within this week...and that's final...

Roli: wake up from your dreams dad...this lady is manipulating you a lot...and you Mrs.gauri jamnanlal dwivedi...I am not going to fall into your cheap tricks...stay away from my pappa...mind you I am not the one whom you think to play...

Jamnanlal: roli...hold your tongue and think before you talk to whom you are talking...

Roli: I know very well to whom I am talking pappa...I am not a kid to not able know about person's mind set and let me remind you pappa...I have studied psychology and I can very well try to read people's mindset that too these kind of cheap people...no more discussions pappa...I am leaving tomorrow and that's final...I am tiered I am going to my room...dare anyone to disturb me...

Saying this roli left to her room but not before giving an angry look at gauri...and banged her rooms door...

House were complete silence after the earthquake felt servants...jamnanlal and gauri also left to their rooms...

Later at night...

All had silent dinner...jamnanlal determined in marrying roli to gauri's brother and roli determined in going back to Canada...

It's night...everyone were sleeping in their respected rooms...

Roli heard knock on her rooms door...she slowly woke up and opened the door...and surprised to find on of their maid...but roli never considered her as maid and always treated her as just like her mom...


Roli: aayiyena maa...(come inside maa)...why are you here this late night without sleeping...?

Maid: I wanna talk to you roli beta...

Roli: sorry maa...in this tension I really forgot to talk to you...how are you..? Is she treating you badly...?

Maid: no beta...nothing to worry I am fine...but i am worried for you...I just now heard that your visa has been cancelled...and I am sure it's been done by him...

Roli: what..? How can it be possible..?that too without consulting me...?

Roli immediately took her mobile and dailed Canada embassy...and shut her mobile in shock that it's true that her visa has been cancelled...

Maid: what happened beta..?

Roli: it's true maa...my visa got cancelled...and it will take long time get a new visa...atleast 10/20 days...

Maid: but beta...you don't know about that wick veeru...he will do anything to marry you...

Roli: no maa...this will not happen...I will never be his...maa help me...I just want to move out if this house...that too today...in fact now...

Maid: but roli...do you even know anything about Delhi...? I mean you don't even know the address of your own house...Malkin had brought you up in such a way that you never got any chance to know about outer world...whatever you need will be just fulfilled in minutes...but I am scared now roli...due to his pampering now you are going to face difficult situations...

Roli: don't worry maa...I will take care of my self...just help me out from here...

Next morning...

Roli Walked lifelessly on the road thinking about something strong...

She was hit by a vehicle strongly...

Roli was badly hurt and was bleeding...she was almost mere death...

Few road side people have admitted roli in hospital...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
wow dear...fab concept with excellent narration ...twists r really shocking!!...very very very interesting...what abt ROLI's condition now?

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