Arshi FF: The Broken Hearts ( NEW LINK ADDED) pg 151

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chinnulu

@chinnulu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#711

Nice update

Loved it

These are their last moments spend together. During the six months separation, something happens which will be their permanent one. Khushi is feeling bad to see her chain broken which was given by Arnav. Waiting for the next one.

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Greyasr

@Greyasr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#712

Too good and very well expressed both their thinking and styles

Edited by Greyasr - 8 years ago

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Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#713

Awsm update

Loved it

Beautifully penned their thoughts and convo!!

Loved the ending quote!!

* sometimes you have to let go to see if there was anything worth holding on to*

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Sowmiya

@anu5

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Posted: 8 years ago

#714

Waiting for the next update

Thank you for the pm!!😊

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Aishu

@Aishu136

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Posted: 8 years ago

#715

Just loved their whole meet!

I must admit you're last line * sometimes you have to let go to see if there was anything worth holding on to* made me cry:(

Khushi is no typical girlfriend demanding things rather being with him and understanding him but Arnav being more focused on his carrier!!

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1076334

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#716

hope that the separation is just for 6 months.

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 8 years ago

#717

Superb part.. loved it..

thanks for pm 😊

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Manasa

@ManKiBaath

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Posted: 8 years ago

#718

It was an emotional update right from the start with Khushi getting into an accident, to when Arnav announced his relocation to Mumbai. Though loved the sprinkles of few light hearted moments in between - the one at the hospital, and Arnav taking care of Khushi.

But I should say that you have been very true to your promised roller coaster ride at the beginning of the story, and I'm guessing the moment has arrived with this separation. Eagerly waiting for the next update.

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surya

@unnik7

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Posted: 8 years ago

#719

Nice and sad update.. I am getting some negative vibes..

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Aakanksha

@ina_saahil

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Posted: 8 years ago

#720

Loved the updates.

It was good to see that Arnav and Khushi were moving ahead in their relationship. The entire time they were in the mela it was a blissful period for both of them.

And then the concern which Arnav showed for Khushi when she got hurt was sweet. It's true that he loves her. But then fate had to intervene and Arnav informed Khushi that he has to move to Mumbai branch for growth of his career. And obviously Khushi loves him and couldn't be selfish so they both accepted this decision.

But then in the end you mentioned that the chain Arnav had gifted Khushi broke and what Arnav said after that made me realise that it was too deep. The chain was delicate thatis why it got stuck and broke. And their relationship can be symbolised as chain. They too are at a very delicate stage of their relationship. So lets see whether this relationship would survive the test of time.

Lots Of Love..😊😊