Kuchh Rang Pyar ke Aise bhii - RaiNa ff thread 1

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

rkchandni

@rkchandni

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: PriyaCherry
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was so Interesting FF.😊
The Character Sketch was so Nice and Interesting.😊
The Concept is so Different.😊
Please Continue soon.😊
__________________________________
(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaCherry.

Thanku so much Priya

Quote

rkchandni

@rkchandni

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: anju_panghal
yippiii another ff on RN
nice intro...all characters are just awesome👏
eagerly waiting 4 d first part...pls update soon n all d best👍🏼

n pls do PM me whenever u update 😊

Sure dear I will surely PM u thanku so kuchh dear

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

rkchandni

@rkchandni

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: sonamiglesias
RN ff is always welcome 😊 ...interesting concept n nice into...

Thanku Suman dear

Quote

.FlyingClouds.

@.FlyingClouds.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Your character sketch is amazing!!👏

Plz cont soon and pm me..

Quote

rkchandni

@rkchandni

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.
Your character sketch is amazing!!👏
Plz cont soon and pm me..

Thanku aditi

Quote

Mrumi

@Mrumi

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

wow.. new RN ff.. party time..🥳🥳

exciting characters and i am so much excited for story also..

give update soon.. thanks for PM...😊

Quote

rkchandni

@rkchandni

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Mrumi
wow.. new RN ff.. party time..🥳🥳
exciting characters and i am so much excited for story also..

give update soon.. thanks for PM...😊

Thanks dear will update on Tuesday

Quote

rkchandni

@rkchandni

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

hello every one... thankyou so much for appreciating the character sketech... i was said i will post on tuesday... but m here to post part 1 of this fic... hope so u will all enjoy it...
keep reading and keep smiling always...

love... Chandni...

Quote

rkchandni

@rkchandni

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

*** Kuchh Rang Pyar Ke Aise bhi...***

Part 1

pyar me lipte kitne... rang mile...
dekhe... kabhi wo rang...
jo... kabhi na mile...
kuchh rang pyar ke, aise bhi...
kuchh rang pyar ke, aise bhi...
kuchh rang pyar ke, aise bhi...
kuchh rang pyar ke, aise bhi...

pyar me lipte kitne... rang mile...
dekhe... kabhi wo rang...
jo... kabhi na mile...
kuchh rang pyar ke, aise bhi...
kuchh rang pyar ke, aise bhi...
kuchh rang pyar ke, aise bhi...
kuchh rang pyar ke, aise bhi...
aiseee... bhiii...

Moritious...

moritious me kareeb dopahar ka waqt hai... ek ladki apne room me dressing table ke saamne baithi hai... usne red aur black color ki half netted saree pehen kar rakhi hai... uske maathe me sindoor hai... kaano me bade - bade daimond ke earings gale me daimond ka simple but elegant sa neck less... mathe pe ek pyari si red color ki stoned bindi... khule baal... kisi pari se koi kam nahi lag rahi thi yeh ladki... par yeh kya... kitani khubsurat si aankhien hai... par in aakhon me yeh moti ki tarah aanshun...? par kyun...?... aise aanshun jo rukne ka naam nahi le rahe... bas uski aankhon se nikal kar uske laal gulaab ki pankhudiyon jaise honthon ko bhigo rahe the... par yeh apne hanth me kya dekh rahi hai... hum thoda aur kareeb jakar dekhte hai to yeh ladki koi aur nahi Naina hai... ha Mrs Naina Rajveer Singh Shekhawat... par jo kabhi Miss Naina Singh Alhuwalia thi... naina apne hathon me liye hue apne mangalsutra ko dekh rahi hai... uski nazare apne us toote hue mangal sutra par tiki hui hai... wo apni aakhien dard se band karti hai ki, uska ek aanshun uske mangal sutra par girta hai... tabhi uska cell ring karta hai... wo uth kar apna cell pick karti hai... uske honthon me dard bhari muskaan aa jati hai...

naina:- ji bhabhi kahiye...

ritu:- naina kaisi hai... tu theek to hai na...? aur Rajveer wo kaisa hai... tum dono enjoy to kar rahe ho na...?.. naina main tere liye bahut khush hu... tere saare sapne pure ho gaye... bus ab bhagwaan se yahi duaa hai, ki tu humesha khush rahe... are dekh na main kab se bole ja rahi hun aur tu hai ki kuchh bol hi nahi rahi hai... bata na...

naina ( wiping her tears... and with fake smile...) :- ha bhabhi... ab aap mujhe kuchh bolne de to na main kuchh bolun... ab suniye... main bilkul theek hun... raj bhi bilkul theek hai... aur hum na is waqt beach site pe hai... raj to mere bagal me hi baithe hai...(apne charo ore ki viraani ko dekhti hai) mujhe moritious bahut achha laga... sach me bhabhi... mere saare sapne pure kar rahe hai raj...

ritu:- chal bahut achha hai... wo kya hai na... naveen ko teri bahut fikra ho rahi thi... par ab jab main unhe bataungi na... to wo bahut khush ho jayeinnge tere liye... waise is waqt beach pe...

naina:- ha bhabhi... mera man hua na... to bas aise hi... achha bhabhi... ( looking at her empty side... with tears...) dekhiye main aapse baat karne me busy hun na to raj chhid rahe hai... ab main rakhti hun...

ritu:- naina teri awaaz...?

naina:- are bhabhi... network me bhi problem hai... byee bhabhi...

ritu:- ok byee... take care...

dono hi phone cut kar deti hai... jahan ritu ke chehre pe ek smile thi... ek satisfaction tha... wahi naina ke chehre aur aankhon me sirf aur sirf dard... naina phone ko bed par fek deti hai... aur wahi bed ke neeche zameen me baith jati hai... apne toote hue mangal sutra ko dekhte hue rone lagti hai... naina us mangal sutra ko apne seene se laga leti hai... aur bas roye ja rahi thi... naina ka forehead uske knees par tika hua tha... ki naina apna sir utha kar saamne ki table par dekhti hai... jahan rajveer aur naina ki ek wedding pic rakhi hai.. naina ki nazar rajveer ke chehre pe thi... usne apne palke zore se band ki... aur use kuchh yaad aaya... jo sayad abhi kuchh samay pehle hi is room me hua tha...

**********************************************************

Naina REMEMBERS...

naina washroom se khushi - khushi taiyaar hokar bahar aati hai... bahut hi khubsurat lag rahi thi naina... ki uski nazar saamne sofe me baithe rajveer par padi... usne black trouser, black shirt aur back jacket pehna tha... uski aankhien laal thi... aur wo drink pe drink kar raha tha... smoke bhi kar raha tha... naina hairaan ho gayi... aur dheere se rajveer ke pass gayi... rajveer jo ek aur peg apne honthon se lagaane wala tha... naina ne uska hath pakad lia aur use roka... rajveer apni laal aankhon se naina ke us hanth ko dekhta hai jisse naina ne uska hath pakda tha... aur fir naina ko...

naina:- raj yeh aap kya kar rahe hai...? aap is tarah... drink... aap to normally nahi peete... aur hum to yahan... ( rajveer gusse se naina ka hath jhatak deta hai...)...

rajveer:- meri marzi main jo chahe karu... maine tumhe kuchh kaha...? kuchh karne se roka maine tumhe...? jo tum mujhe yun...

naina:- raj aap aise kyun... raj hum yahan humare honey moon pe aaye hai... humari zindagi ki nayi suruaat raj... humara pyar hi to humari saadi ki buniyaad hai... aur jahan pyar hota hai... wahan yeh sab nahi raj... chaliye chhodiye... dekhiye main itane achhe se ready hui hun... chaliye na kahin gumne chalte hai... ( naina ne rajveer ka hanth fir pakda... par rajveer ne uska hath fir jhatak diya...naina ko aaj apne raj ka behaviour kuchh alag sa... kuchh badla - badla lag raha tha... jahan ek taraf wo hairaan thi... wahi... hurt bhi... par fir bhi usne shant man se bat ki... wo apna knees ke bal pe baith gayi... aur apne hanth rajveer ke thighs pe rakh kar boli...) raj kya baat hai...? koi pareshaani hai kya...? raj mana pehle baat alag thi... pehle hum pati patni nahi the... par ab to hum saath janmo ke bandhan me bandh chuke hai... aur main chahti hun ki... humare is rishte ki buniyaad sirf pyar aur vishwaas par ho... aur ab to main aapki ardhangini bhi hun na... to yeh mera farz aur mera haq dono hai ki main aapki problems me aapke sath khadi rahu... rajveer bas naina ki baaton ko sun raha hai... ki achanak se use kuchh yad aaya... aur uska gussa badh gaya... usne naina ka hath uski elbow se pakda aur use zor se deewar ki ore push kiya... naina dar si gayi... rajveer ne naina ko bahut hi kash ke pakda tha... naina ko pain bhi ho raha tha... rajveer ne naina ko deewar se tika kar... dono side se apne hathon se use block kar diya... rajveer(gusse se with blood shoted eyes):- bas... bahut sun li tumhari bakwaas... socha tha... yahan shanti se din kat jayeinge.. par nahi... tum apni in faltu baaton se aisa hone nahi dogi... so miss naina sigh aluhwalia... let me clear to you one thing... right here... right now... ki... I Dont Love You... ( dhamaake on naina's face...)... nahi karta main tumse pyar... maine tumse shadi ki... becz I Hate You the most...( again dhamaake on naina's face...)... sabse jyada nafarat... is puri kaynaat me kisi ne kisi se itani nafarat nahi ki hogi jitani nafarat main tumse karta hun... pyar mohabbat jaisi baatien ab is Rajveer ki zindagi me koi mayne nahi rakhti... pyar mohabbat aur ishq jaise lafzo se mera bharosha uth chuka hai... nafarat hai mujhe tumse... had se jyada...sab se jyada... loge toot kar mohabbat karte hai na... main tumse toot kar nafarat karta hun... aur karta rahunga... (dhamaake on naina's face...)... to yeh jo sapne dekh rahi ho na... keep dreaming... becz yeh sapne kabhi pure nahi honge... aur main yahi chahta hun ki tum tuto.. tumhara har ek sapna toot jaaye... tab sayad mere dil me jal rahi is aag ko thodi si shaanti milegi... na chahte hue bhi naina ke sath - sath rajveer ki aankhon me bhi aanshun the... rajveer jhatke se naina se door hua... ki raj ke jacket ke button me fas kar naina ka mangal sutra toot gaya... aur rajveer ki button par latak gaya... naina shocked khadi thi... rajveer ne magalsutra ko apni button se nikala... aur naina ka hath jhatke se pakad kar uske hath me rakh kar bahar ki ore jane laga... ki naina ki awaaz se ruka...

naina:- jab itna sab bata hi diya hai to yeh bhi bata dijiye ki ab tak jo maine mehsoos kiya tha... jo aapki aankhon me dekha tha... wo sab... wo sab kya...?

rajveer ( in a very rude tone):- natak tha... sab jhuth...(dhamaake on naina's face...)...

naina:- kyun...?... kyun kiya yeh sab...?

rajveer:- naina singh aluhwalia... tum itani bewkoof to ho nahi... khud shamajh jaao... aur rajveer hotel se bahar chala gaya...naina apne mangalsutra ko apne hath me liye hue... dressing table pe aakar baith gayi... aur bas use hi dekhe ja rahi hai...

**********************************************************

abhi thodi der pehle hi naina ke saare sapne toot gaye,... ya yun kaha jaaye ki naina hi toot gayi thi... jis insaan ko jaan se jyada chaha tha naina ne... aaj wahi insaan use aise chhod kar chala gaya... kyun yeh to use bhi nahi pata... naina ko samajh nahi aa raha tha ki rajveer usse nafarat aakhir kyun karta hai... aur wo bhi itani nafarat ki us nafarat ki aag me usne naina ke sath kahin na kahin khud ko bhi jala lia tha... ha kyuki is shadi se rajveer khush nahi hai... rajveer to ek aisa ladka hai... ek aisa naam hai ki hindustaan ki na jaane kitani ladkiyaan uske sath hone ko humesha se taiyar hai... to fir kyun...? rajveer ne sirf is ek shabd '' NAFARAT'' ke liye apni zindagi bhi daav par laga rakhi hai... kyun...?... aakhir kyun...? ab sayad isi sawaal ka zawaab naina ko dhundhna tha... naina apni jagah se uth kar jati hai aur us pic ko utha kar window ki taraf chali jati hai... us pic me rajveer ka face dekhti hai... naina ki aankhon se ek aanshun rajveer ke face par girta hai... naina apni fingers se rajveer ke face ko touch kar rahi thi... aur bahar asmaan ki ore dekh rahi thi... jahan khula aasmaan tha... mausam bahut haseen tha... par yahan ander to baarish ho rahi thi... ha naina ki aankhon se sirf baarish hi ho rahi thi... uska dil ek tufaan me fasa hua tha... uska badan kaanp raha tha... aur naina... baarish me kisi raste me pade bejaan paththar ki tarah khadi hai...

Here at Beach side...

ek ladka ek bade se rock ke upar baitha hai... aur kuchh cells utha kar beech paani me feke ja raha hai... thoda kareeb jakar dekhne me pata chalta hai ki yeh koi aur nahi rajveer hai... jiski aankhon me sirf gussa tha... uske chehre se uske mann ka haal saaf pata chal raha tha...usne gusse se apni aakhien band karli... aur use kuchh yad aaya...

**********************************************************

Rajveer REMEMBERS...

naina:- raj... mujhe samajh nahi aa raha tha ki bhaiya ne aise kyun react kiya... but u dont worry.. main hun na...

rajveer:- ha tum ho na... mujhe kya fikra... ( achanak se barish suru ho jati hai...)... oh no... i hate rains...

naina:- i love rains... raj gadi rokiye... na plzz...

rajveer:- no naina...

naina:- raj gadi rokiye warna main kood jaungi...

rajveer:- what are u mad...?

naina:- raj plzz...

rajveer:- ok... ok...( raj stops the car...)...

naina car se bahar aati hai... aur barish me khelne lagti hai...

rajveer:- naina what are u doing plzz come inside...

naina:- nooo... mujhe enjoy karne dijiye plz...

naina apni baahien fayla kar barish ko apni bahon me samet rahi hai... rajveer ko na jaane kya hua... wo bhi car se bahar nikal gaya... aur gadi ke take laga kar khada ho gaya... aur naina ko dekhe ja raha tha... dono hi puri tarah se barish me bheeg chuke the... jaise hi naina yeh dekhti hai ki rajveer bahar hai... wo rajveer ke saamne jakar apna hath aage karti hai... rajveer naina ke hath me apna hath automatically de deta hai... wo ab bhi bas naina ki aankhon me hi dekh raha tha... naina aur raj us sunsaan road par kareeb 1 minute tak couple dance karte hai... ki achanak se bijali ki awaaz aati hai... aur naina dar jati hai... aur rajveer ko hug kar leti hai... rajveer ko hose aata hai... wo na chahte hue bhi naina ko consol karne ke liye use apni bahon me chhipa leta hai...

naina:- raj mujhe bijali ki awaaz se bahut dar lagta hai...

rajveer:- its ok naina main hun na...

naina rajveer se thoda se door hoti hai... aur rajveer ki aankhon me dekhti hai...

naina:- ha aap ho na... mujhe har ek muskil se bachaane ke liye.. hai na...?..( rajveer just smiles a little...)...

rajveer:- chale...?... ( raj turns to open the door... but naina held his one hand...)...

naina:- raj aap humesha mera sath doge na...? yunhi har ghadi meri hifazat kareinge na...?

rajveer:- naina...

naina:- kya hua... boliye na...?

rajveer:- kabhi - kabhi kuchh batien bina kahe samajh jaani chahiye... kuchh batien shabdo ki mohtaaz nahi hoti... ab chale we are getting late... ( rajveer driving seat par baith jata hai...)...

naina in her mind:- ha sahi kaha aapne... par kuchh baton ko izhaar ki aur shabdo ki zarurat padti hai raj... kyunki... kabhi - kabhi... izhaar na karne par bahut kuchh adhura reh jata hai... ( rajveer presses the horn jisse naina apne hose me aati hai... aur aakar front seat pe baith jati hai... and rajveer drove away...)...

**********************************************************

rajveer apni aakhien kholta hai... aur na chahte hue bhi uski aankhien aaj uska sath nahi de rahi thi... we chhalak hi gayi... aur aanshun rajveer ki aankhon se nikal kar galo se guzar kar apna rasta bana rahe the...

for naina:-
oh...ooo...ohhh...hmmm...
wo mile the... yun mile the...
dekhne... bas unhe...
waqt bhi ruk gaya...
wo pyar tha...
chhune jise...
ek pal, ke liye...
aasmaa jhuk gaya...
( naina apni aakhien kholti hai... uski aankhon ka dard saaf - saaf uska haal - e - dil bata raha tha...)

par zindagi...
yeh aitbaar...
aaye magar...
bas ek baar...
kuchh rang pyar ke aise bhi... aise bhiii...
( naina bas rajveer ki tasveer ko dekhe ja rahi hai... na jaane bin bole kitani baatein kitani sikayatein kar rahi hai...)

for rajveer & naina :-
wo mile the... yun mile the...
dekhne... bas unhe...
waqt bhi ruk gaya...
wo pyar tha...
chhune jise...
ek pal, ke liye...
aasmaa jhuk gaya...
par zindagi...
yeh aitbaar...
aaye magar...
bas ek baar...
kuchh rang pyar ke aise bhi... aise bhiii...
kuchh rang pyar ke aise bhi... aise bhiii...
aiseee... bhiii...
( ek taraf naina bas rajveer ke bare me soch rahi hai... to dusri taraf rajveer bhi sirf aur sirf naina ke baare me soch raha tha... uski nafarat kyun kabhi - kabhi itani kamzor pad jati hai... yeh use khud nahi pata tha...)naina to herself:- kyun - kyun hua yeh sab...? akhir kya galti hai meri jo...? yeh sab...!!

rajveer:- in sab ki suruaat ek saal pehle hui thi... jab main naina se pehli bar mila tha.. kabhi socha nahi tha ki... yeh sab hoga... aur aaj main aur naina jahan khade hai... wahan se koi U turn hi nahi hai...

dono hi apne - apne khayalon me ek saal pehle ki yaadon me kho jate hai... jaha se is kahani ki suruaat hui thi... ya yeh kaha jaaye... is pyar ki suruaat...

kareeb 1 Saal Pehle...

Delhi... Alhuwalia mansion...

End of Part 1
press like if u really liked it
do comment
love Chandni
**********************************************************************

Edited by rkchandni - 9 years ago