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Posted: 18 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: avantika_4ever
if ur not gonna continue like u noe 2day or tommorow try giving us an promo 😳

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lolz 😆

imma post a promo but i really want to post 1 more part and then i'll post a promo, if i dun post a part soon i promise that i'll post a promo 😊

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hello64

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Posted: 18 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: brainychild92
awesome. i like ur KARTHIK..i am a BIGGG fan of hiten. 😳

well cant wait till ur looonngg part..
and charecters are kool i like ur aliyah the best out of the ones from the show too

thx 😊

i'm a big hiten fan 2 😳

I love this alliaya 2 shes frum solhan singaar on sahara one 😊

kanwer 😳

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hello64

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Posted: 18 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: me_iq
nice hun....cont soooooooon 😳 😳 😳

thanx 😳

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hello64

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Posted: 18 years ago

#114

Next part in a bit! 😊

Kanwer 😳

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hello64

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Posted: 18 years ago

#115

*~Mera Pyar-Part 2~*

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Kripa danced her heart out that night. She loved the rain and this was her one chance to have some fun and smile. Kripa was dancing when the rain suddenly stopped. She once again grew sad and sat on the ground of her balcony. The wind was cold and the night was dark. Kripa sat there feeling the cold wind brush against her body. She looked over to the Khanna mansion and closed her eyes wondering what Alliaya would be doing.
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It was only 9:30 at night and Angad Khanna was lying on his bed exhausted and thinking about that girl. He shifted his eyesight out towards the Sharma residence and saw a girls just simply sitting there. "She seems cold….."He thought. He Shifted his eyes towards the roof of his room and closed his eyes and repeated the words, "I want her and I will get her." He smiled to the thought and fell asleep for the first time… so early in the night.
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Kripa was sitting there on her balcony feeling… Sticky. So she got up and went inside. She pulled out her nightwear and went to the bathroom to take a shower. She took off her clothes and stood under the relaxing shower and showered her hair and body. She came out smelling like French Lavender with a hint of Vanilla. She smiled and put on her nightwear. She slipped on some ankle sock and put her feet into some warm slippers. She walked out of the bathroom looking like a cute little girl:

It was a hot november night so she decided not to wear her robe so she grabbed her cell phone:

And walked down the stairs and went straight towards the kitchen. She looked through all the cupboards and well found nothing but granola bars and nutritious foods. She felt a gust of anger come upon her and she started to swear. She turned around and found Teddy looking at her. She turned pink and silently spoke, "Do we have any food?"
Teddy was surprised on her choice of attire but he ignored it. "Yes, we have…." Teddy spoke but was cut off by Kripa.
"Do you have any junk food?" Kripa asked.
"No, sorry ma….. I mean Kripa. Mr. Sharma doesn't allow those types of foods in this house." Teddy stated.
Kripa's mouth dropped open and she began to speak, "WHAT DO YOU MEAN!!!!!!!!!!!!," She shouted at him.
"Kr…" Teddy began to speak.
"NO! I WANT YOU TO GO OVER TO THE NEAREST GROCERY STORE AND GET EVERY FLAVOR, EVERY BRAND OF CHIPS, COOKIES, BURGERS, POPCORN, CANDY, AND ICE-CREAM AND CHOCOLATE. PLEASE DON'T FORGET THE CHOCOLATE!"
"But…" Teddy began.
"NOW... umm…Teddy wait. I'm sorry, I'm just a little stressed out but can you please go now and get all that stuff…please?" Kripa spoke to teddy and convinced him.
Teddy left and kripa fell on the leather couch and looked at the TV. She looked around for movies but found absolutely nothing. She frowned and picked up her cell. She turned it on and she called Alliaya. The phone rang a few times and then some one finally picked up.
"KRIPA KI BACHI! WHY THE HELL DIDN'T YOU CALL EARLER! DO YOU KNOW HOW WORRIED I HAVE BEEN? URGH……. AND YOUR CELL WAS ****** OFF!" Alliaya yelled at kripa and kripa simply smiled.
"Okay, Okay sorry. But, I can make up for it. You're coming over right now!
"For what?" Alliaya asked.
"For a slumber party! Bring movies and leave the rest to me. Be here by 10:00" Kripa stated to Alliaya.
"but…" Alliaya spoke but was cut off.
"Kripa nay jo Kehdiya so Kehdiya" She smiled to herself and turned off her cell.
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Alliaya changed into her nightsuit:

She got her toothbrush and put on her robe, slippers and some ankle socks. She tip-toed downstairs and walked out the front door. She walked slowly through the garden to get to Kripa's house.
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Kripa was soooooo happy that Alliaya was coming. The living room was full of all kinds of food and popcorn. Kripa didn't want to wake anyone up so she stepped out of her house and waited for alliaya. She saw a figure in the distance and ran towards it. It was none other than Alliaya they hugged and departed. Kripa told Alliaya how Josh and she didn't patch up and Alliya told her to stand up for herself. Kripa agreed and gave Alliaya another hug. Kripa and Alliyaya walked into the Sharma residence and there night had begun.
Kripa pulled Aliaya into the living room and she screamed FOOD!!!!!!!!The girls laughed. They cranked up the music and started dancing there night away. Then the girls favourite song came on, "Hips don't lie" by Shakira and Kripa got an idea. They had a dance competition. To the song:

Ladies up in here tonight
No fighting, no fighting
We got the refugees up in here
No fighting, no fighting

Shakira, Shakira

I never really knew that she could dance like this
She makes a man wants to speak Spanish
Como se llama (si), bonita (si), mi casa (si, Shakira Shakira), su casa
Shakira, Shakira

Oh baby when you talk like that
You make a woman go mad
So be wise and keep on
Reading the signs of my body

And I'm on tonight
You know my hips don't lie
And I'm starting to feel it's right
All the attraction, the tension
Don't you see baby, this is perfection

Hey Girl, I can see your body moving
And it's driving me crazy
And I didn't have the slightest idea
Until I saw you dancing

And when you walk up on the dance floor
Nobody cannot ignore the way you move your body, girl
And everything so unexpected - the way you right and left it
So you can keep on shaking it

I never really knew that she could dance like this
She makes a man want to speak Spanish
Como se llama (si), bonita (si), mi casa (si, Shakira Shakira), su casa
Shakira, Shakira

Oh baby when you talk like that
You make a woman go mad
So be wise and keep on
Reading the signs of my body

And I'm on tonight
You know my hips don't lie
And I am starting to feel you boy
Come on lets go, real slow
Don't you see baby asi es perfecto

Oh I know I am on tonight my hips don't lie
And I am starting to feel it's right
All the attraction, the tension
Don't you see baby, this is perfection
Shakira, Shakira

Oh boy, I can see your body moving
Half animal, half man
I don't, don't really know what I'm doing
But you seem to have a plan
My will and self restraint
Have come to fail now, fail now
See, I am doing what I can, but I can't so you know
That's a bit too hard to explain

Baila en la calle de noche
Baila en la calle de da

Baila en la calle de noche
Baila en la calle de da

I never really knew that she could dance like this
She makes a man want to speak Spanish
Como se llama (si), bonita (si), mi casa (si, Shakira Shakira), su casa
Shakira, Shakira

Oh baby when you talk like that
You know you got me hypnotized
So be wise and keep on
Reading the signs of my body

Senorita, feel the conga, let me see you move like you come from Colombia

Mira en Barranquilla se baila as, say it!
Mira en Barranquilla se baila as

Yeah
She's so sexy every man's fantasy a refugee like me back with the Fugees from a 3rd world country
I go back like when 'pac carried crates for Humpty Humpty
I need a whole club dizzy
Why the CIA wanna watch us?
Colombians and Haitians
I ain't guilty, it's a musical transaction
No more do we snatch ropes
Refugees run the seas 'cause we own our own boats

I'm on tonight, my hips don't lie
And I'm starting to feel you boy
Come on let's go, real slow
Baby, like this is perfecto

Oh, you know I am on tonight and my hips don't lie
And I am starting to feel it's right
The attraction, the tension
Baby, like this is perfection

No fighting
No fighting

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Josh opened his eyes and heard LOUD music. He assumed it was coming from Angad's house and angrily went back to bed.
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Angad also opened his eyes and heard the music he was really mad. "Who would be having a party 1 in the morning and that too without Angad khanna" He went back to bed trying to forget that there was a party going on.
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After hours of dancing and eating the whole place was a MESS! Allaiya decided it was about time the girls played some Antakshari.

"Kripa, come lets play Antakshari, you're a great singer… please" alliya smiled her sweetest smile and Kripa instantly agreed.
"How could I say no to my best friend?" She smiled.

The first person to start was Alliaya:

Oh meri tamana, bin tera chaan kahin na
Ayaa mudja sakooooon
Junoon junoon junoon junoon
junoon junoon junoon junooooon

the girls laughed at Alliaya choice of song the girls kept playing until it was 3:00 in the morning

"Alliaya lets go to sleep please"
"Okay, but one song and u have to sing the whole thing."
"NO!"
" Then I'm leaving" Alliaya got up when Kripa stopped her.
"ALLIYA! What song?" Kripa said.
Alliaya smiled and sat back down she looked at kripa and said, "the letter was D so choose but it has to be hindi."
"Okay….ummmmm

Kripa finally came up with a song. It was Humko Maloom Hai from Jaan-e-man.

mohabbaton mein marnewale bhi ajeeb hai
ajim hai hamari dastaan jaan-e-man
faaslon pe rehte hai lekin kareeb hai

hamko maalom hain ishq masoom hain
dil se ho jaati hain galtiyaan
sabr se ishq mehroom hain

hamko maalom hain ishq masoom hain
dil se ho jaati hain galtiyaan
sabr se ishq mehroom hain

hamko maalom hain ishq masoom hain
dil se ho jaati hain galtiyaan
sabr se ishq mehroom hain

huaan jo zamane ka dastoor hain
woh maane nahi ?? naaraaz tha
meri barbaadiyon ka woh aaghaaz tha
ishq ka ek hi ek andaaz tha
woh na raazi hue ham bhi baaghi hue
bekaraar ham faraar ho gaye

hamko maalom hain ishq masoom hain
dil se ho jaati hain galtiyaan
sabr se ishq mehroom hain

main pareshan hoon ek majboori par
hoga gam jaankar saath hoon main magar
mujhko rehna padega zara doori par
sirf do hi mahine hai seh lo agar
mera future hai teri kasam
mera future hai jismein piya

hamko maalom hain ishq masoom hain
dil se ho jaati hain galtiyaan
sabr se ishq mehroom hain

waqt se haara aur lauta jo main
lautkar apane ghar jaa chuki thi piya
phone karta raha phone bhi na liya
maine khat bhi likhe saal bhar likhe
meri aawaz pahunchi nahi
kho gayi meri piya kahi
mujhko umeed thi ek din toh kabhi
woh bhi aawaaz degi mujhe

hamko maalom hain ishq masoom hain
dil se ho jaati hain galtiyaan
sabr se ishq mehroom hain

THE NEXT MORNING

Josh woke up and looked at the time. It was only 7:00 but he needed to go to college so up he got. He went to take a shower and out he came wearing something like this:

He looked at his schedule and realized it was a Tuesday and classes start and 11:00. "DAMN!" he yelled. He had no intention of going back to sleep so he walked down the stairs passed the living room and…. He walked back towards the living room and looked at it in Shock! It was filled with food, ice-cream and well in short it was a HUGE MESS!
He shook his head and his eyes fell upon 4 legs, 4 feet, 4 arms, 4 hands and 2 faces buried into the sofa. Josh knew that one was kripa but couldn't figure out who the other was. He realizes how inappropriate there nightwear was and he shook his head and left for the kitchen. He took out a granola bar and started to eat it when he heard a girl scream! He rushed over to the living room to find one of the girls on the floor and Kripa sleeping peacefully on the bed.
One of the cell phones were ringing so the girls on the floor moved her hair out of her face and it was none other than Alliaya. Josh was shocked. "What was she doing here?" he thought. He watched her pick up a pink Motorola razor. She picked it up and yelled at the person on the other end.
"HELLO?"
the person on the other end speaks
"YEAH,YEAH JUST GIVE THE DAMN MESSAGE!"
the person on the other end speaks
"OMG! SAMI IS HERE! AWWWWWWWWW! OMG"
the person on the other end speaks
"NO, KEEP HIM THERE WE'LL PICK HIM UP IN AN HOUR!"
Alliaya hung up the phone and her eyes feel on Josh. She blushed and turned the color of an apple.
"Alliya? What are you doing here?"
Alliaya explains about the sleepover and her friendship with kripa. Josh is mad that someone like Alliaya is friends with Kripa and Forgets to ask about who Sami is.
"Josh, how should I wake up kripa. The loser will sleep through anything. She never gets up before 10, she's always late for class…." Alliaya is cut off.
"Sounds like another angad, well in a girl form." Josh said, he then got up and walked away.
Allaiya giggled but then suddenly stopped when josh came back with a bucket of ICE!
"Josh don't…." Alliaya was about to tell him when he spoke.
"If this is another Angad then I guess we have to wake her like we wake up angad."
Before Alliaya could tell him not to Josh spilled the bucket of ice on kripa. And she screamed the loudest scream!
"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!"Kripa screamed.
She is still screaming and is on the ground wet while Josh and Allaiya covered there ears, Angad at home fell of his bed.
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Angad falls off his bed listening to a girl screaming. "First a party and now screaming! Urgh…. When will this end?" he thought
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Kripa stopped screaming and opened her eyes and saw josh and Alliaya standing here looking at her.
"I was telling you not to spill ice on her because she screams REALLY LOUD!" alliaya yelled at Josh.
" YOU TWO ARE SOOOOOO MEAN! I WON'T SPARE YOU URGHHHHHH……"
Kripa gets up to strangle them both when Alliya tells her if she won't shut up kripa will never know the good news.
Josh just stood there and laughed, "Bye Alli and…." He didn't complete his sentence and walked out the front door.
Kripa was angry at Josh for not saying Bye to her and for spilling ice on her.
"KRIPA!" Alliaya yelled.
"WHAT?"kripa yelled back.
"SAMI IS IN MUMBAI! HE'S AT THE AIRPORT! WE HAVE TO PICK HIM UP ASAP!" Alliaya proclaimed
"Alliaya omg! The love of my life! My hunni bunni is coming! OMG! I'm going to get ready and you go get ready too okay?" Kripa said that and zoomed upstairs.
Alliya just smiled and walked out the front door. "Two things that make kripa happy; Me and Sami" She smiled and walked far into a distance towards the khanna masion.

Okay that's it! Wait for the next part anyways I want your comments from ALL OF YOU! EVEN YOU SILENT READERS LOL 😆 ! Please post your comments and predictions or else I won't continue 😊 . Until next time try to answer this question:

1)Who is Sami?
hint: Sami is not a friend.. so who is he 😕

Keep reading,
kanwer 😳

Edited by hello64 - 18 years ago

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Madiha

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Posted: 18 years ago

#116

omg kanwer that was an awesome part!!! and kripa and aaliya's sleeping attire...tsk.tsk tsk 😆 ....that sleepover sonded so much fun...and angad falling of the bed bcuz kripa screams so loud 😆 ...who is sami?????kripa has a bf? continue soooon 👏

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candyprincess

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Posted: 18 years ago

#117

umm sami's a friend i think and great part

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hello64

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Posted: 18 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: candyprincess
umm sami's a friend i think and great part

thank you 😊

and let me just say sami is NOT a friend 😉

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Rutu

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Posted: 18 years ago

#119

OMG!!!!!!!!!! this part was sooooooooooo funny!!!!!!! 😆 😆 😆 anywazzzzzz GR8888 job!!!! 👏 👏 PLEASE continue soon!!!!!!! and make A-K meet eachother soon!!!!!!!!! 😊