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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: sonamiglesias

It must be worst nightmare of Raj... 😆 He is seriously out of his mind after seeing Naina in saree...i m sure he wants to do same with Naina that he saw Huda doing 😳


Hahaha! 😆 a... let's see! 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Love u soo much diii
It's always a pleasure reading a jealous raj
Especially when he gets all possessive
Naina was soo eager to meet raj once more
Loved raj's agressive behaviour nd taunt bcz it kind of showed his rights on naina
Naina was so shocked to see dis side of raj bcz she has always seen a calm nd composed raj
Aww loved d dialogue "Kitna janti ho mere bare mein...mera haq hota hai" Really awesome
I was so shocked reading d naina huda part
Thank god it was raj's dream
I guess his worst nightmare ever
Hope it acts as a trigger to him confessing his feelings for her

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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Rai u should have been the writer for LRL,
Bohut se dil udhas na hote, first of all I like the way ur portraying Rajveer here, very diff from what he did in LRL.
Naina's character has no change as she speaks her mind, though ur fic or LRL.
Rajveer was shown shy always in presence of Naina.
I like his possesiveness, jeously and boldness ur r showing in him around Naina.
Great going.
Update soon, can't wait to know what's next

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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
hey ria..
how r u?
ek or SS on RN..
wow u r just an amazing writer..
red saari scene is one of my fav scene in LRL..i think everyone loves this scene..
cant wait anymore..pls update next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
another fabulous update. d red saree scene was d epic one of lrl but at that time writers didn't gave proper justification of RN scenes. now after reading we r witnessing one of d best RN moment through ur ff
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: agm1998

Love u soo much diii

It's always a pleasure reading a jealous raj
Especially when he gets all possessive
Naina was soo eager to meet raj once more
Loved raj's agressive behaviour nd taunt bcz it kind of showed his rights on naina
Naina was so shocked to see dis side of raj bcz she has always seen a calm nd composed raj
Aww loved d dialogue "Kitna janti ho mere bare mein...mera haq hota hai" Really awesome
I was so shocked reading d naina huda part
Thank god it was raj's dream
I guess his worst nightmare ever
Hope it acts as a trigger to him confessing his feelings for her


Love u soo much diii

Love you too! 😳❤️

It's always a pleasure reading a jealous raj

Lolz... yes it is! 😉

Especially when he gets all possessive

Naina was soo eager to meet raj once more

Of course why won't she be 😳😉😛

Loved raj's agressive behaviour nd taunt bcz it kind of showed his rights on naina

Yes indeed! 😳🥳

Naina was so shocked to see dis side of raj bcz she has always seen a calm nd composed raj

Yes it was a total pleasure too for her I guess!

Aww loved d dialogue "Kitna janti ho mere bare mein...mera haq hota hai" Really awesome

Hahaha 😆 thank you so much 😳❤️

I was so shocked reading d naina huda part

Hahaha! 😆 OMG! LOLZ then I must say MISSION ACCOMPLISHED! 😛😉😆

Thank god it was raj's dream

😆😳 I can imagine how you must have felt on realizing it! 😆😛

I guess his worst nightmare ever

Indeed! Indeed! 😆😛 I am laughing too hard! 😆

Hope it acts as a trigger to him confessing his feelings for her

Fingers crossed!

Stay blessed!
❤️
Edited by RNpoint1857 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: sridhsc

Rai u should have been the writer for LRL,

Bohut se dil udhas na hote, first of all I like the way ur portraying Rajveer here, very diff from what he did in LRL.
Naina's character has no change as she speaks her mind, though ur fic or LRL.
Rajveer was shown shy always in presence of Naina.
I like his possesiveness, jeously and boldness ur r showing in him around Naina.
Great going.
Update soon, can't wait to know what's next


Rai u should have been the writer for LRL,

Hahaha! 😆 Lolz original writer is better than me 😳

Bohut se dil udhas na hote,

Haan ye to hota, main first day se hi Rajveer-Naina ki chemistry show karti properly.😳 Original series mein they did give hint since the beginning but I guess even the directors were confused about whether they wanted to put them as jodi or not! 😆😛😉 They wasted their time in making Huda-Naina and Rajveer-Dr.Mishra a jodi.😡 Although you must have noticed that when in any serial they try to show two people making a pair since the beginning, they normally end up drifting apart. So here it was the same case, neither it was Huda-Naina nor it was Rajveer-Dr.Mishra! But yaar bohot time laga dia ya to shuru mein hint hi na dete about Rajveer-Naina. You know what when the first time they gave hint, it was during Freshers' Party I thought may be now they'll start showing something between them but hadd hai 'mentorship programme' ke around they gave more hint (I am talking about the room scene which I am writing in RNTMB right now) jab Rajveer says, "tumhare life mein bhi koi ayega, ya shayad aa chuka hai" something like that! 😛

first of all I like the way ur portraying Rajveer here, very diff from what he did in LRL.

Thank you so much 😳 Glad to know that you are liking it! 👏

Naina's character has no change as she speaks her mind, though ur fic or LRL.

Yes! I didn't want to compromise with the originality. Already I am not liking the fact that Rajveer is more outspoken in my story😆 but anyways hopefully I'll do show original Rajveer as well, I am trying to shape the story so that I can bring to you the original Rajveer. 😳

Rajveer was shown shy always in presence of Naina.

Yes! I know. But agar waise dikhati then Rajveer ke dialogues bohot kam hotey 😆

I like his possesiveness, jeously and boldness ur r showing in him around Naina.
Great going.

Thank you so much 😳❤️

Update soon, can't wait to know what's next

Will surely update soon!

Stay blessed

❤️

Edited by RNpoint1857 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: anju_panghal

hey ria..

how r u?
ek or SS on RN..
wow u r just an amazing writer..
red saari scene is one of my fav scene in LRL..i think everyone loves this scene..
cant wait anymore..pls update next part soon


hey ria..

Hi Anju 😊

how r u?

I am fine and hope you are also doing good 😳

ek or SS on RN..

Yup on favorite Red Saree Scene 😳❤️

wow u r just an amazing writer..

Hahaha! Thank you 🤗

red saari scene is one of my fav scene in LRL..i think everyone loves this scene..

Indeed! It's one of my favorites too! 😊

cant wait anymore..pls update next part soon

Updated a little more please check 😊

Stay blessed!
❤️

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Posted: 9 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Sarim.fatmi

another fabulous update. d red saree scene was d epic one of lrl but at that time writers didn't gave proper justification of RN scenes. now after reading we r witnessing one of d best RN moment through ur ff


another fabulous update.

Thank you so much 😳

d red saree scene was d epic one of lrl but at that time writers didn't gave proper justification of RN scenes.

I agree with you totally! 👍🏼😡

now after reading we r witnessing one of d best RN moment through ur ff

😊 I hope you'll like it 😳

Stay Blessed!
❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Once again Navin came as saviour... ye hamesha Navin ko hi takleef leni padti hai uske budhhu dost ke dimag me batti jalane ki...😆😆😆

kya kya dreams dekhne laga hai Rajveer...😆😆.. Control yar..😉

ab toh sudhar jao..😛.. but you know Rajveer.. I love you as you are.. Shy and blushing and smiling.. It suits you.. 😳😳

you are right Ria.. jitne scenes hume Rajveer-Ritu ke mile aur jitne adorable wo scenes the ( of course only for Rajveer ) utne Rajveer-Naina ke kabhi mile nahin.. 😭

anyways.. update soon..

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