ROSID/AVIMAN FF : SWEET N SOUR COMPLETED - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
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ha ha naughty sid where he is taking her waiting for next update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ha ha ... finally i have got little smile on my lips after reading your both ff's
where sid is taking roli...? hope he is planning for some daymares...?😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Realy super dearm where r u waiting for next
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CHAPTER 36



WRITER'S P.O.V



Love makes man crazy. So crazy that neither himself nor his loved one can predict his actions. Same was the condition with Sid. He was going nutty in love. He felt that she was the best ever thing that happened in his life. Hell or heavy water, he'd stay with her; again, always, forever. She was that girl made out of his ribs. And he'd love her for his whole lifetime. Sid was just thinking on all these, when Roli came out of the dressing room wearing a simple baby pink top and jeans; still having those precious symbols of their marriage on her. Often, people say that it's odd to wear all these mangalsutra and sindoor along with such modern clothes. But Roli just ran over those prejudices. For a moment, Sid was just staring at her. He never did it before but now she made him so wacky in her love that he was not thinking, he was just seeing. Roli could sense the million thoughts that might be running in his naughty mind seeing him ogling at her. She just looked down in shy but next moment decided that she shouldn't go this weak. So she walked to him and flashed her fingers in front of his eyes. With this, Sid was snapped out of his thoughts. He acted normal but his face said that he was dreamy. "What happened?" asked Roli. "noth...nothing...what will happen?" asked Sid trying to maintain stability in his words. Roli laughed inwardly, seeing that she was having a good effect on him. Inside her head she bounced like a little bunny rabbit. What happened? Where did you go for trip?" asked Sid. Instantly Roli felt too stupid. Uff...it's very difficult to be normal in front of this guy. "Nothing..." she managed to say. "By the way, you're looking...se.." He stopped with a mischievous glint in his eyes. Roli guessed what he was about o say and with wide open eyes asked "What???" "I mean you're looking smart...What did you thought?" asked Sid making Roli embarrassed. She looked down. Seeing that he was having a good effect on her, Sid smiled. "So...shall we go..." he asked. "Hmmm..." she nodded without saying anything. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Much later...Roli and Sid were on a drive. Sid was going in a shoot up speed and Roli knew why he was doing all these. Already he has purposely got over a number of bumps get a hug from her. But now this speed on national highway was particularly dangerous. It made her tensed. "Siddhant...Go slow...We're on the main road..." she warned. "No...I'm not gonna cut down the speed...If you're afraid, you can of course hold me...I don't mind..." he said with a smirk. Roli instantly hugged him making him gasp in surprise. "This is what you want right? Now please don't go on driving on this dangerous speed for this...Even if you're going slowly, I'll hold you like this..." she said boldly. This made Sid smile. He slowed down the bike and said "not bad...you got a brain..." "Well...I'm staying with a brainless creature like you...I must have a brain..." she said taunting him. "Hmmm...will show you if I got a brain..." Sid murmured. "What did you say?" asked Roli as she heard some portions of his murmur. "Nothing...keep your ears closed Naagin ..." he said. "Naagin??? Me??? Go and call that Maya...I know she have been wooing you like a dim witted snake does...Stupid anaconda..." Roli said. She had heard how all Maya tried to impress Sid and so her anger on her had increased ten folds. Sid understood that Roli wasn't feeling good of Maya and that was definitely a golden opportunity. "Roli...You know Maya is really cute right...Her eyes, her hair, her cheeks, her smile...And..." he went on whilst Roli was burning behind him until she screamed. "Stoppp!!!!!!!!!!Stop the bike..." she yelled. Sid was dazed but parked the bike by a side. "Get down..." Roli said fuming. He knew this was definitely going to be the condition now. "What happened Roli?" he asked innocently or be honest acting innocence. Roli put her hair forward. It fell little down her hip. (Guys...I just have Avi during Mumbai trip in my mind while penning this...Not the present Avi...So she have long hair there...) Sid was surprised by this. Was she about to tie her hair up and get ready to give him slaps??? Chances were not nil. It's Roli...Anything can happen. "Tell me...Is this hair better or that dry grass of that Anaconda?" she asked. Sid looked at her hair and remembered Maya's hair. Closing his eyes he could say that his Roli's hair was thousand times beautiful than that irritating and disgusting hair off Maya's which of course as she said resembled dry grass. "Yours..." he said genuinely. Roli stood same and blinked her eyes. "Look at my eyes...Tell me sincerely...does her eyes look this good to you..." she asked. "No...These are the most beautiful I have ever seen..." said Sid dreamily. Of course, those were the eyes he wanted to look in for a lifetime. Roli smiled now by his praise. "Now her cheek and mine...Which is better?" she asked. "Of course yours...so much that I..." he stopped. "that you.???" She asked. Before she could understand he moved to her right cheek and kissed on it... Then moving back and winking mischievously at her he said. "I feel like doing so..." he said and walked to his bike leaving her to blush and smile. BR]
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
fab updates dear sid purposely tried to make roli jealous of course roli is better in every way than that stupid anaconda roli is the best our sherni loved the way sid replied when roli asked who is better waiting for next eagerly update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
Wowww fabulous...waiting for more update spoon na yaar :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb dear eagerly waiting for nxt
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update dear
Roli is more beautiful than that maya ..there is no comparison also
Waiting for nxt update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 37



ROLI'S'S P.O.V

OMG...this was...this was the most embarrassing moment of my life. I just feel like a zero watt bulb that got fused just now. The condition was like that. He had walked away a while ago, but the tingle that his kiss spread on my cheek is still unsubtle. I wasn't expecting this; it was so fast, a fraction of second work. Now I really wonder if he praised that anaconda for this...Can't trust...He's Siddhant...Siddhant Bharadwaj... I don't know what I feel right now, because it's so much like a brainteaser. I wish if I could have had some sense in me at the moment. But no...Seems that senses are too afraid of Siddhant and had already hidden in the little blanket inside my head. I looked at him who was still smirking. Awww... That mischief smile of his is intoxicating. "Are you gonna stay there only?" asked him making me walk to his bike. I couldn't raise my eyelashes. I was too nervous to face him after what he has done. Like, I feel myself too different. The Roli Dwivedi who was a quarrelsome, confident girl who always faced any situation with her head straight was no more alive in me. Now I had learnt to blush, to put my head down and to be shy, of course. Huh...never felt that this guy would have such a large impact on me, when I first saw him. But now I think way too much, which may embarrass me before him. So coming back to my senses I stood near his bike. He got on it and gestured me to get on which I silently obeyed. He seemed like he had done nothing!!!Cheatercock!!!!!I said in my head. He started driving and this time I forgot to hold him. "Should I increase the speed?" he asked. "Oh no...You're intolerable..." said me as I hold on to him again making him happy. I felt like crying and laughing at the same time. His actions had made my life very difficult to live. For, it's really difficult to control you whilst a guy is lusting over you and he happens to be the same man you love. Things are even worse when you haven't even confessed yet. Oh...that's terrible, in fact. "Roli...you don't wanna know whose smile is pretty? I mean Maya's or yours?" he asked again starting the matter. I knew that this was his plan. To make me angry, start the comparison and finally end up taking advantage of my innocence. "No...I don't wanaa know..." I said sternly. "Oh no...You should..." said him trying to provoke me. But Mr. Siddhant Bharadwaj...this Roli is also not a silly thing. I'm also not gonna leave things like that to you... "Oh really...See...I admit...Maya's smile is prettier than mine..." the biggest lie I have ever told in my life. It's not about the beauty of my smile, but hers was definitely the most pitiful thing I have ever seen. You know right...what happens when an anaconda opens its mouth. Rather than admiring it, you'll better rush to washroom to puke. "Oh seriously?" he asked me again to test me. "Ya...sure..." I said. I know he moment I deny it, he's gonna praise my smile and end up doing some weird thing with me. It's not that I don't like his touch or presence or whatever. I in fact admire it. But the matter is that Siddhant's actions were peculiar. I have seen in movies where police officers torture criminals in detention to get the truth out of their mouths. In a way, Siddhant was doing the same. Difference was that he torture was kind of very sweet. Way too much. Second one; he wants the truth that I love him out of my mouth. And he's doing all for that...Probably I will lose it soon. But my spirit...That will be alive till I finally lose it...Well... Siddhant might have felt the idea futile now, he stopped the matter. He continued driving and finally stopped before the busy arcade with one of the most famous theaters. He parked the bike in the parking area and we got down. So, it's all that...i thought he would cook up something really big, but this was too conventional. Huh...poor Bharadwaj. We walked forward and there were his friends. For the first time in history, a wife feels relieved to see his friends in their outing plan. Of course, his friends presence is gonna serve good to me, he can't really put out his sweet torture on me. I smiled at all of them whilst Siddhant hugged them. "Why late? You told you'll be up soon..." asked Tarun. Sid looked at me mischievously and somewhere I felt he's gonna give a twisted answer. And my guess is always right. "We planned everything on time Tarun...but on the way, we were discussing and clarifying something...Something really important..." he said. "Oh...important...come on Roli...tell us what's it???" asked Nia. I was embarrassed now. Oh god...he and his friends. "Oh come on...it's a couple thing...not a public thing..." said Arjun. Though it embarrassed me and invited laughs from all, ultimately Arjun's comment helped in concluding the issue. Then come let's go in...the movie is gonna start soon and here we have all the stuffs like popcorns and cool drinks..." said Raksha. "Okay...Now I will show you how SRK copied my style in this movie..." said Dhyaan proudly. "Oh come on...we all know you opted this style since the first look of the movie is out... Here he's a stupid worm gonna teach SRK fashion and style..." taunted Nia. "Nia..." called Dhyaan. I felt it interesting. Amongst the commotion Siddhant was in fact getting no time to corner me. That's pretty good. "Come ion guys..Enough of these cats and dogs...See Roli and Siddhant are out or a romantic time and we are not spoiling it..." said Raksha. Oh god...Raksha why you reminded him of it, I asked in my mind. Finally after much talk we got in and occupied our places in Balcony. Siddhant was sitting next to me and in fact I was in the end. I wondered why the 5 seats next to us were empty. I asked Siddhant why it was so, "Oh come on; they just booked these seats so that we can leave them empty and get some privacy...Seems superb right..." he asked winking at me. This wasn't going as easy as I felt; in fact this was dangerous...It was a SRK movie...Any other time I would have watched it with all zest but now his presence next to me makes it impossible for me to concentrate. There was a whole popcorn bucket with us, I wasn't feeling like having. And the dual straw in a single cola had made the chance for drinking it too... All his ridiculous plans. Once or twice he asked me if I would like to share it with him. Not so soon Mr. Bharadwaj. I denied. For the next an hour or so, everything was fine. Everyone was engaged in the movie rather than in themselves. Even I too was genuinely watching the movie. That was when I felt a hand at on mine. This wasn't the first time. Even before jerks have touched my hands like this and had ended up receiving slaps from me. But this time, unfortunately the jerk was my beloved husband. I looked at him shocked, but he was looking dreamily at me and was just kneading my little palm. I was having Goosebumps on this peculiar touch of this. He continued the torture whilst I pleased him not to do so. Now there was some kissing scene in the movie and he as if inspired, instantly moved towards my lips. I was shocked and my heart thumped hard waiting for his next step.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
Super update dear
Sid smile is really intoxicating
Ha ha how roli will handle sid ...
Waiting for nxt update

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