#2 {Dark} Drabble : Claimed By The Devil - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Congrats for new thread
His father is so Cruel
His past was so painful hope Taani bring him happiness
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congo for new thread the update was awsme poor rey has gone through a lot his father was a devil he tortured his mother rey dad is the reason behind rutheless rey excited for nxt
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
awesome update
tht was quite painful

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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Nice update
Rey really had a bad past
What is the shock waited for him while returned?
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
nice update...
rey had went through a lot...

waiting for the next part,...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Chapter 14



He still remember the day, the day he entered his house after 5 years, he was eager to meet his mother, but when he inquired about her, all the family members behaved like the woman named naina didn't even existed. Then, he met the man who was the reason behind his mother's every tear. And the words he spoke next, made him want to kill him right there.



"Reyaansh, don't waste your time behind that weak mother of yours. She is no more, she committed suicide 3 months back. She couldn't see how happy i was with Sunita. Jealous bitch-" Raghubir spoke with venom dripping tone, Rey was trembling with rage while his heart cried for his mother, he hope his father's words were true, but reaction he got from other, told the story otherwise.



He masked his every emotion and moved toward Raghubir, then he noticed a woman standing beside him along with a boy of around 16 or 17 years.



"Don't you dare utter a word against my mother, Raghubir. I won't tolerate it-" With that, Rey let his anger take over his senses and punched him on his face. Raghubir stumbled back and clenched his jaw, he touched his face, angered by his son's move.



"Reyaansh! Is this how you behave with your father? APOLOGIZE TO HIM. RIGHT NOW!" Sunita's angry voice boomed in the haveli.



"And who are you?" Rey questioned her, ignoring her demand as apologizing to his father would be the last thing he will ever do.



"His wife and this is our son, Kabir." Sunita introduced herself proudly. Then he got to know his father married her 18 years back and she was in jaipur, staying as his second yet secret wife. And few months back, Raghubir had brought her in jodhpur which Naina couldn't take in. She had bear his every torture and didn't said anything, but this was something beyond than any physical torture. She couldn't see her husband with another woman and ended her life.



That day, he cried for his mother, it was the last time he cried. He remembered every moment he had spent with his mother, and vowed to make Raghubir pay for his sins. He knew his mother won't be happy, but if he let go Raghubir easily, then he won't be able to forgive himself ever.



He brought a house in jodhpur and started living there as he couldn't even breath in same air as Raghubir so living in same house, was out of the question. Raghubir's bad time was started..



"The day i killed him, was the happiest day of my life." He thought, and a evil smile made its way to his lips. Remembering the day he shot Raghubir, gives him peace.



Raghubir was angry, his business was going in loss, all the investors had took their name back and no new investor was ready to invest in his company, Even his business partner broke the partnership and sold their shares to Rey, making him owner of 60% Shares.



"I thought you are my son, you will be with me, but i was wrong. You betrayed me, and now, i do not wish to have a son like you. Good bye, Son." Raghubir smirked evilly, he pulled a gun from his pocket and pointed at him, who had just stepped out of the house and was surprised seeing Raghubir. Raghubir aimed his chest and pressed the trigger but at the right moment, Rey moved away and the bullet hit the tree behind him.



"Bad move, Raghubir Singhania." Rey snickered, he signaled his men who came from behind and caught Raghubir, the took away the gun from him and handed it to their boss. And that day, the Raghubir faced the torture, Rey made sure he died the most painful death then sent his body to his second wife & son.



"You are a monster! You are his Son, how could you kill him?" Sunita shouted, hugging her husband's dead body.



"Your husband created this monster." Rey answered, staring at the woman with blank eyes. He turned and left from there with out any regret.



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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Nice update
Rey really had a bad past

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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
superb update
so rey killed her dad
waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
painful n emotional update
ooops rey killed his father
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Super - Duper Amazing
Awesome Update
Loved it
Continue Soon
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~Love makes Life~ KRIYAANSH DRABBLE SERIES 'completed'

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