ARSHI TS: Forever,Together:Completed/Thnx NOTE pg 139

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akhila22051993

@akhila22051993

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Posted: 9 years ago

#121

Wonderful story... plz update soon... I guess arnav will bring anjali to meet Neha. .and anjali will become fond of her and Dopt her... this will be awesome.. but don't know wat your going to bring forth

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kiran1992

@kiran1992

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Posted: 9 years ago

#122

Nice story...

Khushi is totally crazy here...😆

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WanieA

@WanieA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#123

🤣...dear me..u started with pain, moved along with sadness and ended with joy..different and interesting...tat laugh is for khushi's character. cho funny.

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 9 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: ShahSAIR
nahiii y u posted it half..kitna maza aaraha tha padh k..
Sb kuch naya laga padh k.. Excpt Arnav Singh Raizada, his Di ,his gusaaa..
Wow new name Aaraam Talab.. Lol
waiting for next
No Commenting Updating.. Nahiii Mai Karungi..

Thnx Sair

This is a complete one part, Baki Part 2 and 3 main

Edited by Mysticaldivine - 9 years ago

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 9 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: Roop_P
So good to see you,

was spying since morning, finally paid off😉

RES

Unres

Simply refreshing👏

Total new concept

new characters

new names

a new feel

His pain seeing his di is inevitable,but he got stuck in between two trees, is there any connection to the story ? He saw Khsuhi,but his lips whispered "Mom".So he is seeing innocent , pure soul as his mother.Love that part👏

Arnav's confusion is still there, that why Khsuh is calling Dr.Balraj as her Uncle and Dr is calling her as of his daughter.waiting for next update for this clarification.

Neha is so cute nd Molly...rfff

Love this sensitive part where Molly was comforting him when he told Neha that his booboo is hurting.

Neha gave him her own Angel...absolutely touched my heart .This part is so beautiful.I love the sensitivity in your writing and this part is marvelous.

Khushi and her banter, a chatter box whose beauty is alluring, making him lose even in his wounded state.Love the description of Khsuhi's beauty from Arnav's eye...His POV is so visible.

we need Khsuhi's POV about Arnav

She ruined his shoes, and he ruined her mood.

Last part is very amazing...So Neha is orphan😭

ur questions will be answered in teh coming update

now that BOLD

u always catch something from my post...😊 u will find it soon.

Thnx Roop, and sorry for being one day late

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Orion_N

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Posted: 9 years ago

#126

Wow awesome work! I really enjoyed reading this, I like that there are a few new characters added compared to the same old ones in the show... makes things more interesting! And a cheeky Arnav sounds perfect... can't wait to read what else you have in store for us! Thanks for the PM :D

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pravallika

@pravallika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#127

Firstly very very sorry for being so late here faiqa ( kaan pakad ke ).. don't call me a drama queen now 😆

And CONGRATS for the new story dear 🤗

coming to the update, that's an awesome work ...

Though this arnav is same angry young man, looks like he is already smitten by this innocent chatter box 😆 i can feel that kushi is going to be the comedian heroine in this story.. kitna bolti hai yaar 😲 but loved her.. and her endearments as usual.. Mr. Araam talab, Mr. Angry janab.. only you can come up with words like this 👏 ⭐️

Neha and molly are very cute.. and Dr. Balraj looks like one sweet soul 😊 You have even given an impression that buaji is one cool character. .

So, anjali is in depression bcoz of shyam and there is no change in shyam... he is always EVIL 😡

awhy is kushi calling balraj uncle when he calls her daughter?? . And how does kushi know anjali and calling her di??? 😕

Waiting for this story to unfold faiqa 😊

Precap: arnav is already flirting with kushi.. he is very fast in this story 😉

Thanks for the pm dear 😊

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Archna

@archnahardik123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#128

First of all I am sorry for being so late to comment. This past week I was busy with guest and on top of it my younger son is having final exams which left me with very less time for me.

Finally I was able to finish reading. And this story is very sweet and Refreshing.

I loved Molly. So Khushi is orphan in this. But how she knows anjali?

Poor Arnav he didn't have any chance in front of her when she speaks.

Looking forward to read more.

Thanks for lovely story. And PM too.

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 9 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: madhu1210
Simply awesome. ...
Your magical writing always bring happiness ...

Wow like the new names- where did you get such a creative names...

Mr. Aaram talab😆...

Wow khushi non stop chattering...

Loved neha..

Eagerly looking forward

Thnx madhu😊

Glad u liked it as I said I am def not a funny writer, I know that so it tooK to me a while to jot this down.😆

I have no clue, I put Khushi in my head because she had many names, magarmach, khadoos, karela, Laad Governor, etc etc so I came up with some just liKe that .

because he fainted nd she was worried then something should ease her and that is her way TO TALK NON STOP TO RELEASE THE PAIN.

Edited by Mysticaldivine - 9 years ago