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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg wowww!!!! soo intense n tht tooo on the first part!!!!!!! shws hw good a writer u r!!!! it was sooo greatttt lol the biker dudes 😃 awww omg por kripa.....omg soo goood !!!!! continue sooonnnnn 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG that was great i imagine me on a motorcycle with cute guy infront of me even though i can't see his face 😆 but still nice imagine if she let go WOW poor kripa the shockingest most shockingest news ever 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: desiigirl19

see wouldnt that be awesome! a guy with a motorcycle...PERFECTION lmao...

luv rani

Perfection even more then that i would hug him as if he were my teddy bear that i loved i don't care about his face okay i do but thats diffrent ooooo can u put me in ur story i wany be the girl he loves then leaves i don't care atleast he loved me once okay maybe not like that charectar but something good plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey rani post the next part soon alright!!
i really wanna see wat happens when the rebellion ANGAD and the sewwtheart KRIPA meet lmao lol
soo continue soon alright



luts of luv and sugar
Hina
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: desiigirl19

wow lol...lemme see "Milly" haha...

luv rani

dude plzzzz and if it doesn't work out with me and angu then later i fall in love my my sweety emmu😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#66

Chapter 2

We had been riding for the past hour atleast. Atleast it felt like that. I had not dared to move once in the past sixty minutes. I was holding on to him so tightly that I could almost feel his heart beating steadily under my arm. I had not dared to say anything because he probably wouldnt even hear it. But I just wondered who he was. I had not seen his face yet but had heard his voice. It was smooth yet so deep that it had almost penetrated my inner core. I couldnt help but wonder what this man looked like. I was about to.....my thoughts were interrupted when he pulled into the driveway of a house by the beach. It was very dark by now and all I could feel was the strong breeze blowing into the strand of hair on my face. I turned around slightly and saw the other four motorcycles follow us in as well. For a second, I panicked but then his voice. It grabbed my attention again. "You can get off now. You're safe here." That smile spread on my face again. I really did feel safer, I thought.

I got off and stood there, looking at the house as if I was scrutinizing it. I turned to him to compliment the house but before I could, he just walked away and into the house, followed by four other men. I stood there, completely lost when I heard someone's voice. "Are you gonna stay here forever?" I turned around and looked at the person in front of me. She was wearing a pair of torn up jeans with a leather jacket and a helmet on top of it. When I looked at her amazedly, she took off her helmet and the wind blew threw her soft hair. "Hi. I'm Sim." Sim? It sounded so much like a biker I thought. Well, she was a biker. But there was something about her that immediately got me mesmorized. There was something about her independent nature that I admired in an instant. Envied it as well. I had never had that kind of freedom before. I was never confined to my home or restricted in any way. But looking at Sam gave me this inferiority complex about who I was. Perhaps, I needed to go find myself first. Then my mother.

"Hi. I'm Kripa." I smiled as she just looked me up and down. I felt like these chills ran down my spine. She looked at me like I was nothing. At that moment I felt like the whole world was looking at me as I stood there naked. I was embarrased, insulted, affected. I quickly lowered my eyes and then waited for her to talk again. "Well, lets go inside shall we?" I nodded and followed her to the house.

I walked up the few stairs to get to the main door but once I stepped inside an automatic smile lighted my face. The house was gorgeous! The furniture looked as if they were imported from France during the Renaissance. The mahogany floors were perfectly waxed and the off white color of the walls gave the entire house an antique look. It looked like the perfect beach house one could have. "Hello?" I turned to see Sim standing there. "Are you just gonna stare at this stuff? Sit down! I'll get you something to drink. you'll have a beer right?" I looked at her in surprise. Beer? "Beer? oh no. I dont drink. Water will be fine."

She looked at me with her eyebrows arched in the middle and a sarcastic smile on her face. "Water? Ok whatever." She nodded her head as if I had asked for the stupidest thing ever. I just smiled awkwardly and sat down on the couch when someone walked into the room. Was that him? I thought for a second. He was a bit shorter than the other guy, I told myself. I quickly got up and he stopped and stared at me. "You? Hi.." I smiled awkwardly and moved forward for a handshake. "I'm Kripa." He nodded with a grin and replied. "Prince." I smiled with my eyes on the floor and then looked up at him again. "Can I ask you something?" He nodded my head still with that smile on his face. "Who was that guy?" He looked at me like I had asked him a stupid question. Suddenly I felt so worthless after the way Sim had treated me and now Prince's stare was evern worse. "Oh...you mean Angad?" I felt my heartbeat skip. Angad? That name was the best thing I had ever heard. So smooth and obscure, I thought. The smile on my face must have alarmed prince because he grinned and moved a little forward, alerting me now. "You like him dont you?"

I didnt know what to answer. "Uh...no. I just wanted to thank him for this. I dont know what to say to him and..." He smiled and moved back again. "Dont worry Kripa. He'll be out here in a few minutes. You can check him out then." His playful smile scared me a little. I smiled uncomfortable and sat down again when he left to go back inside. I just sat there for a while, wondering what I was doing here. How long was I going to be here? Two hours? Two days? Two weeks? I had no clue. What would happen after that? I had no clue.

"angad...." I smiled at his name again. "Here's your water *****." I stood up suddenly when I felt the water on my hair and looked at the bitterness in her eyes. She hated me. I didnt know why but she did. "Sim!" I heard his voice. Almost like a thunder. I quickly looked at his figure at the frame of the door that probably led to the other door. There he was. Gorgeous. I wanted to smile but the situation wasnt funny. I stood there, humiliated, as he walked upto us and stood in front of Sim. Between me and sim. He was right there. He smelled the same, I thought.

"What the heck is wrong with you?" He yelled at Sim as she stood there adamantly. "Whatever Angad." She copped and attitude and left again. I stood there. My eyes on the floor. "Listen...ummm whats your name again?" I couldnt look at him now. It was too hard. I kept my eyes to myself. "Kripa.." I whispered.

"What?"

"Kripa."

"Oh..ok kripa. I'm sorry about what Sim said. She's just very...lost! So I think its best if you forget and move on." I nodded my head as if I was taking his request as an order. "Good. and...you are drenched with that freaking water so...go straight to that room there and change. I'll make Sim give you some of her clothes." I nodded. Sim? She would never give me anything that belongs to her, I thought. But I nodded. Who could argue with him? I slowly turned around to leave when I heard his voice again. "Wait." I stopped without turning my head. "Are you okay?" I turned to myself and smiled at his concern. "Yes I am. Thank you." I felt like I was blushing. For the first time. I had never even blushed when Sameer had proposed to me. Yet, he had made me turn crimson. Just those three words. Are you okay? I loved him. Well, maybe not love. But I was definitely crushing now.

I changed into the shorts and a tank top that Sim had been generous enough to let me borrow. Well, I didnt know how he had convinced her but he had managed. I stood in front of the mirror looking at my messy hair when I heard a knock on the door. I quickly pulled it up in a pony tail and turned around. "Come in." I said almost in a whisper and he entered. I smiled but he didnt. "sit down!" He was so demanding but I did exactly what he said.

"OK look. you can stay here tonight. and tomorrow morning we'll decide about what to do with you."

"But I..."

" No. Dont worry. We will decide something. Dont worry about it." There was this smile on his face that scared me. I didnt want to leave. Ofcourse I didnt want to go back home but most of all, I didnt want to leave him yet. That night I slept in that room. Under the same roof as him. Wondering how long I was going to be there. Kripa Sharma. You have to be here longer. You just have to!

OK. NEXT part is up now!! and maybe this wasnt as interesting as before but i still want that feedback pplzzz!!!!

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Edited by desiigirl19 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice real good stupid sim she likes him continue i love her attitude though 😛 continue soon 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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amazing parts
stupid idiot sim 😡
cont soon
hmm cant wait 2 c how kripa will try to make herself stay longer there
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg that was just amazing!!! I was smiling throughout the whole part! lol. Cont. soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Da previous part was great....hmmmm i'm guessin Sim already has a crush on Angad. Ne wayz, i wonder how long Kripa is goin to live under the same roof.
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