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Posted: 18 years ago
sam is a mystery lol
awesome part
cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
oye rani!!
when r u plannign to continue man!!
i relaly wanna read the enxt part!!
i wounder hope Angad doesnt get mad at Kripa but falls in love with her lol 😆
i found that comment random for sum reason!!
lol but a im weird person 😛


continue as soon as u can i really wannan read the next part and when i say really i mean really really lol


later
luts of luv and sugar
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey rani just start reading your ff and its awesome I read your other ff ahistaah2 i loved it but this one is different. 😊
I really like it 😛
I think angad like her and sam just mix something in her drink don't know why but just thinking 😕
oh can't wait for next part what will happen between angad and kirpa 😳
PLS CONTI SOON 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago

1. Awesome, Superb and Beautifully Written fanfic up till now

2. Good long parts

3. too small font, keep the colour a bit dark, its too bright, may be a simple black would do though I hate it the colour but its the standard which everyone chooses

4. Nice concept different from the serials we see daily (which according to me are boring).

5. Continue soon

6. Sorry if I hurt your feeling in any way

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Posted: 18 years ago
im soo impatient rite now lol! i reallllly like this ff so i hope u continue soon!! or atleast tell us when u can so we dont go nuts lol!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: pink sky

1. Awesome, Superb and Beautifully Written fanfic up till now

2. Good long parts

3. too small font, keep the colour a bit dark, its too bright, may be a simple black would do though I hate it the colour but its the standard which everyone chooses

4. Nice concept different from the serials we see daily (which according to me are boring).

5. Continue soon

6. Sorry if I hurt your feeling in any way

lol okay...but for some reason the font looks really big on my comp. i guess ill post it like huge next time. and since i dont like black as much..ill make sure i use a darker color or somethin...thanks for you opinion though..
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Posted: 18 years ago

Chapter 6
By the time we reached the house I was feeling a little better but I was still a little drowsy. He stopped the bike and parked it slowly. Then I felt him pick me up in his arms and carry me into the house. He placed me on the couch and then suddenly he was gone. I felt really uncomfortable. As if I was all alone in the world but then he came back. "Here, have some water. You'll feel better."

He helped me sit up on the couch and then rest my back against it. He placed the glass in front of my mouth and let me drink the water. In a few sips, I stopped and coughed. I really did feel miserable. I closed my eyes and rested my head on the back. "Who told you to drink? You were fine just a few minutes before and...what did you drink?"

"I...I think I had some beer or..something. I cant remember." I felt this huge headache grab me and I really wanted to puke. "I think I'm gonna throw up." I moved a little forward as if I would throw up on him and he moved back a little. He looked a little funny and so I giggled a little and I'm sure he got annoyed because he got up and left. I felt a bit disheartened.

"Go sleep in your room. " He had come back after almost an hour or atleast thats what he felt like. "Go!" I didnt have the energy to get up.

"No please. Let me just sleep here on the couch."

"No! The guys are gonna be home soon. I dont want them to see you like this. You look horrible. Go, sleep."

I didnt respond or even open my eyes. I had no energy at all. "I..I dont think I can get up." I still didnt open my eyes until...he picked me up in his arms! I couldnt believe it. I opened my eyes and saw him right there, in front of me, staring into my eyes as well.

We didnt say anything to each other. He just took me in his arms and walked me to my room. The lights were off so I couldnt see his face anymore but when he turned it on, still holding me, I saw him again. That same gorgeous face in front of me. Irresistable!

He slowly placed me on the bed but I didnt take my arms off his neck when he let me go. I unwittingly pulled him down and he almost fell on me. "Kripa..let go. I have to go fix the living room. It looks like crap."

"No. Please...dont leave me alone. I'm scared."

"Scared? Of what?"

"Sam...I feel like he's gonna come do something else."

"Something else? What did he do to you? Wait a minute.....he gave you something to drink?"

"Uh....yeah...the beer. I..yeah taht bottle of....beer.

He suddenly pushed my arm away and got up. "That son of a....I wont spare him." I didnt understand what he was talking about. I sat up and took a deep breath. For some reason I felt like I was floating in the air. I saw colorful objects that gave me a unique pleasure and left a smile on my face. I stood up as if I had found this new energy within me and then I stood up on the bed.

I wanted to dance. I took of that jacket he had on me and threw it onto the side and then ran my hands through my hands and felt the music in the air. I wanted to dance like there was no tomorrow. I swear to God, I felt like someone had some rock music on and I couldnt stop myself from dancing.

I started to get really hyper and felt myself sweat like crazy. My hair was getting wet from it and my dress stuck to my body. I felt really happy for some reason. That smile..it was still on my face.

Then suddenly, the sweat disappeared and I started to feel really cold. It was so freezing that I felt my blood freeze. I sat down on the bed and covered myself up in my arms. I was really shivering. The sweat had all dried up and all that was left was a shiverring me.

Suddenly, he opened the door to my room and then rushed to me. "What the hell happened?"

"Its freezing."

"Oh god..you're prolly reacting to it." I didnt know what he was saying. Somehow his words werent reaching me. "What do you mean?"

"Its all Sam's fault. That ******* loser. I cant beleive he....OK relax and breathe" I did what he asked me to. "How are you feeling?"

I suddenly started to cry. "Its too cold. I cant bear it." I think he was scared because he suddenly put his arms around me and kept me there. I guess to make me warm. "Dont worry. You'll be fine!" I beleived him. If he said I would be fine...I guess he was right. I pulled him closer when I felt that the cold was unbearable.

After a while, he made me sleep and then pulled the comforter over me. When he saw me close my eyes, he got up to leave but I held his hand. "Thanks Angad.....I really..." I couldnt speak anymore. I was too tired by now.

I quickly opened my eyes when I heard the door slam open. I guess it had been a while since I had fallen asleep because I felt a little better by now. Well, atleast I could breathe without choking.

I couldnt see the person in front of me because my vision was still a little blurry. "Who is it?" There was no answer. But I felt the person come closer and then sit next to me on my bed. "Who is it?" I yelled a little. I was paranoid by now. Who was it?

"Why? Are you scared I'm gonna kill you or something?" It was Sam. What was he doing here? I didnt even know him yet. I suddenly got up and moved back on the bed. "What do you need?"

"Why are you so scared, babe? Dont worry, I wont harm you!" I knew something wasnt right. I moved further back and he advanced closer. He held something in his hand. I couldnt really see it because he had it behind his back. "What is that?" I screamed out in panic. "Please..JUST LEAVE ME ALONE!"

He didnt. He came closer and then grabbed my arm. Then I saw what he was holding in his hand. It was this syringe with a liquid in it. What was it? "HELP!" I screamed, hoping someone would hear me. Where was Angad?

Suddenly, Angad ran in through the door and pulled Sam back just before he could inject that thing inside my vein. "You bloody *******! How dare you do this to her?"

"Why do you care Angad? She means nothing to us..then why?"

"Just shut the **** up!" He grabbed his collar and his eyes flared up in anger. "You are going to leave her alone, you get it? She is not going to be a victim of your game. Dont you dare..ever..touch her or do what you did to my...never! The only reason you are still here is because of Sim..or else I wouldnt have spared you the last time. So just leave her alone...you get it? DO YOU GET IT???" His voice had just changed tone from a low voice to a raging one.

It somehow scared me. What were they talking about? What was going on? Angad threw Sam out of the room and then walked over to me. I pulled back slightly and waited for him to say something. "I'm really sorry Kripa. Please...dont think about this too much. I promise Sam wont do anything to you. okay?" He got up to leave but he had left so many questions unanswered that I had to stop him.

"What did he do?" He stopped but didnt turn around to face me. He just turned his head and glanced at me. "Dont worry about it. I promise I wont let anything happen." He left. But what had just happened didnt leave my mind. As he walked out the door, I saw Sim walk in. Angad stopped for a second and looked at her with anger and disgust. For some reason, she couldnt look into his eyes. He left before she could say anything and when he did, she turned to look at me. I couldnt believe the look in her eyes. She was really angry. She walked in and stood in front of me, making me insecure. "Sim I..."

"Shut up you *****." What the hell was that? What had I done to her? I was so confused at this point that I wanted to cry. But I couldnt. There would be no one to stop me if I started to. "Please leave me alone sim. please..."

"Why? You little....you just came into our lives and ruined everything for me!" What was she talking about? "What did I do, Sim? I didnt even..."

"Shut up! Do not even utter a single word" She was getting all worked up. I didnt dare to say anything. "Why dont you just leave, Kripa?"

"Sim, I..."

"Because if you dont...I promise that next time, you wont survive this." Survive? Survive what? "Survive what?"

She laughed in my face. As if I had said something funny. "You just make me laugh. Do you know what Sam had given you today?"

I tried to remember. "A bottle of beer." She laughed again. "Beer? do you know what was mixed with that? Ecstacy! ECSTACY!!!" I tried to keep myself together. Ecstacy? Drugs? No way. He couldnt do that to me. Why would he? I had never done anything to him. "No..."

"Yes! and he did it because I told him to. I promise that the next time I tell him to do something...it would be much bigger than this. and then...no one will be able to save you. NOT EVEN ANGAD!" She pushed me away and left. No. I couldnt live here anymore. They would kill me. She would kill me. I had to leave. Or else I would be dead tomorrow and no one would care. I would never be able to see my mother. Never. I had to leave. As soon as I could.


The next morning, Prince walked into my room with a cup of coffee in his hand. I was still sitting on my bed. I wasnt able to fall asleep last night. There was just so much bothering me. "You didnt sleep?" I looked at him, still in my trance. "I'm scared Prince." He placed the coffee on the side table and sat down. "Of what?"

"They're gonna kill me. They're gonna kill me...I wanna go home right now!" I wanted to cry so hard but I couldnt let myself break down like this. He moved closer to me and took my hand into his. "Who? Sam? dont worry about him ok? Angad will never let anything happen to you. ok?" I nodded my head with a No. I was so shook up that no one could console me now.

I think he felt bad for me because there was a little tear in his eye. But he tried to smile a little. "hey kripa....just cry! I promise I wont tell anyone." I couldnt stop myself anymore. I instantly hugged him and broke down. I think he hesitated at first but then hugged me back. "Kripa...please. Dont worry about them. He wont be able to touch you..not again."

"What did I ever do to him, Prince? Why is he even...I dont know what to..." I took a breath as I felt my tears choke me. "Kripa...." He let go of me and then held my face. "Look....I'm here, Angad's here...and you know.." He pointed up, I guess he was pointing to God. "He's there too. I know the other people here dont believe in him but I do...and I know you do too. Dont you?" I nodded like a little kid. "Then just trust him...he'll take care of you."

Those were the nicest words someone had uttered to me in my life. "Thanks so much Prince. You know I love you right?" He nodded. He knew I meant it in a friendly way. "And I love you too!" He smiled and kissed my forehead.

When he let go of me, I saw Angad standing right behind him. For some reason I felt a little conscious about myself. I hope he hadnt taken this in a wrong way. "Prince..what are you doing here?" Prince got up and looked at Angad, almost as if he was scared of him. "I was just talking to Kripa...She was insisting on leaving and..."

"Leaving?" He looked a little hurt. Or maybe, I wasnt reading his expressions the right way. "Ok. Grab your stuff then Ms. Kripa. and I will drop you off to wherever you want me to. Go. Get ready!" I couldnt believe it. He had just asked me to leave? This annoyed me so much. I was in a really complicated stage of life and all he could do was be angry? Wasnt I supposed to be angry, sad, depressed, scared? "OK. Fine. I'll go get ready."

Prince looked at me like I was crazy. "Kripa, come on, youre joking right? Angad..please. Dont make these hasty decisions like always."

"Prince please. Stay out of this." He didnt move his eyes off me. and neither did I. I felt like there was this battle of egos between us. Like we both wanted to prove how stubborn we were. In a moment of rage, I threw my blanket aside and stormed into the bathroom and slammed the door.

When I got in, I stood in front of the mirror and looked at myself. My eyes had dark circles under it and my hair was a mess. I couldnt stand the way I looked. I felt the tears roll down my cheeks and my body shivered at the thought of going back home. But I had to. I couldnt live here and lose myself. I could trust Angad but I didnt see why I did? He was equally a stranger as Sam and Sim. But somehow this stranger had managed to make me feel more special than my own family. I didnt want to leave, but I guess I had to. Or else I would end up killing myself.

I walked out of the shower feeling a lot better and no one was in my room anymore. Getting into something comfortable, I walked out of my room and saw all of them sitting in the living room and Angad standing. It looked as if he was talking to all of them, telling them something. "Kripa.." He took my name calmly. "I was just telling everyone that you have decided to go back to your home." I felt like he had ripped my inner most being out of me and then stomped on it.

I looked at Prince for some comfort but he didnt look at me. I think he didnt have the courage to. I was depending on him but he had betrayed me. I didnt know why but I was just really angry at everything at this point. I was angry at angad, at prince, at sim, at sam, at the other guys for doing nothing at all, at God for letting me down, at life for being to cruel, and then finally...at myself for feeling this way.

"Yes, youre right Angad. I have decided to go back home. I just want to thank all of you for whatever you have done for me. I now know who to trust in life. When the people you count on betray you, its the worst feeling in your life and I have learnt that right here. Thank you very much. Especially you Sim, you have changed my view of people...and completely! Thank you very much."

There was no remorse on her face. Perhaps she had no conscience. Perhaps no one did. I took a deep breath and with a smile I looked at Angad. "Can we leave?" He looked hurt...and angry. But I felt the same. He nodded his head and grabbed his jacket. He walked towards the door and I followed him but then stopped at the door and looked behind me at Prince. There was a hurt expression on his face. Before I would stop myself, I took the step outside and walked away. Forever.


Angad and I hadnt talked to each other the whole time. I felt a little guilty but I was still mad at him. Why had he taken such a rash decision? I was really shaken up at that instant of my life and instead of sympathizing, he had come to conclusions.

Before I knew, he had driven into the driveway of my house. It brought back memories. Some good memories, some bad memories. Then...some nightmares. As I remembered that night I ran away from home, I felt the hair on the back of my neck stand. He parked his motorcycle and waited for me to get off but I didnt. "Are you gonna get off?" I looked at him and he probably realized that I was too scared to.

He got off and secured the bike as he stared at me. "Are you gonna be okay?" I nodded, still lost in my thoughts. "Youre scared?" I nodded with a yes. " You want me to go talk to them?" I looked at him with shock. They would kill me if they found out I was with a stranger for the past week or so.

"They would kill me!" I looked at him as he tried to figure out my problem. "Ok. Dont worry. I know how to handle this. You wait right here!" I listened to his command and stood there silently, hoping for a miracle.

I waited for another 15 minutes before I heard Angad's voice. "Get on the bike!" I saw him running towards me. My worst nightmare had come true. They hadnt forgiven me yet. I did as he said and before I knew, we were on the road again. I saw Sameer's car follow us but after a while we escaped because of Angad's motorcycle skills.

After a few minutes, he stopped his bike and got off. I got off as well and then we walked into the little cafe on the side of the road.

"They are still angry. Arent they?" I looked at him. We had talked after a good half an hour. "Yeah."

"Great!" I smiled out of frustration.

"So what are you gonna do now?" I looked at him as he asked me. "I guess I have no choice. I have to go back there."

"No!" What? "I wont let you do that!!" He sounded so concerned that it brought a slight smile to my lips. He felt a little uncomfortable and spoke again. "When I went in, I saw this man talking to a woman and he was angry. Angry about you leaving all of a sudden. He wanted revenge, Kripa. I dont think anyone deserves that...no one. Not you...not anyone else."

I nodded my head but I knew he was concerned. "Thanks Angad..." He looked at me, trying to hide his embarrasment. "So..what now?" I asked him, not knowing what my future held for me.

"I know!" He replied after a whole one minute. "What?"

"Remember, you told me you were trying to find your mom?" I nodded a yes, not knowing what he was trying to say. "Well...I'm gonna help you find her and you are not going anywhere till we do!" I looked at him, surprised. He was going to help me find her? My life had taken a sudden turn now.

Edited by desiigirl19 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
😃 😃 😃 omg awwwww and OMG holly crap how good Sim and Sam do that to her and why???? there surly is a big mystry behind all this!! and i felt sooooooooooooooooooooooo bad for Kripa it must Kill to to live with a feeling that u have no1 to trust even if its for a short momment it must KILL!!! and Angad better not be mean to her ny more!! and i was soo damn dissapointed in Prince but then i was soo awed by him too when he came in to comfprt Kripa!! i hope ANagd didnt really think kripa loves PRince.. or maybe he did and that was the cause of the sudden outburst!!1


well thanx a lot for continuing!!! 😊
and do please continue soon



luts fo luv and sugar
Hina
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Posted: 18 years ago
it is getting more and more interesting!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 PLEASE continue soon!!!!!!!!!! 😊

p.s. this was along part, always post parts like this!!!!!!!! 😉
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amazing part and a detailed one too 👏 👏 👏

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