The Distance Between Us - An AR FF (Link to TDBU#2 - Page 1) - Page 83

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: DMGThings



Why are you saying that? Your writing is not bakwaas! It's so amazing.

Aur jis tarah se aap dialogue mein emotion capture karte ho, hayyyeee!! I love it!


heheh thank u thank u...
Ab tum log itna keh rahi hai toh maan leti hun...
Lekin woh kiya haina, its always happen with writers...
tumne bhi toh kaha kuch din pehle...
humein humhari stories aise hi lagte hai, but for other writers and readers, it would be best...
good, or whatever hehe...
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Posted: 7 years ago
^agreed. Aisa bohot hota hai. Maine observe kiya hai. Lekin hamesha apni stories se pyaar karna chahiye. Hamesha better banti hai usse. Jaise baaki sab cheezein.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Firstly m angry😡 coz there is no AR scene
Secondly i read the parts 3 times but still not able to understand karan- Shashank scenario
thirdly i love the ARSH bonding.. specially what we seen in DMG shilpa deserve better ending so its good to know that they are now good friends...
Fourth update please😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: scorpiofazy

Firstly m angry😡coz there is no AR scene

Secondly i read the parts 3 times but still not able to understand karan- Shashank scenario
thirdly i love the ARSH bonding.. specially what we seen in DMG shilpa deserve better ending so its good to know that they are now good friends...
Fourth update please😆



Honge AR scenes bhi. Have some patience na. Please!

LOL. I tried to be all mysterious about how exactly Karan & Shashank know each other and thankfully, it looks like I've succeeded cause people haven't been able to guess. So, yay!

ArSh had such great potential, esp where friendship was concerned and I didn't like that their relationship wasn't properly explored, so I brought Shilpa back. :p

Will update soon! Thank you! :)
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: DMGThings

^agreed. Aisa bohot hota hai. Maine observe kiya hai. Lekin hamesha apni stories se pyaar karna chahiye. Hamesha better banti hai usse. Jaise baaki sab cheezein.


yup thats true too :D

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: RihooHaws



yup thats true too :D



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Posted: 7 years ago
Ok. I read the chapter twice but couldn't figure out the connection between Shashank and Karan. Was there anything about this in DMG or Sanjeevani?! Will wait for you to reveal.. :)
I am glad that Shilpa has moved on from Armaan and is now his friend. The CV's were so desperate for S2 to work that they brought Shilpa back, abruptly ended Nikki and Atul's track and worst of all trying to shove Sid - Riddima down everyone's throats. And then when they realized that they couldn't just have Armaan move on with Shilpa (coz that would never do justice to the way his character was built), they ended her track too without proper closure.
Though it's sad to know that Shilpa thinks Ridz doesn't deserve Armaan, but I can overlook that since she doesn't really know Riddhima.

Ab I am waiting desperately for progress in AR friendship...


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: dmgd3

Ok. I read the chapter twice but couldn't figure out the connection between Shashank and Karan. Was there anything about this in DMG or Sanjeevani?! Will wait for you to reveal.. :)

I am glad that Shilpa has moved on from Armaan and is now his friend. The CV's were so desperatefor S2 to work that they brought Shilpaback, abruptly endedNikki and Atul's track and worst ofall trying to shove Sid - Riddima down everyone's throats. And then whenthey realized that they couldn't just have Armaan move on with Shilpa (coz that would never do justice to the way his character was built), they ended her track too without proper closure.
Though it's sad to know that Shilpa thinks Ridz doesn't deserve Armaan, but I can overlook that since she doesn't really know Riddhima.

Ab I am waiting desperately for progress in AR friendship...




I won't tell you guys if it was there in the shows if you haven't figured it out. :p

You're absolutely right! S2 was a disaster on so many levels. Everybody's story needed proper closure - Atul, Rahul, Muskaan, Yuvi/Naina, Shilpa and even Sid. But we didn't get those. I was especially really mad that we didn't get endings for our S1 characters, because we'd spent 2 years loving them and suddenly, with the leap, everyone was gone. And then jaise hi AR-Sid track start hua, there was no place for anyone else on the show. That wasn't done! We should have seen more of them!

Shilpa has only ever seen Riddhima give Armaan pain, so she doesn't understand just how much Ridz loves Armaan and what she's done for him. Isliye she thinks that Ridz doesn't deserve him.

AR friendship will progress in the coming chapters. Lots!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Prizi

aur ye update ayega kab?



Abhi Sunday ko hi kiya! Ruko thoda. Writing ILYLTF cause of the cliffie. Toh iska update ILYLTF ke baad aayega ab.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: DMGThings



Abhi Sunday ko hi kiya! Ruko thoda. Writing ILYLTF cause of the cliffie. Toh iska update ILYLTF ke baad aayega ab.

and now its tuesday... do din ho gaya.. kuch to de de

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