ArHi: A Tale of Two Hearts

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Greetings!
I've been wanting to write this story for a long time, and after months of deliberation, I've finally decided to start it. I'm hoping that the need to give you all regular updates would encourage me to write more often, which is what I want out of this. I'm posting the prologue today. I'm hoping you will all like. Constructive criticism is encouraged!

Regards,
Vanilla Twilight.


A Tale of Two Hearts

I fell in love with him the way you fall asleep. Slowly; and then all at once. - John Green.

It was a bright, sunny morning and Khushi was running late. As one of the business heads at a multinational company, she was expected to be at her office by 9.00. But she was far from being an early bird. God knew how much she hated the mornings. It was something she hated even as a kid, but thanks to the man who woke up next to her every morning, the start of the day seemed a lot less awful. Arnav.

She would have laughed if someone would have told her that she would fall in love and get married a few years ago. It just wasn't something for her, she had decided. A string of failed relationships and a million horrible decisions later, she felt that she wasn't meant to fit into the realm of things and that she would make and live her life all by herself and on her own terms.

She met Arnav at one of her office parties. A couple of glances, a bit of wine and the two clicked off immediately. After 3 years of dinner dates, long drives and amazing sex, Arnav popped the question and she knew that he was what she wanted for the rest of her life. But this story isn't about how they met, or fell in love, or how they lived happily ever after. This is a story about the little things in life, the things that really matter.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting
😊
Waiting to read more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Vanilla Twilight! Well first of all welcome to the forum!🤗
It's a really good thing you began to write because the prologue seems to be quite interesting! 😃
I think I have a sense of where you might take this..are we going to get their love story in flashbacks!? I'm really excited to see how you present your story!
Do continue soon! And please do PM me when you update.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting so plz continue soon I would love to read there amazing story
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: beauty14

Hi Vanilla Twilight! Well first of all welcome to the forum!🤗

It's a really good thing you began to write because the prologue seems to be quite interesting! 😃
I think I have a sense of where you might take this..are we going to get their love story in flashbacks!? I'm really excited to see how you present your story!
Do continue soon! And please do PM me when you update.



Hey!

Thank you for the warm welcome. I'm not planning on revealing anything about the story just yet. Thank you so much for your kind words. It means a lot. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow this is so amazing! Great work, thanks for sharing this and please go on <3 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Love to read more ... Please carry on
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very well penned. Sounds really interesting.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The prologue looks good... looking forward to reading more.

Don't get too bothered if there isn't too much of a positive response initially. I've noticed some of the best stories start with a low response and pick up steam later ... so chin up
and let's get on with what promises to be a good story
Hope the updates are going to be frequent 😉
Edited by HugeArshiFan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome pro
Update soon
Plz add mt or ur PM list

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