Hum aapke hain kaun version2 last part pg120 Maaneet Samud SS - Page 76

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Posted: 9 years ago
Maan atleast should have opened his mouth and tell that he loves Geet
and here geet too accepted😒
OMG!!Engagaement..NOOO
saras asking this many things..did he come to know about Maaneet??
maan babu is J
and my fav scene..Maan filling Geet's maang😃
Everyone shocked coz of Maan's act
that god!!they didn't make it as a big issue!!'
Happy for my Maaneet!!!
sorry for late comment..busy coz of colg works!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow!!So kumud told everything to Saras!!it was really surprising!!Good job Kumud
and even Saras talked to geet about it!!
All are regretting for making such decision!!
Thank god Kumud is out of coma and she is fine :)
Yipee!!Maaneet ki marriage
Loved the update :)
Thank u sooo much
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Posted: 9 years ago
WOW!! saras knew about maaneet as kumud told him everything before...Kumud is back to them ...waiting for the marriage...
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Posted: 9 years ago
R E S E R V E D

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A bit busy at the moment..will unres after some time, hope you don't mind.
Thanks for the PM

Take care.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome. This version seems perfect. This kind of reaction can be anticipated from an angry man MSK.
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Please write few more Maaneet stories.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks a lot 4 the encouragement.I will definitely start a new one in a week or next week.

Originally posted by: kabslocks

Please write few more Maaneet stories.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank u so much for the mindblowing response u all gave for the 2nd version.

Hum aapke hain kaun Part 14 (2nd version)

This is the last part of this version.Plz give a detailed comment on the last version.Also plz write which version you liked the most.First or 2nd?And why u liked it more?



Dedicated to Madhu.. who wants to see Maaneet's baby.



Mehendi function...

Geet's hand was adorned with Mehendi.She showed her hand to Maan.
Maan was surprised.Because her palm was full of Maan's name.
M:Usually only the first letter of the name or the name is written on the palm.That also in small letters.But on your palm my name is written many times.
She smiled:Because I am full of you Maan.
He smiled.He leaned towards her cheek.

Mahi...mahi..

She ran away blushing.He smiled.

Sangeet...

Saras told the guy to play a slow song:Play a slow song for us.Kumud should not exert much dancing too much.
Guy:Ok Sir.
They played a soft song.

Hum dil de chuke sanam
Tere ho gaye hain hum, teree kasam
Oh ho ho hum dil de chuke sanam
Tere ho gaye hain hum, teree kasam

Yeh duneeya kare sitam tujhpe mitnege hum, teree kasam

Oh hum dil de chuke sanam, tere ho gaye hain hum
Teree kasam - (2)
( Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam). Maam held Geet's hand and moved to the dance floor. They danced romantically. Chand chupa badal me sharma ke meree jana
Sine se lag ja too balkhake meree jana Gumsum sa hai gupchup sa hai, madhosh hai khamosh hai
Han yeh sama, han yeh sama kuchh aur hai
Han han han chand chupa...
Najdikiya badh jane de, arre nahee baba nahee, abhee nahee nahee nahee
Dur se hee tum jee bhar ke dekho, tum hee kaho kaise dur se dekhu
Chand ko jaise dekhta chakor hai
Aye gumsum sa hai, yeh sama kuchh aur hai
Ho ho ho chand chupa badal me...

Aaja re aaja re chanda kee jab tak too naa aayega
Sajana ke chere toh dekhne yeh man tarsa jayega
Naa naa chanda too nahee aana too jo aaya toh
Sanam sharma ke kahee chala jaye naa
Aaja re aaja re chanda too lakh duwaye payega
Naa naa chanda too nahee aana, varna sanam chala jayega
( Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam).






Harish could'nt control himself:Play a song for us too.We are going to dance. The guy who was sitting there to play music:Uncleji...you are also going to dance with Auntiji? H:Why not?You think we can't dance in this age?We are more romantic than the youngsters.Right Avantika? Avantika was shy. A romantic song was played. Harish-Avantika danced romantically forgetting the world. Achchha To Ye Baat Hai
Tum Bhi Sun Lo
Jo Jo Savaal Main Poochhuun Unaka Sach-Sach Javaab Dena
Hah
Haah
Achchhaa, To Baagon Men Bahaar Hai
Kyaa


Mohindar:Rano...come let us dance. Rano was shy:Control yourself.I can't. Mohi:Don't be shy Rano. He held her hand and started dancing. Main Ne Poochha Baagon Men Bahaar Hai
Haan Hai
Kaliyon Pe Nikhaar Hai
Haan Hai
To, To Tumako Mujhase Pyaar Hai
Na Na Na, Na Na Na, Na Na Na, Na Na Na(Aradhana)
The youngsters smiled seeing their parents dance. Haldi... Geet was surprised to see Maan in her room. G:Maan! M:I should be the first person to put haldi on you. He put haldi on her face.She blushed. She put haldi on his face. They smiled . Mahi...mahi... Wedding day... Maan and Geet got married. (Thanks to Madhu..for these pics).
Maan and Geet's eyes fell on Pari. M:Wow Pari! P:Maan...as I promised I came for your wedding. She looked at Geet:Geet... Geet smiled:Hi Pari.. P:Hi...Maan and Geet...wish you guys a very long happy married life. They smiled:Thank you. P:After 2 months is my wedding.And you guys should attend my wedding for sure. Maan and Geet:Sure. Seeing Kumud in a beautiful saree Saras was lost in her beauty. S:My wife is so gorgeous.Why your beauty is increasing day by day? Kum:Saras...it's not the time to get romantic with me.Create a romantic atmosphere for Maan and Geet.It's their first night. S:Chill wife.I have already arranged their room.Come with me. Saras took her to Maan's room.It was beautifully decorated with flowers. S:How is it Kumud? Kum:Wow!Beautiful.I never expected this much.
S:Won't Maan get romantic with your sister in this fragrant atmosphere? Kum:Stop it Saras.Shameless. S:They giggled.




Maan entered the room.He saw Geet sitting on the bed and blushing.
He sat near her lifting up her chin.
He removed the pallu from her head. Then he removed her ornaments. Bechain hai meree najar, hai pyar kaa kaisa asar
Naa chup raho itna kaho, ham aapke aapke hain kaun

He cupped her face in his hands and looked at her passionately. G:Maan...who am i to you? Ham aapke hain kaun? M:My life.Ham aapke hain kaun? G:Everything. They embraced each other. Khud ko sanam roka bada, aakhir mujhe kehna pada
Khwabo me tum aate ho kyon, ham aapke aapke hain kaun


Their passionate romance flowed all over their room.
Bechain hai meree najar, hai pyar kaa kaisa asar
Hain hosh gum puchho naa tum, ham aapke aapke hain kaun




Kaise kahun dil kee lagee, chehra meraa padh lo kabhee
Yeh sharm kee surkhee kahe, ham aapke aapke hain kaun




(The credit for the Maaneet baby edits goes to Kavya Kaushi.But special thanks to Madhu.. who shared these lovely edits with me)
After a few months...
Maan and Geet were pampering Vivek.

Avantika:It's so sweet that Vivek is being pampered by his chacha chachi/Maasi.But Vivek's chacha chachi...when are you guys going to give him a cousin to play with?
Harish:Very soon you guys have to give him a company.
Saras:Kumud is not ready for another delivery.Poor Vivek is alone.
Kumud:Guys...get ready to give Vivek his best friend.
Maan and Geet were shy.
M:We were going to tell you all about that.
Kumud:Means?
M:Geet is pregnant.
All were surprised.They all hugged them in excitement.

Dhiktana, tiktana, dhiktana
Dhik, dhiktana, tiktana, dhiktana

They all danced around Maan and Geet in joy.Maan Geet were shy.

Dhiktana, tiktana, dhiktana
Dhik, dhiktana, tiktana, dhiktana

After some months Geet delivered a baby boy.



They named him Ajay.Khuranas and Handas


celebrated Ajay's entry.Vivek and Ajay became best brothers as well as best friends.




The end




Edited by jasminerahul - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsme update
Beautiful ending
Loved it
It was really very entertaining
Full of romance
Everywhere hppiness

Maneet so happy together
Samud made for each other

Elders also enjoying and getting romantic


All in all power pack update

I liked this version more as previous was some what more sad
It was different and more romantic so I liked this one more

Keep smiling
Edited by newmoon18 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely and Sweet Update
Maan and Geet marriage rituals were all done with such happiness the Sangeet function
was the absolute best as the parents too decided to take to the floor that was fantastic
the marriage and life after the wedding was great with Geet also giving birth to a boy
lovely story indeed actually I liked both the versions
because the first Saras had no idea about Maaneet's love for each other while on the
second version Kumud had already spoken to him before her fall

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