Hum aapke hain kaun version2 last part pg120 Maaneet Samud SS - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
Wonderful update
Seems like it's the beginning of a great story
Loved the concept
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92
So beautiful...I liked Harish-Avantika's & Maneet nok jhok very much...And our SaMud lost in their own love...Maan is so naughty and pulling his bhaiyya's leg always...Nice family drama...Thanks..update next part soon!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
Thanks for PM.😊
It was Awesome part.😊
Maaneet and Samud part was so Cute.😊
The Whole part was so interestingly explained.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95

I have no words to thank all of u.It's my Maaneet SS after a long time and the response u all gave me was very nice.Thank u all.



Hum aapke hain kaun Part 2

Saras Kumud's engagement date got fixed.

Geet thought:On the engagement day I should give a sweet surprise to Kumud jeeji.But what?
Suddenly an idea clicked on her mind:Yes got it.But will it work?

Maan thought:I want to ask Geet if she can be my dance partner for Saras bhaiyya's engagement.But she will she agree?
Maan rang up Geet.
Geet thought:I was thinking of calling Maan now.He called me now.Long lifetime you are having Maan.
G:Tell me why did you call me?
M:Do you know to dance?
G:How dare you ask me this question?I always dance for college festivals and I have won prizes too.
M:Ok ok.You could have told that peacefully.Why are you yelling at me?

Anyways thank God you know dance.
G:By the way Jeeji was telling me that you are crazy about dancing.
M:Yes.It is my passion.Can you dance with me for Saras bhaiyya and Kumud bhabhi's engagement function?
Geet was surprised.She thought:He is asking me this side what I wanted to ask him.
G:Why?
M:Because I thought it would be nice if we give them a surprise by dancing.
G:Cool idea.To be frank even I wanted to ask you this question.
M:Really?That means we have 2 bodies and one mind?
G:Are you crazy?
Maan laughed.
G:The dance which we should have good standard.
M:Don't worry about that.I have a choreographer named Vivek who choreographs when I do dance shows.
G:I hope it will turn out to be good.
M:Sure ...it will be good if you dance well.
G:What about you?
M:I will dance well for sure.But yours is a doubt.
G:How dare you!I will prove my dancing talent.
He giggled.

Maan and Geet followed Vivek's instruction and rehearsed well.

Saras and Kumud's engagement...
They exchanged rings.

Harish:Guys you both are officially engaged.Now why don't you guys dance?
Avantika:Of course.Put music.
Saras:No no.I can't dance.I am a pathetic dancer unlike Maan who is an excellent dancer.
Kumud:Even I can't dance.
Rano:Kumud was always shy to dance.
Avantika:Without no programmes the function will be so boring.
She stared at Harish:For some people just food is enough as an entertainment for functions.
Harish was embarrassed.
H:I don't need any entertainment as I myself is an entertainment.
Everyone laughed.
Shamsher:That is true Harish.You are really an entertainment.
Rano:Avantika is lucky.There is someone who can entertain you continously.
Avantika smiled.
Geet thought:Where did this Maan disappear?It's time for us to surprise Jeeji and jeejaji.
Geet tried to ring up Maan.Maan did'nt pick up the call.
G:Maan...pick up the call.It's getting delayed.
Suddenly they a heard Maan's voice.
"Don't worry about not having any entertainment.We are here to entertain you all."
The spotlight fell on Maan.
They all were surprised including Geet.

Maan started shaking his legs to music.

Waha waha ramjee, jodi kya banayee
Bhaiya aur bhabhi ko, badhayee ho badhayee
Sab rasmo se badee hai jag me, dil se dil kee sagayee

Geet joined him and started dancing.

Aapkee kripa se yeh, shubh ghadee aai
Jiji aur jija ko, badhayee ho badhayee
Sab rasmo se badee hai jag me, dil se dil kee sagayee

They all were surprised.

After the dance performance they all hugged Geet and Maan.
Kumud:Loved your surprise my sweet sis.
Saras:Maan...you made my day.

Harish:Once again Maan proved that he is my son.Truly an entertainment.
Avantika:Excuse me..he is my son too.
H:Yes.But he got the entertainment quality from me.He is not at all serious like you.
Avantika:Forget it.

Suddenly a girl appeared.
"Maannn".
She embraced Maan.Geet was shocked.
G:How can she hug Maan publicly?Shameless creature.
Maan looked at Geet with a naughty smile and winked at her.
She:I am so sorry.I became late.

Avantika:No problem beta.
This is Pari.My friend's daughter.Where are your parents Pari?
Pari:They could'nt come as they are busy.So I came on their behalf.
Geet:Why is this Pari always holding Maan's hand?
Geet moved away.
G:She is standing close to Maan as if she is stuck up to him with fevicol.
Suddenly she heard someone's footsteps and turned back.It was Maan.
M:Why are you standing alone here?
G:Why?I can't stand alone?
M:You can.
G:Then why have you come here?Go to Pari.She needs you very badly.
M:Why are you so insecure seeing me with Pari?Are you jealous?
G:Jealous?My foot!Why should I be jealous.
M:Anyways even if you are jealous you don't have to be jealous as we are just friends.
Goosebumps were passing through her when Maan stood close to her looking deeply into her eyes.


She tried to walk away.He held her hand.
She stared at him:Why did you hold my hand?
M:Your forehead lace has fallen down.
She saw her forehead lace on the floor.Maan took it.Geet tried to take it with him.
M:I will put it for you.
Geet could'nt resist.His fingers moved towards her to put the lace.She became shy.

He put the lace on her forehead.

G:Thank you.
Geet walked away.

Maan went towards Saras.
M:What is this bhaiyya?You guys were dating.Still you did'nt even touch her.Now you guys are officially engaged.Still distance between you and bhabhi?
Saras:What should I do?
M:At least give her a kiss.
S:No no.I am against liplocks in films.
M:Ok fine.But this is your life.In real life also you are not planning for any liplock?So unromantic.I am telling you.Kumud bhabhi will find you boring.I don't know how you guys dated each other without no romance.
S:Oh no...I don't want to be boring.What should I do to be romantic Maan?
M:Give her a kiss.Now you have the right to do that.She is your fiancee.
Saras was tensed.

As Maan advised Saras took Kumud to an isolated area.
Kumud:Why did you bring me here Saras?
Saras said romantically:Just to say that you are looking very beautiful.I can't say that in front of others.Right?
Kumud blushed.
Maan who was standing at the door way showed some hand actions to kiss Kumud.
Saras gathered all his courage and moved closer to Kumud to kiss her cheek.
Kumud who felt his breath on her skin blushed.

Suddenly they heard Rano's voice:Kumud!
Kumud:Mom!
Kumud ran out.
Rano:Where were you?
Kum:I went to the washroom.

Saras:Oh no...
Maan came inside:Bhaiyya...you are very unlucky.When you got a chance your mother in law became an obstacle.
Saras was embarrassed.
S:By the way why were you watching us?To see us Kiss.Shameless boy.
Saras pinched Maan's ear.Maan smiled.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
Nice update
Loved it
Geet and Maan both started falling for each other
Will pari become a villan? continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
loved it
maaneet nok zhok ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
awesome update...
Maan and Geet planning for surprise dance performance ... Maan s teaching his bro for romance ...
Continue soon
Waiting
Thank u for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99

Part 2
Beautiful n lovely update
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thanks for the PM dear

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