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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sadh123

And I really loved this epilogue yaara.. it tied up the lose ends. it was too cute in certain areas and I am glad that you made Khushi take that stand with Payal. And aww Arnav is so cute with his baby and the strict stand he took against Pooja made me go ooh and aww!!



I will miss this story definitely and I am waiting for the new stories you have promised to and am definitely not leaving you!


So, few quick questions,
Why have you named this story so?
And when did writer's block hit you? And did it come?
Which character was too difficult to write? And why?



Agayi mera dimaagh khaane tum? Chalo aaj discount hai, khaalo 😆

This story is named Floating Stars. Why? Because our destiny is somewhat related to stars. We never know about our destiny. In a moment we are very ecstatic but we never know how earth shattering can the next moment be? This story mainly revolves around the sudden happenings, Khushi never expected all this to happen in her life, to get pregnant, to get cheated by her own sister and to get another awesome family. Very less people in this age think about what is going to happen with their life. So was Khushi. That is why her destiny was unpredictable hence the title 'Floating Stars'. The stars can be twisted and we never know what destiny has in store for us!

Second question, yes it did hit me many times. *cries*. It happened a month back and thankfully I had overcome that phase. :)

Thirdly, every character was damn difficult 😆 First I thought that writing about buaji will be very difficult and Khushi as well. I hurriedly forced myself to write the first portion of the story thinking when Arnav will find Khushi and console her, that part will be the easiest but that turned out to be hard too when the time came. At the time of Payal's confrontation with the family, her character was hard to handle since I had to show her state of mind and keep things realistic. Girls and youth now a days like her can play in their heated minds but many a times it is never mature. They never think of the consequences. So thinking about the new generation of today, her character was put forward in the story. Not overnight someone can change hence till the end, her character is the same, she regretted but regret doesnt change you fully.
Then writing about Arnav and Khushi and their relationship was damn difficult though at first I thought that would be my cup of tea.
So basically every scene and character I thought would be easy turned out to be very evil for me

Thankyou Sadh for leaving such a beautiful comment 🤗 No more FFs dude, just OSs and TSs!
Edited by Rish_Rubles - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Rish_Rubles



Agayi mera dimaagh khaane tum? Chalo aaj discount hai, khaalo 😆

This story is named Floating Stars. Why? Because our destiny is somewhat related to stars. We never know about our destiny. In a moment we are very ecstatic but we never know how earth shattering can the next moment be? This story mainly revolves around the sudden happenings, Khushi never expected all this to happen in her life, to get pregnant, to get cheated by her own sister and to get another awesome family. Very less people in this age think about what is going to happen with their life. So was Khushi. That is why her destiny was unpredictable hence the title 'Floating Stars'. The stars can be twisted and we never know what destiny has in store for us!

Second question, yes it did hit me many times. *cries*. It happened a month back and thankfully I had overcome that phase. :)

Thirdly, every character was damn difficult 😆 First I thought that writing about buaji will be very difficult and Khushi as well. I hurriedly forced myself to write the first portion of the story thinking when Arnav will find Khushi and console her, that part will be the easiest but that turned out to be hard too when the time came. At the time of Payal's confrontation with the family, her character was hard to handle since I had to show her state of mind and keep things realistic. Girls and youth now a days like her can play in their heated minds but many a times it is never mature. They never think of the consequences. So thinking about the new generation of today, her character was put forward in the story. Not overnight someone can change hence till the end, her character is the same, she regretted but regret doesnt change you fully.
Then writing about Arnav and Khushi and their relationship was damn difficult though at first I thought that would be my cup of tea.
So basically every scene and character I thought would be easy turned out to be very evil for me

Thankyou Sadh for leaving such a beautiful comment 🤗 No more FFs dude, just OSs and TSs!


Aww thanks for patiently answering every question. I hope they didn't bore you and I really liked your approach behind the whole concept.


No SS also? 🥱
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sadh123


Aww thanks for patiently answering every question. I hope they didn't bore you and I really liked your approach behind the whole concept.


No SS also? 🥱



Afterall, kisi ne poocha hai toh i have to reply na 😳 I loved them! Thankyou :*

Naah, I am so tired, bas OSs and TSs will do 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Ri, finally caught up with the story.

Must say you have given a wonderful end to this story with khushu accepting Arnav as her live rather than one who pitied her condition by marrying her. In a way her acceptance was honoring Arnav's love and not mistaking it as a favor or pity.

Loved the way there relation developed after that Shyam mishap. And the way khuahi showed Payal the door from her happy family and life.

I liked this shy at time bold Khushi not shying from PDA with her love.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome ff. Loved all the chapters. Very well written. Concept of the story was brilliant.. The way u showed arshi friendship n dem as lovers n husband n wife was amazing. Some chapters made me even cry feeling khushi's pain. Thanks for such a wonderful ff.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved the entire SS from start to the end.
The start was great, though it started on a note that the society wouldn't appreciate, but I loved the fact that Arnav loved Khushi and had the courage to accept his deeds.
And from their Khushi's life had only happiness and happiness just the way her name depicts.
With Arnav, she got so many new relations that she had now. And they were not the blood relations, they all were relations of heart and they were bound by love.
Be it Amar and Ananya, in whom she got her father and mother, be it Anjali, in whom she got a loving and caring sister or be it Rohan, in whom she got a doting brother. All the relations Khushi held close to her heart and it was vice-versa.
So all in all I loved this SS of yours.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works. I have been away from IF for some time owing to personal reasons. But now I am back and I will make sure that I get myself updated with your works.
Do keep up the good work..😊
Lots Of Love...😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
firstly i'm really sry for responding so late...
i was busy due to my exams and studies,...
plz forgive me...
and for future also////////////////
as i will be busy at least till march-april...


and just now i read two ch in one go,...
loved it...
finally khushi got every happiness,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
she did right by saying payal...
of course she forgave her...
but no one can forget whatever happen with them...
awesome story dear...


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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome SS, read it in one go.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sad to see it come to an end! But loved it!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Like the way you ended it
Beautiful
Enjoy this journey
Thanks for the pm dear

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